Gordon Takes a Tumble!

[@amitysluzara2022]

I loved this adaptation! It was great seeing an epilogue (idk if that's the correct term to use so my apologies it it isnt) about Gordon and Salty talking after Gordon's crash as I wish we got that in the episode. I'm glad we got an explanation for the points being set for the branchline too as it always bothered me that we didn't in the episode

[@Stuingtion]

This rewrite of this episode is gold! Great job! On the side note, I'm surprised the signalmen wasn't punished for being careless with the points, "again".

[@thesudriana016]

Brilliant adaptation of another one of the best Gordon episodes of the show! I like how you added some creative liberties like the trucks pushing Gordon and Salty and Gordon making up near the end which is something I kinda wish we saw in the actual episode, but it also gave some Railway Series vibes and even the episode itself feels as if it's ripped from one of Awdry's pages. I think it would've made a grand fit if Salty ever had a Railway Series book to himself.

[@erikthetrainmaster6112]

You know, if Salty had a railway series book, it would be titled Salty the Dockyard Diesel and it would contain the episodes Sally’s Secret, No Sleep for Cranky or Mavis Helps Out, Gordon Takes a Tumble and Salty’s Stormy Tale

[@ianjackson4721]

“No one had been hurt” Bruh the farmers wallet will be hurting from that for months

[@kevsterhoungueh1975]

Actually what Gordon did is a sue-able thing

[@alfa1134]

2:28 - One small goof. I think that you meant to have Gordon say "But, Sir, I'm no goods engine" or "...I'm an express engine". I think he'd rather be painted black or work on branch lines than say that he's a goods engine, lol. Nonetheless, I really liked this rewrite, especially how you mixed up the cast to include BoCo and Fergus, as well as give other characters a chance to have a bigger part in the story.

[@skullzproductions]

yeah saying that means he just proved he wants to pull goods

[@paramount3603]

@@skullzproductions he did his own version of the season 6 episode Gordon takes a tumble

[@skullzproductions]

@@paramount3603 i know that

[@billyjudd3326]

If i made a rewrite of this, I would put Duck in Fergus' place, And Still Allow Thomas and Percy to keep their roles in this episode.

[@jimmyjohncoolyes]

y duck tho

[@17puttab]

I like this alternate take of Gordon Takes A Tumble. Well done!

[@TheMk1thomas]

Is nice to see BoCo in this adaptation

[@JohntheLNERP2]

Gordon: But I'm a goods engine! Me: You hear that lads Gordon's a goods engine!!!

[@sappymy]

That's a goof

[@JohntheLNERP2]

@sappymy I know I know but I couldn't resist posting it

[@nigelrichardson4327]

I always enjoy seeing others create their own takes of classic episodes, and you did a mighty fine job! Its rewrites such as these that push me to work on my own adaptation of James Goes Too Far.

[@Bulbasaur617]

So this is a little rewrite to Gordon takes a Tumble. So for this version, it takes place around Season 7 and it's more accurate then randomly having characters like Thomas and Percy appear working at a line that we don't usually see. At least storywise or something. I think I like this version of the episode. Well done on this. Keep up the good work and take your time on your other videos and stuff.

[@thecaledoniansleeper2648]

Not to mention Fergus’ appearance in this adaptation, which he wasn’t introduced until season 7.

[@bernarda1247]

Bruh you spoiled it.

[@Bulbasaur617]

@@bernarda1247 I didn't. And this is why you watch before reading the comments.

[@bernarda1247]

@@Bulbasaur617 you clearly don’t know people who can watch and read comments at the same time.

[@setheatontheautobot4586]

1:07 Gordon, you LITERALLY went on strike because you hate shunting. Besides, I bet you couldn't even organize a single sighting if your life depended on it.

[@makerboy1074]

I love your idea of rewriting season 6 episodes

[@BR_Percy]

2:29 Gordon: I'm a "GOODS" engine

[@RobloxFunX]

Voice crack in Thomas and friends

[@erickaraujo5327]

Hang on did Gordon said he was a goods engine?

[@Mr300bowler]

Gordon did said he was a goods engine

[@Flyingdurito]

Perfect for the fandom simply through boco In all honesty though, great work with this remake/rewrite Edit (after going through the description): I’d like to see Thomas and the jet engine tackled or maybe better late than never, just stories with odd plots that could do with a rework

[@blazemaster1149]

Confirm, Gordon’s a goods engine😂

[@stuartbarclay7940]

Very good work, mate!😁👍

[@loganwirth4146]

Nice adaptation I like the changes

[@jamesthomas5109]

Great video mate, I like how it is rewritten too.

[@JordanFanProductions]

Loved this rewriten adaptation! Great job Rhen!

[@kinelvistang4959]

awesome adaptation enjoyed the video!! :)

[@FlyingRabbitMedia]

2:30 is Gordon meant to say "I'm a goods engine"? surely that's an error in the script?

[@RhenProd]

Yeah it’s supposed to be “I’m not a goods engine.” Whoops… 🤷‍♂️

[@FlyingRabbitMedia]

@@RhenProd great episode other than the 1 tiny slip up :)

[@cammerooskistudios5831]

In my headcanon, I think the old branchline is the old entrance to Great Waterton. Explains why its rural and the tracks are old and rusty, Its because the line was no longer used after Great Waterton was abandoned. It also explains why nobody was at the farm but a scarecrow.

[@ThomasLover]

So voice acting here so good to hear!

[@Woofrie]

"I'm an express engine, I don't go slow," he said, and he went even faster. TWELVE SECONDS LATER "Oh, help!" Gordon cried as he slid off the tracks and into a field.

[@brianfalzon6739]

Awesome adaption, feels like Season 6 and 7 over again!

[@zacharyspinks6207]

This is a Great Story, Good Job😁

[@DaGrounderZone]

Amazing adaptation

[@djmohglojojo]

I did a re-dub of Thomas and Bertie have a race. Its incomplete, but its funny so far. I thought i was the only one who thought of re-dubing or rescripting episodes. This has inspired me to go further

[@Nightmare_52]

"but sir, i am a goods engine" hah, slip of the tongue right there ey gordon?

[@ChildrenShowArchive456]

I’m an express engine, I don’t go….Oh- Seriously though, I remember having this episode on my Percy’s Chocolate Crunch VHS but I barely watched it when I was younger but now I started watching this episode a lot. I still own this VHS to this very day.

[@janamaro5894]

5:15 No one was hurt, but poor Gordon felt very undignified. Gordon: What will Sir Topham Hatt say? He find out soon enough. Sir Topham Hatt: Well, Gordon? You wanna show salty a thing too? And you are currently done that. You've show him who silly is to ignore go slow signs! Gordon: Sorry sir.

[@EwanFanstudios]

Awesome Job

[@FictionalADDON]

Dispite the disclaimer at the start COPPA would had just marked it anyways

[@bigmacsama]

Nicely done!

[@jamesleopard8518]

4:54 There is a long field that Gordon is getting ready to tumble off the tracks and crash into

[@patrickcombs5869]

HELP!

[@randysawsomeworld1]

Gordon: I'm a damn express engine, I don't go fucking go slow damn it

[@setheatontheautobot4586]

I feel it might have been better if the trucks had faces in the original story.

[@jonathanlafferty2271]

Salty couldn't do the work by himself for long.

[@williamcollins864]

Fillmore (after Gordon flies off the tracks and into the old field): Whoa. Bad trip, man.

[@jackjoiner5392]

I Wish Boco Appeared More After It’s Really Sad That He Never Appeared Again After Season 5

[@David-kk3jf]

2:28 “But sir, I’m a *goods* engine”

[@scottjacob-yl2xv]

When you’d top gordon at the bush it’s look like he stopped and hanging off

[@andysnoopy9137]

2:30 Surely you meant to say "express engine"?

[@erikthetrainmaster6112]

Even though I love the original, this is a great adaptation of my favorite season 6 episode. If this was like a railway series story, it would be in a book about Salty himself. However, I feel like Harvey would have been in Fergus’s place as this is a season 6 episode, although it’s really cool to see Boco. Also, I wonder how you got the trainz models of Gordon, Henry and Salty from.

[@jamesleopard8518]

Gordon tumbled, crashed and fell into the long field

[@christinejorgens6577]

I wonder what classic episodes can be adapted into a horror retake?

[@Christopher-ms3yy]

While ranting Gordon said he a goods engine. He is an express engine.

[@fishpop]

2:29 Shouldn't that have been "I'm NOT a goods engine"?

[@RaekRaek.]

Gordon takes a tumble

[@candicefreeberg]

the Percy runs AWAY

[@pokebreeder2517]

also isn't also the signalmen's fault as well and it wasn't like gordon was trying to speed through

[@evanclarke5561]

Good job on this! Still, as both Boco and Bear were mixed traffic engines, I don't understand why neither engine joined Salty at the docks. Isn't it Henry's job to pull an early morning freight train, the Flying Kipper?

[@evanclarke5561]

I've got an idea for a Something In the Air RWS style adaptation. Early one morning, the Fat Controller came to see his engines at Ffarquhar. "Ah, good morning engines," he smiled. "I need an engine to take fish vans from Norramby to Knapford for Henry's Flying Kipper later this evening. Toby and Daisy, you already have enough work for today. Thomas and Percy, I need either of you to go. Do I have any volunteers?" Percy smiled. "I'll go, sir, even if the smell of fish doesn't impress me much," he said. "That's a good engine. If you leave now then you shouldn't be late for you-know-who," beamed the Fat Controller. It was nearly lunchtime when Percy arrived at the Fishing Village. Vans getting loaded with fish needed to get shunted. Percy's driver and fireman went into a tavern to get some food. Meanwhile, Percy began to fret. The workmen were using old equipment and the job was taking a long time. "I'll be late for Henry and he won't like it. Please hurry up and - " Percy was interrupted rudely. His driver and fireman who had just come back from lunch snickered. A crane had dropped a crate of fish on Percy, who huffed: "Phew! What a pong!" Percy's driver said, "Don't worry, my boy. You can have a nice washdown later. Let's just get this job done first." Soon they were speeding down the picturesque coastal track. Suddenly they saw a man waving a red flag. "What's the matter now?" Percy grumpily questioned. "High tides are damaging the line. I've marked the spot," replied the man. "We'll just inspect," the driver said. The guard placed an amber lamp on a stick to warn other trains. "It'd be dangerous for big engines like Gordon and Henry to take this line yet it's safe enough for Percy," said the fireman. "After we've arrived at the docks we must tell them to close the line." Henry waited impatiently for Percy's trucks. "Ugh! You're late and that stench is making me sick," he remarked crassly. "I can't help it, it's the fish and there's danger on the rails, that's why we're late," Percy retorted. "Pah! You're the only danger on the rails, Percy! Now quit wasting time and get your trucks hitched to my train!" snapped Henry. "Bossy boots," Percy muttered. Afterwards, Percy's crew were drinking coffee with the yard master in his office when they heard Henry's whistle. There he was, steaming out of the station with the Flying Kipper. "What line is Henry taking tonight?" demanded Percy's fireman. "The coastal run, it's the quickest," came the blunt reply. "But I told you, it's dangerous for trains like Henry to use that track!" The yard master called the signalman, but it was too late as Henry had already passed it in addition to James who was pulling the post train. "I'll soon make up for lost time," Henry harrumphed. But he was wrong. By the time he reached the coastal track, he couldn't see where he was going. "Driver, slow down! I can't see anything!" he cried. "No, no!" shouted the vans, who were tired of Henry's rudeness. "Go on! Go on!" They knocked his crew off the footplate. That's when the mist cleared and, even though Henry tried to stop, the trucks pushed him into the sea! After the tide fell, Sir Topham Hatt found out about the incident. Boats were sent to rescue the train. The Fat Controller spoke severely about the episode. "Engines don't swim Henry. You were meant to deliver fish, not swim with them," he scolded. "Yes sir. I'm sorry, sir," sighed Henry. Some boys at the docks were delighted with Henry's dilemma. "Look at that green whale!" one said. "It's not a whale, Einstein, it's a monster!" jeered another. "Geez Louise Henry, I bet you'll have many fishy tales to tell!" added Cranky the crane mockingly. Henry was sad. Percy felt sorry for him though. "Come on, it's time for a washdown," he said, pulling him to the washdown. "I'm sorry I roasted you, Percy," said Henry. "It's all good. But do you smell something?" asked Percy. "What?" gasped Henry. "Fresh air!" laughed Percy.

[@Thomtomfan]

RHENEAS LAUNGUAGE!!

[@jakobhardy1734]

do you wish to keep your comments?

[@s.p.d.magentaranger1822]

Blame COPPA

[@star86703]

Brilliant crash and rewrite

[@JonahgamerTV]

Request: You should do the same thing with Neville next

[@MountainDude1]

AWESOME!!

[@mrjollyschoctanker3926]

2:28 Neville and Murdoch forgot to exist

[@thomasdeturk5142]

I’m turning 31 on the 31st of December.

[@karenfan010]

can you do an adaption of thomas’ day off

[@tobiasg169]

Hi, I really like your content😀 Which models do you use for this? I kinda want to try it for myself, but I couldn't find the versions with rolling eyes and switching faces on the spot and stuff like that

[@mysticsavage8810]

If I'm correct, it's sudrian industries, least that's where I found mine

[@alfiebassett5658]

I want to know the website the express coaches are on

[@marcusarline7135]

Gordon learns his lesson

[@benhughes3394]

6:32 😔😢

[@antonioramirez6322]

We see ghost bus

[@mooseygoosey3749]

2:31 idk if this was intentional but Gordon said I’m a goods engine which I found very funny

[@Ink.454]

This was an amazing remake! I loved your take on this! Also, what skybox/sky are you using here, it looks cool (4:42) If its not too much trouble, could i have the link to a download?

[@jamesleopard8518]

5:11 Gordon crashed into the barn, I don't hear any chickens and hens sound effects in the background

[@RoseSupreme]

2:29 Was that a narration error?

[@natesmainlinevids]

Compared to the original and this rewrite of it, the crash Gordon had here seemed a bit less tragic than the original.

[@PrideOfTheFleet688]

What is that flatbed made out!?!!

[@spring626]

Ok to fair it wasn't really Gordon's fault in this adaptation. The Signalman was careless and Gordon did try to stop the train. Gordon really couldn't control what would have happened. The only thing he did wrong was bumping the trucks and insulting Salty and Cranky.

[@jeremiahsisaias8677]

Where did you find the skyboxes from? I can't find them anywhere on the Discord link I got from someone else in the comments in another video that I can't remember....

[@jamesleopard8518]

4:54 Tumble Time

[@superstepno835]

Do you want to be a actor in collectible railway adventures as Rheneas

[@bobbymckechnie7572]

I do have a question at 5:59 we see cranes, would that be useless? I mean it would be much more practical to use a winch hammered into the ground with a few pins, right? Like those for the trucks? Or? Just a thought though I could be wrong

[@manhunter433]

Will there be a finale for the Fog Phantom?

[@RhenProd]

Yes

[@alekseyy__d]

Can you make a Sodor Supernatural ????

[@pokebreeder2517]

um their where not points as it was just a curve into the branch line or did i miss something? 4:14

[@christophermartinez1321]

Hey wat happened to part 3 fog?

[@peteliew9712]

Stop

[@jamesbelcher8509]

3:49 Freight Train Cars

[@chomikuje_bo_lubie]

How do you mąkę that

[@lucasm22]

0:00 0:14

[@Spacemanfilms2002]

What happened to your discord server?

[@jlaws8740]

Sorry to bother you, but it says that the Discord link is invalid or expired

[@RandomRetroTrainGuy82]

5:07

[@sebastian1938]

I am a kid

[@scottjacob-yl2xv]

Pause*

[@josmelalejandrotovargonzal765]

Pero los furgones qhora tuvieron la culpa esta vez

[@jam-k5h6z]

hi

[@eliavalos1]

The the modeled Thomas sometimes the show is TV-Y7 L

[@PerpIsSpoopy]

100th comment right here 😉

[@ManglethefoxPrimegirl]

Thomas and Friends are made for kids right now so yeah I called you out on that right now @RheneasProductions