Futile Devices - Line Rider

a prequel to "i love you" by me
heres the two line rider tracks together, sorry if the transition isnt the best :3 : • Futile Devices / I Lov...
insiprations:
branches/jade
moonxplorer- i love you
jade and moonxplorer: my life's all right
september hofmann: in the absence of comfort
music: futile devices by sufjan stevens
my third last track lmao

[@branchesjade3638]

mmm theres a lot i really resonate with in this. colours are rly pretty, you're gradually finding more visually subtle choices. one thing you can work on in future tracks is considering having bosh move in different directions, there's a lot more that can be explored movement-wise than just generally chugging along to the right... think of what purpose you want bosh to have in your track-- are they a point of reference for the camera? a character in a story (like in "i love you")? a dancer to the music? a tour guide that shows us around the setting of your track? a mix of those? just knowing that will give your tracks a stronger direction. love that ending and how you're connecting some of your works together, reflecting on their thematic links and what that says about you and your life

[@moon_xplorer]

Thank you for your criticism!!

[@brunoportodesign]

Great feedback

[@brunoportodesign]

Love the background lines, and their contribuiton to the theme