Hairdresser B-Roll Video. Studio 13, Stourbridge, UK

Hi,
this is one of my first video that I have produced myself. Please give me some feedback about my first video made for my friend.
I have used:
Sony A7III
Gimbal Weebill S
Sony GM 24mm 1.4
Sony 55mm 1.8
Viltrox 85mm 1.8
Music used in the video:
Alex Cristoforetti - Dance Party | Jump
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