Heedless - Kevan Gahan

Heedless is a song I wrote months ago but only recently recorded. It is a song that means a lot to me so please share this if you like what you hear! Thanks so much for listening.
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Lyrics:
I wanna spend my time
taking your breath away
Ive been laying here for hours
mixing up the words I wanna say
Cause I need you to see
I could waste away my day
sweat dripping down my face
spitting nonsense to cover up
the pain in what I think you'll say
But this time I'm not wrong
Cause all I can see are better days
spinning in her head
and all I can be is nothing more than anything I've been
so be honest like the winter
and show me all your rain cause now
I see that ill never know what we could be
And I'd love to think that its all still one step away
and I'm not in such a clouded place
stuck waiting and craving for
your writing on my wall
becoming something I can call mine again
because now
All I can see are better days
spinning in her head
and all I can be is nothing more than anything I've been
so be honest like the winter
and show me all your rain cause now
I see that ill never know what we could be
All I can see are better days
spinning in her head
and all I can be is nothing more than anything I've been
so I'll be honest like the winter
and I'll show you all my pain cause now
I see, that you're gone
I let you fall away from me..

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You saved my day thanks

[@TheAsurmo]

Well done keep it

[@bernardoyacono]

Nice songs man 👍

[@biggamer2001]

i really like this song since I hear your demo (like 3 minutes ago, I hear it just before coming I to this haha), but I think you should try to build up in the second verse, then fall again in the last chorus, if you want, try to make to see if you like, cause in my head it sounds fire this way. Overall nice song man, I compose too, but I really liked your lyrics, made the song beautiful