Everything Wrong With "EWW CinemaSins: Toy Story 2" by Luke Dougherty

[@LukeDougherty1003]

This was an interesting video, and you left some good feedback because I always want to know how I can do better, though there are a few things I have to say: 1. For some of these sins, I was trying not to repeat things Captain Vader said, because I try not to copy other CinemaSins sinners. 2. 1:44 I did Toy Story 3 before 2 because when I was in a period of doing videos I wanted to do, I had that movie in a poll and it won (and Toy Story 2 was made in a request period). 3. 3:31 That’s mainly because Th3Birdman pretty much does the same thing. 4. 0:13 I could’ve shared this sooner, but “Door-tee” is how my last name is pronounced. 5. 6:25 Admittedly, I could’ve made the text darker, but I wasn’t intentionally making it hard to read. 6. For the “That’s worth these many sins” part, I used to specify how many sins I’d be giving, but I eventually stopped doing that because I figured my viewers could figure it out for themselves. And overall, I do always mean well in these videos (since I’m very well meaning), but like I said, I do always want to know how to do better, and also, I appreciate you subscribing.

[@CinemaSinsSins249]

Thanks for being a good sport about this! I was kind of hesitant to make this video, because making fun of smaller creators is a whole different ballgame to making fun of a borderline corporate conglomerate like Cinemasins, but I ended up doing it because I thought most of my criticisms were either fair or funny enough warrant making a video about it. Again, none of these were super serious criticisms. This was supposed to be intended in good fun. 1. Same, dude. I used to be a big Jay Exci fan, so it’s always hard to cover movies that he already did without treading familiar ground. 2. That’s fair. That sin especially was not supposed to be super serious (keep in mind I made fun of myself for doing the exact same thing). 3. Again, that’s fair. I never realized Th3Birdman also did that. It’s been a little while since I’ve watched one of his videos. 4. …fuck. Sorry about that. 5. Yeah, I know you weren’t ACTUALLY trying to make it hard to read. That was hyperbole. But I do still think the color choice was kind of odd. My suggestion would be to either put borders around your text or to use a consistent color for all of them. 6. That’s understandable. That sin especially also wasn’t super serious criticism, because I thought saying “plus one sin for making me do math” would be funny. You’re clearly more inspired by Birdman, because he’s much more analytical, while I’m more inspired by Jay Exci, who is much more comedic. Sometimes, I’ll make a sin about something that I know isn’t a huge deal for the sake of making a joke about it. Feel free to take any of my criticisms as constructive, but don’t let me or anyone else tell you how to make your videos.

[@seanalailima5929]

Missed sin for knowing that Pete is evil because the voice is Sideshow Bob.

[@Ludi_Chris]

This is a fun change to your normal content. But still good fun. Well done 👍

[@AmishParadise27]

Yeah as much as I like Luke's videos, like you I think he has some issues here and there and I love that you were able to point them out here.

[@JadeiteMcSwag]

sins sins

[@CinemaSinsSins249]

So I just now realized that I accidentally added a sin when I meant to remove one at 5:18. Fuck.

[@IronWolf123]

Time to do a "Everything wrong with CinemaSinsSinsSins" video

[@NeoBoy664]

Hey, i know this isn't an animated movie request, but I'd really really love to see you do a cinema sins sins on Office Space. Pleaseee!!

[@CinemaSinsSins249]

@NeoBoy664 Sure! I don’t just do animated movies. Although I haven’t actually seen Office Space, so I’ll have to check it out.

[@NeoBoy664]

@CinemaSinsSins249 yayy thanks, also I've subbed and turned on the bell, so I'll see. Thanks man!

[@CinemaSinsSins249]

@NeoBoy664 You’re welcome! (Although it might take a little while, because I’ve got a lot of other requests)

[@Walkman05YT]

Please do CARS, cinema sins royally obliterated my childhood favorite

[@theofficialliedetector1545]

An EWW of an EWW of an EWW. EWWception

[@CinemaSinsSins249]

Now, let’s see if someone makes a EWW of THIS video!

[@POPTARTMAN420]

It’s a sins sins sins video

[@seanalailima5929]

Also did Captain Vader. Do a sim video Luke's EWW Everything Wrong With Robots please when you are done with my other requests?

[@seanalailima5929]

Can you do an EWW on Capt. Vader's vid too?

[@CinemaSinsSins249]

Yeah, I’m probably not gonna do more of these. This was just supposed to be a fun bonus video, and regular CinemaSinsSins should be back next week.

[@seanalailima5929]

@ Please?

[@captainvader921]

@@seanalailima5929 Honestly, I could totally do that myself, as that was a much older video, and I hate how bad the sound quality is. There are probably a couple other things that I disagree with now (I haven't seen it in awhile, so who knows how much of it still holds up), and I also remember the sin count during the sentence being completely wrong (thanks to my brother for pointing that out), but I do like the idea of doing an EWW on my own videos. Not sure when that'll be though. Though out of curiosity's sake, what critiques do you have for it?

[@seanalailima5929]

Also do TonySonic's EWW Everything Wrong With Chariii5's Sonic Lost World please?

[@Fictionboy16]

TonySonic disowned the EWW Charriii5 series and has been commentated to death long enough. He's learned from the error of his ways and the drama has to stay dead now.

[@seanalailima5929]

@ What I mean is what TonySonic did wrong.