Editing YOUR College Essays | How to Write a Successful Common App Essay

[@elevatedschool]

Hi friends!! For the next month (until 11/1/23), we’ll be selecting 3 of the commenters on THIS video for a FREE essay review! To qualify, all you have to do is like and reply to this comment with something you learned from this video :) FYI normally, we charge $225 for a professional common app review with feedback from two of our ElevatEd consultants!

[@sisi5940]

I have been struggling with the overall connections to my essay, but this video helped guide me in a better direction. The spike ball essay managed to find a connection between two seemingly unrelated topics, which I seek to do through spice tolerance and volunteering. Also, the problem-to-solution ratio is a stand-out lesson, as most of my first draft was just a rant on problems. It was a super helpful video as always!

[@sisi5940]

I had another question, are you only going to select after November 1st? Not choosing anyone before that EA deadline?

[@elevatedschool]

we will! Stay tuned for updates on our community post page!

[@audreyn.g]

Something I learned from this video is to discuss how an has issue affected you and your community, possibly mentioning how you have been involved in addressing this issue.

[@summydev]

Watching this video has made me learn how one has to be specific and lucid while sighting examples and also try connecting it well.

[@rafaela_LT8]

This video helped me so much! you managed to clear my writer's block and made me realize that I was missing tangible evidence, thank you!!

[@SAT_nerds]

I’ve learn that creativity as all that matters on common app essays

[@catherineb6889]

Thank you so much for your advice, as someone who's lost on how to begin and what I should take into account, your advice has definitely helped guide me, thank you!

[@elevatedschool]

You're so welcome! So glad it was helpful Catherine!

[@yasharthpandey1464]

Godsend 🤩

[@santabanter]

#resumedump the struggle is real

[@blitzieyt]

Dear Kevin, I was wondering if I could submit my essay for one of these review-vids. I've been working on it for a very long time and would love to get your opinion as I know how experienced you are. Sadly, my parent are currently not completely able to finance the consulting calls so that's why I'm asking. It would be greatly appreciated

[@elevatedschool]

Sure! Email it to [e-mail]

[@The_Internet_Cop]

Can anyone review my essay?

[@sh1nsh1lla15]

Thank you very much for your tutorials and reviews! I’ve heard how you said sometime that you felt like posting videos to void. I just wanted to say that I personally have learned pretty much everything regarding essays with the help of your channel. Moreover, if I have a thought of learning some tips for my essay, your videos will be the first thing bumping up in my mind. So I don’t want you to stop striving, because otherwise It would be harder for me to adjust my essay. Bom Bom! Thank you!

[@gloss1138]

right?? everything I've learned about essays that were actually super helpful was all from this one channel. I knew from the first video I watched here that this wasn't just another college youtuber, and now I'm always one of the first people to watch whenever he uploads lmao. Kevin, if you think you're uploading into a void, just remember that us void-dwellers absolutely adore you and can't bear the thought of going through the college applications process without you!

[@jokes_onit]

My first time and my first comment on youtube ever😅. I have used this app for 3 and half years but have never made a comment on any content until this one. I really find this educative and very insightful too and that's why I couldn't help but show my love❤ by commenting. Thanks a lot man🙌🙌

[@elevatedschool]

Wow! Thanks so much for your kind comment! This made my day!!

[@elevatedschool]

Hi everyone! It's been 4 years since we started this KZbin channel + launched this agency to help kids get into colleges. So far, we've helped students gain more than 500+ acceptances to top U.S. colleges, including every Ivy League School, Stanford, MIT and more! If you'd like your essay reviewed by us, just visit our website! www.elevated.school/editmyessay

[@jokes_onit]

Uhm I think there should be "reviewed" in that last sentence.

[@elevatedschool]

Thank you! Just fixed @@jokes_onit

[@Rin-gn5by]

Hi, do you guys plan to do more free common app essay / Uc PIQ reviews in the near future ? Can we still send our essays to the email adress?

[@cheezoo945]

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[@MohammedAbubakarSiddick]

I sent you my common app essay for review 😢

[@BithanyaKetemaNigussie]

The feed back are really helpful thank you. Your videos gave me insight for writing my essay

[@BithanyaKetemaNigussie]

The first time I write my essay it was dull and bunch of words but after watching this and the other videos I learnt that being myself is the key for success than trying to be professional and it helped fr. I hope I can get ur feed back but I can't afford it.

[@akueiyuangmachotgarang.7801]

This is a good work, Kevin.

[@shikhrajsingh5726]

Hii, I would love to get my essay reviewed. This is my entry for the free review!

[@MeshackOmondi-ye3yw]

Hello!! What's your take on personal statements that are about unrepresented groups, say, the LGBTQ community in Africa, where they're are not welcomed (this shouldn't be the case).