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[@mickl5536]

Hang on a minute ! We go from standing up ready to face an attack from assassins, to suddenly standing on a balcony looking at a city ? Seriously messed up continuity. Ruind the whole thread of the story. These sorts of failures just make me stop reading any further. 👎

[@michaeleversberg1712]

That's it! You want people to subscribe to your channel, but the narrator [whether human or AI] is not able to enunciate certain words or names such as at 9:39 minutes in the word(unreadable) was read in the past tense and not in the present tense. Well as the human pilot's name of ALEX was misspoken as A lax instead, but later was corrected. Is this an AI generated story or did janitor was given the transcript to proofread while on a cigarette break? Come on now, get with it, and produce the the quality work that I know you can do. Go on, make me proud.