Nice you started off strong but got sloppy at the end and didn't recover to well but still a good set overall good luck
@proudja6 жыл бұрын
thanks for the critique, will keep it in mind respect
@JuggernautProductions6 жыл бұрын
Try again next year bro, try more word plays from different genres and some tone play and better song choices.
@proudja6 жыл бұрын
thanks but if u payed attention i played more than 5 genres literally built this the night of deadline from scratch, how about you post a lil routine yourself with some pointers? but thanks for the critique
@JuggernautProductions6 жыл бұрын
I said you should try again with more word plays, or better ones r more vibrant songs. Like when you play jump around, before the sean paul, you could quickly play jumpman for a second, when u playing "shake that thing" from sean paul, you could play shake your ass by mystical, when you playinf rock my world from MJ u could play Rock Di world from Chi Ching Ching. When you play this is how we do it, you play the elephant man and bounty this is how we do it,. When you play the 1, 2, 3 that can be found of the intro of vybz kartel's money fi spend, you could bring in Alklaine's 123 . You're saying you accept my crtique and telling me post something to prove myself with pointers. Everyone entering the 3 style are scratching, judges are looking for creativity and word plays are key in that. I don't camera record mixes. But who knows I may drop one here. But dont think its bashing. I am really dissappointed with the Jamaican entries. DJ 47 is only one who has a chance, and he is using CDJs , SO it shows its not about the equipment its your talent.. But try again next year, but if you want more advice lemme know.
@JuggernautProductions6 жыл бұрын
The fact that you made this on the night of the deadline, kinda suggests that you weren't really interested in entering.
@proudja6 жыл бұрын
will prolly use those for an idea not bad
@JuggernautProductions6 жыл бұрын
Yea bredda, strength for everyone bro. We in this together man. You have the equipment. Victory is yours for the taking. Peace bro.