Dawn, award winning trans short film

[@heatherkelly4347]

When he said "You're the first girl I've touched in ages", and she burst into tears, I felt that. No words or exposition were necessary to convey what she felt.

[@AutomationDnD]

Yes- it was beautiful

[@Pooyuck]

She burst into tears? How could you not. It could be such a simple thing; a sentence, a single word, or a look, but the impact can be enormous.

[@britneyhochman5204]

Definitely one of the more nuanced portrayals of a trans woman I've seen in a short film. When you're actually out living as a trans woman, or trans person for that matter, it's not the spectacle of transitioning that shapes you the most. More often, it's the small, beautiful moments; those odd little interactions that let you see yourself in a new light. Even if they only last for a brief moment, it's those simple things that force you to see your own beauty.

[@pold3967]

Such a wonderful film. Beautifully layered and impeccably acted. Is it strange to say that one of things (and there are many) that I liked was the scene with Dawn getting on the bus? As a trans woman, I've been out and about, and ended up near a bunch of rowdy teens more than once. Almost every time, they've been polite, quietened down (for a minute) and shown themselves in a good light. The only downside being my age, where I now get called "madam". ;-) But, in all seriousness, I love the intersectionality of this film. We're all more complex than one-dimensional caricatures portrayed by some media. Keep up the good work, Jake!

[@JakeGrafFilms]

Thanks so much for the lovely words!!

[@monica93304]

@@JakeGrafFilms as an older (late bloomer) trans woman (51) I could relate to this girl. This film was very touching and profound. I definately shed a few tears. Well done.

[@michaelakeane9105]

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[@michaelakeane9105]

I'm also an older, cd

[@AutomationDnD]

@@JakeGrafFilms I came back again (to Find This, again) after 2 years. it *IS* very Very well done. There really *SHOULD* be a part 2, .... I tried (briefly) to do a basic search. .... there _Should_ (there *Could* be) a part 2 to this. The: *_First Girl I've touched_* Line..... Where Dawn breaks for a moment, really is super-touching. There was a lot packed into the few minutes of this. You rapidly become "invested" in these young adults. And you do *_WONDER what happens with both of them_* Basically you come away from this little drama, saying to yourself: _There could be _*_worse things_*_ than, being KIND to One Another_

[@dandoescreative]

I've commented on your work before! Love how transportive this film is - introducing those of us who may be sighted/cis-/straight to ways of otherness that ultimately loop back to embrace us all. An open invitation for a more trusting, sensuous and feeling world. Thank you Jake!

[@JakeGrafFilms]

Thanks so much, Dan!

[@MikotoKenn]

I love the glimpse of hope, strength, optimism and the use of literal x figurative metaphor of the "eyes". Having it makes people blind to see the essence of a transwoman: a human who deserves to be treated fairly. I finished the movie feeling triumph, pride and tranquility. Just one thing, I am not a native English speaker, and it was difficult for me to hear some of what they said, so subtitles, please.

[@foziart1325]

But- why doesn’t it have subtitles?

[@tonycroucher4792]

My goto clip ....been the way I am since 6yrs old ....sent this to my Big brother and best friend ....They understand me now ❤❤

[@stevethomas74]

I've watched this several times a week since I first saw this. This is hands-down one of my absolute favourite short films of all time! Such a simple, yet powerful reminder of the power and importance of connections, no matter how brief or unorthodox in nature they might be. And I think this speaks to all, irrespective of being trans or not. Really well done to everyone involved, you all should be very proud! 👏🎬

[@dianaqueen3298]

So many emotions building inside which I can't express in words... All I can say is dear Jake Thank You for making this short film

[@dawnbeckett9179]

It's somewhat ironic I found this video. I love this so much!

[@minacarroll8867]

Oh to meet a man like that .It would make he want to stay another day .Every thing about this story is so beautiful.

[@JakeGrafFilms]

Thank you so much! :)

[@davidbrown1566]

Jake, thanks for this lovely glimpse into what could be.

[@muntumsutu8404]

The emotion and connection from watching this short film. This is a piece of art

[@hannahroedder936]

Touching film, Subscribed! I'm disabled and trans; weird intersection. Partially paralyzed due to a stroke, but still started HRT. Finally understand this whole happiness and pride thing some people say they feel. Good to want to live after half a century of suicidal ideation. My wife is staying saying she "loves a person, not a gender". I am not worthy!

[@thescriptsuperheroes8807]

this film is very cool and motivating for transgender people.. I hope that the "trans" can live side by side with the people around, and not get discriminated against again amen.. I wish you success and good health, greetings from Indonesia

[@davidbarker5957]

Another powerful movie from Jake Graf. Thank you for making this.

[@dheniiranto1098]

Such a good movie! Beautiful 💖🌈

[@theincarnationofboredom207]

Incredibly beautiful.

[@raylamilne1942]

Amazing beautiful film that made me smile.Thanks Jake good work 💜

[@1981CJR]

Absolutely outstanding! Genuinely moving piece, truly beautifully shot, directed, acted and scored. Not to mention how utterly gorgeous Nicole is, Harry probably is too though in fairness.

[@hannahwinterbourne3335]

Thank you so much for the very kind feedback! :)

[@1981CJR]

It's very well deserved indeed! Take care courageous lady ❤@@hannahwinterbourne3335

[@francescagatica2799]

When she stared at the rising sun I think I didn't expect to see such beautiful face and glistening eyes. You can see how much she's struggling by just looking at her eyes

[@stevethomas74]

That was excellent, well done to everybody involved! I absolutely love short films at the best of times, especially unique stories and this one was exquisitely written. shot, acted and directed 🎬👏

[@conz2078]

one of the best trans short films

[@cmkseven7]

OMG! So beautiful! (Looks like a young Sheryl Crow!)

[@AutomationDnD]

She DOES !!!

[@jessicaafonso9324]

My favourite movie!!!!!!!!! I really love.

[@JakeGrafFilms]

Thanks so much!!

[@roymeadway3592]

Beautiful and moving

[@tonycroucher4792]

My go to film for hope x

[@JakeGrafFilms]

That's so lovely to hear!❤❤

[@cassiopee318]

I really want them to be happy together now ☺️

[@coryashawasega5727]

Beautiful short story. I wish there was more to this story.☺️🙂

[@MelanieMoxon]

Beautiful film, thankyou.

[@cazhatten3341]

havent seen such a poignant short film 4 ages. all preconceptions put aside and just 2 human beings connecting.tho a follow up would be nice, i guess the point is we don't need one

[@JakeGrafFilms]

Thanks Caz!❤️

[@themartamationgartlowe4870]

I still love this video so much. I don't want this to be deleted.

[@camv3236]

He knew, one thinks, what she was in her heart, in her essence. Also a lovely portrayal of disability. He's not helpless. He "sees" both her, and his environment, just differently to those with other senses.

[@phaeriestud]

I enjoyed this film very much. Well done Jake!

[@EternalDensity]

Yes, break out of your cocoon, you beautiful butterfly. All us beautiful butterflies.

[@gs0760]

that was beautiful

[@RickNelsonMn]

A Dawn to remember.

[@RickNelsonMn]

Watched again. Such an impact. 🦋🌄

[@lukaswycaza]

I really loved this.. The soundtrack is truly impeccable

[@dharmendras792]

Very good movie My elder brother Jake

[@raylamilne1942]

Jake I admire you and Hannah with word's that can't even discribe.People keep telling me that I have this story of my life that would make a huge huge help to not just the Trans community but community as a whole.Im Rayla and I would like u to help me aswel are kind. xxxxx

[@chrisearls7942]

first saw this film maybe a month ago and have probably watched it every day since. 73 year old cis cincinnatian. didn't enjoy reading short stories , and now see how powerful it can be to convey so much emotion in this film. Thank You to all who created this story

[@JakeGrafFilms]

Thank you so much for the lovely message and feedback!!

[@wendyvic4046]

Loved it. Very good, bravo!

[@llicksand675]

Eternal ! Enlightening !

[@chrissyweikoop7931]

i am kinda sad, jake hasnt uploaded for a while. he writes amazing characters. so simple and yet so much more depth than what these hollywood folks can come up with. i really felt that one too. just getting away from a horrible situation, running into a moment of acceptance...

[@JakeGrafFilms]

Don’t be sad! Working on a new film right now.❤️

[@chrissyweikoop7931]

@@JakeGrafFilms oh god sir, i never thought you'd reply to some random girl like me. you made my day! twice even haha. looking forward to your new work! i wish you success and best of luck! 😍

[@Lolohaole195]

Beautiful video

[@andreewebb671]

OMG! THAT'S?! Holy crap! I used to watch all of her KZbin shows. Hm. So she became an actress. Good for her.

[@jessicahunt107]

Will there be a sequel to this? I sure hope so!!! 🤞🤞

[@alwaysmanandwoman]

Loved it.

[@AutomationDnD]

This was SO well-done. ............................. so poignant There should be a part 2

[@corentin7160]

Beautyful 🍎 🌈

[@bearothman]

Wow! Beautiful and touching film!

[@modykarim9993]

Jake,how can I see full this movie..I am very like

[@christopherbenloss8459]

Wow she is simply all around beautiful 😍

[@111nation]

Ikr

[@transunicorn]

I've cried.

[@anthonyrygucki8865]

Can we have a happy ending x

[@dawnbeckett9179]

In my eyes it was a happy ending, because the woman got the guy's jacket, the guy was really nice to her, and the people on the bus gendered her correctly. Maybe that's just my optimism, but it could've been a sad ending

[@aussieyogie]

The ending is how you see it, happy or sad.

[@arianoosterbaan4583]

I hate that its a short movie, cos its just a beautiful story. 💜

[@sarahthornton1590]

Thank you, this video really touched me. It was beautiful.

[@lillestiv3523]

Besides basic knowledge about how blind ppl interact with others bieng very wrong (granted I don't know if it's stylistic choice or ignorance) I really loved this shortfilm was absolutely great and made me tear up.

[@MissMarinaCapri]

Well done, thanks for sharing ❤😊

[@raymondgilbert7266]

Subtle and touching

[@bonniewest5778]

Good film!

[@oliviawutam]

I can't take this much longer, some self-righteous 'people' are so mean

[@esabin-simpson1520]

Beautifull

[@shondra6]

🙏🙏 beautiful film.

[@probablyrachey]

this was so cute omg

[@Sasha-doll-2023]

Beautiful.

[@johnlumb1078]

Great little film well done to you all.

[@markevans1973]

So good ❤️❤️❤️❤️

[@MissMarinaCapri]

What is your name? …………….Dawn Loved it

[@joshuadavy5293]

Keep it going!!!

[@efemovies]

❤️

[@isabellerasmussen2712]

ok but how he reading the number

[@glitternpain]

He could have other people read it for him

[@kbot9197]

Somebody help me understand my son just told me about him changing and hormones I know nothing about this but my son is the nicest person I’ve ever known and no but I’m having a hard time

[@roybateman5840]

I wish the best for you and your son. He is lucky to have a supportive parent! Here are some links to check out. familyproject.sfsu.edu/family-videos familyproject.sfsu.edu/publications familyproject.sfsu.edu/resources transgenderlawcenter.org/

[@kbot9197]

@@roybateman5840 thank you roy he told me to look things up so thank you we can’t see each other we are in full lockdown just over the phone

[@chloehughes292]

Support start with at home with a loving family. There is always love and acceptance out there 🏳️‍🌈🏳️‍⚧️❤️🧡💛💚💙💜💕

[@MaceGill]

Remember that your child is the SAME PERSON you know and love.

[@daisychain3007]

He also breaks my heart because he is blind. Blindness is a terrible affliction, especially in such a young man.

[@Lavender_1618]

While this is beautiful....it just made me internalize that unless I find a blind person I'm likely to be alone forever.

[@tanickasinclair7035]

This is Jennifer Sinclair. What a cool film! I want a guy like that!!!!

[@jamis2031]

Yay I loved it ❤

[@LaHayeSaint]

This was a hauntingly beautiful but very strange video which i didn't understand.

[@markcraig4036]

Nice. Dawn is a lovely woman.

[@annejones597]

Beautiful

[@akbar8477]

a real human interaction that is it.

[@DavidStoops-ml8ib]

Reminds me of Norfolk countryside

[@islaws4589]

😊💜

[@CyberPun]

She took the man's jacket !

[@sueannewalsh1919]

I so wanted him to get on the bus with her.

[@DaniPitchford]

i wanna see more...

[@benjifox6354]

So human ,

[@hannahf7458]

Wow im early

[@u.karnan8766]

👍👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏💚💛💜💙

[@giannicasarino4348]

9p

[@petercrane430]

A beautiful film, thanks