Doctor Who | The Star Beast Intro (FIXED)

[@FPSpsychoYT]

Oh this is MILES better, great work!

[@Suedehead05]

Very kind words, much appreciated!

[@santiago6555]

Thank God you removed "once upon a timelord" bro wtf was RTD thinking when he wrote that LMAO

[@ShortCircuitStudios]

I personally liked the line but you’re free to have your own opinion.

[@DocKerns]

I thought it was fire 💀

[@mohzayd1234]

@Eclipse.mp4ur onto something

[@DoctorDisco1963]

Funny enough, there was a comic book released in 2023 (was supposed to be released in 2022 but was delayed) featuring The Tenth Doctor and Martha Jones with that exact title!

[@lesliejamesgilbertbyrne6448]

I loved it

[@powpenguin7483]

So much better! The original just felt really awkward

[@LilacLily17]

Omg this is amazing! Much better than David Tennant standing there like 🧍‍♂️ lol

[@Road_to_Dawn]

What the heck, how is this so much better even than every official recap on the entire show lol

[@senseweaver01]

Yeah this is brilliant! The original episode's intro was like an awkward job interview

[@DB_137]

😮😆 Unreal! That intro was such a nostalgic sequence, was so great to see all of that paired with the OST, and the titles sounded and looked bloody brilliant XD Fantastic job 🙌

[@Suedehead05]

Thank you so much, means a lot!

[@Doctor_What63]

Wow - miles better than what we got. Really beautifully done

[@DanielAnnear]

Tbh this trailer HITS HARD!! Far better edit. Rather than that awkward standing in the middle of space. 😅 Great job!

[@TheGamingNinja704-TGN704]

Maybe a good thing we didn’t get this intro. As the episode after it would never live up to the hype created before the title sequence. 😂

[@TheValeyard1430]

this intro is great, the only changes i would make, would be trying to edit the logo to be the newer one, plus render the same time vortex as classic RTD for season 4, but with the current exterior flying through, then maybe by the end, have it transition slowly into what we see the intro is now,

[@Chord_]

I was just expecting David cropped into his TARDIS, but this is miles beyond that! Loved it! I especially commend you for the choice of music, very apropos!

[@Alkonium]

That reminds me, I saw someone do up a take on the 2005 intro, but redone with the 2023 logo and the 2018 TARDIS.

[@AlexGonzalez-gf4oz]

Yeah, I was thinking about that video while watching this.

[@dudley3403]

You fixed it by showing less star beast and more series 4, very smart my friend 🤗 also great music choice

[@sarahglover3286]

The actual one seemed so tacked on, this looks like someone actually tried to do a previously!

[@PapaLuge]

God its so much better

[@cimmeriantenebrae4272]

This is incredible and a very succinct recap for the Doctor and Donna! I really love the theme tune used for the opening credits and I would love to hear a longer version!

[@voltage4176]

This is SOOO much better then what we got. Great work!

[@FireBrickStudios]

HELL YES! SO MUCH BETTER!

[@dsdots]

THE INTRO MUSIC

[@Blazing_Ninja]

This is so much better! Great job!

[@randomdonutguy9636]

this is really good, some of the sound effects are ok, but on a BBC budget would be incredible, but really great job considering you're just a fan, lush build up at the end.

[@Suedehead05]

Thank you very much, really do apricate this. This is by no means by best work, however i did intend on polishing up the video before it was uploaded. Sadly i lost the original files i had whilst editing and had this one kept aside unlisted which could definitely have been improved.

[@elfiooh]

Perfect 🤩 I found the original intro a bit shit actually, not a fan of these shots of the Doctor standing in space talking to the camera...

[@X08-Chill]

I kinda love them, for all the wrong reasons 😂

[@Suedehead05]

This is exactly how i felt, the intro we got for the star beast felt rather cheaply produced, i think a flashback scene like i mocked up might have worked better (without tooting my own horn)

[@X08-Chill]

@@Suedehead05 Yeah, it's very telling that Rachel Talalay’s name isn't on it. I'm fine with the recap existing and playing before the episode on first broadcast, but it really shouldn't be the actual pre-titles sequence

[@Budbrothers420]

They had to make the most of his incarnation even his merch was mental 😂

[@teamrobotgaming]

This is fantastic!

[@leshiy_nd]

Fantastic!

[@fintandavies]

Such a great edit! 😃

[@Lumibear.]

Lovely! Thank you so much for that.

[@FlatSatire]

Excellent!

[@morganhames]

Oh this is so brilliant! SO much better than the original - especially the music, what a great combination of all the themes! Where is the music from?

[@M3rche]

Amazing!

[@adamsmithington7478]

This is way better than david tennant standing on nothing. This literally explains and shows more than the actual intro. I think they made that awful intro because disney wanted them to give backstory for new viewers. Also the title sequence was great with the 2008 sequence but remixed theme representing nuwho and old who and it didn't have the crappy PowerPoint slide graphic for the logo well done!

[@the_real_drwhoroblox1935]

only critique is at 0:32 when donna shakes

[@Oheretic]

Hell yes.

[@cameronsonnex6276]

Can we get intro and outro please

[@ajax4887]

Why didn't he do it this way?

[@jxsh03]

How did you get the voice lines without the background music?

[@overlordswapi594]

ok but it's missing the "Once upon a timelord" :

[@Suedehead05]

Duly noted, you're right i should have added that

[@topmandog1]

i love but why a 20fps series 4 intro

[@Suedehead05]

This is a rough draft I've had kicking about for 8months roughly now, it definitely needed some polishing but the original edited i compiled become corrupt and instead of going to waste i decided to upload the unlisted version i had available, definitely not perfect but it is what it is. Hope this clears things up.

[@Domihork]

How did we get to the point where random people on youtube do a much better job at producing this show than actual people paid to do it by the BBC and Disney?

[@BrianRumbaoaDisney1998]

888 Likes!

[@Mxtt_Hxll]

I mean this isn’t a “fixed” intro. It’s a completely different intro altogether.

[@ewobbley]

What? This ‘completely different intro’ fixes the introduction of the episode. Fix means to put something right, and/or improve or adapt something. If this video replaced The Star Beast intro, it would be putting things right. This is because it is an improvement. It adapts the original intro by using the narration and presenting the idea better. This video fixes the episodes intro, objectively and without doubt.

[@TheMoonRover]

@@ewobbley Your opinion is, by definition, not objective. You say it's an improvement. I say it's a fun edit, but way too long of a recap to be used in an actual episode.

[@ewobbley]

@@TheMoonRover It’s only 20 seconds longer. Instead of The Star Beast being 57 minutes long, it would be 57 minutes and 20 seconds long. An increase of 0.581%. The recap in Twice Upon A Time was 1 minute and 10 seconds just to recap one story, while this fix of the Star Beast intro is 30 seconds longer and manages to succinctly recap an entire series (and specials) of the show. A Star Wars show (Obi) had a four minute recap to cover 7 hours of content, whereas Ten and Donna has around 13 hours of content and this fans’ fix for the recap is only 1 minute and 50 seconds. This fix of the recap is not ‘way too long’ by any means. What exactly is your measurement and parameter for the basis of your opinion? Why can it not be an improvement because it doesn’t meet your personal arbitrary length? You could have said the SFX or music or bitrate was better in the actual introduction, but you chose the most personal preference thing ever.

[@TheMoonRover]

@@ewobbley Well, what is your "objective" measure of what is or isn't an improvement? You claim your opinions are objective and without doubt, then try to refute others by making irrelevant arguments which completely miss the point. It's not a fix, it's an edit. A fix implies there was something wrong with the original, but you never bothered to explain what that is. Seems a bit hypocritical, don't you think? As for your question: relevance. All the relevant information was given in the episode, so did it really even need a recap in the first place? (The producers didn't think so until Disney asked). This edit doesn't add anything useful. Other shows might indeed need a longer recap because there is more information to fit in. And yes, I agree. There are definitely some oddities with sound, bitrate, etc, but this is a quick fan edit, not an official thing. That could be smoothed out, but it's still excessive for a recap. Not sure about the music transitions either.

[@ewobbley]

⁠@@TheMoonRoverYou have cried strawman when there isn’t one and have resorted to personal attacks because you have weak retort that isn’t backed up by any evidence or logical reasoning. I am embarrassed I’ve taken the bait to this trolling.

[@koromerzhin]

Where is sutehk ?

[@The_Lost_Subrosian]

Bringing back David Tennant in hindsight however was a big mistake given his more recent behaviour

[@Gnargleherooftime]

His recent behaviour... Of not being transphobic? No I think he's good lmao