Evernight [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark AU)

[@Rainbow_Sish_Kabob]

You gotta love a story with the words “grim” and “dark” in the opening line

[@McBean1331]

Yes.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@McBean1331 AJ looks cool reminds me of Van Helsing

[@nilgnoimv2803]

Applejack as a dark protagonist has her own charm... although someone wold prefer a deadly grim mare with a chainsaw equivalent of Guts' Dragonslayer.

[@Darksoulpoetry]

10:48 Grannies right. AJ shoulda named her 6 shot after her. Grannie Smith and Wesson!

[@kbeats5289]

I find it so fascinating to see a pony fic of ponies using firearms outside of Fallout Equestria. It's actually rather cool. This story is fantastic! I like the flutterbat twist. Even more that she's seemed to switch from vampire fruit bat to straight up vampire and her brood just grows from there. XD good luck AJ.

[@SnowHoof000]

Sorry, must've missed the flutterbat twist....

[@pjtha1]

HOW DO PONIES USE GUNS ANYWAY

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

Yay new MLP Grimdark and Applejack reminds me of Van Helsing in this story. Love that movie.

[@ashleighstangeland7488]

Was that pony vampire thing mentioned at the end, supposed to be..... FLUTTERSHY/FLUTTERBAT?!?!

[@gamingwithjosie]

This was amazing Lost. Why does it not surprise me that Granny haunts the apple household.

[@revaslatts4301]

Plot twist: Vinyl Scratch is the actual vampire.

[@SnowHoof000]

Huh. Do we have a potential candidate for a vampire earth pony?

[@Viktorijas_KID]

10:59 ,,I'm the one who's dead! You should name a gun after me!!!" That part got me laughing! XD

[@blackroseknight77]

Applejack: the vampire slayer. hoofstatic story Losty! 😊

[@Danero1919]

This was a phenomenal reading. Don’t feel bad about how long it took. I’m trying my hand at fic writing, and it’s amazed me how long it can take to create a fic with 10k words and have it be something worth publishing. I can only imagine how much longer it takes to do stories justice in an audio format.

[@TheCommenterDragon]

Sweet Celestia Lost no matter what you always come through with these fantastic fanfic readings! I never get tired of listening to your amazing voice, You and Mag did such a marvelous job on this make no mistake about it!!!

[@cameronjsmith7382]

HOT DAMN! THE QUEEN STRIKES AGAIN! Awesome reading Lost!

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

Cameron J Smith Yeah and I like the thumbnail of Applejack she looks awesome..

[@cameronjsmith7382]

@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 agreed.

[@antonrueda1044]

The visuals are amazing! I can't believe how much work was put into this fanfic. Awesome job!

[@DubbyTheEevee23]

When I first saw that thumbnail Angerjack popped up in my mind😅

[@LemonLimeSkull]

Equestria must offer exceptional dental care if aj can be firing rounds from her mouth like that, but in all seriousness another exceptional dark story can't wait for the next one. Thanks

[@Gamzeejunior]

A monster hunting au with quotes from Hellboy. This pleases me.

[@loonathehellhound6387]

I already love the thumbnail. Apple Jack looks bad ass.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

Loona the Hellhound And it reminds me of Van Helsing

[@Edmonton-of2ec]

Holy, the visual effects are just… wow. Love this

[@Firestarsparkle]

The lost found her next fanfic amazing reading

[@GreysonAuctor]

I recently remembered my "MLP audiofic" Phase and came back to your channel. Im pleased as punch that you still make content! ❤

[@victorialucas7645]

AJ: “How you like them… Apples? Darkly tart enough for ya, with just the right amount of juice to get the blood going, ya bucking Monsters?”

[@thetruecrystalvixen]

I was honestly waiting for the vampire to either turn out to be Big Macintosh or Fluttershy- or Fluttershy and Big Macintosh was in her thrall. This was an excellent reading, I always enjoy anything you read, your narration comes off as calm, soothing and a bit menacing.

[@McBean1331]

Lost is a legend no joke.

[@CyreeTWPF]

YOU GO, APPLEJACK!!!!!!!!!!

[@Idontrunntoofast]

Lost! Your uploads are more than welcome in my notifications :-) also that "Hellboy" reference.. it has been a long time since I've watched that movie.

[@atomic5271]

this gives me heavy Hellboy vibes and i'm loving it. i would love to read more like this.

[@atomic5271]

i got to min 6 and it is just Hellboy XD

[@MeliesCinemagician]

Reminds me a lot of that old Van Helsing movie with Hugh Jackman. Applejackman, perhaps?

[@charleswalker8262]

Coming Soon From Hasbro..............................AppleJack The Vampire Slayer.

[@juliemesser2053]

😆👏

[@Sonicnicholasgameandreview8999]

Me as a Vampire. Ha ha ha ha If you want to kill me you have to catch me first

[@1989JROG]

I definitely enjoyed the fic and I liked the visuals. Excellent as always, Lost.

[@DarkTheAuthor]

No matter what you narrate your voice is always perfect for it i swear. Im lowkey kinda jealous lmao. Im cursed with a permanently monotone British voice XD

[@POOKESEE]

I love the ending LOL

[@greenskull3384]

6:03-7:00 Hellboy reference! Classic!!!😂👍

[@Idontrunntoofast]

Yep I got that one! 🤣

[@vladivoices]

That was awesome! I like this vampire hunter Applejack au! XD

[@Gresekjr122]

Lost&Magpie5Ever Beyond beautiful narration. I really enjoyed this Grim Dark Story. Keep up the good work. Have a wonderful day Lost & Magpie. Love you both.

[@compahearts5546]

Yo i just barely got into mlp fandom due to creepy pasta. Got to say I hope u do more readings of them they are interesting.

[@VivisCorner]

Aj in this fanfic is so badass

[@shannon9677]

I love your narrating voice. It's perfect for storytelling.

[@toeshrimp]

I didn't expect this to become a flutterbat horror dang that was really good

[@SnowHoof000]

Seriously, when was flutterbat mentioned?

[@dr.brones6951]

that was really really really good, I want more

[@thenewadventuresofhenry6998]

GrimDark characters with firearms almost always have higher chances of survival.

[@Archiver_Studio]

So we've got a badass monster hunting AJ who needs to kill Fluttershy/Flutterbat?! That is both depressing and AWESOME like holy crap! I love that!

[@geartime4]

HAHA! I KNEW FLUTTERSHY WAS GONNA SHOW UP SOONER OR LATER!

[@IceCreamMonster1366]

Absolutely sick Lost! Hope you do a series of this! 🩸

[@TheLastRunicorn]

She's back!!!!

[@mushu1105]

Is it me, or did thay mentioned flutterbat? Great story btw y'all did great! also what's this song called? 7:50

[@CrazyGreenFluff]

awesome!! i hope jack will be okay, she seemed pretty composed killing the first one so maybe. it may seem like she's gonna die but i've played games where i'm swarmed by enemies and manage to beat them all and survive on the verge of death, so im optimistic she'll get out alive-- although surely with several more scars :0 FANTASIC FIC AND READING!!

[@Lordfever7252]

Yay a new Story you rock LostNarrator

[@bleakautomaton4808]

I almost thought this would've been a Bloodborne crossover

[@RaidoDemonSimp]

I LOVE THIS APPLEJACK BEING A MONSTER HUNTER IS AMAZING🥰🤩😎😎😎😎😎

[@rhiannondavis5724]

I have a few suggestions for MLP grimdark fanfics you can do. "Forever Faithful", "Lil' Miss Rarity", "Pegasus Device (The sequel to Rainbow Factory)", "Cheerilee's Garden", "Scarlet Harvest (The sequel to Cheerilee's Garden)", and "The Cutie Mark Killers" You can totally do a casting call for those as well 😉

[@4zy1]

also "Final Performance" that one came out last month and its really good

[@rhiannondavis5724]

@@4zy1 What's "Final Performance" about?

[@4zy1]

@@rhiannondavis5724 If you're familiar with the episode "No Second Prances" it's kind of like a sequel to that. During the production of the Season 6 finale, an animator discovers a .fla file containing a fan episode/project that somehow got put in with other episode files. I don't wanna spoil too much, but it gives a little insight to Trixie's declining mental state and backstory.

[@rhiannondavis5724]

@@4zy1 I'm familiar with the episode "No Second Prances"

[@beeruslemaridena6167]

Good to see applejack finally fighting instead if being a victim

[@Sonicnicholasgameandreview8999]

Please do a part 2

[@archeishere1]

Hell yeah another Grimdark

[@bamargraf]

Yay! A new reading!

[@primroseprime9533]

I do enjoy an awesome grimdark

[@ellaplay505]

I totally didn't watch every single thing in one sitting :) even the bloopers I will wait for more :D

[@danielybarra8664]

I like this story but i have one question are you sure that giant vampire thing that applejack shot isnt vinyl scratch?

[@ianswinford5570]

Since my OC is a vampire, should I be worried about this huntress? I hope not.

[@Sonicnicholasgameandreview8999]

Applejack vs Vampires 🧛🏻‍♀️

[@mistystudios1163]

THIS WAS AMAZING!!

[@carolinecheney]

This is a great story! Hope you have a good day!

[@McBean1331]

Vampire ponies.

[@WolfX1120]

That was epic,,, /)

[@GlitchGhost1285]

A good ol Hellsing Jack story. Always a great to listen too.

[@DoctorTex]

"The night is grim and full of dark" As a Kingdom Hearts fan, this usage of "dark" as a noun empties my hurt.

[@ashleighstangeland7488]

So would this be based on that au created in the episode Cutie remark (if that's the right one) one of like five that we're shown? Or is this its own thing??

[@Lionessqueen98]

I like this story

[@teamidris]

Yay, Love a good grimdark. As you may have noticed :o)

[@SleepingFury4269]

i may be super late, but what happened to the reading for "La Pomme Boutique"? 😭 i can't find it anywhere

[@thelostnarrator]

That video unfortunately got marked as made for kids and I tried to send in a repeal, but it was denied. I had to unlist it because I obviously don't want kids to find that in the kids app, but you can find it still on the playlist where I have all my grimdsrk readings sorted. It's called "The Dark Horse" playlist and you can find it under podcasts or the MLP Fanfic Readings playlist as well. It sucks, but I wanted to at least keep it up that way. I might reupload it some day, but for now, that's the work around.

[@astralring8124]

4:28 that's what she said

[@SuperSpike47]

Fantastic video 😺

[@juliemesser2053]

Wonderful just Wonderful.😮😊

[@kittenanders694]

Omg that is so granny 😂

[@caprituna]

THIS CONCEPT IS SO COOL

[@quintonjones2699]

That was awesome Lost

[@skyquestriamystoriesUK]

Incredible video

[@princesita22je]

So basically this is an au where nightmare moon was able to make it eternally nighttime.

[@LilaHubert-jl9zd]

*in halo narrator voice* SLAYER.

[@mrmlpvideogerman]

this was so good.

[@RosaUshiromiya11037]

the ending.............

[@BlackMoonHowls]

I know that song, Inception was liked by more people than I thought.

[@OriginalMariAnnaWolf]

Welp! AJs ded! That's what happens when Twi fail to get Flutters back completely, making her into a real vamp?

[@arielortiz3548]

👏

[@SNOW_LEOPARDS101]

YESSSSSS ANOTHERR ONEEEE

[@pingudude2409]

Epic, so epic

[@SebastianMichaelis99]

Oh hi goldie

[@RobertoMaciel-me9jt]

Que historia nao?

[@quinnhouk5369]

Awesome

[@jeditalez]

I'm listening to fanfic readings to better write my own!

[@defnotpretz0_o]

APLE SLEEP EXPERIMENT

[@ace_of_cups4096]

Oooooooh shit, i KNEW that was gonna happen!!!! Edit: Wait... Pink hair?? Is Flutters a vampire pony again?? 😅

[@joshnolen2675]

Is it just me or is anyone else getting a little bit of Bloodborne vibes?

[@leonasnake]

OOOO I LOVE THIS

[@fnafqueen101]

So will apple jack survive the attack and kill them all and Fluttershy also

[@woodkiller4496]

wow

[@ParsureArts]

Wooooo nice!!

[@Dusk_Mightyena]

Woman thinks she’s Simon Belmont

[@teresadoldsbynum9440]

This some good shit 😊