Does this sound good?(Self composed etude)

[@lotavio343]

Y e S

[@Swaroque]

Bravo ! Claps. Love the moment around 0:20 and the sudden developments. But it's actually the same three note motif. Short phrases.

[@Benatural1]

@@Swaroque first work,not very proud of it lol

[@Swaroque]

@@Benatural1 It's a praise, brother. Although I love music and recognise a few things, but nowhere at this level.

[@divinitylegend]

Very good😊

[@gpiano1801]

I really like it! It sounds so cool

[@Benatural1]

I'm glad you liked it!

[@davidedentuti]

very good, but watch your notation. still, this is very impressive. keep it up!!!!

[@Benatural1]

Oh yeah,notations messed up but I'll take care of it from now on,thx for commenting!

[@Teslav2_music]

deserves more views in my opinion

[@Benatural1]

Thanks!

[@Whatismusic1234]

Short answer: Yes

[@AnonymousPianist99]

I hate you you think this is better than bartok. No hate to this guy, it’s a good composition but damn nigga

[@nassera]

1:05 sounds like something I know but I forgot.

[@Scherzo-j5y]

The rhythm is interesting

[@Jqh73o]

This would benefit a lot from a real performance, sadly, with the midi, the melody is difficult to follow, and what sounds is the top voice

[@Benatural1]

@@Jqh73o I'll probably simplify it for performance in the future,thanks for the feedback

[@Asd-zj5te]

Please, send me this notes. I will play it

[@Benatural1]

@@Asd-zj5te Do you have discord?

[@marinadela1361]

Have you tried playing it yourself?

[@Benatural1]

I haven't and I know that there are some parts that are almost impossible to play lol

[@ChairPencil]

No

[@mac1024]

no, pretty boring

[@YukiEhms]

It lacks maturity

[@Jqh73o]

What is lacking maturity for you. It is a very subjective term