Great info in this post! The good personal statement Chat GPT revised, sounds like a desperate, wordy screenplay. It makes it seem like the applicant is trying "way too hard." GPT is missing the emotional "ebb and flow" most human writers, naturally have. That revision had both "PICK ME," and "Mike Tyson" real energy. Punched the humility and humanity right out of the original, garrulously knocking it down to basic.