"EMERGENCY ALERT" Creepypasta

[@coreyhammond6940]

"... in the middle of an Episode of the Big Bang Theory... " not even 40seconds in and this is already the scariest creepypasta I've ever heard.

[@hvip4]

The real freaky part is when our protagonist decides to browse Reddit.

[@thatchil]

I agree the craft Mac n cheese spooky

[@PorgBo]

Bazinga! *fucking dies*

[@rswindol]

As soon as I heard that, I was actively rooting against the protagonist. When he browsed Reddit, I knew he was a monster.

[@obsoleteamarii3248]

Bro I’m listening to this again high asf rn, I lost my shit when I heard that lmao

[@michaelmartin9022]

"Go into a room with no windows" "Gee, wonder why? Better go outside and see what the trouble is"

[@brody7098]

It said it was a weather alert he went outside to see if there was any clouds

[@childishstalker9855]

"oh gee there's a weather alert better go outside to see the fucking hurricane" - person from hurricane florence

[@luckystar3641]

@@brody7098 Also he said he hadn't seen any clouds before

[@chickenpermission5381]

That's the entire fucking attitude of people in Oklahoma lmfaoooo

[@Smiles3110]

@@chickenpermission5381 and kansas

[@Wombattlr]

This guy should narrate audio books, because strangely, i find his voice very calming...

[@Darksomnium]

thank you! im glad you like my voice :)

[@tricia5585]

Same

[@brooklynjohnson6139]

Exactly

[@brooklynjohnson6139]

@@Darksomnium I always comment on your vids an you never notice I like your voice tooooo

[@mrcreepmcpasta2959]

@@brooklynjohnson6139 because your comment doesn't get enough likes for him to be able to see your video.

[@ZrinNZ]

When you find yourself in the middle of a containment breach and you're just some dude.

[@Rick-jf2ig]

Zrin I was wondering if anyone else thought of SCP

[@RedTooth756]

Zrin agreed bleh

[@comradedogma4957]

But scp-013 are cigarettes

[@Soha_an.]

Blake Fountain Cigirate addicts?

[@crispyblindead2413]

Def got that vibe

[@Zacktheguy]

Lmao I didn’t realize an ad came on so all I heard was “ I’ll keep you updated......... THIS IS MY VOICE 1 DAY IN MINNESOTA”

[@brooklynjohnson6139]

😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

[@brooklynjohnson6139]

I almost dieddddd

[@Andi-ex1js]

Wtf kind of add is that?

[@AssistantCoreAQI]

An Old TikTok Ad.

[@S-CB-SL-Animations]

HAHAHAHA-

[@kin3tica]

"it must of been the wind" Sneak level 100

[@GraveyardMaiden]

This gives me SCP Foundation vibes, I like it.

[@idunnowhatuurite3017]

TheRiceandCake, i was thinking the same thing.

[@mochaa727]

hey it could be like a SCP-013 (which im sure is already being used)

[@gavinjohnson4628]

i got the same idea

[@GraveyardMaiden]

leuk515 true, I guess it's more so the numbers they assigned the subjects. Then again the research group in this story could be a group of interest for the foundation or something idk

[@fireystormofdeamon8118]

yes

[@toothy_efoa]

This needs a short film badly

[@youngmetrotrustsme2523]

ToothyDuck41 sounds a little like stranger things tbh

[@nickstick4756]

I agree

[@kingofmystery1135]

Agreed

[@titanthewolf3716]

It does or an animation

[@phydis7556]

Yes. It does.

[@thaddacusmaximus6706]

Neighbor: *dies* Protagonist: meh, let’s raid him

[@clementineschalchen330]

Realistic survival games are realistic

[@misterb3577]

Protagonist: *raids dead neighbor's house multiple times, uses it as an ambush base and then diversionary tactic* Near the end I was almost hoping he'd swing the neighbor's corpse at them like a weapon, lol.

[@dr.altoclef9255]

Hey, not like he's gonna need his food where he is.

[@thaddacusmaximus6706]

It’s been 3 years, and I don’t have the time to rewatch the video rn. If my memory is correct, he dies, but still narrates the neighbors starting to raid or whatever. I could be thinking of something different though

[@chriscanfly6386]

@@thaddacusmaximus6706 he was killed by 13 because he pulled a gun on her. The narrator doesn't die

[@elijahthompson7075]

So I'm driving right now listening to this and a severe weather warning that sounds similar to this just came on😂

[@Darksomnium]

be safe!!

[@LiquidClara]

grab your shotgun and watch for the mew officers

[@titanthewolf3716]

elijah thompson that's creepy

[@Torat]

elijah thompson waw

[@frayhernandez7116]

elijah thompson i

[@mikemaceda3222]

Never was into these but this sounds scary af late at night.

[@Darksomnium]

glad you're enjoying it :)

[@mikemaceda3222]

The Dark Somnium - Nosleep & True Scary Stories no doubt. Thanks. These stories would go great on sleepovers. 👍

[@IvanGonzalez-vl3nb]

Sounds like an scp video

[@ezequielmacias8991]

mike maceda ik

[@Darksomnium]

ive made a few vides on that!

[@gmalamat1393]

Every time I here cowalsky i think of the meme "KOWALSKY, ANALYSIS".

[@soontherewillbesnow]

SAME-

[@GamingXenZen]

I just hear skipper's voice in my head saying "Kowalski analysis" and Rick going "kaboom?" With Private tryna be helpful and cute and badass at the same time lol

[@gothiccbabi]

Dude same

[@sirrmobreadings6978]

Yup same

[@Xbalanque84]

I immediately think of the "Fake Dad" episode of Ren & Stimpy.

[@82dorrin]

SCP on the loose.

[@spaci2939]

I was guessing that shit too. Because they said "013 Escaped".

[@rubymay9740]

yes me also

[@nope5708]

My thoughts exactly

[@si1t]

013 are cigs and 002 is "the living room" i think

[@IvanGonzalez-vl3nb]

Yep, I think Scp-682 got out lol

[@james_k9654]

This is weird. I was listening to this because I was interested. About 1/3rd of the way through, a single bolt of lightning struck and then, without warning, it started to rain heavily and there were extremely strong winds that all came out of nowhere. I don't knew if it's a coincidence or not (which it probably is) but it was weird how close the timing was

[@Darksomnium]

Muahaha >:D

[@Glarpinator]

@@Darksomnium uh oh

[@lollipopdragon2259]

The universe has a sense of humor. 😂

[@susanbeemer4331]

Yes the universe did have a sense of humor and Everything and I mean Everything is connected just think about it for a moment from that point of view and it's not so strange anymore lol

[@SamuelSmith-hf1rh]

Intention is the first step to manifestation be mindfull lest fiction can become your reality

[@emerald7853]

Well you were watching big bang theory so you kind got what was comin for ya

[@phantomphoenix4981]

What’s wrong with Big Bang theory?

[@neet-noot573]

Finn Davies lots of things

[@phantomphoenix4981]

I never watched it

[@darkdripzy1560]

Oh boy here we go Christians

[@jlord8179]

@@phantomphoenix4981 laugh tracks every 3 microseconds

[@Bambi-nc5yl]

This honestly sounds like it would be a good movie

[@Darksomnium]

agreed :)

[@savin0279]

Scott Stone The ending especially sounds good, when the music kicks in, with the protagonist speaking. Then the credits roll

[@Vjombrn]

Agreed

[@tawlay1191]

Scott Stone if he could he should make a movie

[@ThereIsNoSleep]

Cheers to anyone who listens to the whole thing in one sitting like I did.

[@Darksomnium]

thank you so much for your time!

[@robbicooper9418]

No had to pause it for a minute. I had to pee.

[@smilingcat1703]

Thanks

[@luthodic2063]

Ehh i watched the whole thing

[@epitaph_.]

who doesn't listen to these like this, I always listen to every story like this

[@stormshred]

“My name is Sean” THAT GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS, THAT SERIOUSLY TERRIFIED ME.

[@LuvHydrozz]

Why is your name sean?

[@clementineschalchen330]

@@LuvHydrozz “Why, is you’re name Sean?”

[@ostrofopolous1548]

@@clementineschalchen330 "Why, is your name Sean?"

[@gregi787]

@@ostrofopolous1548 name your why sean is?

[@MrWarthog]

@@clementineschalchen330 Why is? You, are name Sean.

[@snail6643]

0-13 needs to give me lessons on how to wear a pillow case

[@johnmedina7083]

Why am I watching this at night during a thunderstorm

[@Darksomnium]

>=D muaha

[@johnmedina7083]

The Dark Somnium Yea I didn't sleep well that day and there actually was a thunder storm in a Miami where in at

[@mrliminal6247]

well we all do radom stuff

[@onyxbasilisk9046]

Clouds started appearing in the evening when I found this video, wtf

[@waddyathink5714]

Can I drink you? I'm thirsty

[@alexreyes5083]

Absolutely killer stories, I can literally picture this as a movie!

[@Darksomnium]

glad you enjoyed t :)

[@gavinjohnson4628]

lets get a filmmaker onboard and lets do it!

[@Torat]

Alex Reyes tots dude

[@amestrianidiot]

Kinda sounds like what happened before the events of a quiet place.

[@womp_womp4]

Me too

[@TiggZ_]

This guy is so freakin' talented and definately deserves sooo many more subs!

[@annbarker4529]

I was having anxiety/stress today ... I literally had to lay down in the dark , and come to your page to hear your voice lol it’s so soothing and helped me calm down a bit to rest. You’re awesome 😊

[@landonytchannel3996]

Man lot of work went into this story.

[@Darksomnium]

for sure, i hope youlike it!

[@jamespope2840]

Yes for sure

[@ToreiVR]

Some of these stories you've narrated could make for really good movies man i swear. Especially with that musc at the end, that sort of rock n roll vibe over a shot of a bruised up, dirty group of people escaping from some zombie infested town or something and like that and it just ends off as a cliffhanger for a part 2.

[@Miss-Alexis]

so there's a "mew" foundation built around weaponizing psychic powers, but the clone named "two" is "dangerous". maybe kowalski hid in a cave in a blue city after this story.

[@jiyeokersto8177]

Alex Henley is this a reference to something?

[@hulkissick9945]

It’s a reference to Pokémon you Uncultured Swines

[@phantomphoenix4981]

And the mew foundation is under a truck

[@rainwolf3653]

This is great

[@GRIMIEY]

They probably do there top secret information under a truck

[@StrawberryPeachTea.]

I love the way he narrates these stories! I listen to them while I do my digital art I find that it helps with being more creative in my art

[@hedtkesautodetailing6706]

Legit I found your channel while at work a couple days ago and it's been a life changer. It sounds strange, but your voice along with several meds I take, keep my PTSD at bay. Thank you for making great content and I look forward to hearing all of it.

[@kathyinwonderlandl.a.8934]

Doesn’t sound strange at all, another narrator that’s good as this is CreepsMcpasta his voice is like velvet and very soothing like Dark Somniums

[@masterpoe4942]

Way to apply the pressure bud...lol

[@susanbeemer4331]

Also check out lighthouse horror he's awesome as well they are my two favs

[@cindyl329]

​@@susanbeemer4331Mine too, love them!! Love this channel and both of theirs also. My "go-to" channels for when I'm cleaning or sleeping. I'm a forever fan of these guys! 😍❤

[@vanessamaybevanesa]

When you scroll through all the comments and you have nothing else to do in a 1 hour video

[@antseulogy]

Olivia Colomar literally me rn

[@shroomie266]

Not me! I'm drawing fan art for a KZbinr.

[@LunealSky]

If you speed it up you get a shorter video so you can shove more of these in a day

[@timothystowell3122]

someone called scp Foundation

[@Darksomnium]

haha

[@ConnorPrime25]

That’s what I thought but 013 is a cigarette called blue lady that is purely mind altering

[@Raccon_Detective.]

@@ConnorPrime25 Can you explain what it is ?

[@XxCoffinBirthxX]

@@Raccon_Detective. It’s a bunch of cigarettes labeled “BLUE LADY” and when you smoke them you begin to permanently perceive yourself as a woman (it’s the same woman across all cases) “Subjects have described the woman to be aged between 25 and 35 years old, standing approximately 1.6 metres tall with an estimated weight of between 50 and 55 kg. Additional recurring details include cropped dark hair, blue eyes, and bright blue lipstick.”

[@brendawinnie9749]

I would love a part 2. I would like to know what’s happening now.

[@priely5149]

wow, the second time i completely amazed from reddit's story. if this is a fake, he must be or very should be a writter because that's was fucking awsome.

[@Darksomnium]

thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it :)

[@zadotterazo690]

priel y what do you mean "if" it was fake?

[@kangarookangaroo702]

It's a story dude, yes it is fake. Seriously?

[@kangarookangaroo702]

Bear Bristol Not at all. This isn't r/nosleep.

[@fyrebirdd]

Brodie Demers this was posted on no sleep

[@kori4264]

this could totally be an SCP story

[@abikioa]

It sure would

[@luckystar3641]

the end kind of reminds me of scp 3300, the rain. Its a town where people don't know that they made of rain and every time it rains the people get replaced. Here's the scp article: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-3300 Here's a narration of the article, because I like listening to them more than reading them: kzbin.info/www/bejne/sIGuaIh7mp6lja8

[@ZaccoOfficial]

Oh god... Atleast the guy had doggos... if something happens to me... i can't be alone. Too scary... "I kinda like situations like this" I don't like them like the but... I like storms

[@kaileytyler6076]

I always get chills from the music at the end of each part. It never fails.

[@bobmasters9871]

at 16 minutes. the "ah" made me laugh. it's just so out of place.

[@callumlewis3082]

bob masters it’s sounds like a moan

[@childishstalker9855]

oh no

[@theskieshavefallen8408]

Ikr, lol.

[@FirestormDDash]

Ah

[@bugglaneiii807]

This story is crazy as hell!!! Wish it was louder. Other than that THIS STORY WAS AWESOME!!

[@Darksomnium]

im going to remaster this soon :) thnk you!

[@selenepickins4874]

you just earned yourself a new sub! Though the story could use a little polish, your narration was spot on & your use of background music (very subtle & appropriately creepy) & additional voices made this narration more like a radio play from ages past & less like some guy just reading a creepy pasta written by some hormonal teenager locked in his/her parents' basement. Congrats on your channel & a job well done! BTW, I'm an old, tough writer chick with a degree in Creative Writing not easily pleased nor impressed so pat yourself on the back twice today! LOL

[@Darksomnium]

thank you so much! that means alot to me :D

[@TeffyBabyy]

Your description of the teenagers though 🤣😂🤣😆😆

[@michaelh9649]

@Selene Pickins Yeah, the way he adds the different effects and music really differentiates him from other KZbin narrators. He’s in my top 3, with NaturesTemper and MrCreepyPasta. You should check out “The Left Right Game” that he narrates. It’s like 5 hours long or something, but it is one of the best stories I’ve ever listened to or read. This story, on the other hand...blah.

[@picklerick8715]

Why in the world should your opinion matter in this situation, even if you didnt like it... your degree wouldnt have any say in what he would do with his story telling. Shut up KAREN

[@davidolsen2495]

@@picklerick8715 lol dude your name is pickle rick. The most egotistical, narcissistic human in the multivesre. Oh and the biggest dick. But I do still love him and pickle rick is an epic episode

[@gtrkarma]

I know a story is good when I start to take elements of the story and put them into my comic This is one of those stories *also this was more of a feelspasta to me tf they callin it creepy for?*

[@Darksomnium]

Oh you think so? I didn't really get a feel pasta vibe from it but I can understand why you would and I respect that :)

[@Owlleap]

It was creepy in the beginning and then it was more feels

[@si1t]

The one with 013 and 002 arent scps i checked, infact 013 are cigarettes.

[@grimm8366]

002 is an anime character

[@Wormhito]

002 is straight up a room.

[@Jinx.....]

15:00 im sorry but the girl's voice acting is cracking me up. She's getting from what i can gather is tazered and she's screaming in lower case. "aaaaaaaaa stop ._."

[@goodvibekidd696]

Love your channel, dude. You have a fantastic narrating voice, great sound effects, very immersive stories. Keep up your amazing work, your dedication is creating one of the best creepypasta channels on KZbin.

[@Darksomnium]

Thanks so much!

[@obunga6659]

That was one of the best endings to a creepy pasta I have ever heard

[@ngf]

Woah, you have Mega in your channel url

[@JokieJesterE]

"Id Phone the cops but i dont know they're number!" 😒 Really?

[@BreadApologist]

its 1-800 cops right? lol

[@GeneSeth]

ShadowVoid75 he meant REAL cops, not MEW

[@BreadApologist]

Mew? Since when did pokemon become police officers?

[@hi-hr7ik]

ShadowVoid75 Uhh some areas have different phone numbers for the police

[@toothy_efoa]

QUICKLY CALL 911! I can't! WHY?! I don't know the number

[@raven800plays]

48:29 audio looping over what you're saying. "we just kidnapped a guy" played over three times. breaks the flow/immersion

[@jaheriawilson19]

dude i was so confused and concerned lol

[@boogerman908]

Man maybe it's the Midwestern in me but emergency alert creepy pasta is my favorite. Sad that it's so rare

[@-lukario-]

This legit made me feel powerless and sad. If that was the emotion it intended to evoke than nice job

[@a.j.whelpley2551]

I'd love to see a short film adaptation or movie of this story it had me hooked when I first heard about it a week ago, even joined a discord to discuss or theroise about the story and possible alternate reality being a case for why he is experiencing everything and we all (the readers) have heard no information about what he was describing let alone any alert messages on TVs, phones, etc (good story all in all)

[@Abaddontepes666]

Ronnie you're a fantastic narrator, you have become the voice that lulls me to sleep every night thank you for many great stories and many wonderful lucid dreams

[@coworker4391]

it seems like hes actually in danger, with the updates and the police reports. good writing.

[@justiniadonisi9290]

Clones with the force + Wesker and the Umbrella Corporation = a pretty entertaining story!

[@amandasmith2399]

Good thing I am not listening to this at night. I always get mildly freaked out whenever I hear weather warnings. These stories remind me of Stephen King books and movies. All the suspense.

[@indigoincognito5]

just found this vid,when my power was knocked out by a windstorm with lightning....very effective,by the way

[@ArcaneSorceror]

It took a lot of work, but I am glad it paid off

[@Darksomnium]

+Andrew ;D

[@LuvHydrozz]

@@Darksomnium w o w

[@Wymansan19]

There's just something about this story that makes it emotional and spoopy like I'll randomly tear up at a part and then a second later I'll be freaked out this story is amazing it's perfect to me and I love it especially the narrating good story you earned a sub

[@altIiiIiiiiI]

I was honestly rooting for Liz, sad to see her pass. Though that ending leaves me to suspect that she either somehow survived, which is unlikely, or 002 was the one that issued the Warning. Probably the ladder.

[@fatalrob0t]

*latter >.>; "ladder" is what you use to go up to high places. "Latter" means the last option of a list, just as "former" means the first option on a list.

[@altIiiIiiiiI]

@@fatalrob0t my comment was four years ago what the hell

[@blueismylove3128]

​@@altIiiIiiiiI Well better late than never to learn ya something 🤷🏾‍♀️

[@amandaeasley2616]

I listen to these stories every night and his narrations are extremely soothing. I literally fell asleep listening to the 3rd parent. Not because it was boring (it wasn’t) but because his voice is absolutely mesmerizing…

[@leogol6045]

This needs to be a movie!!!

[@JokieJesterE]

Wait i used to live in a small town in oregon with about 400 people called Halfway so thats probably where this story takes place

[@Jay-km1no]

ShadowVoid75 umm it’s fake you now that right?

[@LuvHydrozz]

@@Jay-km1no It still might have been the setting for the story.

[@dalton12316]

Less than 500 people, and not on most maps is just about every eastern Oregon town

[@woof101]

I live in Portland, way more people but eh we are by the airport so

[@vlork666]

This isn't abnormal... This is literally EVERY state except Hawaii... Even California has small towns with 500 people or less. Hell, 98% of the towns in my home state have less than 300 people living in them.

[@dididogster9994]

"This is a covid-19 announcement."

[@amythepandemonium3673]

While watching this, it began to rain. Not ashamed to say, I cried.

[@OKCCowboy1]

I never knew who was before this video, but I'm extremely impressed with this shit.

[@Darksomnium]

thank you so much :)

[@OKCCowboy1]

The Dark Somnium - Nosleep & True Scary Stories dude no problem. Reminds me of be busta. I'm honestly impressed. Especially with as little of subscribers you have i thought I stumbled across a 200k subscriber narrator. I hope you get the credit you deserve some day. Keep up the good work I've been lurking your videos for probably the past 2 hours. You really do deserve many more subs.

[@Captainhogthrob]

Crazy that these videos has been so high quality for SO LONG. Not a lot of creators I can watch 5 year old videos from without even noticing

[@Darksomnium]

Wow thank you so much :)

[@dietdogwater6422]

002? Iota? *Darling, I don't feel so good*

[@tanyalee5361]

Hey I’m not the only one

[@sagetscippio8878]

Interesting,... well, off to continue binge watching your channel!👍🏿✌🏿👨🏿‍💻

[@SaImanKayani]

I like how some people try to implement realistic fiction, especially when it's horror. The surreal and unknown, when brought to life, can be found to be very terrifying for some.

[@stormywilder2280]

I'm addicted to your videos. I really appreciate all the work you put into them with all your own music and everything!! 10/10 will definitely recommend to my friends! Lol

[@Way2caffeinated]

Secret organization... Wears company emblems on their sweaters.

[@nickbakaj322]

Rip Liz

[@broboxbeat5944]

Nick Bakaj Spoilers

[@dakotasardi7384]

meh, about time my ex got the outcome i expected with what she got herself into

[@immortalcypher9814]

This should be turned into like a “Background” Podcast. Like, in between the updates, it waited the actual amount of time, and just played a little bit of music or something. It would be cool and more entertaining if you had to wait for the next updates.

[@Shadowcub69]

This dude needs to go shopping I mean wtf. Awesome story telling.

[@cesarsfuneral978]

Hey I’m so glad I found this channel great narration and story’s gives me the chills

[@ROCKINTINMAN]

I was watching your videos on my tv while playing on my phone, and this popped up and freaked me tf out. Good job😂👍

[@jamedlamed3982]

I remember reading this the day it was posted and following it through a few a days.

[@cia3847]

MEW got to 013 first. damn.

[@Soha_an.]

CIA Oh don't mind me.

[@childishstalker9855]

CIA thats the FBIS job you fuckin

[@canyonparkerfirebird]

Love your voice bro i pass out to these stories everynight but here i am actually listening u sound like a mix between mrcreepypasta and darkness prevails i love it

[@itsasarahmichelle4475]

Canyon łi

[@ThestuffthatSaralikes]

Yay!! An EAS scenario that has a story attached to it?!! YES PLEASE!! My two favorite types of YT videos IN ONE??!! Thanks love!!

[@markverheyden3015]

Am I the only one that searched scp 013 and scp 002 when the said 013 and 002?

[@themadfrankenstien]

I did, it came upwith a cigarette scp

[@mlgproandore1228]

Blue lady cigarettes

[@trufflehound1960]

You have a great voice for story telling, both relaxing and interesting at the same time. Love these fascinating stories.

[@lawrencedrexeljr.2597]

+The Dark Somnium I should have you narrate my novels.

[@Darksomnium]

I would be honored, do you have a place online where I can look at them

[@mrliminal6247]

jezz

[@davidhein2046]

Dark somnium you are definitely one of the best I've heard yet bro u should definitely have millions of subscribers right now thank u for the great work

[@duwop5960]

soon as I heard, 013 got out, I got instant SCP:CB vibes

[@comradedogma4957]

Even though 013 are cigarettes

[@comradedogma4957]

Also they're clones and their designations are their numbers

[@an8thdimensionalbeing142]

I love these type of creepypasta stories. It sort of makes me think of an scp containment breach.

[@denisevalentino8917]

That was fun! More like that please 😁

[@dawnstephens9751]

Well this is a real gem! Great story! Amazing job all the way around!

[@linary8566]

It started raining really hard while I was watching this

[@CookieDoughBoy]

I remember skipping this when it was published thinking "this will be a gem years from now when I need something to listen too", now, listening to it 6 years later, it was worth the wait. 💯

[@Saber-Momma]

They should animate this should make for a good show also I loved it I wasn't afraid I just enjoyed it thoroughly

[@Darksomnium]

glad you liked it :)

[@jamespope2840]

Glad

[@iamzomb.]

The peaceful music along with the commentary is such a weird feeling soothing and scary

[@Blasfamous8]

Loved this story- appropriately scary, occasionally witty and unexpectedly sad at times- In addition to being extremely well read and enhanced with music and sound effects- it was legitimate high quality all around. Yes, it borrowed some elements of other stories and tv shows- but everything derives it’s influence from some other source, and the author did a nice job of crafting this with their own style and perspective, the only thing I would change- the ending was kinda ass lol. I mean the super powered arch villain 😒... and then the audience doesn’t get the satisfaction of witnessing his bloody demise... boo. Liz could have died still, that was kinda whatev- but the crazy, megalomaniac, all powerful, immortal villain- thaaaats a bit (a lot) overdone and unfulfilling, but aside from that, really a good sci-fi story! Ps- to the author- thank you for not killing the dogs- they ALWAYS kill the pets to get the audience emotional, but it’s a tired trick and just makes listeners pissed at the author more than anything lol- so thanks for letting them pull through!! 😁

[@nistarok123]

@46:59 _"Jim, calm your ass"_ Best line in both content _and_ voice, right there

[@cyberspy2d678]

This is such a good story! Your narration with the effects and other voices are great

[@Darksomnium]

thanky ou so much!

[@cyberspy2d678]

The Dark Somnium also this story got me into your music. Which is really good too

[@SharkOSix]

I found my blue spy brother

[@cyberspy2d678]

aidenshark06 ayyyyyyyyyyy!!!! Hahaha That actually made me laugh

[@SharkOSix]

Wait my spy brother is red that blue spy is a enemy

[@TripleDCrook]

Story is great. Narration impeccable. Couldnt turn my ears away

[@Darkhawk-y8y]

Reminds me a bit of the sun vanished...the beginning does, anyway. But this was before TSV

[@mushroomfae777]

Katie Manuel that’s exactly what I was thinking!

[@crat28]

Wonderful story and narration. Would love to see this as a movie.

[@irvinmorales1409]

I remember the first time I ever heard the sound of a severe weather alert, I legit cried. Then again, I was like four years old.

[@enrageddragon6664]

Rainstorm + lightning + creepy sounds = some scary stories

[@tatsumitwi348]

Why do the long ones always turn into supernatural power fantasies... I'm here to be scared or paranoid...

[@sydneymcgill3640]

That ending was brilliantly done by both the writer and the reader. Very awesome music at the end I got the chills!! Awesome job!!

[@coreybeshoar8703]

This sounds a lot like 11 from stranger things

[@love2fight205]

I haven’t heard the full thing yet, but as an experienced creepypasta listener I can recommend this. Always carry a semi auto 12 gauge shotgun loaded with blessed slug shot doused in holy water, and at least 30 extra shells. And it doesn’t hurt to have a couple grenades. If anything can kill the abominations of the pastaverse, it’s those things.