me: *watches video* me after: *makes a creepypasta completely braking these rules*
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
lol. don't come at me when you get bad reviews.
@roguetheshadowclaw96237 жыл бұрын
that's the whole point. make it bad and make people either cringe or tell other people that this is a bad creepypasta thereby making more people read it :P
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
Rogue the Shadow Claw lol make sure that it‘s funny
@sutomuarashi5 жыл бұрын
what was it? LMA0
@creppyuwupaster21805 жыл бұрын
Rogue the Shadow Claw mood
@societyclown12807 жыл бұрын
A creepypasta oc that isn't edgy but instead all pastel and pink would be nice. Umbridge effect you know.
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
CinnaCorn that‘s literally one of my oc‘s called Poppy. She does appear crazy but her colors are pastel. daleeny.deviantart.com/art/Poppy-661322429 she‘s supposed to be a video game boss who can go out into real life and usually disguises herself in amusement parks using the ability she has in the game to hunt for meat that she eats in her monster form.
@BTS-sw5fi6 жыл бұрын
*Umbitch
@yonaholic6 жыл бұрын
CinnaCorn ya I have one of those tho she's pretty edgy and poisons people with cake. :)
@Orquita20016 жыл бұрын
Lawful evil
@interestingboyo7905 жыл бұрын
The Umbridge Effect™ "Will confuse you every time."
@mistyparrales73478 жыл бұрын
I know you from your deviant art XD I found your channel by listening to rants XD big fan of your drawings
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
thx! cool to see some DA folk in here!
@dominicsoto87558 жыл бұрын
Daleeny can you test my oc ?
@CoffyThecat Жыл бұрын
Can you test my oc
@mountainsandchapter33988 жыл бұрын
I think with Creepypasta OCs you also have to limit the backstory (especially with monster/creature characters) unless you can make their descent into their dangerous state unsettling and creepy. It leaves a layer of mystery and keeps people from pitying the character. With people falling victim to a creature (or their mental health if it can be displayed properly) the backstory could actually be frightening when done right but otherwise it just takes away from the character.
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
Yup
@jadenisemotional6104 жыл бұрын
If you're making a Creepypasta OC. I reccomend looking into videos of how to make a HORROR character. Not a fandom character. It's much better to focus on the aura surrounding your character. Making it unknown and less familiar will be effecient. A good way of doing this is making the story being told by the POV of someone other than your OC.
@critterbugal7 жыл бұрын
How is this OC? Her name is Chiyoh. When she was younger, she had a close connection to dogs. Specifically, large dogs. At around age 9, she was attacked by a dog, which ended up in an injury in her eyes and brain. She died in the hospital. She woke up suddenly in her old house and looked in the bathroom mirror. It had been 16 years, and she came back. Not the way she wanted though. She came back as a fleshgait. I might continue more soon if anyone wants.
@hatchixnana7 жыл бұрын
MS Paint it sounds interesting!
@critterbugal7 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@CrypticlyEncrypted6 жыл бұрын
The dog part seems unrealistic and funny.
@silentmara11996 жыл бұрын
*I like it, but you could make the dog bite her neck instead? Because most animals hunt their prey by biting the neck*
@_G1ZM0_3 жыл бұрын
Whos chiyoh and what does it have with backstory bc im bad at english
@nothingnew30007 жыл бұрын
This Girl Needs More Subscribers
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
Some Random Person Who Likes Anime thank you!
@RedEzelt8 жыл бұрын
This video was really helpful! I've been trying to write and create a creepypasta for the past seven months, I haven't been able to write a story but I have created the character I also want to ask Are Creepypastas that are human but mixed with your own original species alright?, I mean I have my species Ezelts but I don't know if it'll make my character a Mary Sue
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
a mary sue is not defined by original species or things you create. it's not about what yo do, it's about how you do it.
@RedEzelt8 жыл бұрын
Daleeny Exactly
@ajaxrao60424 жыл бұрын
I honestly thought this video going to be one of those satire kind of video but I was wrong. Genuinely good points on creating OCs.
@Encentix6 жыл бұрын
Quick update! Feel free to post your Ocs in the comments but please don‘t expect me to review them. I am a busy person and i can‘t review every one of your Ocs in deph. Thank you for all the feedback on this video though and if you want a serious review of your character then i really recommend hitting up a reviewer online. Thanks for understanding. Cheers~
@303cat85 жыл бұрын
Blood is red Jack is blue I ate pasta And I watched this to
@michelle.pflughoft87688 жыл бұрын
When you said research I just laughed, because me and my mom on weekends watch shows about murders. (Not Bones or criminal minds) I watch Snapped and Forensic Files. Documentary's.
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
well, reasearch would be best if it's coming from real life.
@michelle.pflughoft87688 жыл бұрын
Oh no I meant I watch real documentary's. Sorry for the confusion. I was trying to sound funny cause I watch real life murders all the time. I agree if it comes from real life it's better.
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
ohhhhhh ok now i get it XD well thats good!
@michelle.pflughoft87688 жыл бұрын
Sorry sometimes I don't make sense XD
@roy27354 жыл бұрын
Me: *watches a true crime show* My friends: omg, wasn't it soooo scary when they- Me: shhhh, im doing reasech
@peanutbutterpikachu8 жыл бұрын
Don't make it edgy. Edgy is overused.
@oof46988 жыл бұрын
Peanut Butter Pikachu well my oc is a gay ( yep )stalker ( stalks too the point of having a schedule), yandere( I hate that word but that's what he pretty much is) and a pyschopath (can't feel sad or guilty, most feelings are their though) he is pretty short and scronny, he was blue eyes, pale skin, dark brown hair, (almost black). I know this sounds like a Gary stue but I will eventually make the story of him more in depth.
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
Peanut Butter Pikachu well if you are trying to make a Antagonistic character edgy can't be avoided too much. What i would recommend is trying to make them 3 Dimensional and original. Trying to not make them edgy is poor advice because you don't really know how to avoid edgy in the first place.
@Bikkie9205 жыл бұрын
@@oof4698 oh lovely another person romanticising mental illness
@sxcxax5 жыл бұрын
Hi 2 years after
@bubblesoda28445 жыл бұрын
I mean it's kinda hard to make it NOT edgy. Just dont make it overpowered or emotionless. That's what's really overused.
@Monika-jw8fn5 жыл бұрын
That is interesting! My protagonist was wondering how to make a creepypasta and I took my computer, looked up and voila! I found this! Thank you so much!!
@bluemars77188 жыл бұрын
damn those are nice drawings ya got there
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
thank you!
@bluemars77188 жыл бұрын
Daleeny your welcone
@errorsans65607 жыл бұрын
I know this vid is old but this really helped!thanks
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
Error Sans yw!
@IMINYOURWALLS..3 жыл бұрын
The way I write my creepypastas are usually based on uncommon phobias. When I say this, I mean, I make a random character experience suffering from this phobia (and they often have some sort of mental illness/unsolved trauma, which might be cliché, which is why I only use this if I have a completely blank name) when I write about it.
@brandonlynch79137 жыл бұрын
I love your voice it's just so entrancing. :D
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
Brandon Lynch wow thx!
@brandonlynch79137 жыл бұрын
You're welcome. :D
@boyintheantiqueshop7 жыл бұрын
This is the first video I've watched on your channel, and I have one question. WHY DON'T YOU HAVE MORE SUBS!!!!??? I really like your channel, and it helps me out a lot! Thanks!
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
The Meme Crew i don‘t know! Maybe cause i take so long to upload? XD thanks for enjoying!
@panicatthesocialanxiety82798 жыл бұрын
I tried okay. My Oc has no name yet since I still need some research but she is Japanese and is more of a legend type cp. she has a pale complexion, long dark brown hair, slightly oversized arms, and a skinny body type. She has no mouth and has black eyes. People mistake her face for a mask. Also she crawls instead of walking. And she is silent. And wears a white blood stained kimono. Her story is still a wip.
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
well sounds good so far. just try to not make it too sadoko ish.
@justsomeonenoonecaresabout7108 жыл бұрын
@Panic! At The Social Anxiety it sounds good so far! ( also your username is my life)
@Sniblet8 жыл бұрын
Girl from the Ring? **Quickly Googles "Sadoko" to make sure I'm not repeating something that's already been said** *_"Did you mean: sadako"_* *_"Sadako Yamamura is the central character and antagonist of Koji Suzuki's Ring Trilogy novels..."_* **I'm definitely repeating something that's already been said** Right... just, uuhhh... what Daleeny said. Kbye!
@platinumclan74527 жыл бұрын
Sounds like a mix between sadoku and kayako
@wonderjocelyn17197 жыл бұрын
I'm scared....but I'm not frightened! ... Nope NVM I'm definitely frightened..I swear if I see something like that climbing on a wall..I will scream Bible verses and then kill myself...yep. that would happen
@crownred5 жыл бұрын
I've got quite a few creepypasta OC's (that I use for fanfictions at the moment, I'm working on making them creepier so they can "evolve" into a proper creepypasta) but I'll stick with my main for this. ⚠️Trigger warning ⚠️ Creepypasta Name: Kay Backstory: (still undergoing editing since it's cliche and doesn't really make sense) "Present time": She's a serial killer that eats her victims flesh (mainly arms) and has gained attention from police since she keeps leaving DNA at crime scenes, but she (her old identity) had been classified as dead since she had been missing for five years. She doesn't exactly hide and is spotted at various times by police, who attempt to arrest her but she always somehow manages to disappear before the police can get too close. Appearance: pale and covered in scratches (and most of the time, blood), longish (an inch or two longer than shoulder height) white hair and (I keep forgetting the proper name) the whites of her eyes are completely black, with electric blue irises that do appear to glow in the dark. Signature appearance: black cargo pants, green camp converse high tops, a thin dark blue jacket and a fashionably torn (I don't decide in a colour) t-shirt. Weapon: black/obsidian knife ⚠️please don't steal⚠️ :3
@basicallyafilipino4 жыл бұрын
Me: decides to make a Russian OC, draws GP-5 gas mask, jacket, and boots Also me: Haha, done!
@devilsacolyte62688 жыл бұрын
I love this video and I can't wait for the next one!
@ChesireDogma6 жыл бұрын
This is a good tips for making an creepypasta oc
@ecodeer85878 жыл бұрын
This helped a lot thank you! I am creating a creature oc that comes from Native American origins, it's name is the seeker and they guard and protect forests located in The United States of America. So later I will research ideas to adapt onto my character.
@ashley_the_proxy32744 жыл бұрын
I took some personality quizzes and I learned that I'm very edgy and I'm a introvert so imma make a oc based off me in real life but not completely like me.
@justinb84045 жыл бұрын
1: *DONT SHIP YOUR OC WITH ANY OF THE CREEPY PASTAS*
@imsohard4744 жыл бұрын
my oc is enemies with slenderman she had schizophrenia and in her visions slenderman told her to kill her "children" (she worked at an orphanage) or he'll kill them but she didnt want that so she killed them herself to protect them is that okay? xd
@sodo9544 жыл бұрын
Yeah! I know someone who had the same disorder and saw a slenderman many times so I think that's pretty cool
@ALLEPHZALLEPHZ4 жыл бұрын
@@imsohard474 nice
@imsohard4744 жыл бұрын
@@sodo954 thank you!
@sodo9544 жыл бұрын
@@imsohard474 mhm!
@theyoutuberwhomakesbadvide97866 жыл бұрын
My OC is a 13 year old male. He was wandering in a forest when he was 10 and was missing for 3 years, he has a blue hoodie, black pants, brown shoes, and hair covering 1 of his eyes, he was possessed by a ghostly monster that feeds off of people's souls, the character sometimes has control over himself, but when he doesn't, it (the ghostly monster) wants to kill as many people as it possibly can before the teenager gains control again, you can tell when he's possessed because the white part of his eyes turn dark red, and his eyes start bleeding Edit: Everything besides the appearance and personality is a W.I.P the backstory is almost finished
@mugz76356 жыл бұрын
I'm very proud of my OC! Her name is Aella,but her CP name is Whirlwind. She looks like she's ten,but is really no age at all. She was a baby who was aborted,and her soul was converted into a demonic entity. Her parents pretended to have a miscarriage after everyone in their community gave them gifts for the baby that they could just sell for more money than they already had. Aella appears as a doll-like child,with mirrors for eyes,short blond hair that floats as if she's underwater,and pale skin that is cracked like an old doll's would be around her right eye. She wears a teddy bear mask that covers every part of her face except her mouth and wears a slightly dirtied-up white dress. She targets people who abuse,abort,or 'touch' children. What do you think about Aella?
@Manawi-r5d2 жыл бұрын
Such a nice and cool character where is she from ?
@Asher-3186 ай бұрын
@@Manawi-r5dThe person said it was their OC (original character)
@popsiclekip93286 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I'm off to make a creepy pasta. I wasn't planning to I just watched this out of boredom but than I just got motivated to make one
@drummerboi3576 жыл бұрын
i always remember the CROFT in oc making all the things you listed apart from T time perod
@shelbysnow12884 жыл бұрын
It this good? Name: Kaitlyn Mink Gender: Female Family: Wip Appearance: Light brown hair with brown eyes that have a red tint. She has taned skin and a birthmark on her right shoulder that looks like Skelton eyes and teeth, her mom has a similar birthmark. Style: Expossed shoulders and turtle necks Story: I always felt.. different.. Sometimes I over heard people telling my dad I gave them bad vibes. When I turned 8, I finally found out... "We can't keep shielding her like this!" My mom yelled from another room. "We need to wait, she's not ready!" My dad retorted. "The demon will take over if we don't tell her now!" "D-demon?" I said wandering into the room. "How long were you there?" My dad asked. "Long enough!" I cried. To get to the basics they told me both me and my mom have a demon inside of us. The demon feeds off of fear and sorrow. They told me mom will die on her 30th birthday because she never let the demon take over. It's why me and and my mom have almost identical birthmarks. Also, mom was 29. Idk what else yet :P
@basicallyafilipino4 жыл бұрын
Yup, it's a good starting point
@talcyan26633 жыл бұрын
I think its good :D
@thehernandez70647 жыл бұрын
I'm planning to do a Lost Episode CreepyPasta, yeah I know it's kinda risky so I just a few tips that would be nice.
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
Frisk Dreemurr yeah. You can do any idea as long as the execution is good. Just research the topic and make it seem realistic and believable.
@davidmartin16164 жыл бұрын
I personally think this: *To make a creepypasta oc, it doesn't necessary has to be the villain or a monster.*
@davidmartin16164 жыл бұрын
@@Snow-Leopard-kr2dp True, tough she kills criminals (I think)
@Encentix4 жыл бұрын
Yeah it can be anything. these are just ideas.
@davidmartin16164 жыл бұрын
@@Encentix I know, and thanks to this video I made many creepypastas oc's, thank you :3
@pedringers014 жыл бұрын
my dad used to make horror movies he makes action ones now but i can watch my dads horror movies for a concept
@What-nu8dj8 жыл бұрын
I wanted to ask a question is Holocaust a good name? in creating an oc. and I did some research on back story of the name and I don't want offend anyone with it should I change the name or keep it?
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
well if it fits the subject and portrays it well without inaccuracies it will work. murder in general is offensive to people. it's still used. not every fictional thing has to be politically correct. art has allmost no boundaries. and it is good that it is like that.
@c.chonii55687 жыл бұрын
OC so far. Name : WIP Age : 16 Gender : Female Appearance : WIP Personality : WIP Family : WIP Backstory : She was grabbed from behind, her back landing into the hard seat, a car door slammed shut, and a pale woman came into view sitting on the drivers seat, she turned around and put a white cloth over her mouth, and the blue sky turned green, then black. She woke up, still sitting, but now on a chair, hands and legs binded tight, a hankerchief over her mouth and a blind fold on her eyes, both wrapped tight, she tried to be as still as possible, she didn't want to know what this woman would do if she were awake. "1234, hear the horned king knocking on the door" a voice sang behind her, she didn't move an inch. "5678, this empty darkness he did make" "9,10,11,12, the age my sweet baby was before he left" a hand hit my face, causing me to gasp and move. "And now he will come back to me, child" Her hand was combing through the terrified girls thick brown hair, what was in her mind she dared not think. "And you will be the key" A haunting chant echoed through the room, a bit of light was seeping through her blind fold, candles, she was going to burn wasn't she? She struggled, the chair fell to the left, or was it her right? didn't matter, the chanting grew louder and faster, burning through her skull. the chanting was answered by a long screeching roar.
@silentmara11996 жыл бұрын
*I like it, good so far* *I know this is a year late xD*
@PRGME76 жыл бұрын
Ebøny Entrøpy who names their kid WIP?
@Catsorgtfo5 жыл бұрын
Is her last name Nae Nae?
@koko.7275 жыл бұрын
First thing I think of when I saw that the name was Wip: *NOW WATCH ME WIP, NOW WATCH ME NAE NAE*
@sarahseedsXD5 жыл бұрын
PRGME7 It means Work In Progress
@caseyco30265 жыл бұрын
I'm trying to make one about a type of mythical creature with horns and is really skinny, forgot the name. Edit: Windigo
@gonejustgone5 жыл бұрын
Thanks, I needed this. :3 I'm done with the OC OF HER APPEARENCE AND PERSONALITY SO I needed more to this.
@dominicsoto87558 жыл бұрын
I tried to make a creepypasta I thought of my oc when I was in elementary school I want to know how I can do digital art so I can draw him better.
@brianjamessheehan8 жыл бұрын
Crazy Hyena25 step one upgrade to paint.net from ms paint step two your on your own now
@TempestGamingVODS7 жыл бұрын
Temmoi Paint.net is absolutely stupid, and if anything it limits you even more than ms paint. Never use it.
@pencil_sketches18334 жыл бұрын
Me: has an oc that is a robot with (stolen) human flesh* Also me: *sweats nervously*
@Encentix4 жыл бұрын
Lol it‘s ok don‘t let my advice stop ya! My example was just pointing out that u shouldn‘t make a character that wouldn‘t work because it cancels itself out. Ur example would be an exception because if ur robot‘s unique trait was having it‘s exo skin made out of human skin then that‘s perfectly logical while havkng a character be a robot but also not a robot is obviously a thkng that doesn‘t make sense cause it contradicts itself.
@tisharin39117 жыл бұрын
Hi and thank you so much for this video. I've been dying to make an oc myself but i literally don't know how. Thanks again!❤❤
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
Tisha Rin yw!
@callmebyku7 жыл бұрын
serial killer idea (due to research) : Albert Fisher film related to him: The Gray Man (2007)
@r_rchl53267 жыл бұрын
Runover_Crybaby Oh god..no..Albert Fish is straight up TERRIBLE
@callmebyku7 жыл бұрын
Creepypasta LoverX13 makes a great creepy pasta tho
@r_rchl53267 жыл бұрын
Runover_Crybaby Yes..BUT THAT GUY IS STILL TERRIBLE xD
@Rosemary-go8us4 жыл бұрын
I know I'm 2 or 3 years off here (ha same old me ...) but I'm doing mine based off Jeffrey Dahmer.
@Neveronline20244 жыл бұрын
Ah yes Jeffrey Dahmer aka the Milwaukee cannibal
@blackcatobituaryVHS6 жыл бұрын
I have a creepypasta oc. His name is zarku and he is a pale armless demon with a huge black cross on his chest. He has large deformed horns and has spines going down his head. He has sharp back claws and the tip of his tail is shaped like a trident. He has one beady eye and one huge hypnotic eye. Still working on his backstory
@elizabeth-bo4eb7 жыл бұрын
When she was talking about horror movies with romanticized killings I instantly thought of Kill Bill
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
Necozz _ never seen that movie but interesting to know.
@rachellebarrera96484 жыл бұрын
i already have a character but im still struggling
@yonaholic6 жыл бұрын
I feel like I have one that's sorta ok. Her name is Eva. She was a black eyed child but is now grown out and is a teen. Idk her backstory yet.
@metallicvoid19847 жыл бұрын
Back in like..... 2008...? I had a CP OC and holy SHIT she was bad! Now that I am a bit older, and have been making OC's for many things, and watching these videos, I can look back and say "God.... This WAS terrible... Bloody Mary Sue up in here! Shit!" But I can also make a DECENT CP OC now. And I have tried my hand at writing, so I think I could make a decent story... Buy this video also gave me a bit more knowledge of what I should do! Thank you for this!
@bladeartz9997 жыл бұрын
You could also make your own comic series of your oc and put it on a site like DeviantArt! That's what I'm doing I don't know if anyone else is but lol
@asiladust8 жыл бұрын
Thank goodness my character follows everything pretty well
@pharaohtiger98645 жыл бұрын
Ok, I have a question. My oc can morph into a wolf(might change that later Idk) and is basically a werewolf. Is that original, or should I fit it into the creepypasta world?
@adttalia57064 жыл бұрын
I have an oc, she is a demon but she always show up as a human-wolf... And I just can't make a backstory for her T-T I don't even know If It fits in the Creepypasta fandom
@evaporation72936 жыл бұрын
I uploaded a video of me speed painting her tell me if you think I did good!
@madeline72475 жыл бұрын
Name: Bloody Windows/ Maya Willows Appearance: a girl with stained-glass shards all over her body, even at her heart and eyes and blood drips from all the cuts on her body onto her white dress. Weapons: the stained glass shards on her body Personality: full of judgement, bratty, but only kills those who wronged their children of doing horrible crimes. Backstory: “It’s Judgement Day; you must drop to hell.” Backstory: She was born to a wealthy family, but her friends at school were jealous of not only her money and status, but also because she was very intelligent. However, she is a whiny brat who complains about even the smallest of things. One day, she was painting a portrait and accidentally spilled dark red paint on her dress, which was white. She called for one of her maids to come and help her clean it, but after years of her cruelty, the maid decided that it was time for revenge. That night, she took another maid’s baby ,who was in the nursery of the mansion as the owner let her use it, and stabbed him with a kitchen knife. She called Maya to come down to the kitchen, and told her that she would clean the dress. She went down, only to be horrified at the sight of the dead infant. The maid then called Maya’s parents and accused her of murdering the other maid’s baby. Her parents were furious and they locked her up in the attic, only allowing her to wear the stained dress. Days passed, then weeks, then months, and she had enough and jumped off a stained glass window of the attic and fell to her death. At her funeral, the maid revealed that she had killed the infant, but her parents still believed that Maya killed him. They spat at the coffin carrying her body, which still had the shard. They then cursed her to rot in hell when the coffin was being transported in the hearse. Six days after her burial, she was resurrected, and swore revenge to those who wronged her and any other children. Fun fact: her catchphrase is partly based on her death.
@FlumeryVODs7 жыл бұрын
I'm gonna make a vampire CP OC because I like vampires what a reason lol
@ihavetowait90daystochangem886 жыл бұрын
My oc is a 6 year old who never sleeps and makes paper telescopes to stalk people at night.Drawing is hobby.
@black123exe55 жыл бұрын
QwQ thank you i wanted to make a creepypasta oc for a long time and i needed some tips i will use these
@constellationetoile81536 жыл бұрын
I have a character who is human, and is getting revenge on the loan sharks who killed her parents for not paying their debt. Her human name is Amaris Carter and her killer name is Karma her catchphrase is is based off a song that I listened to after I created her, and I was like, "WOAH, THIS SONG ALMOST PERFECTLY DESCRIBES HER AND HER BACKSTORY" so her catchphrase is "Karma's gonna come collect your debt."
@HOLYCROWN7776 жыл бұрын
Can I show you mine Creepypasta Oc in deviant art ??? Please reply saying yes
@gaypotatouwu54874 жыл бұрын
Ok so this video is amazing!
@lovelessbachelor7 жыл бұрын
I clicked on this to see if my oc Selena the Shooter,was considered a bad oc So let's just explain her physical appearances: Skin is extremely pale as of her lack of sun Short Dark grey hair left side covering her nonexistent left eye Wears white t shirt stained with blood,also wears overalls Right arm is nonexistent as it is brutality ripped off Chest pocket on overalls have scalpels and knifes dripping with blood Holds shotgun in left hand BTW she's 14 and her real name is Selena sitkin And no...I don't ship her with anyone
@redlight47397 жыл бұрын
My Oc is a cat named Oreo (because she is black and white) she is possessed (because cats are week and can't alert people) she is a fully adult cat. Her owner is a child named Charlotte. The demons goal is to limit the human population. Oreo chases people into danger (like traffic or off a cliff) only if she is desperate she rips out their throat (she does not normally do it because she is cat) she scares them by making her eyes glow or hissing really deeply then she chases them. She does not know of any creepypasta characters. She does not have a illness (she is a cat) she us a rescue with not really a bad past. Her owner looks after her well. What do you think Mary sue or not?
@bluej22068 жыл бұрын
you know another thing is you can look up early signs of a serial killer from the crime museum websit
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
yup thx for the suggestion!
@ShiorikoDesu3 жыл бұрын
I haven't decided on a real name but my OC's killer name is "Yami no Megami"(闇の女神, Goddess of Darkness)
@wonderjocelyn17197 жыл бұрын
My oc is.. Name: Croc (Jofia Elisa Yogen is her real name) Age: 17 Gender:Female Sexuality: Straight (not homophobic but I'm homoloveit) Religion: Filipino , and Porto Rican Appearance: Dark brown hair (in a messy bun), Her skin is a little rough in small spots around her body, Grey tank top with black swimming shorts and no shoes, also has goggles (like Toby but more like covering just her eyes). Weapon of choice: Her teeth and claws/nails Backs story: Jofia was a normal child , had friends and had plenty of fun! No one bullied her and she wasn't abused..but...there were people who hated her so much and that they wanted to kill her..then one night a fire started in her house she was stuck and lost breath while getting her baby brother(3 years old he was) out of the house..she got home m out but after she got him out the window the window closed and got stuck. She was now stuck. They did eventually got her out... but she was needed for the nearest hospital even a animal hospital would be enough...and the closest was the 'Water Animals Hospital'.. When they got there they had to do a curtain surgery that would change her life forever. They removed her lugs and nails and teeth and eyes and even a small part of her brain..but with what you might be asking.. with the only thing they had. Crocodile parts...she survived and her brain was re wired..but she had an urge to kills some thing..they gave her some goggles and long pants with long sleeved shirt..and they then said to her" don't eat at school in front of every one but behind the school.."..she went to school the next day and everyone was asking why does she have so much clothes on...no one would even look at her...and then the school bully's pulled off all her clothes and everyone looked at her in disgust then everyone was laughing at her..even the teachers...she then stood up and stared to laugh...everyone stopped and watched her laugh..she then snapped..and stared to kill everyone in her path..and then disappeared and was never seen again.. (Still a work in progress)
@JulyBaby6 жыл бұрын
W O N D E R J O C E L Y N yay I'm filipino
@basicallyafilipino4 жыл бұрын
Filipino? Yeah, I'm a Fili
@greytmc46443 жыл бұрын
I needed this ty Also people do say creepypastas have to be creepy, I made one that literally is a hecking purple cat thing like bruh they dont- Seriously tho why do peopl say dis-
@teeveeee7 жыл бұрын
Have any tips for this idea i have? I'm creating some ocs simular to Slender, Sulker, etc. and their Proxies. It's actually going to be a clown, that does things somewhat inspired by the joker, such as giving them candy that forces the victim to become dependant on said candy, or else die from starvation and/or lack of real food. The clowns proxies would be people that either were manipulated into joining him, or somehow unaffected by his deadly tricks. It's still in the works and I'll have to really need to work on it before I feel it's properly polished
@dedfiesh59216 жыл бұрын
I used to have this OC Belladonna and I *hated* her. I recently did she revisions and here's what I got. Carroline White was an average 10 year old girl with a lovely mother but an abusive step father. Her step father mentally abused her until she was 12 when she suddenly snapped. Vines grew from her wrist and her eyes turned black, somehow she had powers that only activated when she was in a time of pure rage. She killed her step father and when her mother tried to interfere, Carroline killed her as well due to the pure anger in her body. She was taken by the cops and sent to a foster home where she lives a primarily happy life. However, the trauma in her childhood caused her to have D.I.D and lead to very jumpy and timid.
@angelar.67507 жыл бұрын
LaughingJacklin is one oc that my gf made untill others started useing the concept of makeing lj ocs
@angeliita-7 жыл бұрын
This is so helpful! I've trying to make a Creepypasta OC that is no too Edgy or is not a Marry sue
@Spaceytrash8 жыл бұрын
totally off topic but I still can't believe how you can watch these gruesome horror movies nowadays and couldn't even watch the Ärzte vid for Junge in the past xD
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
True xD
@AllieDrawzStuff3 жыл бұрын
This is very well made and concise! Very nice video.
@sodo9544 жыл бұрын
What did you mean by the same torture? Sorry just wondering because my character gets tortured a little (only 2 weeks but that's a major part of his story) and it's not like normal torture but did you mean like physical torture? Or did you mean the same way of physical torture is over used? And if so what is that type of torture
@complicatedpanda10337 жыл бұрын
What is the best way to actually draw an oc? Using an app or using pencil and paper?
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
A Girl i recommend Programms like Paint tool Sai or Fire Alpaca for digital. But if u want you can make a traditional piece too. U can use a pencil for the sketch and liners for the outlines. (No need to buy the expensive ones) color it in with Colored pencils, Watercolor or markers depending on what you wanna use.
@ingsoc7876 жыл бұрын
My OC is a mad scientist type who uses atropine, hydrogen peroxide, and rattlesnake venom.
@lostandfounddatpuppy15567 жыл бұрын
thanks this has really helped!
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
Lost and Found Dat Puppy yw!
@valentinelove94638 жыл бұрын
This is so useful!
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
thx!
@valentinelove94638 жыл бұрын
+Daleeny You're welcome.🙂
@CosmicDragonMastsrChief4 жыл бұрын
One of my oc’s race was a game code. Not a game character but a virus within the code
@PlatinumShadowRayn6 жыл бұрын
Thanks to this video i created a creepypasta oc called dark suicide (name while alive kate)
@thepigeonman37197 жыл бұрын
I wanna make mine a creature that before it kills its victims it sing London bridge is falling down and it sounds like a little girl any tips on design? (I haven't watched the hole vid sorry if its mary sueish)
@asheerheartattack6 жыл бұрын
First thing first: Twisted Glitched is like a creepypasta, but a OC at the same time. Here's the first Glitched's description: A light grey wolf-fox with black fire patterns covering her animatronic costume, she has a red eye, a maroon eyepatch covering a white glitchy eye. She has a red collar on that seems like it's connected to her. She tries to help at first....... then she goes after you. Twisted Glitched description: Name: Twisted Glitched Gender: Female (referred as to it sometimes) Species: Twisted Animatronic Looks: The same wolf-fox frame as Glitched, but Twisted Glitched is mainly endoskeleton, she has the patterns still, just her original suit color. Her eyes are grey or white, the eyepatch and collar are missing. Her teeth appear to be blood-stained on the tips, as if she had dipped them in blood. Personality: I would describe her as aggressive, isolated and hateful. Where did she live?: She lived at the pizzeria where the second Fnaf game is set. Backstory: She was the regular Glitched once, one day she got in a fight with another animatronic and lost half of her costume. Shortly after that, the other half fell off. She ran away from the pizzeria after that. One day she woke up in a workshop, with a human attempting to repair her. The human is who she calls The Creator. She waited, and waited, The Creator didn't come back. Later she killed The Creator when he finally came back. Nicknames: Twisted Glitch and Unfinished Project. Can I animate her story?: Yes give the credit to me tho. Wait I need her *REAL STORY*: Damnit... *Sighs* fine it's in her point of view. *Twisted* Well.... I can't believe I'm writing this well hanging on to the ceiling. I'm Twisted Glitched. The one The Creator didn't finish. Let's go back to when I arrived up to this moment. I remembered running away from the pizzeria, then powering off. I opened my eyes and grumbled. I was in a cage that seemed to be in a workshop. "What the hell." I said out loud, my voice even more messed up then usual. I got up the best I could and noticed I was mostly endoskeleton. Whoever had "fixed me" wasn't here, maybe I could get out? I heard a sputtering of a engine, reminds me of Foxy's singing. I sat still again and then I powered off. When I was powered on again, the cage wasn't metal.. It was trees? "One how did these get here." I slammed against a tree, it broke and so did the others. I got out of there and climbed the wall, up to the ceiling. "Not half bad..." I murmured. *I'll add more later*
@Sneaky_Snail_Pie_027 жыл бұрын
I have several OCs. My very first one ever was actually based off of me. Her name has changed about 3 times now. She went from Shadow Shine The Killer (really mary sue! I know!), to just Shadow Shine, then she was Shadow FireBlade, and then Shadow FireSoul, and then just recently I named her Shadow BetaFire. Her story is kinda long, and sadly what is considered cliche because of the over use of what species she is. She's supposed to be a werewolf vampire... demon kind of creature. She herself isn't sure of what she is actually. Someone said that it was stupid because it makes her over powered and that the idea of an OC being one or both of those is used often. Shadow BetaFire not only is a demon of some sort, but she has no way to figure out how. She was born to human parents and has a family that is entirely human. I know there is stuff to perfect here. I came up with this OC when I was 11 and had just become a part of the creepypasta fandom.
@zombatar1566 жыл бұрын
Does anybody think a deformed human is also ok to use for an OC plus I think not knowing much about the character is scarier
@crazycatzg34813 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your tips, and do u happen to know any horror movie about toxic person, a person that has been broken beyond repair? I’m working on a Creepypasta oc based on that
@darewolf68448 жыл бұрын
i always make my ocs like me or i at least make sure i can see my self in the oc
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
every one does that to an extend. it just has to fit that's all. if it doesn't fit the character then the character won't work. keep that in mind.
@CrowbusRune2 жыл бұрын
Ooo wait there's a lot of serial killer documents that are real cool to read about
@blo0dyteeth645 жыл бұрын
I want to amke a creelypasta caracter that look something like me so i can cosplay as her, but ill age her up
@shi_no_kurai_kage Жыл бұрын
About that... HOW DO I FIT IN?
@pillralgarden31706 жыл бұрын
I created a creepypasta called Amy Black! She comes to you in your nightmares, she sometimes takes you as a guest and an alliance but sometimes as a nemesis and a bad guy, she died by a train accident, (she got mental and saw a crying girl in front of the train, she wanted to push the girl but by mistake gets crushed by the train, the glass breaks in front of her, and breaking the oil tank, all the oil goes on her, and some electric wires, boom! She burns)she has black short hair, a bit of a brown body, brown eyes, and a Royale dress, for her dark form she has no eye balls, ruined dress, crying blood, and twitching neck, no hands
@slab90347 жыл бұрын
This was very helpful! Subscribed :3
@hulamcflyer49726 жыл бұрын
My creepypasta OC doesn't have a mental illness, bullied, abuse etc. Instead she was born like this way. She is a Soul Reaper after all.
@nyancat86558 жыл бұрын
This video was really helpful Could you possibly make one for a "The Walking Dead" OC?
@Encentix7 жыл бұрын
Who Is He sorry but i‘m too uninformed about this topic to make a video about it.
@buggexx6 жыл бұрын
so i cant have a furry/ anthapamorhtic animal creepypasta oc :(
@alexx.79725 жыл бұрын
All i was saying in my head was “ dontmakeitedgydontmakeitedgydontmakeitedgy “
@societyofamusementparkhistory4 жыл бұрын
Would you guys think a Cold War era scientist who goes mad and builds himself into a robot and uses everyday objects as pieces of the robot like toasters, refrigerators, jukeboxes, etc interesting?
@c0l0rs1nc.44 жыл бұрын
and this is why i'm writing a creepypasta named rosebud xD or Alister before rosebud but idk writing a lil backstory is going to ot be difficult as i'm writng a 20 chapter book rn so
@cricat37768 жыл бұрын
is the picture in the thumbnail from lost_amber?????(from wattpad)
@Encentix8 жыл бұрын
I don't know exactly. i found it on google.
@Yourfather1984 Жыл бұрын
I am trying to make a “camping” creepypasta, by having a sprit or demon posesing a charater. But again my strong side is design and not story.
@wearegachakings52616 жыл бұрын
"only watch this movie if you can handle sad stuff" Me:I don't feel Sadness. Or emotions. Or anything