Haelor Empire Makes Huge Mistake by Attacking This Human Vessel | HFY Sci-Fi Story

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[@craigsawicky1643]

Immediately upon spotting or sensing an unknown vessel, General Quarters/ Battle Stations is called. Better to be Safe Than Sorry! This allows an immediate response to any "Greeting".

[@David-iu7gg]

Is it just me??? One second, they accomplished their mission and are going home untouched. The next second , they are back aboard the enemy ship (that they supposedly just escaped from unharmed), and they are detected and in a massive battle, fighting to escape. Contradiction upon Contradiction makes me hate, and end these stories...unfinished. Get your shit together...can't stomach anymore...done with you.

[@cseale61]

Whether this story is human written, or AI generated, Admirals do NOT command ships. They do not even board ships that are anticipating battle. Admirals do not lead boarding parties (nor do Captains). This is standard military/Naval protocol. Admirals are too valuable; they stay in the Command Centers and lead from there. I spent a couple hitches in the US Navy and know how this works.

[@draighodge6039]

Do aliens follow human command structures?

[@user-yb6xv7xk2t]

Wish i was so bored i could nitpick a story.

[@cseale61]

@@user-yb6xv7xk2t Not bored at all. I enjoy these stories in the evenings, or while coding. It's just, as a a former Petty Officer in the Navy, I get a little sensitive when people who write these stories (most of them good) don't do enough research to get it right. It only takes a quick Google search.

[@georgearden7075]

The "aliens" are already here.

[@ChadLetourneaurhavoc]

was it a cruiser or and Battle cruiser

[@carlwatkins2218]

i liked this 😃

[@ChadLetourneaurhavoc]

So what is it they left the hanger without issue or they got attacked

[@nfldend501]

I'm so sick of every friggin ship being the obdomiable. Like so many Marines sailors even The UNSC Enterprise, Hornet, Yorktown anything

[@mystikmind2005]

Not changing names makes ripping off other stories quicker.

[@GregoryP-jw8qj]

Uuhhh... why were the Lenorians boarding the Indomitable, a dead ship that is no longer a threat and abandoned, right in the middle of the biggest space battle both sides could throw at each other, when those forces could more than likely be used for a better purpose somewhere else? I'm sorry I'm trying to get it...🫤😮‍💨😞 😖 I closed my eyes.. did we win?

[@jessetheunending9357]

You should individually title each of these short stories, have them spoken at the beginning, ingested instead of jumping right into the story, out of the gate

[@guyvalentine7258]

Afterburners in space? And why do holes in the ships always have to be on decks 7 through 12. Also why does it have to be that every enemy soldier killed has to be replaced by two more. Why not just One for One or three to One or some other number.

[@rudiratlos6707]

Terran forces hail an extraterrstrial researchstation ? How ? And when entering they are sorroundet by researchers 🙄 You need to work on that plot 😅

[@nfldend501]

agreed

[@nfldend501]

and change the name of the ship or make a story based on the missions of the Obdomimable

[@GregoryP-jw8qj]

Indomitable..😬🚀📡🛰️🌌☄️🪐

[@nfldend501]

@@GregoryP-jw8qj @GregoryP-jw8qj lmao u think after hearing it in 5 stories in a row I would have spelt it right. Congrats to Lt Major General Sgt Private 1st Class Sheila Wiseman a renowned plant biologist zenoologist and pilot along with being President and top Diplomat on her promotion to the newly built Indomitable

[@guyvalentine7258]

Well this story is better than most that this author writes. I could actually listen to the whole thing without cringing too much.

[@friedbones8227]

The problem I have with most of his stories are the mispronunciation of words used (and the misspelling of same) on the screen. He appears to be using AI generated voice over. It would be better if he used a live voice actor instead.

[@woswasdenni1914]

@@friedbones8227 the ai generated voiceovers are common use and are fine but problem is it seems also beeing written by an ai, not a very good one tough

[@tioraytm]

Another chatGPT story, full of holes and not making any logical sense. And the story AI is pathetic. Unless you ask the AI a precise question then it wouldn't tell you or do anything useful.

[@gordowg1wg145]

Terribly "written", with excretia for dialogue, plot hole you could fly the USS Enterprise through - sideways, complete ignorance of commant structure - or any other from the sound of it, etc... Don't even bother with the piss-poor first sentence - your brain cells will thank you!