Digimon Story Episode 1 - Part 4

[@zerodex3039]

I have finally uploaded the final part for episode 1. I hope you guys enjoyed it. Was there anything I needed to improve on? I would love to hear your feedback. Thank you for the support! I really appreciate it.

[@minedantaken1684]

I just realized that this story is kinda a mix of konosuba and promissed neverland when it comes to the tone. Quite interesting, but idk how to criticise something like that. If I were to point out two things worth improving, then: 1. Add voices. Doesn't matter who, it doesn't have to be professional, your mics quality is far more than enough, just so we have more of a distinction and a feel for the characters by the way they speak. 2. Try making character sheets to stay more on model. I'd recomend if you take a shintani approach and simplify the characters as much as you can. + 2 mini tips. Keep a semi-consistant lineweight, so you don't get something like on 1:22 where one digimon has a THICC ASS outline and the other doesn't at all and try using a stabilizer to make your lines look smoother. Good luck, always happy to help, if you'd like! Edit: Should've made this comment after watching the whole thing. I have one small problem with the way one digimon seems powerfull at one moment, then it gets overpowered by airdramon AND then airdramon gets defeated like that.

[@wobblebubbeeakasham8118]

@@minedantaken1684 huh maybe I should help voice act one of the babies

[@holdthetruthhostage]

Respect for evolving the content

[@Jaxionisnum2]

Dang Cyclomon is massive and just when I thought Airdramon was big. Poor Elecmon though

[@igorholanda4415]

Good work and good luck

[@chomperboy7092]

If this had voice acting this would be the best series on KZbin

[@darknessoverwhelmed]

This was great.

[@Ryan_BB]

Jesus airdramon is so big, bigger then tyrannomon same as cyclonemon

[@wobblebubbeeakasham8118]

I love Beta- sorry Airdramon at first he seems intimidating but he still has the personality of Betamon and is very carefree because of it but to any evil Digimon Airdramon is cruel and for good reason. but why did zurumon eat and explode also now it seems like everyone is dead but why did cyclonemon and mokumon survive. I can see why airdramon live but why those two. tyrannomon definitely needs some representation so you played it smart and have a rivalry with greymon but I wonder, do you think tyrannomon can digivolve to leviamon. cause they both have similar color scheme, both reptile like, and tyrannomon is envious about greymon and leviamon represents envy. Also the im airdarmon now was such a cool reference. I also find the inspiration super cool.

[@YEARZERO-os8tm]

As long as the main features of their design are still there you can simplify the digimons designs a bit to make them easier to draw

[@weregarurumon3202]

Rip everyone

[@jasondobbins9735]

Can you do a video on chronomon I feel like not many people know of him

[@holdthetruthhostage]

Featuring Skull Faced Shinron

[@FahadNFT]

the old idea seems better than the scene in episode I loved the story this could be more serious digimon story I am also planing to make a digimon story but manga not animated video

[@Cretus4718]

Hope he's doing fine.

[@Pokemontrinerblue]

But me dent wacs tah digimon movie

[@RomHunterBlueSilver]

Is the metal empire is THAT Bad? It need further study.

[@met7137]

First?

[@renamon5658]

Third