This piece was written, recorded and performed by Jordan Bailey. Jordan hopes that it inspires you to be your best self. Enjoy!
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@RatchelRach5 жыл бұрын
Dear you, Your skin isn't paper, so don't cut it. Your life isn't a film, so don't end it. Your size isn't a book, so don't judge it. Your face isn't a mask, so don't hide it. Life is short, so don't make it shorter. Your head isn't a target, so please don't shoot it. Sincerely, someone who cares about you more than you could ever know, even if I don't know you in person. Edit: I come back to this video every so often. I forgot about this comment. My sister did that last one on November 22nd 2020 because she didn't realize how amazing she was, and I miss her so much. So I mean this even more than I did when I first wrote this comment when I say: Don't. Give. Up. It's not worth it. You are loved and cared for by more people than you think, including me. I don't know how she didn't see that. I'm not asking for pity or you to feel bad for me or anything, but if you could pray for my family or at least wish them well, that would make my day more than you could ever possibly know. It's November 22, 2021. Thought I'd come back to this for the occasion.
@k.k72083 жыл бұрын
@unreasonably random I saw this comment a few days ago and prayed throughout the day. It was the day I was contemplating. (You know if you know) it helped me. But I prayed for your family all day. I hope you could feel God’s presence in that moment. Lots of love to you, your family, and your sister
@RatchelRach3 жыл бұрын
@@k.k7208 Thank you so much. This comment really made my day. God bless you.
@RatchelRach3 жыл бұрын
@@k.k7208 also I'm glad my comment helped you through your struggles and it's so amazing that I was able to spread joy and love to someone who needed it
@RatchelRach3 жыл бұрын
@@k.k7208 Hey I know I'm still just a stranger on the internet, but I just wanted to check in to see how you're doing. I'm still praying for you. ❤️
@k.k72083 жыл бұрын
@@RatchelRach thank you so much for asking! i am doing much better as i have made my dance team and have good supportive friends at my side. ofc i still have moments but i’m over all so much better. again, i can’t thank you enough for this comment🥰 how are you feeling lately?
@naomiwolff88356 жыл бұрын
This deserves way more attention. So underrated. So powerful and this is a gift, that you can write poetry like this. Love love love yourself.
@JordanCathryn6 жыл бұрын
Naomi Wolff thank you lovely that means a lot
@daisywestwood9045 жыл бұрын
Naomi Wolff d cg
@animalb-channel8839 ай бұрын
This is my solo song this year
@VinoVenitas6 жыл бұрын
"Dear you, I feel the same way as you." That line right there was the one that really hit home with me. So many times do I have to tell myself that Im ok. This was beautiful and the way you moved to your own words was stunning. Well done
@JordanCathryn6 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for your kind words and comments. It means a lot to me that it mattered to you.
@jessplays80926 жыл бұрын
This might be my favourite poem ever. This deserves so much more attention. This was absolutely beautiful. Amazing job!
@JordanCathryn5 жыл бұрын
That means so much. Thank you for all your support.
@kaylamccabe11426 жыл бұрын
this is way too underrated. amazing! really, truly, amazing.
@ellakitchen44626 жыл бұрын
Can you put the audio on Apple Music plzzzz or send a link ❤️
@ryanboles58495 жыл бұрын
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH, SO INSPIRING, IM GONNA CRY
@258605 жыл бұрын
That was beautiful… I felt all the emotion... and such beautiful words.... I loved it!
@cassiusfelix28055 жыл бұрын
I tear up a little bit at the end that was beautiful
@abbiegandy64635 жыл бұрын
This was beautiful. Never stop being you, you're amazing and your words are changing the world. One person at a time ❤️
@walli_art Жыл бұрын
That is the most beautiful dance I have ever seen. And to the most beautiful song and person.
@ryl30674 жыл бұрын
This is absolutely beautiful!! I feel so alive after watching this.
@gabriellekelly39613 жыл бұрын
So awesome! I really enjoyed watching this video.
@marymargaretdavis21485 жыл бұрын
Love this so much.
@thetanyasaxena4 жыл бұрын
Dear Jordan, This is an absolutely beautiful piece of work, and something to be proud of. I also see in the comments that you’ve freely shared permission for many other dancers to use your poem for creating work as well. As a dancer myself, I know how emotional the process of creation is, and in addition to your obvious skills as a dancer and writer I commend your generosity of spirit. Thank you so much for sharing this, and all the best for your further work!
@lilyandlexislife Жыл бұрын
So kind ❤️
@malachisavage12376 жыл бұрын
how can i get a hold of you to use this piece of music/words for my own dance performance?
@sophiewennekamp5 жыл бұрын
Please tell me this got first overall! This is so amazing, so emotionally this needs more attention!
@zFlxmezz4 жыл бұрын
i love this alot i recommend to alot of other people
@zoehendershot7725 жыл бұрын
This is amazing! Is there anyway I could get a link of this so I can use it?
@alexalopezmusic10 ай бұрын
This made me cry
@paigeaddison22856 жыл бұрын
This dance is amazing
@JordanCathryn6 жыл бұрын
I am so glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to let me know.
@paigeaddison22856 жыл бұрын
Your welcome you are a beautiful dancer
@TristanCulver24 күн бұрын
Hi Jordan! I was wondering if I could get your permission to have your poem and song to dance to whenever I need to get my feelings out! Thank you for being so inspiring! ❤️
@KaterynaFreitas Жыл бұрын
Did you write this? If so it’s absolutely beautiful and I’m gunna save this video so I can listen to it whenever ❤️
@lilyandlexislife Жыл бұрын
Dear Jordan!! This is so beautiful. I actually shed a tear near the end, you have such a gift to write poetry like this and dance to it. May I use this audio for a solo at my dance studio for next year? Your words are so inspiring and I would be honoured for you to let me use it, if so, would you like me to send you my email? Amazing and such an inspirational dance and poetry. 🩷❤️😊
@JordanCathryn Жыл бұрын
Hi Lily, you are more than welcome to use it! You can email me at jor02@onlinemac.com
@muscat5464 жыл бұрын
I loved the dance and poem
@ainsleyholeman34 жыл бұрын
i really love this piece and i was wondering if i could use it for my solo this year! it’s so beautiful, if not i completely understand!! thank you!!!
@brigidmay61725 жыл бұрын
This video is all I ever needed to hear. Thank you so much.
@studentslife14484 жыл бұрын
when I was seeing this I got lost in the video .Really liked your video and the effort done by you
@truptibenpatel32452 жыл бұрын
Exactly what I needed to hear!
@GeraldineDeBorahMusic Жыл бұрын
Beautiful👏
@vijaypandey78064 жыл бұрын
I am in love with your thought put into performance
@Laurab133855 жыл бұрын
This really speaks to me
@lorahashley80954 жыл бұрын
Could someone please tell me the what the music is in the background I love it!
@nichoelann Жыл бұрын
this is incredibly beautiful! 💞
@andrijanarabusic6655 Жыл бұрын
Too good❤
@simrankhapare77763 жыл бұрын
I heard this and loved it so much, that I prepared a performance with this and received so much love
@simrankhapare77763 жыл бұрын
Can you please allow me to upload on you tube too?
@JordanCathryn2 жыл бұрын
I saw your comment asking to upload it, and yes please do! Just give credit and tag me as I'd love to see it!
@ameliacollins70755 жыл бұрын
This sounds like it was written to me. Thank you.
@Croissantsss4 жыл бұрын
This is beautiful choreography!!! Inspired by Sierra demulder?
@nathanaelcard4 жыл бұрын
This is dope, Jordan
@danceinactionstudio114111 ай бұрын
Hi Jordan, I Love this spoken word - found it so inspirational! I wondered if I could please use some of the audio for my dance team routine. Have emailed you too for permission X
@sisitauheluhelu17034 жыл бұрын
Name of the instrumental audio ??
@adriannehess17594 жыл бұрын
I really want to dance to this!
@dyaniison59624 жыл бұрын
love this
@emilygrove41254 жыл бұрын
This is one of my new favorite dances, I dont know if you will see this but is there anyway I could use this poem and song for my up coming season, it will be a different dance! But I love this ❤❤❤
@JordanCathryn4 жыл бұрын
Yes feel free to use the poem and song, I'd love for it to be used and shared:)
@blasiaantinoro52632 жыл бұрын
Jordan do you have the instrumental part to this song I love it and would love to use
@Jasmith626 Жыл бұрын
I emailed and sent a message on fb for permission to use your audio for choreography! Thanks
@yvonnevuillermin75206 ай бұрын
Hello how do I ask for permission to use this track for my daughter she would love to dance to it.
@willowsolly88995 жыл бұрын
Please link the audio!!!!?
@biaben13132 жыл бұрын
Hello Jordan! This is absolutely beautiful. So inspiring! I was wondering if I may use your music for my dance team. It would be an honor to be able to dance to this. Sending Love!
@JordanCathryn2 жыл бұрын
Thank you, I'm happy to let you use it!
@biaben13132 жыл бұрын
@@JordanCathryn Thank you so much! Can I send you my email??
@JordanCathryn2 жыл бұрын
@@biaben1313 Feel free to shoot me an email: jor02@onlinemac.com
@sydney4081 Жыл бұрын
Hey Jordan, I was just wondering if we could use this song for my solo this year? We have already started it at dance, but we can't add to much until you give us the ok.
@JordanCathryn Жыл бұрын
Hi Sydney, yes you may use it! If it's posted anywhere, please give credit, and best of luck with your routine!
@micaelacrimi94104 жыл бұрын
SONG??????¿¿¿¿¿ PLSSS
@evelynmanresa90415 жыл бұрын
Is there any way you could post the lyrics online?
@abbyrampling86604 жыл бұрын
what song is this to??
@sarahnarysblog Жыл бұрын
Can I use the audio for a dance competition choreo?
@JordanCathryn Жыл бұрын
Yes
@sarahnarysblog Жыл бұрын
The text is from you but how is the melody called?
@kaylasmith6343 жыл бұрын
Hi! I’m looking for some spoken poetry to dance to and i absolutely love this it’s beautiful and I was wondering if I could have some sort of Mp3 of it or some recording that I could use for a dance? If not I completely understand this is yours completely I just think that it’s so amazing and would love to use it myself😊
@JordanCathryn3 жыл бұрын
Yes of course you can! Send an email to jor02@onlinemac.com and I'll send it to you
@kaylasmith6343 жыл бұрын
Ok!!
@juliettewade1921 Жыл бұрын
This is beautiful and I have a dancer that wants to use it to compete with this season. May I use it for her solo?
@JordanCathryn Жыл бұрын
Yes you may!
@juliettewade1921 Жыл бұрын
@@JordanCathryn thanks so much!!❤️
@cf78155 жыл бұрын
Hi, I was wondering if I could use this for my solo this year? I've been told that spoken word is a good challenge, and I feel like I'll be able to execute the dance better if I actually feel what the poem is about. This really, really speaks to me and I was wondering I could use it? If you don't want me to, I respect your decision :)
@JordanCathryn5 жыл бұрын
of course you can use it!
@cf78155 жыл бұрын
@@JordanCathryn thank you so much for replying!
@turnerjanus89833 жыл бұрын
I thought this was very beautiful, would you mind if I could use this piece for a dance solo?
@JordanCathryn2 жыл бұрын
Yes you may!
@CandiceClarkeAcademy2 жыл бұрын
Dear Jordan can I use this poem to choreograph for a competition please
@JordanCathryn2 жыл бұрын
Yes you may! Just give credit and tag me as I'd love to see it!
@lizbethacevedo67632 жыл бұрын
Hey! your piece really spoke to me and i was wondering if i could use this for my senior solo?
@JordanCathryn2 жыл бұрын
Absolutely! Let me know if you need audio:)
@lizbethacevedo67632 жыл бұрын
@@JordanCathryn yes please! that would be great!
@JordanCathryn2 жыл бұрын
@@lizbethacevedo6763 Please send me an email at jor02@onlinemac.com so I can send it to you
@ROHITYADAV-xk3gb3 жыл бұрын
Dear you , will you please make a voice for me ? " There was once a girl so bright the sparkle in her eyes never dull she had everything she could have dreamed of her life wasn't perfect but with him as perfect as it gets he gave her hope that one day she would have her fairytale herself the princess and him the prince but not after long the prince turned into a toad he built the princess a castle of hope only to knock it all down he told her about this thing called love the princess unsure if it were real he taught her how to feel it but didn't stay to make it last the silly toad didn't know what he lost but the princess lost something that day the sparkle in her eye burned out and she was sure they'd never shine again for he was the reason they lit up."
@niawilliams91184 жыл бұрын
Omg, can I use this audio to choreograph with for my company audition? This is beautiful
@JordanCathryn4 жыл бұрын
yes! please do!
@niawilliams91184 жыл бұрын
Jordan Bailey thank you so much!!
@tracytrotter4458 Жыл бұрын
@@JordanCathryn where can I get a copy of this audio? LOVE LO
@dannycoleman15802 жыл бұрын
My daughter is learning a contemporary piece to this song. Would you give us permission to use it in our competitions?
@JordanCathryn2 жыл бұрын
Yes!
@dannycoleman1580 Жыл бұрын
@@JordanCathryn thank you so much. I will send you the video of her first competition using your amazing song.
@dannycoleman1580 Жыл бұрын
@@JordanCathryn do you have an email or somewhere I can send the video of her first competition using your song?
@briannaduncan42585 жыл бұрын
hey jordan! my name is brianna duncan and i am also a dancer. i was looking for songs that really inspired me and something i can relate to and i fell in love with this one. i was wondering if i could do a competitive solo to this song??? i would really like youre permission to use it so pleaseee get back to me!
@JordanCathryn5 жыл бұрын
I'd be happy to let you use it!
@briannaduncan42585 жыл бұрын
Jordan Bailey, thank you so much! it really means alot
@gabiperez70115 жыл бұрын
I have been looking for a solo song for months and finna came across this. Would you feel okay if i used this for my solo piece
@JordanCathryn5 жыл бұрын
yes of course please use it!
@JordanCathryn5 жыл бұрын
yes!
@sophietimony42283 жыл бұрын
What audio is this :)
@JordanCathryn3 жыл бұрын
It's an original
@schulz04013 жыл бұрын
Could I use this for my solo this year?
@JordanCathryn3 жыл бұрын
yes!
@schulz04013 жыл бұрын
@@JordanCathryn omg really thank you sooooo much I love this. My uncle committed suicide 7 months ago and since then our family is going thru really hard times. I think this is exactly how I feel and if he would've he would still be here. Thank you sooo much
@schulz04013 жыл бұрын
@@JordanCathryn Hello again so I was wondering if by any chance you have the original audio file? We tried using it from this video but it doesn't sound too good. Would you be willing to share it with me. I can purchase if you want
@schulz04013 жыл бұрын
@@JordanCathryn hi Jordan pls respond to my last comment. I really need to start pls I follow back in a day or you can unfollow 😋 my solo soon and I can't picture myself dancing to anything else. It would mean so much to me to be able to dance to your awesome words. They really do inspire me. We just need to audio to sound better so that is why we need the original. Again we are willing to purchase it.
@sydneyclementshaw14095 жыл бұрын
I sent this to my bff who also goes through what I go throw (not going to get into details sorry)