Good but I think that there should be more variation to your flow. The back and forth rhyming is catchy, but it gets old after like 20 seconds. However, that would be a lot easier to do with a more interesting beat. A nice beat would enhance the whole thing altogether because nowadays people really wanna hear catchy lyrics that almost float on a tune. I listened to your paint the town red remix and that was great because there was a nice beat, and you did change up the flow a little. Also it would be really cool to see the older 2000s style of rapping kind of mixed with the modern trap sound because most people really like that stuff. Aside from all that, this is some great stuff! Hope you make it one day 💯💯
@ThatRedHeadedMenace7 ай бұрын
Thank you! I appreciate the constructive criticism. :)
@Eveyrttt2 ай бұрын
Ngl chat the flow is good
@ThatRedHeadedMenace2 ай бұрын
Thank you! :)
@YaBoiSiahong8 ай бұрын
dude thats fire🔥🔥🔥 u earned yourself a sub
@ThatRedHeadedMenace8 ай бұрын
Thank you! :)
@PandemoniumGameDev7 ай бұрын
Keep it up bro, this sounds dope!
@ThatRedHeadedMenace7 ай бұрын
Thank you! :)
@neillman68097 ай бұрын
damn thats good
@ThatRedHeadedMenace7 ай бұрын
Thank you! :)
@neillman68097 ай бұрын
you got good lyrics but you rhyme them nicely love tha flow@@ThatRedHeadedMenace
@numbmoi7 ай бұрын
Hard
@mariakyralaki35528 ай бұрын
Bro you're good!
@ThatRedHeadedMenace8 ай бұрын
Thank you! :)
@souleymaneari248 ай бұрын
Please realize your dream
@FampierGorilla8 ай бұрын
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
@user-zt6kp6md5r8 ай бұрын
Good and impressive, but I got one question; was it a freestyle or a prewritten text?
@ThatRedHeadedMenace8 ай бұрын
Prewritten. :)
@i.ogam3ing2327 ай бұрын
Yo u wanna do something together?
@ThatRedHeadedMenace7 ай бұрын
I don’t usually do collaborations unless I know someone personally. Do you make music too? :)
@i.ogam3ing2327 ай бұрын
@@ThatRedHeadedMenace yeah I do lol, I have a music channel
@ThatRedHeadedMenace7 ай бұрын
@i.ogam3ing232 Nice! Do you rap as well?
@spogebobsqearpants8 ай бұрын
just discovered you man. you’re onto something. consistency is key and you’ll hit big man, trust me 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥