How to Write the Perfect IELTS Essay Introduction

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I have 10 days left in academic ielts...need help in reading

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[@yusufkaya1393]

hi can i have your help for my issue? some examiners that i have talk to told me that don't ever write too much words in your intro while when I look your videos you guys are written around 70 to 80 words I don't know which one to go with -_- since you got a good score maybe you can help me with this mate.

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Can you help in reading part please

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Can u tell me how to write task two bp plz

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More tips kindly

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This has been one of the best explanations about how to write essay intros, thank you guys for making it public to everyone. It says a lot about you.

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Did you use "I" in your thesis statement of introduction part?

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what to do when a person has no knowledge about the topic?

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Amusing 😊

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I totally totally recommend E2. I am super amazed how you guys are so amazing. I was struggling to get 7 in writing. With your guidance especially the teacher Mark, I got 8.5 7.5 7 7 in LRWS respectively. All glory goes to God and credit to you folks thanks from the bottom of my heart.

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Hey mark and jay tha day came, i scored 7.5 in ielts thanks for all your support and car.

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Hi Alex and Jay, i got my IELTS results today and scored 7 bands overall in first attempt. I want to thank both of you from the bottom of my heart; because of your KZbin videos, i was able to get such a good quality material. God bless both of you, thank you so much!!!! P.S. while writing this, i used something which Jay taught as a writing tip😁

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@Mirjalol Shamsiddinov To be honest, i barely spent 2 days. Did some practice for reading and listening and watched these videos for tips and tricks. For listening, i did not prepare, just went there with full confidence and spoke to best of my abilities. All i can say is don't worry much, its really a simple exam. You just need peace of mind and confidence. If you have time, please practice sample questions too.

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I found this video extremely helpful and will be able to apply these tips and explanations to my upcoming IELTS test. Thank you for providing clear and thorough lessons.

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I just got my results this morning, I got 6.0 in my writing and I study under this post within 3 days . Thank you very much 🙏🏻

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Mark, I want to say thank you for these videos on writing and for your feedback when i got my writing evaluated. You are the best and I am happy to recommend anyone who is struggling with writing to you.

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I love this ssoooo much so I did my test yesterday & on my way to the exam I was listening....surprisingly I got this same topic for my task 2 can't wait to get my result

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What was your result?

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Update! I got an overall of 7

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Hi, thanks for this video, it was really useful. I passed my IELTS test.

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Hat's off Mark! You just have changed my way of thinking about the essay writing.

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Seriously you don't need to stress on this. I have had issues with writing essays. But today, I think I can make a band 8, if I study on put all your guide into practice. Taking my IELTS test in Feb. Thank you

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Dear Mark, I can not thank you enough for very much clearer and convenient explanation of ideas... God bless you. Keep sharing if possible...

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this is the lesson that i've been seeking for a long time. i needed to the understand of the mathematics of this exam!

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Thanks that help me a lot. It totally changed me writing in essays.

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[@dans1454]

My only query with this is that the question doesn't ask about fairness; it only asks about efficiency. Therefore, isn't talking about fairness going off topic?

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Wow! Mark you are a perfect and gifted teacher, You have really opened my mind on how to get the essay writing right. Great ideas thanks God bless you 🙏

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Tomorrow is my test day i hope this instructions would boost my scores

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The best explanation that I have ever learnt

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Videos in this channel helped me so much with my writing. Thanks a lot!

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Good luck with your IELTS writing study! There are more helpful videos here kzbin.info/door/e0ULdWzDjXxXFICmpK057Q

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Really clear and useful explanation! Thank you for this great video!

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Thus so so perfect and well explained. I have learnt alot. Simple things that u didn't know. I have an exam in a months time, it's really helpful

[@maylwin4033]

If the introduction doesn't include the background statement, it will effect the score? Thank you for uploading the upgraded IELTS related videos.

[@E2IELTS]

It’s best if you write a broad background statement.

[@70sk8erboy70]

I understood the question a little differently. “an efficient way to deal with crime” can be interpreted as an efficient way to reduce crime or prevent it. I have answered the question accordingly. Do you think I would lose points? The question does not really define what “dealing with crime” is…

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Hello Mark, this video has really helped to simplify the entire essay writing process to me... I thank you so much for sharing.

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L9 R8.5 W7,5 sp7,5 😊😊

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Learning Has taken place

[@nandishajani]

Sometimes there is no question at all. Instead it is a statement "Discuss both these views and give your own opinion"

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Thank you Mark. Well explained.

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Glad you liked it

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Hi Mark! Your lesson is simply outstanding.It's because,you've shared the tips as to how to go about the essay in the IELTS exams. Thanks & regards.

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This is the best explanation I have ever have , thanks a lot ; please do a lot of video about how to write the disadvantage and advantages introduction.

[@IELTSwithBrad]

I'll try and create this video soon. There are more helpful videos here kzbin.info/door/e0ULdWzDjXxXFICmpK057Q

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Thanks a lot . Wish you all the best 🌸

[@oyagbesanolusegun2633]

Due to the alarming rise in crime rate in some countries in recent time, there is need for a proactive measure to curb the menace. Some people have advocated for more enrolment in police force, as the best panacea to reduce crime rate. I do not share this view and in this essay, I will discuss some of my reasons.

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As an established nation, to guarantee the safety and security of society and its citizens, the government should follow some constant deterrent comeuppance for its culprits. Some opine that this is the viable alternative to decrease the crime rate. Notwithstanding this contention, I do believe that there are moments when the justice system needs to be more flexible towards criminals. This essay will explore two reasons in support of my perspective and also will discuss why implementing a stable set of punishments can curb the level of crime in society.

[@arhunm1981]

You're making it complicated by forcefully inserting sophisticated words. Here the flow doesn't feel natural. To be precise, it lacks collocation.

[@samakvan119]

@@arhunm1981 thank you for the comment. but the words are used naturally, however being five-dollar words. In Band Descriptor, you can see using uncommon words can increase the score for Lexis while not bringing any confusion. To me, there is no confusion. Could you be more specific? Another thing is that I paraphrased the question and clarified what is going to happen in my essay. Or I am not aware of some facts that you are hinting at.

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[@Bbyc104]

Honestly my struggle is introduction, if I could get a hold of it, I’d be so confident in writing this exam

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another teacher from this channel shows a different method to write an introduction ..which one should follow?

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По практикуем?

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Thank you. Learnt so much

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Really amazing teacher you are. Thanku

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Thanks for this explanation

[@ritchieron1]

Hello. I have an observation on your example: You drift off the prompt of the question. It's never talking about fairnes of the legal system, but rather only about its efficiency. Eventhough the topic of both main ideas is the same, the second idea is drifting off from the main topic which is efficiency and not effectivity or fairness.

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Mr.Mark.. Thank you for this video..

[@itzkaurpannu2207]

I have a question. Can we start Body paragraph with the interrogative sentence ?

[@IELTSwithBrad]

You should not start the MBP with an interrogative sentence. Perhaps you can use an interrogative sentence in the introduction though. Good luck with your IELTS writing study! There are more helpful videos here kzbin.info/door/e0ULdWzDjXxXFICmpK057Q

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Sir today it's my first lecture which I listen today.its about essay.

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Good luck with your IELTS writing study! There are more helpful videos here kzbin.info/door/e0ULdWzDjXxXFICmpK057Q

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I really don't know how to write introduction regarding prompts which have more than one statement or question, I am really confused

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I disagree that "there are not different essay types". Many people successfully learn to write well by memorizing the different types and having a plan for each one. Your method may also work but realize it is not the only way.

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thank you so much! big help!

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super helpful tutorial. life-saving video.

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Plzz sir make more videos on reading ... Like how we get good marks in ielts reading .... Plzzz need your help .... Reading is quite difficult for many students ......

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As usual, informative 👌

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If like teacher on youtube do not understand our problem with the writing task, it is not the structure of the essey, it is the structure of the sentence, woh to put small rich phrase to reflect the meaning is what we lack.

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Amazing explanation. Thank you!

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This is just what I needed! Thank you so much for explaining it so nicely!

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This is great content.

[@navdeep8764]

Please help me understand this. How to answer “Do you agree or disagree?” should I be completely agree/ disagree to the statement or I can write like “I agree to the statement but also some other thing can be done”. Or like “i agree to the statement but also there are some negative impact for this on the statement given.”