-Gay Story- How Atlantis Was Found

[@Dragonmoon1598]

Enjoyable. This one was a lot smoother. The shifting of memories, the back story, everything. Nothing felt rushed or missed. Strong conclusion. And, of course, the romance subplot was good.😁

[@gAyIstrange]

I wanted to do more with the memories and there were a few things I wish I did differntly but overall I didn't want to go too deep into flashback land.

[@Dragonmoon1598]

@gAyIstrange Fair . . . But, going off your past stories. This seemed to accumulate things you've done and bring them all together. There was clear improvement and growth. Obviously, there's always room for improvement or things we wish we did differently. But, overall, it was easy to follow and engaging. It's one of your stronger stories for sure.😁