Galactic Council Tortured Human Child So We Burned Their Worlds! | HFY Sci-Fi Story

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2 ай бұрын

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@deannerost8706
@deannerost8706 2 ай бұрын
No one wants peace more than a battle hardened soldier. No one is faster to answer the call than that same warrior, not for their selves but for those they love.
@modmanwb
@modmanwb Ай бұрын
thank you that is rather poetic but very true
@wonttell4873
@wonttell4873 2 ай бұрын
Horrible, one minute David had killed Ector and the next they are on a colony world, their enhancements neutralized by Ectors device and killing him again.
@xenon53827
@xenon53827 Ай бұрын
AI sodded it all up, this is what you get...
@robertwhitehead8671HMCS
@robertwhitehead8671HMCS Ай бұрын
It's a recurring issue with this whole youtube page almost every story
@echnaton192
@echnaton192 Ай бұрын
This is one of the stupidest AI-generated story ever. This channel is an atrocity.
@mickgibson370
@mickgibson370 2 ай бұрын
Talk about ECTOR, he died 6 times!
@wildfire160
@wildfire160 Ай бұрын
Yeah but the Sullbon were clones and there were six of him🙂🙂 ...or were there seven😈😈
@quazar5017
@quazar5017 Ай бұрын
I was first wondering why anybody would do anything for a farmer. But when you consider the trend of automation continuing it is quite possible that a single farmer could have an entire paradise world under it's belt, along with millions of orbital farming stations and billions of farming robots... and that's just his job.
@pinuppanda6372
@pinuppanda6372 Ай бұрын
Did you forget david had a dead mans switch? How did he go from having one to having both hands free
@andrewjones3146
@andrewjones3146 Ай бұрын
This Star Trek enterprise in 30 minutes 😅
@wereguy18
@wereguy18 Ай бұрын
why does ecktor die so many times....? like, this is a great story, but god damn, pick a death and run with it. on top of that, how did ecktor make a device to counteract the 'spartans'? he'd be too dead from being strangled to death lmfao. still, neat story
@phillipperritt7787
@phillipperritt7787 Ай бұрын
David would not quit before getting his retirement.
@RobertCrickmore
@RobertCrickmore Ай бұрын
KZbin loves to take down music videos that barely touch on copyright infringement by just a few notes yet here we have direct copies in the artwork of Warhammer Space Marines, The Suleban are one of the main aliens from the Star Trek Enterprise TV show, then after describing David's enhancements, him and his team are called Spartans. Halo anyone? Ridiculous.
@mikistenbeck6517
@mikistenbeck6517 2 ай бұрын
that's just Warhammer troops, i don't know what else to say. other then *_RIP AND TEAR UNTIL IT'S DOOOOOOOOOOOOOONE!_* i know that's Doom's Motto, shat up, it fits.
@clockworklaharl9977
@clockworklaharl9977 2 ай бұрын
Gotta get the story straighter… its jumping back and forth between what happened and what happened leading up to the previous…
@fredmaxwell9619
@fredmaxwell9619 2 ай бұрын
How many times is David going to kill Ektor. 1st when Ektor had the dead man switch, 2nd again rescuing those colonists', 3rd time Ektor had the nullification device and what happen to the other races helping the Suleyban??? The story was good up through destroying Ektor's lab and the Suleyban world, after that it went downhill fast. How did Ektor manage to escape all that destruction when no other ships escaped. I appreciate the stories but this one sucked.
@user-et7gf3uc4n
@user-et7gf3uc4n 2 ай бұрын
I think this story simply has 3 endings. something like in video games 3 scenarios and 3 different deaths of Ector, one of them is the right one but which one depends on the listener
@geofthompson3844
@geofthompson3844 Ай бұрын
This was absolutely dreadful. A six year old victim of experiments and torture suddenly became a 30 year old genetically modified super soldier and a scientist alien lived somehow after managing to escape from a planet that was destroyed, on a ship that was also destroyed, and then managed to get repeatedly killed but survive, and somehow the amazing earth forces after destroying the bad aliens did bugger all for decades and allowed the bad alien to continue doing stuff whilst dead. Have you ever heard of something called a coherent narrative?😂. This was awful 😖
@VT01
@VT01 18 күн бұрын
Thanks for the heads up, gonna give this one a miss.
@overhauled7918
@overhauled7918 2 ай бұрын
I kinda like the AI generated 40k space marines. 88
@JohnDoe-bh2lp
@JohnDoe-bh2lp Ай бұрын
I didn't notice it was AI until I looked at the marines in the back. Not too long ago making a specific logo like the eagle symbol would've been all morphed and messed up if done by AI
@overhauled7918
@overhauled7918 Ай бұрын
@@JohnDoe-bh2lp took like a second if you focus on the marine in the front and how he's holding his gun.
@JohnDoe-bh2lp
@JohnDoe-bh2lp Ай бұрын
@@overhauled7918 I assumed that was an artist's touch because I've seen soldiers only hold foregrip to free up their other hand
@afterthefact6708
@afterthefact6708 Ай бұрын
​@@overhauled7918 Ive held my rifle like that lol
@xaimeglez74
@xaimeglez74 Ай бұрын
I approve!!! 😂😂😂
@noahkleugh9323
@noahkleugh9323 2 ай бұрын
To my fellow vets IGY6;
@mrcool9672
@mrcool9672 17 күн бұрын
Heavy story.
@shanebraden8482
@shanebraden8482 2 ай бұрын
Wait! I thought ecto was killed with his dead man switch still in his had? How or why is that MF still alive?
@xenon53827
@xenon53827 Ай бұрын
A bit like somebody dropping a manuscript and just shoving the pages randomly back into the folder...
@captainobvious9233
@captainobvious9233 Ай бұрын
Better question is why in every ' Tortured Human Child' story, he always uses a 'Little Boy' ? Sick Boy lover maybe?
@pinuppanda6372
@pinuppanda6372 Ай бұрын
Save the hostages and set the charges? Did you not just get the dead mans switch to blow up the base, the fuck you setting charges for
@sarahjenkins4013
@sarahjenkins4013 17 күн бұрын
Great Story! Thanks!
@RonaldTrumpOfficial
@RonaldTrumpOfficial 2 ай бұрын
It’s crazy how these ai channels can’t even fact check at least
@swiftmatic
@swiftmatic Ай бұрын
How does one 'fact check' fiction?
@JasonWelch-jt9io
@JasonWelch-jt9io Ай бұрын
Better question is why in every single one of these 'Aliens Tortured Human Child' stories, the victim is ALWAYS a boy.
@miner79r
@miner79r Ай бұрын
In my opinion... How many names did the boy have? At least three?
@fnmuniverse2815
@fnmuniverse2815 Ай бұрын
Warhammer is the best series of books I have ever had the pleasure of reading!!
@mikistenbeck6517
@mikistenbeck6517 2 ай бұрын
also, you really need to get your text genrator under control, it leaves the story in it's dust.
@basolisk3057
@basolisk3057 2 ай бұрын
Oh my, Games Workshop legal team is going to have fun with you
@roberttanguay8532
@roberttanguay8532 2 ай бұрын
Why? GW can't Trade Mark Space Marine as that name was used by Authors like E.E DOC Smith, Asimov and others
@lozzar1069
@lozzar1069 Ай бұрын
With what money?
@swiftmatic
@swiftmatic Ай бұрын
Suliban (sp?) ? You're gonna get sued by whoever owns Star Trek IP
@claystillman5713
@claystillman5713 Ай бұрын
I like it. I hope GW doesn’t make you change the art.
@craigfiles7067
@craigfiles7067 2 ай бұрын
4 times ector was taken down you need to get the story straight
@greyknightexan
@greyknightexan 2 ай бұрын
3 are clones, problem fixed
@belelokai3328
@belelokai3328 2 ай бұрын
These are ALL AI Generated and AI read. Inconsistencies and mispronunciations are entirely digital. I highly doubt the uploaders of these stories read or hear them before posting them. At least not entirely.
@craigfiles7067
@craigfiles7067 2 ай бұрын
Than say they are clones in the storyline
@mrmugatu1look638
@mrmugatu1look638 2 ай бұрын
@18:59 The birth of their Space Maines. (Avenging Angles)
@xenon53827
@xenon53827 Ай бұрын
Why did the AI shuffle the order of this story a bit like someone shuffles a deck of cards? After about 20 minutes, the continuity goes to pieces. A bit like somebody dropping a manuscript and just shoving the pages randomly back into the folder........ Guess what? I didn't press 'Like' !
@pvopop4938
@pvopop4938 Ай бұрын
You ruined the story by killing hector and then suddenly he was alive again, keep the story make sense
@royc5925
@royc5925 Ай бұрын
At least I wasn't the only one who wondered how Ector could be alive one moment dead in another and still alive in a paragraph later. It would make a much better story if you kept it real. Otherwise the storyline is a good listen but please correct the bouncing in the read.
@noahkleugh9323
@noahkleugh9323 2 ай бұрын
Ector got killed multiple times?
@TheMalcolmPowder
@TheMalcolmPowder 2 ай бұрын
I have seen this tendency many times, where protagonists are killed, then a sudden re-write where they are killed again. An AI glitch?
@marysmith-ps7uj
@marysmith-ps7uj 2 ай бұрын
It's like the writer pieced the story together out of order. That's messed up!
@noahkleugh9323
@noahkleugh9323 2 ай бұрын
@@TheMalcolmPowder Thart and sloppy proof reading.
@TheMalcolmPowder
@TheMalcolmPowder 2 ай бұрын
@@noahkleugh9323 Hurried AI money making.
@robertortiz7853
@robertortiz7853 Ай бұрын
Clones?
@happymonkey420
@happymonkey420 Ай бұрын
Whoop Whoop homies ✌🏻🐵✌🏻
@xenon53827
@xenon53827 Ай бұрын
First three seconds, how can you torture a little boy's screams? Bend the sound waves till they snap? AI (Audio Inaccurate !) LOL!
@PeterMichna-tf5jc
@PeterMichna-tf5jc Ай бұрын
the thumbnail is just space marines with different helmets
@dwightdee6808
@dwightdee6808 Ай бұрын
I think it is the trauma of David's mind he sees Ector everywhere like what Polkadot man said about his mother in Suicide Squad 2. He was saved from the Lab but not from the trauma. Becoming a soldier only gave a way to direct it. The AI just doesn't do a good job of expressing the shift in pov and emotional mindset in the later parts.
@HD.Keem96
@HD.Keem96 Ай бұрын
Cry Havoc And Let Loose The Dogs Of War
@Ragingturtle92
@Ragingturtle92 Ай бұрын
Why is it in every one of these short stories it’s like the writer changes their mind after the bbeg fight and change it but they forget the delete the first part? I do enjoy a lot of these but it can be confusing sometimes 🤦‍♂️.
@fredhubner4610
@fredhubner4610 Ай бұрын
Wo und wie kann ich die Texte zu den Geschichten nachlesen? (Where and how can I read the texts for the stories?)
@chuckfoster3811
@chuckfoster3811 29 күн бұрын
This story seems to have been read out of order. David killed Ector, then in a different battle captured him, then encountered him again. I stopped listening at that point.
@danawelch5593
@danawelch5593 Ай бұрын
It's indentured servitude (also under 13th amendment)unless voluntary And some states charge room and board while in prison. But you know how much Reagan Neo Cons politicians love for profit prisons. Big money and kickbacks
@paullee3660
@paullee3660 Ай бұрын
It’s totally bizarre how nobody proof read this story even once. What a joke.
@stanbartsch1984
@stanbartsch1984 8 күн бұрын
Failed Continuity Checks have a few possible causes. 1) The author doesn't keep track of his own ideas and writings and forgets to proofread. 2) The editor puts things together wrong, and fails to read/listen to the final product. And that's what kills most of these stories - bad writing or bad editing.
@omarrashid6170
@omarrashid6170 26 күн бұрын
Why is there a screenshot of Warhammer 40K ?
@oldmanfromscenetwentyfour8164
@oldmanfromscenetwentyfour8164 Ай бұрын
I thought the Boy's name was Keat, who tf is David? It's all AI isn't it? No one seems to review and proofread any of the Stories you post!
@Steezyjo510
@Steezyjo510 Ай бұрын
I enjoy HFY stories but these ai art prompts are literally 40.5k lmfao
@XtremeXC29
@XtremeXC29 Ай бұрын
Listen to a borked AI have a siezure retelling the story of Halo, or just go play the game(s)? Choices.
@andyking957
@andyking957 Ай бұрын
AI generated stuff
@Velshard
@Velshard Ай бұрын
Narration was total crap. Mind you, the story wasn't very good either, but a good narration could have made it decent.
@danhardesty6318
@danhardesty6318 Ай бұрын
Well, that is AI for you.
@CraigerZ-Myra1
@CraigerZ-Myra1 Ай бұрын
88 babY EIGHTY EIGHT ADE-DEE-ATE I don’t know if you would be able to or not, but could you write a story that would include Spider-Man, or superman, the justice league gone after bad aliens, maybe change the name of the superheroes that keep their abilities, or even robot, German, shepherds, or enhanced dogs, I listen to the one you did about dragons. Did you ever follow up with that?😊
@xenon53827
@xenon53827 Ай бұрын
Just use the same AI story generator and say, " I wanna story with...." and include them.
@louistarrats6537
@louistarrats6537 Ай бұрын
a fan88
@American7888
@American7888 Ай бұрын
AT8.
@paulacornelison243
@paulacornelison243 Ай бұрын
What the heck? Talk about a disjointed story!
@sdragut
@sdragut Ай бұрын
WHAT A RIDICULOUS STORY. How many lives does this Ector have? learn to write!
@luzcannon4141
@luzcannon4141 2 ай бұрын
Chapters are out of order. You need to edit with more care and attention
@xenon53827
@xenon53827 Ай бұрын
Changes 'You need to edit with more care and attention' to just 'You need to edit' except of course, there's no time to have the AI check it out, as the channel owner might lose a few bucks...
@cantsleep4231
@cantsleep4231 Ай бұрын
Your story line really mixed up
@Tebok73509
@Tebok73509 Ай бұрын
In every single one of your ' Tortured Human Child ' Stories... why is it ALWAYS a little boy? Use a girl sometimes please...
@greywolf539
@greywolf539 Ай бұрын
Good story ruined by being out of order
@roberttanguay8532
@roberttanguay8532 2 ай бұрын
So, just how many times in 1 story do you have to take out the mad scientist? First David killed Ector by strangling him, next, David knocked him out with a punch and had his Spartans drag him to a ship so they could take him to the Admiral and finally, in a life and death struggle Ector detonates a bomb with the result being David holding up his head. So... which is it? Doesn't your A.I. have the ability to create a cohesive storyline or are you guys too lazy to proofread before you post? Last story I'll ever click on. Absolutely Pathetic
@paullee3660
@paullee3660 Ай бұрын
Is the story written by AI, as well as the narration and illustration? Is that why it’s a nonsensical mess?
@carlthor91
@carlthor91 Ай бұрын
1) Admirals and Generals, do NOT, lead assault groups. 2) Medics on teams, take care of wounded, moving them, only, when safe, or emergency demands. Crap story. Need a better writer.
@Aethelwolf
@Aethelwolf Ай бұрын
Wailes not whales. Saws not sores. Your speeh to text sucks
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