How to Write Complex IELTS Sentences

[@khajaarsalaan7111]

Thanks to the team of e2 ielts (especially jay) I have secured my desire band score because of you guys! L-7.5 R-7 W-6 S-6.5 OVERALL - 7 BAND! Thanks to all of you guys to make ielts like a child's play! Love and blessings!

[@chetankumar1163]

Bro please tell me about the videos which help you

[@khajaarsalaan7111]

@@chetankumar1163 this e2 ielts channel has everything related to speaking and writing

[@khajaarsalaan7111]

@@chetankumar1163 all of the writing and speaking part refer their videos from their Playlist especially writing as they have all of the type of essays you need to learn and practice!

[@khajaarsalaan7111]

@@chetankumar1163 also check out asad yakub and arshpreet Singh for reading and writing 😊

[@khajaarsalaan7111]

And also practice practice practice specially reading and writing make your own content for writing have some knowledge about everything like advantages and disadvantages like that Go for it you can crack ielts ❤️❤️❤️

[@blessingoluwole2130]

Thank you so much Alex 🤗. You played a significant role in making me pass IELTS with an overall of 8.0......L 8.5, R 7.5, W 7.0 and S 8.0.... I sincerely give God all the glory 🙌. If I can do it, you can do it too. Trust me....study hard and pray harder 🙏. God will do it for you too. Amen 🙏

[@blenderarts311]

Amin insha'Allah

[@mlrmultisoftsolutions2239]

@Blessing Oluwole can you please tell me how did you prepared to get 8 band?

[@mlrmultisoftsolutions2239]

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[@anukomalanukomal3293]

Well done 🙂

[@blessingoluwole2130]

@@mlrmultisoftsolutions2239 I started preparing in September and sat for it in December. Don't book a date until you are absolutely ready . You can do it too 💪

[@rahulsinha7192]

I am highly grateful to the whole E2 IELTS team. The videos really helped me a lot. I attempted my IELTS (Academic) on 29th June 2019. Yesterday I got my results. By God's grace, I got an OVERALL BAND SCORE of 7.5/9.0. LISTENING: 8.0 READING: 7.0 WRITING: 6.5; could have done better here also but messed up with time management SPEAKING: 8.0 Thank you very much. This was my FIRST attempt.

[@chetankumar1163]

Bro please suggest me some videos which help you

[@pardeepkaur1706]

Plz tell about your writing task and speaking que card plz

[@zaidalbdairi2407]

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@@pardeepkaur1706 Writing task 1: LINE GRAPH showing prices of Banana in four different countries Writing task 2: advantage/disadvantage + give an opinion on consumer goods Speaking Question card: about how the Internet helped me in solving a problem recently.

[@sumitis17]

Most of the computer games have positive impact on children, provided that they are informative and teach something new to them. Although these games consume whole lot of time, they can be beneficial by curbing the screen time.

[@papy_jay]

In addition to making complex sentence, starting a sentence with subordinate conjunction also helps to achieve "Passive Sentence." This to me is wide range of sentence structure. Thank you Alex👍

[@vikrant2372]

Followed Alex and Jay for the writing module and their structured teaching methodology and tips, it worked wonders. Got an 8.5 overall. Appreciate your work. Cheers

[@alien3305]

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[@alien3305]

I suppose you're native, right?

[@RetaxChennai]

I got my results today. I scored 9777, 9 in listening. Thank you so much Alex and Jay, I just followed your advise.

[@E2IELTS]

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[@singhsaab3335]

Did you prepare from E2 Ielts only or did you follow something else too? Please share your preparation strategy.

[@imranhasan9369]

I would like to sincerely thank you for your extraordinary materials. I took GT on 7 March, 2020. Score: Overall=7.0, L=7.5, R=7.5, S=6.5,W=6.5 Love and respect from Dhaka, Bangladesh.

[@happyjatt1542]

Congratulations

[@jayedislamshawon4491]

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[@jayedislamshawon4491]

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[@sukhvirtech]

seriously man

[@prathamkesarkar]

Hello Jay, Finally I got my desired score of 7.5 in IELTS exam. L(8.5), R(7.0), S(8.0), W(6.0). Thank you so much, sir. Finally, I can achieve my dreams. I would recommend everyone to take up E2 language subscription. Totally worth it, my score improved from L(6.0), R(6.0), S(6.5), W(5.5). Average band of (6.0)

[@jashankaur1404]

Plss tell me some tips to improve speaking from band 6

[@akshaychaudhary4624]

@@jashankaur1404 speak naturally.

[@shubhangisharma6870]

Thank you for this video, I particularly struggled in the writing section and in my first attempt I was pleasantly surprised to score an overall band 8. L - 8.5, R - 8.5, S - 7.5, W -7.5. Thank you for the content and keep up the good work!

[@sarwansingh1467]

Mam writting da dsdo kuj 🙏

[@kuchevlogs]

Need help in writing

[@jajapeacetonye2015]

Even though computer games can impact on children's lives positively, there are still some negative aspects of it that should not be ignored.

[@henryryan4096]

I regret my childhood years, because I never paid attention in school. That really caught up with me later in life. Now I’m 70 years old and trying to learn English so I can communicate and write better. Thank You so much for your videos. Would you grade my paragraph, I think my writing has already improved a lot. Love Henry

[@E2IELTS]

Hello! Keep trying and learning. :)

[@sagespeaks3536]

Although I was introduced to E2 IELTS very late, that did not stop me from securing 8 in IELTS writing.

[@mdnadim9778]

Playing computer games have a positive impact on children while have a negative one.

[@zahraaabdulrahman7]

me envy you

[@imbasito]

I was thinking I am smart until I sat in the exam. Until I sat in the exam, I was thinking I am smart.

[@osagieosemwota76]

A lot of people believe computer games have a negative impact on children while others think it’s the perfect way to relieve stress. Personally I think computer games have a positive impact on children as it keeps them busy and away from trouble. Gaming actually increases a child’s hand eye co-ordination which improves their abilities in sports like basketball, volleyball and baseball. Contrary to popular belief, computer games require a lot of focus and challenges a child’s thinking capacity which may reflect on a his/her academic performance. Although video games can be addictive, parents must create a balance in order to manage gaming time along with order activities.

[@shahabnah]

Excellent! I found two typos though. may reflect on (without a) his/her... along with other activities

[@hamedakhlaqi6804]

Pors and cons

[@vatsalshah7606]

really good work but ...use some people not a lot of ...i think so

[@jabbajed926]

Dude this is too long. Hahaha.

[@ahemadriaz]

Subordinate clause- 1 Reason- Because, Since, as 2 Result- As a result, results in , leads to 3 Contrast- Although, Though, Even Though, whereas, While, However. 4 Comparison- As.......as , than, as if, as though, like 5 Conditional- If, as long as, provided that, even if, only if, whether , unless, even if, only if 6 Purpose- So that, in order to 7 Time- When, while, after, Before, during, until, as soon as , Once, Since, as long as, as 8 place- where, everywhere, anywhere, whenever 9 Manner-(How) as much as, as many as

[@prabhjeetsingh623]

Using Subordinate clauses: In order to use computer games in a productive manner, certain measures need to be taken. Kids should be monitored by parents during their usage, rather than leaving them on their own. Parents should also buy age specific games for their children, so that they don’t get indulged in illegal activities like crime and war.

[@rishh6417]

Thank you Alex and Jay Following your tutorials, tips, and techniques for preparation, I was able to score 7.5 in writing from an earlier score of 6 To whoever reading this, please watch each and every video from the playlist and practice hard. Cheers

[@janakaliyanapathirana8881]

I'm not taking about computer games but want to talk about your service for the world. I've been a Cambridge English teacher who educate students to prepare for Cambridge English Assessments for years. I've started to improve my knowledge of IELTS and followed many videos on it. E2 IELTS presents fantastic way to learn IELTS not only for students but also for teachers who have less knowledge of IELTS. I recommend E2 IELTS those who read me without any hesitate. Thank you very much E2 IELTS. Thank you very much Alex and Jay. Janaka

[@E2IELTS]

Thanks Janaka! Really appreciate your words ☺️🌟👍

[@arshadsyed6628]

Talking* about...to those* .....hesitation*

[@janakaliyanapathirana8881]

@@arshadsyed6628 Thank you again.

[@be.curious101]

Thank you Alex, I was able to score a band 8 on writing because of your help. Thank you so much :)

[@abrorrustamov245]

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[@harshgarg2774]

Hello brother I want to give exam on 8th of may so please let me know how to write the task 1 and task 2 to get 8 bands for GT

[@amoghtayade481]

Hey all, I wanted to share a very important experience with you all so that it can alert and help everyone! I recently gave the IELTS test and received L9 R7.5 W6.5 S8.5, thanks to E2 youtube videos. The whole and sole reason for not getting a better band in Writing was that I missed a part of the question that asked to write experiences for each point in the essay. Due to less time, I didn't read the last line of the Writing Part 2 which said, 'Write 250 words and write experiences for your opinions'. Had I done that, I would have scored a lot better! So please, pretty please, READ THE ENTIRE QUESTION!

[@amoghtayade481]

Update: I gave IELTS again and scored L8.5 R8.0 W7.0 S8.5 this time! Thanks, E2!

[@samat1728]

@@amoghtayade481 great job man

[@DYKSHOW]

Since I'm Watching these videos a day before my IELTS, it will help me score a significant band. Thank you E2 team and please wish me good luck. 🙂

[@princesscarolyn3480]

hey did u get it?

[@kasumimisty8354]

What did you score?

[@melissafelipecadillo5085]

Thanks a ton for this lesson! Although some computer games could have an educational purpose, most of them negatively influence children’s behaviour. Parents often believe that computer games have a negative impact on their offspring, while psychologists suggest that they could help children develop skills such as creativity and teamwork.

[@jatinbharth5921]

Hey Melissa I also wanna write a essay like this could you pls give me some tips about grammer or complex once

[@melissafelipecadillo5085]

@@jatinbharth5921 hi! I’d recommend you to write as many sentences as you can using the structures shown in the video. Also, you can see your mistakes by using Grammarly (free version). Best of luck!

[@taimurzahid7877]

Someone, please review this introduction paragraph :) E-Sports have taken the world by storm, and what was previously a fun activity to do over the weekends has now evolved into a highly competitive field. People spend hours daily to master their skills to better control the characters as well as unlock new features and moves. While some may agree that it is an essential skill for children to acquire to improve their cognitive abilities and reflexes, others feel that this affects their moods and their relationships. This essay will discuss both views.

[@LearnAndProgress-du3hl]

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[@saray6806]

Amazing video and explanation, thank you! This is my answer: • The answer to this question will depend on parent’s permission in which will affect the child behaviour in a good or bad way in regards to computer games. Nowadays, trying to avoid gaming or technologies is a difficult task to do for parents so that it is better to adapt them with responsibility in order to have a positive impact at the end of the day.

[@bpchampika3264]

...Will depends on Parents'

[@Deepak4201]

Although some think that computer games have a negative effect on children, others argue that with proper guidance they can be very useful.

[@shahriarsojol8112]

Yet some think that computer games have negative effect on children, it's more lenient on present covid pandemic

[@anitathuo8112]

Teach me please i have ielts exams soon and am a beginner

[@kalyugon]

@@anitathuo8112 practice, it will help you rather than asking for help

[@rahulnath1784]

Although some thinks that computer games have a negative effect on children, others oppose to this view.

[@OktayTurgay]

Sorry, Is it "effect" or "affect" ?

[@ShashiDhiman]

Playing computer games is the prime most activity for children. Many people consider online gaming as a stress reliever while others think of it as a negative influence on mental health. Gaming is a fun activity provided that it is performed in a limited manner. Increased screen time has been considered as the primary cause of problems associated with online gaming.

[@aasthashrestha9995]

Scored a 7.5 in IELTS Writing.Thanks a bunch!!!

[@ayeshamuzaffar9220]

How did you prepare? Kindly share

[@nouuman]

Perfectly explained in a shortest way,salute to great teachers.

[@milkybook7875]

Altough it is stated that computer games help children to enhance their creativity, they have some unfavourable effects on children such as deterioration of eyesight or addiction. In addition to that, negative effects of computer games could be seen by children who can not distinguish the real World and the virtual world.

[@vuongangkhoa9671]

What makes E2's videos more interesting than others' is that the team gives learners the opportunity to interact with them while watching by doing small tasks along the fly instead of just listening passively. I really appreciate what you guys have been doing. Officially become a huge fan of this channel hehehe

[@legendsummit2256]

Thank you for this helpful lesson. It's really important to improve my ielts grammar scores in writing and speaking.

[@present5496]

Thanks for your clear explanation. Some people clarify that computer games have a negative impact on children, while others think they give a positive impact because not only do they let children learn how to communicate effectively, but computer games also help children develop a strategic mindset.

[@shrutipandya2959]

Dear Alex, you're impeccable at teaching! I do not have enough words to express how grateful I am to you! Thanks a ton ❤️

[@yasserelgabry]

Wows ❤️ 👌 😍 🤗, this is the the most precise, informative, easy to understand and remember lecture I have ever had. 🇪🇬

[@manalisharma2704]

Hyy Alex thanks 4 info... Can u plzz make a video on punctuation lyk where to put comma and where not

[@hamidulislamraju]

It's my favourite channel for ielts while I'm coming in KZbin than i followed Alex's all vedio . Because i prepared for ielts at high band score 9. This is my aim in my life become a successful Students..

[@UsMan-nv2uh]

Computer games play a crucial role on student's life . In order to improves creativity of students , puzzle games are one of them which help effectively . Although some games are just wastage of time , parent should be notice their activities. When pupils have some free time after completion of homework , they can spend time on ideological games . ( is it correct)?

[@VENUSDSOUZA]

I was able to score my desired band in part due to the tips you had shared over the months. Between Jay and you, I was properly prepared. You have my gratitude, Thank you!

[@periklisgewrgiou5327]

Thank you so much for your interesting , clear , and useful lesson

[@vaibhavmishra1362]

Although computer games are good indoor entertainment for children, they can be addictive as a potential side effect.

[@victorkrasnov5576]

Video is comprehensive and well-structured, thank you. I just cannot understand the punctuation in the sentence "Many children play computer games but others prefer sports". Where is the comma before the coordinating conjunction on this slide?

[@Chax9_1990]

What a great lesson! Even though computer games can assist children becoming more mindful, it may affect their social behaviors.

[@manijutt1630]

In order to get a good band in IELTS, Not only he has a need to strive but also proper planning.

[@danquixote6072]

In order to get a good band in IELTS, not only does he need to put a lot of effort in , he needs to plan his exam preparation properly too.

[@aamnahqaiserqadri5897]

your this tutorial is really a great lesson, I could not get time to work on it and you cleared my basic concepts in 30 minutes.

[@nayaramedeiros93]

Although there are some who argue that computer games have a positive impact on children lifes, there are some drawbacks to be taken into consideration.

[@gauravthenoddy]

Amazing

[@duniyaderang4805]

Have a doubt, wheather it should be children lives or lifes, which one is correct?

[@gauravthenoddy]

@@duniyaderang4805 well should be lives tho

[@karmahelp4992]

@@duniyaderang4805 whether 🙂

[@duniyaderang4805]

@@karmahelp4992 thats typo. I accept it

[@sumitdesai9679]

Very useful and informative. thank you so much, Alex.

[@NaveenThanikachalam]

Alex, Jay, thanks to you and the E2 team. By following your tips, in the writing test, I scored 8/9 and an overall score of 8.5/9.

[@rajandeepkaur2678]

Could you please give me tips about writing and speaking.i would be glad to learn some tips from you

[@iamthorni]

In today's modern era where science and technology are vastly advancing, electronic gaming is also showing tremendous innovations. The argument whether or not it is causing advantageous or detrimental effects to a child is still debatable, however, in regard to the proposition, I believe that games being run by a computer or machine causes harm to a child's perception only if the content is violent as oppose to a few educational games that provide knowledge to children.

[@jj-qe2wg]

It's too wordy, a deliberate attempt to show off vocabulary. Not quite academic

[@iamthorni]

@@jj-qe2wg are you a legit ielts examiner?

[@E2IELTS]

Good effort! 2 grammar corrections: having... effects on (these words collocate) and games... cause (subject-verb agreement error. 👍

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[@036_priyankapatel5]

Since we are living in technological era computer games are the one that helps children to remain activists towards technology. Although they are designed as a stress buster , they causes harmful effects on children eyes in a long run. Parents need to have an eye on the time that their children are offering to computer games in order to have the balance between its positive impact and negative impact.

[@Might12390]

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[@noumanabbasi9547]

how video games can be designed as "stress buster" i don't think so initially computer games were developed for research projects in early 1950's in universities and also big companies also used them for different purposes.....

[@ellahgrace358]

Thanks so much dear.Am preparing for ielts exams in august God willing.Love you from Uganda

[@titilayofaluyi4390]

Thank you for the lecture. Games on electronic devices are seen in almost every home where most kids play them during leisure hours. This major development have different effects on children especially wrong ones even though in some cases, playing games have positive imparts.

[@demo2207]

Gaming technology has advanced rapidly in the last decade, as it is almost irresistible to young minds Competitive sports should be encouraged among children in order to improve health, fitness and foster cooperation. Some children spend up to 7 hours a day unsupervised, although parents often deny this. Computer games can have positive impact provide that they must age appropriate.

[@charusmitabadgujar8164]

Now a days children are more exposed to screen time. Because exposure to computer games can have serious hazards on health, their usage should be limited. Long hours of screen time causes stress on the eyes which can further damage the retina which is important for vision. As long hours of sitting at one place also increases the risk of obesity, parents should engage their child in outdoor games.

[@moamaralhoushan3219]

Even though this is the first time watching you video, I am so impressed by the way you handle it. Because of the advancement in computer gaming, our children are going to lose a lot of their mind capabilities. Even though many recent researches show negative impacts of the gaming technology, people are still do not want to listen to these facts. Governments should take proper actions in regard to using devices at elementary schools so that students can focus on their studies at this important stage of their life. While computer games are so engaging, I have never tried them. Many people are fond of mobile games but not computer ones.

[@jafar-k5v]

thanks huge dear, I download your videos and watch offline. they are very useful.

[@riyapatel9540]

Although there are many benefits of using computer but they should in keep in mind where and when to use appropriately.

The effects of computer games on children are undeniable. Although some argue that all of them tend to impact children negatively, others believe that computer games have a variety of positive impacts, as well.

[@yayaalisafi5122]

she said we can not start new sentece with subordinating conjunction , irem

[@yayaalisafi5122]

The effects of computer games on children are undeniable although some argue that all of them tend to impact children negatively, others believe that computer games have a variety of positive impacts, as well.

[@francescoalbanese4150]

A very neat, and well done English grammar lesson. Thank you.

[@jkyu2701]

Using complex sentences While many parents believe computer games do harm to their children, some others see their positive side on brain development. Boarding games, for instance, are one of those helping children learn logics and tactics, which are of great help to their advances in subjects like maths and physics.😊

[@shubhamdhanoa7502]

although all the time i was looking at you , cleared confusions about complexs and compound one

[@radinkhan2460]

Thanks a lot for your awesome video lesson. Answer: Although computer games have a negative impact on children, but sometimes it makes positive effect to give refreshment of his mind.

[@shambulingesh619]

"Even though I am not writing IELTS, I came here just to learn how to write complex sentences." is this correct?

[@R.G.TAALKS]

Your sentence is totally wrong because

[@fahadsoftware3508]

@@R.G.TAALKSi haven't IELTS exam, even though I wached this video, to just know how to write complex sentences. I'm no sure is that right nor wrong, but always remember partics makes parfict.

[@MA-rp5pu]

Although I do not have IELTS exam, I am watching this video just to learn how to write complex sentences.

[@shahabnah]

@@MA-rp5pu I do not have an IELTS exam

[@mariecarpangan4009]

Or you may write it this way: Even though I will not take the IELTS exam, I came here to learn about writing complex sentences.

[@mayowaoladapo5227]

While computer games have positive impact on younger ones, there are also some negative effects too.

[@saadainlari]

16 mins 45 secs: Computer games can have a positive impact on children because they can stimulate critical thinking amongst them. Besides, helping in their thinking, computer games can also increase the attention span of children, thus improving their cognitive decision making.

[@allaroundtv2275]

One question, how can the attention span of children help them to improve their decision making? :)

[@ghazalmoosavi-s7l]

Although many people may argue that computer games would affect children negatively, if meticulously designed it could serve as both an enjoyable and a valuable source for educational means. Therefore, it is important to clarify the goal beforehand as games can be a double-edged sword which can lead to a disastrous effect if an inappropriate mean will be introduced, yet if it will bewell-prepared it can do wonders in the means of teaching.

[@karankukreja6160]

Thank you so much for the amazing video. Watched this the day before my exam and got an overall 8! Thanks once again!!!!

[@hel2690]

Thanks Alax, I don't have any words for appreciation.🥰

[@benedettabassi6521]

Although computer games are popular and alluring among children, they broadly have a negative impact on them because of the consequences of misuse. While youngsters in the past did recreational activities outdoor, nowadays children are hunched at home playing videogames. What do you think about this sentence? thank you all

[@doctornazam8726]

very good

[@Drutagami]

Provided that computer games are popular as well as alluring among children, one of the negative impact could be the misuses of it.While youngsters preferred recreational activities outdoor, nowadays, children are hunched at home playing videogames.

[@jskheeva5800]

Although computer games have useful impact on children in improving their mental skills, the negative effects relating to eye-sight and health postures can't be snubbed.

[@vd22444]

A clear and informative complex sentence... This could avoid grammatical errors and increase word count.

[@onlyielts888]

Excellent your teaching,,please,,you will a lot of vedio make in writing task 2,, then iam properly learning on this channel,,

[@Hope_CC]

It really helps me.THX.

[@faizisaac9462]

I want to write an essay so I want to know what's the kind of question is this advantages, disadvantages ?????

[@dhairyashah6554]

In order to protect your child from game addiction, parent's need to make sure they are also indulged in outdor games.

[@AnkitSharma-tw1ck]

parents not parent's

[@circassianeagle7746]

Even though computer games have a few positive impacts, their negative impacts are much more. In fact, playing computer games for more than 7 hours per day might cause a serious case of addiction for teenagers, even if parents monitor their children.

[@khayotillotorakulov54]

I found it reall useful, thanks team!

[@E2IELTS]

Great to hear!

[@madinakytlykaeva]

Thank you for your amazing work! Will try to create a complex sentence. "Computer games have a positive effect on children, provided that time children spend online is properly monitored." Let me know if it's ok, thanks!

[@nwokediemmanuel369]

Although computer games helps to reduce stress in the lives of children,it reduces their interest when it comes to the study habits of many children.

[@Drutagami]

Although computer games can be engaging, it significantly reduces their interest when it comes to studying.

[@saikiranp.r6966]

Although computer games are stress busters, they tend to have a negative impact on children.

[@pujakalhan5723]

I think, Although - but combination will go better here. For instance - Although computer games are considered as stress buster, but they also tend to have a negative impact on the psyche of children.

[@pujakalhan5723]

It's ok. We all are learners here 😄

[@tejibrar103]

@@saikiranp.r6966 yeah.... You are right although and but can't come together in a single sentence it's a common mistake though.

[@invariablyliveliness8278]

First of all your two sentences are not contradicting each. See that....

[@rishabhsharma8499]

@@pujakalhan5723 in case of although we generally avoid 'but'

[@ahmedashik1681]

Though computer games have some benefits, they have more serious impact on children.

[@Rxdhaval1987]

Although it is a complex sentence, it is described very thoroughly by a mentor.

[@curiousmind981]

I just got 7 in IELTS result yesterday this is really helpful thank you so much.

[@amyshanbeyguer8757]

Computer games have a positive impact because they keep players away from bad ways.

[@panaderiaartesanalpastelo2154]

Since computer games are considerably addictive, children should be allowed to play for short periods of time so that they don´t disconnect from reality and become introvert or antisocial youngsters.

[@farihasdesigns2827]

Children are getting addicted to computer games now a days because they are spending much time on computer rather than playing outdoors or engaging in other healthy activities. This is causing numerous negative impacts on their health and education.

[@taranjitsingh5354]

Good answer

[@redrose5724]

It is really good - just add "*too* much time"

[@E2IELTS]

Great! 3 corrections: ‘nowadays’ is one word, computers should be plural, and having ... impacts (not causing) 👍

[@AmazonTechies]

thanks a lot for your efforts i think those who still goes to academies wasting time by travelling and wasting money they will get their desired scores free of cost keep it up dear teachers.

[@jashandeepkaur2189]

There are some positive impact of computer games.The first is improvement in communication skills which has meant towards better learning.In other words, children often play online games where they communicate with their friends,and so the ideas helps them in practical learning

[@wikey8472]

Could you please do vedios with grammar patterns . Cuz it is one of the best helps to improve our English as when I speak to somebody in English sometimes I get stuck cuz I feel like the grammar pattern that I gonna talk might be correct or wrong? Eg:- we use the word WOULD when we talk about something by imagine. As that..... Please do really important ☺️😊😊👌👌👌👍👍✅✅✅

[@shwanali7158]

My answer to the practice you gave me: Computer games may have positive and negative impacts on our children as well. If strategic games to be played under supervision for limited time, these may expand their mind and ways of thinking. Whereas spending more time in front of screen with more violent containing games, these may cause more health and mind issues. (Please correct for me the above sentences.)

[@mithalmithal6728]

This is man who always speak truth. mam this is a complex sentence

[@preethammeruva9437]

In the past, there used to be a misconception in parents mind that video games had negative impact on children, although that is changing now thanks to interactive and stimulating games that help sharpen children's brain. However, proper monitoring will still be required to control the amount of time children spend on the devices such that it won't affect their health.

[@loveYong622]

Since the rapid development of technology in the last decade, computer access is commonly seen among children which some scholars called these kids digital natives. Because for those people who born after 1990 have been able to operate Internet fluently, whereas their parents sometimes struggling with computer.

[@yuvrajjag2558]

Really nice explanation. Thank you! Here is my answer for the exercise at the last As the restrictions which were imposed during the pandemic prolonged, many children took to video games to entertain themselves. In order to limit the screen exposure, many parents took to features like Scree Time, which are available in apple products, to put a tab on their children.

[@roseessien9435]

Quite informative! I'm most grateful Alex. Although computer game has negative impact on Children, it also have benefit.

[@growwithsunny-249]

Thank you. I will surely study through your videos every day. So useful!

[@lahirusampath5426]

jinil,u re so cute ....

[@imatheist7917]

You people are doing great job. Best wishes ❤from India 🇮🇳

[@dreamscometrue833]

To watch computer have many advantage as well as disadvantage like that it impact on thier eyes and also positive effect like that it increase thier confidence level and IQ level and so on.....

[@sunnykharb282]

Computer games will be helpfull in children's life but these can be dangerous if played restlessly. As there would be serious effect on the children's eyes rather than gaining benefits from the activity. Finally, I would like to convey that even though it has some drawbacks, but they can it's advantages. Thankyou so much! Do mention the mistakes so that I can rectify them.

[@jaspalkaler5045]

How i use although. 1) Although negative, positive Or 2) Although positive, negative

[@nicoleannepalma2472]

Thank you so much for sharing this information. I hope I'll be able to ace the IELTS exam.

[@tomiit6579]

Its really great illustration about types of sentences, Thanks a lot.

[@far4tar]

Compound sentences contain 2 diff. thoughts and joined by coordinating conjunctions (FANBOYS) For And Nor But Or Yet So