CSS 2018| Correction of Sentences| Precis and Composition| CSS Exams in Pakistan| FPSC| PPSC

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Correct the following sentences is an essential part of any Precis and Composition paper. In this Correction of Sentences series I will solve the past papers of FPSC, PPSC, KPSC, BPSC and SPSC. Working on these common grammar mistakes will help the students in developing expression and avoiding basic grammatical mistakes. This correction is from CSS 2019 paper of CSS Exams in Pakistan.
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What a sumptuous video is this ma'am keep it up and please make a video on dangling modifiers mistakes...I will be obliged forever....

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Assalam Alaikum Fatima Batool Mam ❤️💕💞.... A great and fruitful video .... Thank you.... You have cleared rather then for me

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Maam plz tell me about dangling part?

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4) Could be corrected like this My friend said he does not remember having read a more enjoyable book. According to Grammarly Application this sentence is also correct and error free. correction 6 be like this One day the bird did not perform certain tricks which he had taught it to his satisfication. Correction 7 be like this I was impressed by the manners of the Orator rather than his matter. What's your comments on this ???

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The sentence number iv is grammatically correct, and it doesn't need any correction. Thanks for wasting time on it.

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Ma'am do you think that the covid pandemic is such a topic to come in exam? Should we prep it in descriptive way or in argumentative way?

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Exactly, this is very important topic .

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You should prepare it.

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@@FatimaBatoolcss viii:- what awful weather! ? Viii:- What an awesome weather!

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Thank you mam Mam kindly upload other years correction as well as soon as possible Today i was searching your channel again & again to see correction of 2017 but its not uploaded yet... Plz upload it

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Excellent work done madam Fatima Batool,mam can u make video a motivational video for CSS aspirants where we get really motivate and inspire,,u are doing great job

[@kavitadinani1605]

Please upload more videos of sentence correction.

[@YasirKhan-xd6us]

Madam I appreciate you for your work. I have a question. Is WEATHER uncountable noun or abstract noun ? Our teacher taught us " abstract noun is something you have in your mind and you cannot touch it as in love,hate,sadness etc." Please reply so that i shall be able to understand the difference.

[@FatimaBatoolcss]

Weather is uncountable noun.

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Mam please upload All years' corrections from past papers as it would be really helpful for the aspirants

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Sure we will

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Beautifuly explained

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Mam incorrect k neeche correct sentences poray likha karen. Kind Regards

[@shaoorahmed7590]

Excuse me ! Ma'am I am requesting to you for solve punctuation from css precis and composition paper 2020 .

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Ap Next vdo kb upload kry gi corrections ki.... plzz do ds soon

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Noted .

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Mam kindly make more videos on sentence correction. It's very helpful for us to improve grammar skills.

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Mam ,jin words main dash use hota,unka btaaden,kuch main ni use hota. Jesay grass root level, Hard-core strategies

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Excellent Mam..

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Thank you.

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@@FatimaBatoolcss your welcome Mam.. One request we need the lecture that how to start the preparation of css.. When you find time mam give us the lecture.. I know your so much busy.

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Waiting patiently

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Mam can you prepare lecture on punctuation topic

[@ExamCrack194]

Ma'am is this right or not. III. I by no means allow you to do so.

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Fruitful sessions.

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thx

[@awaiskhan8392]

I, by no means allow you to do so. Is that correct?

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Thank you so much Madam this is really helpful

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Mam do you offer online class ?

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Madam, your work is appreciable. I have few questions regarding answering the css questions for all papers , i.e structure and marking scheme of an answer. Secondly, want to get checked my essay for evaluation. Any book to cover idioms? Please guide me in this regard .

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Salam, Mam plz upload lectures on other composition past papers 2008 to 1017 plz

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Noted

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Please upload more papers like this one

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Mam what is dagling part ? Please tell .Thanks !!

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[@Nasirkhan057]

Thank u ma'am ,kindly suggest best books for this paper.

[@FatimaBatoolcss]

High School English Grammar by Wren and Martin

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[@snowfall307]

My friend said that he had not remembered having read enjoyable book. Is this right?

[@FatimaBatoolcss]

Past Indefinite tense is used, and we will make correction in the same tense.

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@@FatimaBatoolcss may please make me understand about the usage of none...i am confused with; 1.none of them is innocent. 2.none of them have attended the function.

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Good

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You may join my online classes starting from 5th July. For details 03219424492

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I'm beginner ma'am....kindly recommend me book to improve grammar

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I have improved my English. I was suffering as well. you should start from the ground level purchase book of ''wren and martin'' do watch youtube videos and read the blog on the internet, before you study any topic from wren and martin. follow this practice you may face some difficulties initially. But later on, you will get results.best of luck!

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I will soon start basic grammar so stay tuned. Use High School English Grammar by Wren and Martin.

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Thanks

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Ma'am plz explain dangling part

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Madam i need your ●help● I listenned Hasan Nisar & Irshad Bhatti most of time. Both were pointed negative aspects of Pakistanis & politicians of Pakistan. My approach is also become negative toward Politicians & Pakistan by listenning them. I want to change my approach. ●Suggest some Positive Think tanks (Analystis) . Whom Talk positive aspects of Pakistan.....●

[@arafatkhan8050]

Can we say: Going up the hill, a person saw a temple (as you used "he" which is a vague pronoun. To further clarify it, person is, I think, more proper... Plz, help! 😊

[@imrankhanmrijan]

yes. You can write 'the man' not 'a man'. going up the hill,he/she/they/we/i saw an old temple. we can also write, " while he/she/they/we/I was/were going uphill, an old temple was seen.

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mam, please make a video on 'verb transition in essay writing' as well

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Noted

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add 2021 too

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I also recommend book for grammer

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High School English Grammar by Wren and Martin

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Mam what do you mean by dangling part of the sentence?

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Mam can we write sentence number 3 and 4 in this way? 3: by no means, I can allow you to do so. 5: while going up to the hill, an old temple was seen.

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while (he/she/they/we/I ) ( was/were) going uphill, an old temple was seen.

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2- they left the hotel in a motar car where they had been staying. is it correct

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Nice video, Good Video Editing👍

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Thank you mam!

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