Hamilton - "Wait for It" Animatic

[@munromister777]

This definitely needs way more attention and love, it's a great animatic

[@sykeraid4944]

Not as smoothly drawn as others, but god damn do I love how you actually have more transitions of movement for Aaron. All the others are smoother but yours actually has Aaron Burr moving and going places and exhibiting better emotion through bodily movement. This needs more attention.

[@lucky6kirby]

Thank you for the feedback and compliments! I am still a newbie, so I know there is still areas where I can make better.

[@sykeraid4944]

It still looks great and I wish more people would watch it.

[@michellemelendez383]

I was wondering if some of these were assignments, because so many were released around the same time. Such hard work, and a great project. What can be more emotive, and convey so much with so little, than theater? Translating that into storyboard form is challenging, but it drives the point home. A story can be told with just emotion.

[@lucky6kirby]

Yup, this was a project done over the course of 3-4 weeks. I was in a storyboarding class, and each student got to choose a song that was at least 3 minutes long from the Hamilton soundtrack. My teacher had this same project for several semesters, and I reckon there are more teachers out there with this same project. It might explain why there are loads of them uploaded at the same time. Also, beautifully said!

[@spacecasewriter3276]

Beautiful! I love the emotions in it!!!

[@Ali_Bunnii]

Omg! You need more subscribers. This is amazing!

[@lucky6kirby]

Thank you very much for your kind words! ' v '

[@Chiickiienuggiies]

Wow this is amazing! A few frames were off in a couple places, but that's bound to happen. You really deserve more subscribers

[@montejeska]

sup bro we were in class together i liked your animatic way too much when you did it tbh i shoulda been out there like with confetti poppers with how well you did

[@lucky6kirby]

Thank you so much! I like yours a lot too! I'm always amazed at your art style! I really enjoyed your final as well.

[@montejeska]

lucky6kirby also never knew u were into feh wtf... catch me being a meme in arena

[@lucky6kirby]

Lmao. What is your ID?

[@montejeska]

lucky6kirby 6927499204

[@lucky6kirby]

Sent! I go by "maimim" there.

[@puffytuffycat7407]

Dude this is amazing! Though like you said there could be improvement but I couldn't so this so, you've gain a sub!! And I can't wait to see your process of improvement :)

[@lucky6kirby]

Thank you for your kind words!

[@peridotasadeadbritishmonar7924]

😍

[@klltsun_2576]

Is it just me, or is there something about the eyes and mouth that make it seem like he's lacking emotion? Like, Burr is shouting-singing, and his expression seemed a bit too calm. I suggest trying to narrow his eyes sometimes, like, put a line for the lower eyelid whenever he narrows his eyes. Like when he was panting and leaning his hands on his knees. Same with whenever his eyes are widened. A slight lower eyelid to really emphasize that he has his eyes widened. The mouth too, try different shapes, especially when he's shouting. Look at cartoons and adjust to make it less exagerrated, until it fits your drawing style. But then again, maybe that's just my preference. You do you, whether you agree with what I said or not.

[@lucky6kirby]

I agree with you. I honestly didn't put that much attention to expressing emotions through the details in the face since I was just focused on finishing it. This was a school assignment, and I was a bit tight on schedule. That is why the transitions are so rigid. I have seen other Hamilton animatics, and this one cannot compare to them. This was more of a storyboard turned into an animatic, so there are in-betweens missing. The lack of movements of both the eyes and mouth does make him look kinda dead inside.

[@lucky6kirby]

Also, thank you for the suggestion. One of my weaknesses is drawing expressive faces. In addition, I normally do not draw in this style. I usually draw anime, but my teacher wanted to make me move away from that so it got a bit awkward.

[@klltsun_2576]

@@lucky6kirby Understandable. I also feel awkward when I try to draw in a more american style instead of anime lol P.S. the "dead inside" made me laugh for some reason XD

[@queenliyah5162]

Looks like Aaron Burr is jealous of Alexander Hamilton.

[@nikki.9700]

Alright im gonna hit up kim k to advertise your channel