"Give him what he wants" Creepypasta

[@Potatocrime24-7]

"I didn't mean no harm" YOU SLAMMED HIS WRISTS, ANKLES, AND FINGERS IN THE TRUNK AS A "PRANK".

[@hailedspace25]

The “I didnt mean no harm” line filled me with so much rage and annoyance like you’re not 6 years old anymore you dumb protag

[@MorbidKat]

And apparently got wasted and left a baby in an unchanged diaper for the weekend... But "didn't mean no harm" wtf yea try that line with family court...

[@slaymyface1357]

Just a prank bro XD

[@Potatocrime24-7]

@@slaymyface1357 I wish that was what he said instead of I didn't mean no harm.

[@slaymyface1357]

@@Potatocrime24-7 nah "just a prank bro, y u mad? I just kidnapped you for my sick youtube channel"

[@jesussaves6625]

Just trying to scare him, but they were willing to smash his wrist, his ankle, and his fingers in the trunk while he screamed hysterically in the trunk?... I don't know. Sounds pretty depraved from the start.

[@Simon-ot6yn]

Yea reminds me of those type of bullies who spends their entire youth tormenting others and then grows up to live a normal life and then look back at it like it was normal and nothing bad ever came of it. Psychologically its insane all the strategies your brain can come up with to shield you from the consequences of your actions

[@oisinlynch8427]

@@Simon-ot6yn true but Micheal shouldn’t have said that about their fathers

[@dawnmidnightsun2521]

@@oisinlynch8427 no excuse to break someone's bones and force someone into a damn trunk.

[@oisinlynch8427]

@@dawnmidnightsun2521 I don’t encourage that either I just meant since Micheal was the smart 1 he should have just ignored them

[@CourtlySeaDog]

@@oisinlynch8427 yes, ignore the beer bottles thrown at him and the blatant harrassment

[@izarian42]

From the title, I thought this was going to be a first-person horror narrative from the perspective of Caillou's parents.

[@southeastindependentsocial330]

Nice lol

[@hypowebb9984]

XDDD

[@jonah666]

(Demon voice sings) I'm just a kid who's four Each day I grow some more I like exploring I'm Caillou

[@izarian42]

@@jonah666 I'm one of Horsemen, Four, Death, Conquest, Famine, War, Hear those Trumpets Roaring? I'm Caillou!

[@reenusmcreet7323]

​@@izarian42yo that actually kinda funny

[@joeyl669]

The main character was such a pushover lol

[@keonkla]

A weakling who didnt want to be in the same position.

[@CaptainTripps420]

Nah, pushovers actually need to be pushed. This Main character layed down from the beginning.

[@skyshaymin8851]

he’s a bottom

[@omarperez-jw9oh]

He is a push over but towards the middle it seems like Michael has the power to influence people.

[@bi-bibabyblue9649]

@@skyshaymin8851 *exactly*

[@FirearmsEngineering]

Its very hard to find pity for the protagonist

[@johnDoe-gv8si]

I was with fhe bad guy until he sacrificed his sister like she was nothing. Something about that is worse than the other kills.

[@blaquemann9398]

@@johnDoe-gv8si I really don't think its him, he's basically ate or absorbed him and is using his likeness and memories to solicit nourishment.

[@oisinlynch8427]

@@johnDoe-gv8si I still think Micheal should have ignored them when they called him names

[@oisinlynch8427]

It’s hard to pity the bad guy as well since he was calling them names as well

[@dawnmidnightsun2521]

@@oisinlynch8427 the guy was scared.

[@alwaysforgetful1089]

Everyone in this story sucks and I only feel pity for the ones that had nothing to do with it in the first place. There comes a point when the suffering you cause outweighs what was done unto you, and just about every "protagonist" in this story has already danced over that line.

[@8MoneyIzmyMission8]

The character Michael doesn't want pity and he's not really doing this for revenge. He's doing it just because it makes him happy. He killed his sister just to get Andy. He convinced the main character to not kill himself so he can keep giving him more playthings.

[@demoneyin9390]

Michael especially sucks and is the worst type of person, but yea it’s not like the protagonists are good people either. Edit: yea they’re all evil

[@jamesfromteamrocketmcduck7288]

The only actually good person was the old lady 😭 and even she was take

[@Amber_Phoenix]

Don't you just hate it when you bully someone so hard you accidentally create a powerful supernatural entity?!

[@cloverassassinscreed]

oh my God hilarious the way he just said "smoke a little dope, get a little drunk, feel each other up".... Like it was a country song...

[@conorwhelan500]

Do a little dance, make a little love, get down tonight 🕺🏻

[@ganglians]

Bars

[@neckcutter2592]

" did you chop him up and feed him to his family at the town barbecue? " Freaking Priceless...

[@NoName-yz7dw]

South Park reference

[@graceamodeo1587]

Main character: literally bullies a kid all his life and eventually demolishes him, shoving him into the trunk of his car "I didn't mean no harm." Yeah, you keep telling yourself that. Lol

[@learncat8771]

That was the entire point of that mantra, they were aware that it doesn't mean anything.

[@Cander617]

Bullied all his life? Nah not true the kid himself was a pos little tattle tale

[@flfthedot6977]

5 minutes in, I'm too pissed to wanna finish.

[@desusvult1679]

I have not finished yet, so @ 2:20 does Foster The People -"Pumped up Kicks" play?

[@kikikungfukakes6639]

Lol did you finish it? Because it did get better.

[@croazzb3525]

If this title was like the rest: "A few years ago i had a claustrophobic friend who we picked on and now I must give him what he wants. What he wants will haunt me forever, and here's why..."

[@theoverlander4579]

Blech, reddit

[@creepycassette]

creepypasta titles be like: "i stuffed a kid into a trunk for a prank. Here's why we shouldnt have done it. PART 5/50000000000"

[@croazzb3525]

@@creepycassette they accidentally put the subject in the title line

[@Arkonu]

Or its a Dhaar Man Video: "Jocks bully nerd, Immediately regret it...."

[@blaquemann9398]

This would make a great movie, with a few touch ups and consistency in the rules it would be a full on masterpieces.

[@GmodPlusWoW]

*Alex:* _does a kinda shitty thing_ "I didn't mean no harm." *Michael:* *"TURURURURURURURU~"*

[@qwertycomputer7871]

So he *did* mean harm.

[@notcentered602]

It was really hard to keep track what was happening. Time passed without being said.

[@ValleyMermaid]

I agree! Very confusing and hard to follow.

[@Gooner184]

Agreed. Awfully written story with an unlikeable protagonist to boot. Woeful listening.

[@paratrooper508]

yeah this one was disjointed

[@christyfielding7498]

When the mc was saying I did this I didn't mean no harm, when I did that I didn't mean no harm, etc was how it was showing time pass. It wasn't coming out and saying hey 3 years passed. Idk the technical name of it but it's a way to show something without directly saying it. Then it did say weeks had gone by after he put Dave in the car motor. You don't have to just say time went by in a story to show that it has. It's actually good writing to not have to for the reader to know it has.

[@Bob-po2dp]

@@christyfielding7498 I think it would have worked better if you were reading it in a written format. A lot gets lost in translation sometimes during narrations. Like there could have been a specific bolded word or paragraph spacing that indicates the passage of time, but you can’t really see that if someone is telling the story to you.

[@wafee0515]

Goodnight guys,imma listen to my bedtime story now ◉‿◉

[@ShutupandListen]

These are bedtime stories

[@ValleyMermaid]

17:46 is where the first time concussion starts in this story. There’s nothing to indicate time has passed. I thought it was still the same night. Had to listen to a few times to figure it out. Great story, but could have been even better with something to indicate times, even when recalling childhood memory. I was not sure which character was having the memory.

[@literallynobody5459]

Literally just woke up and now I'm chilling listening to this ~.~

[@bizzyizzy9526]

This is how you're supposed to do a creepypasta title short, ominous and foreboding 😏

[@squeaktheswan2007]

This is almost an hour long.

[@bizzyizzy9526]

@@squeaktheswan2007 I said title not the actual Creepypasta they can be as long as they want 😏

[@squeaktheswan2007]

@@bizzyizzy9526 Oh, okay.

[@TheSCPStudio]

Why the fuck are you people so obsessed with the titles of stories clearly written by 15 year olds. The stories themselves are rarely that good, let alone the titles.

[@provokedutensilsunited6354]

@@TheSCPStudio did you come up with that title yourself?

[@SomeGuyCalledNick]

This story made me so damn mad

[@JimmmyRaynor]

same

[@keonkla]

Its like they think killing somebody is right just because you dislike a guy. Dumb asf

[@jay_naidu]

@@keonkla Andy had been driven to sacrifice his entire family. Of course they’d begin to follow a crooked line of logic. How on earth would anyone remain logical after committing such an act?

[@guinevereemilysummers9945]

@@keonkla They were drunk and stupid and they roughed him up a little, and forced him into a claustrophobic space. The only reason he died was because of the paranormal circumstances, they were not going to kill him.

[@tessa_m98]

I don’t think a fake story has ever pissed me off as much as this one has

[@lamarledennis3220]

This guy has no accountability for his actions, he deserves it all

[@stanclark8824]

reminds me of IT if georgie was the main villain and was bullied by everyone.

[@underthependulum3484]

Main character: Real life has consequences. Main character: *performs multiple acts of assault that would definently have landed him in "real world" prison.*

[@gavinlocke4226]

here we go! back to my creepy pasta addiction! haven’t been here in a few months.

[@qwertycomputer7871]

Ten minutes in. Ima say the main character and his friends deserve anything that happens to them.

[@deliyajackman8808]

Sleep paralysis: Why don’t you listen to these at night? Me:... Me again: Does it really matter? You come whenever you want, day or night. Sleep paralysis: *laughs*

[@kenmccleary8338]

the nobody line is unnecessary for the joke

[@FirstnameLastname-md5yq]

I agree with ken

[@lazytitan360ping]

Lol

[@brokebackbecky7275]

It’s kinda hard to believe he didn’t mean any harm when he forced someone into the trunk of a car. When someone is panicking like that they can easily die of affixation due to the cramped space and lack of air. I know this because there was an incident in my hometown of some kids playing hide and seek in an old car lot

[@whowantsabighug]

"hanging around outside a school, waiting for my girlfriend to get out" nope, no thank you, that's the horror right there

[@lisas8614]

What if she's a teacher?

[@saroushen]

Not first, Not last, See Creeps, Click fast.

[@cloverassassinscreed]

Nice✔️

[@Atharva550thunder]

Cringe

[@shywithsprinkles_5619]

Ugh I hate the fact that people like this actually exist, people that “feel mean today” that get a sick kick out of other peoples misery

[@gracie1312]

Losers on the prowl for a power trip

[@emmydaniel25]

"Give him what he wants" Me: Ok this title sounds a bit-

[@samsom4122]

rapy

[@kenmccleary8338]

@@samsom4122 haha I was gonna write the same response... honestly glad you beat me to it.

[@atomicmegalodon1413]

@@samsom4122 rapey*

[@victorplayz5777]

Sus

[@thatoneguyproductions269ye9]

*@ @* *# ~ #*

[@KingdomKali]

Wow, that was disgusting... I loved it! Haven't heard a story that good in quite some time, thanks for sharing it Creeps!

[@lurklurk4000]

How does this not have more views its so good

[@rowenahaps8514]

I love the shadow people stories- those and the religious type ones are my favs. I'm terrified of getting sleep paralysis or seeing demons/shadow people so I don't listen to those ones anymore 😔 they are the ghost peppers of the creepypasta world

[@jackdurden466]

Damn, I’m still trying to figure out if it was all in Alex’s head, or real as it can be. Either way that man (Alex) suffered the greatest and his shame will haunt him forever. The strange part is he was the most sorry for what they had done. But I guess that didn’t matter. What REALLY gets me is where the hell did Michael go? How? Do trunks of all cars contain secret wormholes or passages to Narnia? Hmm, looks like I’m gonna have to find out. Definitely an original work, and the author should be proud of this one!

[@guinevereemilysummers9945]

It's sort of like a pseudo-afterlife that you can somehow reach by being in a dark place for a long time. Doesn't make much sense, but it's very creepy.

[@swamp6825]

Late reply but I think it’s something like the backrooms where you just “glitch” into it and can’t get out

[@aesilian]

This story is both very good and stupid. I mean...wtf even a dying turtle has more will than this guy. He really had nothing else to give, might as well find a way in that abyss and torture that nerd for eternity.

[@hailedspace25]

The protagonist of this story is such a horrible person it made this story so aggravating

[@scottle2397]

Yup I agree

[@lampylightbulb]

But Mike There is another option To live between the abyss and reality. That's what us insomniacs do :)

[@uwu2250]

"public lice"

[@lewdtubergames7136]

The name looks amazing excited to watch this

[@bizzyizzy9526]

Just like the number one rule of Showbiz always give the audience what they want 🤔

[@kimistry9533]

And CreepyMcPasta always delivers!👍❤

[@bizzyizzy9526]

@88 88 I was just making an analyzation of the title itself not of the Creepypasta 🤨

[@dimasakbar7668]

More like the "executive producer" amirite

[@CoralineBassJones]

Thank you for new pasta!

[@nikolama6739]

Thank you Creeps ❤️

[@darthderek]

Am I the only one who heard the opening piano chord and expected to hear the rest of I Will Survive play after it? Yeah, probably just me

[@arlocorley1557]

This one just annoyed me, the shit repetition, the unlikeable characters and no reason to care

[@adashofpaprika]

When he hit the homeless dude I instantly hated him

[@doodleartlover]

Hard to follow...but fairly worthwhile listening to.

[@-Unlimited-]

And he wants Taco Bell CrunchWrap Supreme ™

[@thatoneguyproductions269ye9]

And I want bread with dark chocolate...

[@nitrocharge2404]

The perfect title for childish dirty jokes

[@mikeyputnam4299]

Kinda gives a Steven King kind of vibe

[@danielqs97]

First thought at seeing the title was, "return the slab, or suffer my curse."

[@butterballin]

Try showering in the candlelight to these stories. I dare u

[@izcariotttt]

Don't publically call me out on my practices

[@polishherowitoldpilecki5521]

Interesting.

[@Skyman58]

That sounds freaking horrifying I must try it!

[@portiada]

I know this is this whole point, but this story was EXTREMELY creepy. I love these and I experience varying degrees of unease when I listen to them. But I just kept thinking that this story is *specifically* creepy. Good job (I guess, lol)

[@realfalanuhlaalu]

I was not expecting the thing with the sister. I know what it is but I'm afraid to say it...

[@JoeMama-fo8bu]

What is it? I'm curious as to how and why she knew what Micheal had been up to.

[@yourfreakreation1790]

Can you say it? What is it?

[@grimsgraveyard3598]

So he was eaten or trapped by shadow beings in their realm because he was locked in the trunk? Then he took revenge and killed his own sister brutally when they tried to use her against him never explaining how or why he became what he did.

[@oisinlynch8427]

Agreed that’s fucked up

[@numnum2520]

41 minutes? Wow, thanks.

[@training4chocolate]

That poor drifter

[@Zapatabone]

Lmao am I supposed to feel bad for the protagonist??

[@SpicyJustice3466]

Monster: Give me whut I want Deadpool: A girl?

[@zurreal9783]

Roses are red The pasta is creepy Good ol CreepsMcPasta Keeps me from getting sleepy

[@Darkx24]

i dont like the protagonist but we can't forget Michael went out of his way to fuck with them throughout high school, its not like they knew this would happen to him and doing one bad thing to Mickael doesn't equal to the years of shit he did to them

[@John_Buckson]

hell implies there's an option is bloody powerful

[@vodyanoy2]

imagining a man getting sucked inside of a can is horrifying

[@syb6133]

Fr. It seems like a steven king story

[@kiralonely]

That scene is partially why this story is cemented as one of my all time favs. The paranormal monster-esque aspect is so like, idk, it feels fairly unique compared to many current stories, and the depth of like body horror in a lot of it is really, gah. I just really enjoy this story, lol.

[@Alhazzred01]

"didn't mean no harm" ..so he DID mean harm. That shit has always irked me, lol

[@kyshafay2973]

Its like 6.20am but did i just hear public lice at 14:20

[@JoeMama-fo8bu]

I kinda didn't get why Micheal killed his sister. She had already known what Micheal was doing so had he been haunting her too?

[@Blasfamous8]

This one was darkkkkkk 😈 Great story!

[@graysonwalley318]

He’s gonna have to take it😡

[@Alhazzred01]

"public lice" made me laugh.

[@ZayahFeaster]

2021 was the year of creepypastas, god DAMN 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯👏🏿

[@ATB-vh6pe]

This is my favorite creepypasta.

[@PhantomOfDarkness]

why? what would that leave me with?

[@ScaryghostStories]

Such a creepy story, good karma lesson though 😳😳😳

[@tylerm1053]

This is one of the best I have heard and I've listened to 100s. I listen every night to fall asleep. So creepy

[@candiceperry7916]

This guy should give his son whatever he wants

[@hannahlafave9916]

LOL ily omg

[@badnewsbruner]

Wow... This was absolutely incredible... Holy shit.

[@michaelmcdowell7096]

Reminds me of a nightmare I had as a kid. This is thinking outside the can.

[@kiralonely]

Pff. Fantastic wording.

[@wetzyy398]

Loved the vid dude

[@christopherdwiggins528]

The guy claimed this guy did nothing but harass them so one day they got into an argument and got revenge. The guy brought up their fathers having a shitty one himself. They locked him in a trunk. All parties are wrong and no one deserved what they got since deserving is an opinion not a fact so it shouldn't change disposition. It is odd to see how many people try to measure who is in the wrong.

[@kailanbeifong5930]

I'm 9 minutes in.... I will feel no pity for these f*kas at the end🤷‍♀️ Edit: welllllllll.....damnit Michael why'd ya involve some innocent ppl,, 😭 I don't feel bad for the guys🤷‍♀️

[@chasemoore1216]

Micheals character pissed me off mostly because he talks about how Alex Dave and Andy owe him for locking him in the trunk but proceeds to make them do heinous acts 10x worse then what they ever did to him when they were younger. Not to mention killing his own sister to get rid of Andy. People are saying its an entity possessing Micheal , but why would an enitity from this "void" come seeking revenge to these guys to begin with? It never even explained how Micheal got there to begin with? I thought there would be some sort of redemption for any of them but no.

[@Avv151]

Dude u deserve so more subscribers 😭

[@MathewSteeleAtheology]

Fantastic story.

[@lukaswilliams5851]

Did michaels sister get killed in the end. I was confused about what happened after the hand came out

[@JoeMama-fo8bu]

Pretty sure she did. She had a cavity in her chest and looked like a crushed statue.

[@williamjr3750]

Wasn't able to finish it about what happened

[@Hellspawner06]

Never have I ever wished death upon a MC so fast in my life..

[@TragicDestiny82]

Wow. What a story...That ending

[@kikikungfukakes6639]

These are oddly horrifyingly specific details 😅👌

[@crow4834]

So how did Michael escape from the car? How in the world did he get from there to the “shadows”?

[@conservat1vepatr1ot]

This is what happened when hurt kids, deal with other hurt kids that handled their pain differently. Fuckin awful that this stuff happens.

[@cearal-EAT-cearal7647]

when you give a freak a cookie...

[@nyroony]

I think the point here was to make us feel cathartic because the MC's are douchebags, but by the halfway point Michael is way worse than they could ever be...

[@Mr_Klamacklius]

Is nobody gonna acknowledge this is absolutely horrifying?

[@JimmmyRaynor]

I LOVE U CREEPS! PLZ WRITE ANOTHER ASBERGO MAN! OR WOMAN THAT WOULD BE SUPER SCARY TOO!

[@adamlandry4993]

Amazing!!

[@krazy93650]

It’s sucks what they did but in reality people who constantly snitch on people and get pleasure out of getting people in trouble in a controlled environment should never hang around with the people you snitched on cause this is what happens

[@vitaaviandhono2506]

I'm such a vengeful person if I were in Michael's shoes I'd probably turn into an entity too and ruin those bullies lives

[@ns6q333]

he wants beans

[@christyfielding7498]

I've never heard a MC who deserved what he got more.

[@creepycassette]

The title of this story is what i demand from those who have what I want.