dark sector review - warframe 1999

[@michaelpenuela]

Niceeee

[@alltogethergames8469]

Thanks 🤗

[@darkAwesome100]

Hey, it's good to see another up-and-coming creator. The game looks cool, and it really is like looking at the ancestor to warframe. I actually wanted to review your video itself, so hear goes: The script is ok, but the delivery is pretty flat. Not sure how to explain it, but it feels like you're reading an essay rather than talking to us. Try to speak more fluidly, and consider how the points you're making connect to each other. Additionally, there are times when it's difficult to hear you over the game's audio. Other than that, I think you did a fine job. Reviewing games that are temporarily free is a really interestingly concept, so I look forward to seeing how you progress over time.

[@alltogethergames8469]

thank you for the feed back. i do have a few medical conditions that some times makes talking a little hard but i will try to add in more reflection into my videos. i will also look more into writing structures too since im using a defalt templet for talking points right now. i do try to put the game sound as more of a background thing and like i did with this one if they have a lot of talking in it i remove the audio fully to make things a bit easer to hear. i'll be more mindful of the audio mix too. this is a grate help to me :)