IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 | How to write a perfect introduction

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I have used following style. Please let me know if they are correct. Example 1: The provided data comprises a bar chart illustrating the top countries that produced and consumed the most oil in 2010 and 2015. The provided data comprises a bar chart representing how many people were employed in four major industry sectors in the UK between 1910 and 2012. The chart illustrates the leading nations that produced and consumed oil in the years 2010 and 2015 / in two time periods (2010 and 2015). Example 2: The provided data comprises a chart representing how many people visited Australia and Canada as tourists over a five-year period. Example 3: The provided data comprises two pie charts and a bar chart representing the distribution of different types of water resources and its supply in various regions of the world. The provided data comprises maps representing Westfield university before and after its proposed redevelopment. The provided data comprises maps representing the main changes that have taken in Newbury High School from 1980 until the present moment and the proposed development up until 2030. Example 4: The provided data comprises a diagram illustrating the steps are involved in recycling aluminum drink cans. Example 5: The provided data comprises a diagram illustrating the process of electricity generation in a geothermal energy.

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Hi how did you do? hope everything went well for you.

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Hi Asiya, I just received my IELTS score with an overall band of 7, L-7.5, R-7, S-7 and W-6 with only 3 days of preparation in my first attempt with the help of your videos and oxford 16 workbook. Thank you for the wonderful and helpful videos that you are creating. Lots of love from India❤️

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[@sonajuhasova3774]

Thank you so much for your videos, they were great help. I took the IELTS academic a couple of days ago and today I got my results. Overall, I got a band 8 (8.5 listening, 9 reading, 7 writing and 8 speaking). Thanks once again for everything

[@Wind0wsMediaPlayer]

Hii, could you help me out with a few questions? I wanted to know long did you prepare for the exam and which resources you had used to prepare for writing section? Also, how did you practice for the speaking part? I was a little nervous about that.

[@sonajuhasova3774]

@@Wind0wsMediaPlayer Hi, of course. I was preparing for a few months (approximately 3), but that was very light preparation- I watched maybe 2 IELTS related videos per week, made some notes and did one section of the test like reading, also skipping some weeks completely. Only the last week before the exam I started to prepare intensively several hours each day. I relied mostly on KZbin channels - except this one I was watching Lillie IELTS and IELTS advantage. Also, I practiced the tests from the official Cambridge IELTS books. With writing, the main thing that helped me was videos from IELTS advantage channel and their 5 day writing challenge which prepared me for task2 and Lillie IELTS did some great detailed videos on academic task 1. For me personally speaking was the smallest concern, I watched a few videos and also looked up the questions and tried to answer them aloud. Also speaking to yourself in English while doing random things also helps. And also my examiner was very kind, so I was not very nervous. I hope this helped a bit and good luck! 😌🤞🏼

[@Wind0wsMediaPlayer]

@@sonajuhasova3774 Thank you so much for your response and yes it did help! You’re great :D Did you get any feedback on your essays or were you just comparing your essay answers to the answer key? Currently that is what I’m doing. And what were the number of books which you had solved, like Cambridge IELTS Academic 10-17? Also, is it fine if i reply here later with more questions if i have any during my preparation? I have to take the exam and start my applications soon bc of the deadlines and all of this had made me so anxious oof

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Did you get 8 band only by self-studying😬 how?!

[@umidaboqijonova8684]

How is it possible speaking 8, writing 7🥲wow

[@mariamadebola]

I'm writing my exam in 2 days; I will come back to this comment to share my scores

[@mariamadebola]

I wrote my test and had a 7.5 in my overall score on my 1st attempt; ( L=7.5, R= 7.5, W= 6.5 and S=7.5)

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the chart displays how many tourists travelled to Australia and Canada from 2012 to 2017

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The diagram illustrate the process of conversion of geothermal energy to electricty The diagram illustrate the production of eletricity from geothermal energy

[@zeeshankhanyousafzai5229]

The given line graph illustrates that how many number of explorers visited Australia and Canada over a five-year period.

[@SaiKiran-vf4lw]

1)The Chart provides information about number of people coming to australia and canada between a five year period 2012 and 2017. 2)The pie chart displays data about amount of water resources being provided globally. 3)The Maps illustrates its changes for newbury high school in the past year 1980,at the present,and its future developments for the year 2030. 4)The chart displays various stages of process involved in reproduction of aluminium drink cans. 5)The diagram displays how electricity is being produced by utilizing geothermal energy.

[@i8__DK]

My Exam is on 1st October wish me luck. Also thanks for sharing. This video will definitely helpme a lot in writing task 1 ❤

[@abrarahmad3897]

my introductions were as follows: The provided graph gives information on the foreign tourism of the two developed nations of Canada and Australia between a five-year period. The provided graphs illustrate the type and share of the major water resources across the globe which are namely saline and freshwater. The following maps give insight on the current structure of the Westfield University while proposing some developments in the future. The provided three maps illustrate the layout of the Newbury High School in 1980 and the present while proposing a redefined structure for the future. The diagram gives information on the processes involved in the recycling of a simple aluminium drink cans. The following diagram illustrates how the heat from the Earth can be utilised to generate electricity.

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The chart provides information on the natural sources of water available on earth and examine the sources of freshwater supply laying emphasis on the distribution of the Renewable freshwater supply across different regions of the world

[@linnahelen]

I love your channel so far! You gave a lof of helpful tips I can use in the writing part, thank you for that.

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[@synacheath1046]

the bar chart gives information about the visitors who visiting in both countries in the year 2012 and 2017.

[@PouyanSarvari]

Hi Asiya. It was the best video in order to learn the introduction sentence for me. Thanks a lot

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[@wajihkhan4007]

how was it ? what were the topics of writing and speaking?

[@synacheath1046]

The graph describes the number of the employees at different locations in the Uk economy between 1910 and 2010.

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[@hi5mysticyt188]

Hi asiya mam! I received my result yesterday, im very thankful for your informative videos ❤, i scored 7.5 overall with 8.5 in listening 8 in reading 7 in speaking and 6.5 in writing ❤ once again thank you for your support ❤

[@zeeshankhanyousafzai5229]

The given graphs illustrate the distribution of water resources world wide.

[@salmanhayat6262]

Incredible! Thanks for making this video.

[@ayoayo33]

The maps below represent the periodical developmental changes in Newbury High School and its constructional expected improvements in 2030.

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Today is my exam day.I am a little bit nervous, please pray for me))) Thanks Asiya for the video)))

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10 November is my real test ..little bit worried about writing and reading ...thanks for giving such contents ..

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Is this correct? The diagram illustrates the steps on how the aluminum drink cans were recycled.

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the diagram displays the stages involved in aluminium drink cans recylcing.

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[@balqeesmarwan9113]

Can i say: the diagram provides information about the step of how to recycle the aluminum drink cans

[@catoholic4412]

Hi Asiya, need your feedback in this for 10:02 I have written, The pie chart and bar graph illustrates what are the world's water resources and where they are allocated.

[@synacheath1046]

The maps provide the change of the year 1980 and now of the new plans developed.

[@mikogamerz]

Hello maam can i use The bar graph illustrates the top ten nations who produces and consumes oil in the year 2010 and 2015?? Please reply 🙏

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I think it’s a great one for writing task 1.

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Passage: More than 10 years ago, while taking the temperature of the universe, astronomers' found something odd. Qustion(T/F/NG): Astronomers often find something odd on the sky. Please help me with answer by providing it's description.

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False...because it's not happening often....it once happened 10 years ago

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[@jaziblatif7844]

Greetings Ma'am . I'm a big fan of yours and I hv a question In the example of " how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity" can we also rephrase this question as " The diagram illustrates the process of, how the electrity is being produced using the geothermal energy"... P.S. looking forward getting a reply as soon as possible

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The information regarding thé changes that took place in the Newbury High School in the life span of 43 years from 1970 tở present date is illustrated by the rendered diagram.

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The chart illustrates ten of the highest oil producing and consuming nations in the years 2010 and 2015. / The chart displays ranks of the first ten nations on the basis of maximum oil produced and consumed in the years 2010 and 2015. [Will these work?]

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[@zeeshankhanyousafzai5229]

The maps display information about the previous, current, and proposed design of Newbury High School.

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"The data presentes a complete study about worldwide water resources including renewable freshwater distribution." Sounds good?

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The maps provide information what will change in newbury high school after its development up until 2030 The diagram illustrates the steps of produce electricity by using geothermal energy.. Is it write or wrong?

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[@medhasaha3467]

The diagram illustrates the procedure by which aluminium drink cans are recylcled. how about this one?

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The Chart provide information on Australia And Canada tourist for 2012 to 2017

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[@halakh1957]

I wrote an introduction for the second example about the water resources. Can anyone please see it and give advice. The graphs display the distribution of global water sources, including some information about the proportion of the whole quantity of water that existed on Earth, which is categorized to two groups, in addition to the resources of water, which are for human consumption, and the amount of existed renewable freshwater supply in each continent.

[@FasTrackIELTS]

The ideas are good but there are some inaccuracies. Ask ChatGPT to proofread it or use human proofreaders at textranch.com ;)

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People who smoke are predominantly men- is this line correct?

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The graphs display the distribution of water resources on a global scale, showing two resources of water with one being shown detailedly. Hi Asiya! What do you think about this one?

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[@doctor-l2o]

how can levels of employment be written as how many people were employed? it changes the meaning.

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[@Badhonkumarhalder]

the diagram illustrates the process of producing electricity using by geothermal energy. is it write?

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[@sadafdayyerianzadeh]

Hi,is this correct to say that:The diagram displays the stages which involved in producing electricity by geothermal energy??

[@hamoody2727]

hello asiya i have a question in the introduction do i just need to paraphrase it or do i need to paraphrase and write more?

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I have exam on 16 December. Any information or comments plisss.

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[@amandeepkaur3776]

Mam is the use of passive voice is forbidden by IDP in writing task 2... Kindly reply

[@FasTrackIELTS]

Of course not! The passive voice is an integral part of English language. Using it correctly will actually help you with your grammar score. Good luck!

[@amandeepkaur3776]

So mam how passive sentences should be included to achieve a higher band score. .... Please reply

[@crickettube5182]

I got 7 L-9 R-7 S-6 W-6.5

[@mohomedabdiaden8492]

how did you prepare my english level is b1 and my exam will be held after 4 months in addition my desire band is minimum 7