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[@wolfiec9974]

That was amazing!!!!😮

[@IlikeBoysandgirls]

Bootiful 7/5 stars ✨

[@undenbrowning35]

You have a way of forming an extremely unlikable protagonist 😐. She just goes around beating people up and then insulting others, and when someone tries to have a genuine conversation with her, she all, "I'm too good to talk to the likes of you." I don't know if that's how you meant for her to come off, but she ends up looking confrontational, reckless, stuck up, mean, and not particularly intuitive.

[@voxxrah]

buddy i'd be a bit embarrassed sending a whole para but in the story it is said that the protagonist used to own all this land, and she wants it back. of course she'd be mean to everyone she comes across because they are the ones who have taken her land away

[@undenbrowning35]

@@voxxrah yeah maybe, but she's getting mad at the wrong people. And is that really the most effective way of 'getting her land back,' as you say? 😒🤷

[@voxxrah]

@@undenbrowning35 the first guards had to be fought, otherwise she wouldnt get in. the boy didnt really do anything but the protagonist fighting him will show the viewers that shes mad. then the female and the ruler of the land had to be fought aswell.