Galactic Empire Stunned When Ruthless Human Diplomat Said "You Attacked our Home" | Best HFY Stories

[@tonynelligan1930]

wow our hero started off as a marine or army grunt fighting in the streets without any advance tech then he's sent to space to be the ambassador to U.N. of outer space. and then now effectively a fleet commander and capt. in his own right of the first warship of earth. come on people ease up on the poor guy he can't do it all.

[@beccabbea2511]

One big problem with the narration is the lack of flow. There are no pauses, no rhythm to indicate a change of time, place, or situation, plus the fact that the story timeline seems all mixed up. Which is a shame as it's not a bad story.

[@marc-audetlapointe8260]

PROBLEM Repetition at point 17:20. I hate the circular loopin of a story. Erasing the idiotic preamble would make the story more enjoyable !!!!!!

[@AndyCaley]

Can't be doing with that voice. Sorry. Just being honest. Some might like it. Just personal opinion