Cruel World Short Film

In the post apocalyptic Yorkshire moors, a lone survivor struggles to find a purpose and survive.

[@dukecity7688]

This was great! It's better than anything on Netflix. Well done.💐

[@joeyj6808]

Very nicely done. I'd like to see more by this guy.

[@lauratucker2077]

Excellent. Willy Nelson's music was a perfect fit.

[@darksparkbruh979]

Thank you, I do love a good bit of Willy Nelson

[@JWS1968]

Definite skills here. Some of the shots and as someone else says 'world building' is great. There are some stuff like dirt on the lens and also jumpy camera but in the scheme of things small stuff. Great job.

[@archiewhite9223]

I do agree, unfortunately I didn’t have much choice other than to work with the lenses that had dirt on them. It was mostly due to the deadline that I couldn’t go for reshoots for the jumpy angles either.

[@JWS1968]

@@archiewhite9223 did the camera have IBIS? Sometimes it can do that jitter thing. Dirt on a lens. Check every shot there and then. Constantly cleaning. Make it a habit. Also check the glass at rear of lens which can get dirty when changing lens. We've all done it.

[@briankane460]

Good job Archie

[@darksparkbruh979]

Thank you :D

[@charliewhite6962]

Great movie, good shots and world building! Very immersive

[@peggycarson4420]

Good short n loved your choice of music

[@archiewhite9223]

Thank you!! :D

[@peggycarson4420]

WN right on

[@flamindigo]

Cool zombie shuffle at 15:30 - otherwise, a lack of attention to details of continuity

[@archiewhite9223]

Yeah I missed out a few things as I was mostly focused on getting as good shots I could. Though there is an improved version on my channel that you may find better :)

[@observer7418]

Student film?

[@darksparkbruh979]

Yeah is it that obvious? Haha

[@observer7418]

I was engaged enough to watch the whole thing. So, not horrible. What did you get on it? @@darksparkbruh979