I always expected you to release a song. I've for almost 2 years making music and I havent made one with lyrics yet. Also, a love song is a good way to start. Those, according to how I experienced by other songs, are what tends to become at least recognized among other musicians and singers. The music, the lyrics and everything is good but I fell something makes this bad... The way you sing, you sing good but this song feels like you were singing without the push to do it, sounds... without you wanting to sing... But over that, all this is really good.