Critiquing Email Copy of Beginner Copywriters | Become a $3k/mo Copywriter with These Tips

[@aliyanmehmood8121]

I think the audience will get better hooked if the students use some facts or figures in the subject line like "90% Startups close within an year because..." Or "5 Deadly Mistakes that will KILL your startup"

[@MuhammadUmar-ny5pc]

Jim Edward yd aa gya isay parh kr

[@aliyanmehmood8121]

@@MuhammadUmar-ny5pc sorry bro but wo kon ha?

[@saifsatti5413]

wonderfully explained every step.

[@fajz4coco]

sir PLEASE PLEASE make more videos on email copywriting samples they are EXTREMELY helpful !!

[@AliAsifRaza]

good copy critique and now i read your recommended books for begginer copywriting and its very help full to gain clearity.

[@Maheenali991]

Sir plz make a video on client hunting for email copywriter

[@fajz4coco]

yes PLEASEEEE

[@ahmed.digify]

Hey Mr. Armash, We would love to see more videos like these. Thank you for the effort.

[@kjsoomro]

Masha Allah Masha Allah sir aap bht hi bahtreen tareekey se samjate hain may Allah grant you even more success .

[@HarisWaseem-re6tt]

siiuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu that's marvalous email critique from sir KAMAL and Ma Sha ALLAh this video is great and much valuable

[@armashkamal]

JazakaAllah!

[@Ali-g5m6i]

You are the one of my best mentor Sir GREAT ❤

[@shamwrites3893]

Really helpful ❤

[@copywriterpro-123]

Tremendous job 👏👏👏....

[@shanzarazzaq8272]

Really helpful 👍

[@engrrhameed1160]

Shorts of this channel is a big khazana/Library for learning copywriting. 😊

[@Javeria-z9e]

VERY HELPFUL

[@quotesmotivation2]

Thnx sir i learn many thngs from it

[@asmatakhoond-yz1rp]

Awesome learnt new little things

[@aamirfaraz9972]

As said MANY times We as students dont hv words to thank you❤❤❤ So much invaluable stuff & that is free INCREDIBLE!!! Jazak Allah SIR

[@ltnworld9443]

very informative video😊

[@Islam43590]

MAKE more videos like this please

[@engrrhameed1160]

Series of critiquing Email copy of newbies copywriters will be more helpful please ❤❤.

[@FahadKhan-wb3tx]

only Pakistani consistent copywriter that posts, Post more......... Thanks

[@maryamyamin1405]

you r too good and your every video is helpful i am in a learning process in your workshop, you mentioned reading one-hour emails but i do not know on what sites those emails or data could help me to write an email to be available plz guide me

[@jawad_younis]

Aoa sir. I have to say you deserve alot more recognition for the efforts you are doing for the youth. I have learnt the basics of copywriting from you and I am grateful to Allah that I learnt from you because you made things so easy to learn. I have a question, I have subscribed to Alex Cattoni and thoroughly analyze their emails everytime and have learnt some key points. But one thing bothers me, do freelance copywriters need to give a full fledged email to the client with graphic and aesthetic elements stuffed in the email or can I work as a text only copywriter. Same case for CTA. Please sir if you could clarify me, it can help me start my journey today. Thank you

[@AS-zl4ui]

I too have the same query. Did you get the answer by any chance?

[@jawad_younis]

@@AS-zl4ui No I didn't. But I have researched and copywriters just write on a word doc or google doc, no design or anything.

[@AS-zl4ui]

@@jawad_younis thanks you for answering bro!!

[@madihafiroz935]

Waiting to become your student and learn from the the AKC program, so I can start my career as a copy writer...🎉

[@armashkamal]

@@madihafiroz935 let's do it!

[@madihafiroz935]

@@armashkamal In-Sha-Allah ❤️

[@Sam-k2s]

just a quick question...??? i just came across a bunch of landing pages and they were well designed, I mean the color, imgs and icons. now my question is, how do they design it? Was it designed by the copywriter or a grapic designer?

[@tariqz5384]

Why there are no so many paras? No bullets. No bold font? Is this right?

[@fajz4coco]

sir is it important to upload the portfolio on fiverr gig or usky bagair bhe clients mil jaty hain?

[@propro-sk5qs]

Hello sir Can I know which of your course is the most effective one The MPP or the 2 month course

[@RabiaIftikhar-x4i]

nice

[@rahemeen1663]

make a video on how to make portfolio and upwork account

[@MuhammadJunaid-nh8nr]

sir, kindly tell me which copywriting type should we learn for the first??

[@SaadHabib-u3k]

👏

[@Simon5641]

I have a question, does email copywriting work? recently. Because every beginner starts with an email. I think now this is so much saturated.

[@armashkamal]

@@Simon5641 you're wrong. It can never get saturated.

[@fajz4coco]

sir i took your course but i dont know who to write it on microsoft (how to add links or what format to use) uspain aik video bana dain PLEASE (there is NO such video on youtube related to this 💔)

[@luqman.t3134]

This isn't a reason to get sad. You can write your emails on google documents if you don't have Ms word. I do the same.

[@HafizMuhammadAkhtarShahzad]

I want to do this course, what is the fee for copywriting?

[@armashkamal]

@@HafizMuhammadAkhtarShahzad all details here: armashkamal.com/program

[@LIMONBLOGS14]

I want to join your course and i am From Bangladesh

[@Shafeeq-m3k]

Sir ,I resently complete my education 12th.i want to become a copywriter.can I do this ? I have no knowledge and I want to do something that fields .please inform me

[@AliRazaShareef-h1w]

AI tools are heavily used in the 2nd sequence.

[@Uniqlo_yt]

Hello mr. Armash kamal sir i want to learn copywriting full course in your regards you can teach me online, And you tell me how to i join you cours..? 🙂

[@armashkamal]

go here: armashkamal.com/program

[@GurdevSingh-f5u]

Jellp sir i want learn copywriter from india

[@EshalHoorain1]

clients ko hunt krny k methods btyn.

[@ahsaniqbaltechsoft]

can you give us 2 assignments for free to test our skills and then we can show you and you can critique it on video like this but this will be not of your students but other beginners and you could showcase the effectiveness of your course?

[@Unknown.H.01]

Bhai ma ne Email copywriting to seekhi ha lekin clients nhi hain

[@Asdaq454]

kahan se sikhi hai

[@engrrhameed1160]

Hey Mr. Armash Kamal! Are their copies are not relating to the pain points of reader in a logical way, with clarity, too much elaborated, with no curiosity for the next email, the subject lines are not grabbing attention of the reader, and sentences are not easily understandable. @everyone

[@aliyanali8509]

this copy was horrible, would love to see u critique/breakdown better copy

[@armashkamal]

@@aliyanali8509 not horrible, considering they are beginners. But yes critiquing good copy is so much more fun! Maybe next video! In the program, I critique senior copywriters' copy in multiple sessions. Unfortunately, can't share them publicly, lol.

[@manjmanj7609]

11:23 konsa idiot itna prhy ga Bas house ko bugs se saaf krny k liye?????? Email should 12 to 15 lines... With simple language

[@gutsyYt203]

The second email was not that good. As a reader, anyone will get bored reading this. HORRIBLE

[@Kriti-p2n]

The second part of the first email is completely 0. It starts with a story while the prospect is already aware of the problem. also, the story feels too long and distracting not that outstanding it'll definitely build skepticism

[@quotesmotivation2]

Sir plz share ur email address to subscribe your email list