Giving divorce papers to your forced husband on your first anniversary || Jungkook ff

[@DeSireFanfiction]

This part is full of povs and emotions! But yeah, here’s the last part. I'm definitely open to any constructive criticism or thoughts. And if you enjoyed this part, feel free to leave a comment🫶

[@julietachavarria6152]

She did good what was the purpose of bein in a place of full of pain if her "husband" never move on of the betrayed yn sister do to hum she did right and divorce and start again in her life without pain, without t0oxic parents she did good to end this even their story never was in theire faith it was good for them

[@KUHUBTSARMY]

I liked the yn taking care of herself and standing for herself. I don't know about them being together or with some other but jungkook , what about him ? Where is his happy ending, that guy has taken worst pain given by ela who was his childhood love. Please i want to see a happy jungkook in this series because he had no fault in anything in this series. Or at least make him move on from that bitch, he also needs a closure.

[@yoongigurl0716]

​@@KUHUBTSARMY Exactly

[@jiminslostjam8537]

We want jk and yn to move on with their real love in bonusss pls

[@itsme....891]

Bro I cry Waiting for next episode author And the way you wrote line it's feels so real girl Even you don't use jungkook picture still story feels good

[@gypsytraveller6617]

I don’t usually comment as most of the fan fiction stories end the same. The life lessons for both characters is so refreshing. YNs was able to recognize what she needed in her life and have the strength to act on it and leave the toxicity behind to move forward. Hopefully we all have the courage to do this to whatever degree to lead a happier life. Good job.

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[@Nobaarraa]

I thought they'll get together but this is the reality and this is the exact thing everyone should be doing, in the process of loving someone you don't have to lose yourself, you're your first priority. I loved the ending so much

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[@Hidden-ns]

Somehow I was hoping that they will ended up together with some ups and downs but the ending was really good

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[@yoongigurl0716]

This was amazing author i loved it how y/n chose to love herself but I really wanted them to end from y/n point of view the story end is good but this story has 2 charecters what about the other if we see clearly the most to suffer here is jk he didnt deserve what he got the girl he loved ran away and got married to his sister that was really bad and when he decided to give a chance he saw his ex happy and lost it these are emotions humans cannot simply press a switch and be happy and give chance to others they need time and care jk truly realised how his behaviour affected y/n he regretted but y/n will move on her sister is happy what about him i really want him to be happy either with y/n or someone else but he deserves happiness too

[@DeSireFanfiction]

@@yoongigurl0716 Of course he deserve happiness, he needs time, but he will move on at his own pace, without the pressure of guilt from having a wife he feels obligated to love. He needs to work on himself first, and then, eventually, he’ll find someone he truly loves and wants to spend the rest of his life with.

[@yoongigurl0716]

​​@@DeSireFanfiction that's understandable author my point is you could have showed that it seems incomplete as he didn't got closure nor the bad people got karma as per the ending it seems he's miserable and the one who did wrong with him y/n's sister is living happily without any karma and regret atleast make a bonus and give a closure of he moves on like how you gave for y/n and how y/n's mother and sister regrets please

[@kimjehak2]

First thing was wrong with jk but secondly he got a chance to live happily.... But he himself made his second chance miserable no one is behind his destruction He himself chose to stay in misery when life gave him another chance.... Hurting another person when you're hurt isn't justified When yn is trying he doesn't consider her tries but when she's leaving he suddenly feels hurt but now he lost his second chance also for mourning on his first love Now he'll find another love to live happily

[@namra9684]

I love it this way its perfect . But make a next part where they all have settled down

[@maryr1905]

I think you captured the emotions well. Sometimes leaving is the right thing to do when there is no hope of change. No matter if you ever find someone else to take that place, life can still be really good on your own. I made that choice and even though it was and is hard at times (that is true with anything), I have no regrets.

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[@Tango-Star]

Damn its so good. i loved this story. You worked so hard im proud of you

[@DeSireFanfiction]

@@Tango-Star Thank you🥹🫶

[@Tango-Star]

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[@ParkYaksha]

i love the storyline and as always like any other ff i was expecting they get back together *sighs* but thats the harsh reality. im so impressed by how u portrayed all those beautiful emotions. i literally stung my heart and now ig its time for a bonus hehe PLEASE AUTHORRR WE NEED A BONUS

[@itsme....891]

This story feels so dammm real Can't wait for next episode girl

[@mariumusmani8721]

It was the best that i could wish forr like amazingg endingg a satisfied one❤

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[@pallabiroy9652]

Can u make bonus episode with jk and y/n together after y/n become independent

[@umaira036]

I thought you would give them a happy ending together happily but this ending is also amazing and wonderful ❤❤❤

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[@putuupa5511]

I don't know, but it feels empty the story ends like that. please consider it for bonus part

[@puspitamurdani630]

This really needs a bonus part

[@sobiakhirani3975]

Its was definitely unexpected as every time the FL would forgive and forget but this was amazing ❤❤❤❤❤ Can i request a bonus of FL character development and her success while Jungkook moving on and maybe confronting Ela plzzz… ☺️☺️ All i would say is it was fabulous and heartwarming 🥰🥰🥰 u r a great author

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[@namjinsopevminkook6293]

Now this is it. This YN is my inspiration. 25:30 This part reminded me of Dipaboli from Satkahon by Samresh Majumder. We shouldn't hold onto people who only brought us pain. That's how Dipaboli was able to cut Alok from her life like YN did. But Jungkook is not like Alok. He is a gentleman unlike Alok who was an asshole. But still he did hurt YN intentionally or unintentionally. Man! I want to write a lot. But I can't. The heavy feeling on my chest isn't letting me think properly! I got really very emotional 😭

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[@leach767]

Well honestly I just loved y/n's character way to much . Though I am still not independent of my own still I really want to be independent. Few more years till I go to that part and I really love the way her character grew cause yes we don't do the same mistake again and if you're going to still cling or go back to the person who gave no importance to you then your nothing but pathetic of your own , more over you have no self esteem. No matter if you have a caring or loving husband in your life you still need to be fucking independent . Nothing in this world comes for free and if it's does then it's not reality it's imagination . Btw I love your every fanfic author , I am a fanfic reader for almost a half decade now and I have a list of favourite writers who put so much to make a character the way I see the world and you're one of them . I really like your fanfic so much . Keep going author , I love you ❤

[@DeSireFanfiction]

@@leach767 Thank you so much🥹🫶

[@leach767]

​@@DeSireFanfictionwell keep going and you're welcome , love you ❤

[@sonalibiswas4931]

We need bonus part unnie

[@MakkaPakka-i6e]

Liberty it is!🤍 and Ela not being part of the picture was new..usually in other stories she would regret and stuff ..but here it was such a fresh view...I would love to know what exactly was the msg u wanted to give by not having ela in picture at all..

[@missbunn660]

I really love this 💜💜 It's definitely need bonus part 😅😅

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[@preeti752]

This was amazing author 👏🏻 Bravo you did well I'm truly feeling delighted 😌

[@DeSireFanfiction]

@@preeti752 Thanks❤️✨

[@Nteamz_Lune]

loved the ending n damn thank u for uploading the last part so quickly....i am so happy with this ending really loved it n loved how u described yn's pov so well n her choices n y she chose them...not going to ask for a bonus coz i love this ending so much n idk y am i happy u didnt write scenes in this where her fam apologises n all like how mostly it is n that is the best part for me that she is free...again really loved the ending

[@DeSireFanfiction]

@@Nteamz_Lune I already had planned out this ending because it was better than, (ml and fl staying together and a happy ending).... And am glad y'all liked this ending 🥹🫶

[@nebuD05]

Your writings are seriously getting better, this was something uncommon to read but the harsh reality among us.. the more we attached, the more it pains.. Absolutely greatly written❤

[@DeSireFanfiction]

Thank you🥹🫶

[@Priyajha685]

Bonus part please unni 🤌🥲

[@Is123-i7t]

I loved this story a lot! This is a refreshing ending! I’m shameless so I’ll ask a bonus of both yn and jk happy with their new life partners and her sister and parents realising their mistakes. 😅😅😅😅 I hope you make one, otherwise this one is very good too!

[@sonalibiswas4931]

Please don't take it wrong it was amazing but we need happy ending

[@adirahara2758]

It's kinda sad knowing some people really can't move on from thier love ones😢

[@DaisyDe-su6sf]

Ok so for the very first time i didn't feel sad for sad ending or we can say that not the sad but the best ending I've ever seen it was so emotional that i literally CRIED.... HATS OF TO YOU AUTHOR ❤

[@DivineWorldॐ]

This was perfect. Somehow thi s is the peice ld advice I need in my life. Thank you

[@aprajitakumari2016]

Hey! Dear author " I really loved the ending❤️, But I will like it if you make a bonus part of it, if you are going to make a bonus part of it , then I also have an idea or suggestion which I would like to share with you. If you like it, you can use it otherwise it's your choice "Dear author" 😊. Y/N and Jungkook reunite in the future, years after their initial separation. In this scenario, Y/N has become a successful and independent woman, while Jungkook has moved on from Ela. However, deep down, he still misses y/n When they meet again, they confront their past and start anew, gradually becoming friends. As they get to know each other better, they unknowingly develop feelings for one another. They realize their past circumstances weren't right for a relationship, but perhaps they were meant to be together. The time apart allowed them to grow, and now they're ready to start a new chapter together. Dear author, feel free to incorporate them into the story or leave it as is, as it already has a beautiful ending. Ultimately, the choice is yours.😃☺️❤️

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[@Sanjana-xd6df]

It was beautiful 🦋

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[@TharikaM-z8w]

hey author.....this was a great ff (sorry i'm late) but please could you make a bonus part with a happy ending where he comes back to her as a friend and slowly starts putting efforts in the relationship and convincing her to get back with him again. I just couldnt stop crying after reading this......pleaseeeeeee....its a humble request

[@roqaya1371]

I like the ending

[@manishav8888]

Will u really end it here 😢 Please don't get angry I wanted both of them together can u make a bonus part atleast please 🥺🥺

[@Maha_The_Army]

there is no happy ending

[@Escaperstoinfinity]

​@@Maha_The_Armyno,, THIS is Y/N's happy ending.❤

[@bachomia1013]

This isn't a happy ending unnie​@@Escaperstoinfinity

[@bachomia1013]

​@@Maha_The_Armyyahh i was talking about it too

[@Maha_The_Army]

@@Escaperstoinfinity I meant happy ending with jungkook lol! Not every story has a happy ending and this one is perfect bcuz it's just werif to end them together knowing that jungkook was involved with y/n's sister and thats werid lol like just imagine being with a guy who was involved with your own sister! So the writer did her best and ended it fairly

[@BTSarmygirl-pb6zh]

I thought you would give them a happy ending together happily but this ending is also amazing and wonderful 😇🤘✨💜💜💓🐰🐰🎉💐💝♾️

[@aarthyrajkumar605]

Something I just needed now and that's exactly the right thing to do 🫰🫰🫰

[@namjinsopevminkook6293]

1:26 This feeling. Yeah. Pathetic 🙂

[@Nobaarraa]

Can you write an ff on jin w smt like this but keep it a happy ending

[@rugvedabagwe7720]

Hey author, thank you soooo much for such a wonderful story!!!! A story of self-discovery!!!! As a writer and a journalist, myself, i read your stories actively.... I get to learn a lot from them, especially about dialogue writing. So thank you once again!!!! 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇 However, here I would like to highlight some points for others. This story has been interpret as "reality* or *not a happy ending*. No offense to those readers, but may i say that unfortunately the idea of happy ending for the majority of the world is about a romantic hererose relationship. This is highly redundant. As a writer and what i have been taught of this art, i strongly believe that every story is about an " Individual" and one should not look at a story through the incomplete factors that the society has set for us... I am soooo happy for this story and i wish the author the best for her future writing endeavors!!!!!

[@DeSireFanfiction]

Thank you for your kind words🥹🫶✨

[@itsme....891]

I want to say it but y/n should feel regret or make her feel horrible for what she did by treating one daughter like a made and treat a another on like princess

[@itsme....891]

Love it

[@shreenidhi08]

man yesterday it was around 9 to 10 pm so i couldnt able to watch fully...... yeah i agree that this is reality but i would love to have a bonus where jk would realize his mistake and them being together......................yeah why not happy ending in fiction..............atleast it is not painfull as in reality inst it?!?

[@pratikshasingh6505]

Next plz ❤

[@DeSireFanfiction]

This is the last part

[@shreenidhi08]

Got it in like 2mins💖💖💖💖

[@DeSireFanfiction]

🥉🥉

[@pallabiroy9652]

​@@DeSireFanfiction will it be too much if we want bonus point where jk and y/n will become together after many years

[@shreenidhi08]

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[@mrm_manalee]

It's really obvious that this is the most perfect ending for this ff ✨but still can we have a another ending ik that yk what I mean🥲pls? Yk it's called fiction not reality for a reason🙏

[@Priyajha685]

1st🎉

[@DeSireFanfiction]

🥇🥇

[@pallabiroy9652]

​@@DeSireFanfiction pls make a bonus episode where jk and y/n will be together after many years as my birthday gift

[@IshaniChowdhury-i5m]

Earlyyy

[@DeSireFanfiction]

🥈🥈

[@pallabiroy9652]

​@@DeSireFanfiction pls make bonus episode where jk and y/n will meet each other and they will become together. My birthday is 13 November

[@kevinlewis8763]

This story made me unsubscribe u

[@DeSireFanfiction]

That's totally fine, I gained alot of subscribers because of this story. At the same time many people would unsubscribe too... It all depend on people mindset. Have a good night🫶

[@rmayas8285]

𝙶𝚘𝚘𝚍 𝚜𝚝𝚘𝚛𝚢,,, 𝚗𝚎𝚎𝚍 𝚗𝚎𝚡𝚝 𝚎𝚙𝚒𝚜𝚘𝚍𝚎,, 𝚖𝚊𝚢𝚋𝚎 𝚋𝚘𝚗𝚞𝚜❤❤❤

[@DeSireFanfiction]

@@rmayas8285 there's no next episode❤️