HEROBRINES END - PART 1: Sound The Alarm

[@dragonman1495]

Haven’t watched anything from this channel in a while but title gave me nostalgia so decided to come

[@xarrison8274]

SAME

[@Cindy18175]

Same

[@DeionMora]

Same

[@dragonman1495]

@@DeionMora Same

[@CreativeCalamityy]

I know I said a lot about this in the discord, but this is actually incredible. The amount of work put into this and the way it’s all laid out and edited is so amazing. Everything fits perfectly. The music is fantastic, and it goes excellently with the episode and the situation. The editing is ON POINT and everything is so well done. This seriously gave me a nostalgia trip. It reminded me of how I felt back a couple years when we were all waiting for the next episode of Forgotten or the Unknown to come out. The waiting for something awesome and to know what happens next. To see yet again an amazing piece of work that has come so far in the past few years. That’s how I want to feel. I want to feel excited and impressed and impatient for the next. You’ve done such an amazing job on this and I just can’t WAIT to see more! You’re content has such an amazing spark and you’re so creative and you’ve come so far. I’m so excited for what’s to come. Great job Dylan. This is truly a masterpiece. 🙏🙌🔥

[@tywitek45]

Oh yea, it’s all coming together.

[@venus_ai]

Dylan,I want you to take a look at your first ever herobrine lake video. And then your latest- look how far you've come and be proud of how high quality your work is- you have stuff going for you and it's amazing to see how much you can do. You've come from messing around on minecraft, to creating your own personal soundtrack and getting proper voice actors. Really, really, HONESTLY, be proud of what you're achieving- and do not stop. I'm so so happy that I found you when I did, not only for my paper thin well-being, but also for seeing and being along side someone who works for their talent. Keep doing good things, and I'll always be here to support you 💙👏👏👏

[@krowned_ily]

It would be a great idea if Jack became the new Herobrine somehow because he was stuck inside the simulation so long, and he wants to get revenge on the people who put him there.

[@caliber4044]

Very well done Dylan. You have got the knack for putting suspense onto an already suspenseful series. This is how you keep something going, you keep making it better, and that is how people keep coming back. Or even if you start over, you create something new that no one has seen done in the way you do it, and they take interest. You did very well with the music and integrating it into the edits. I have to say, when listening to the soundtrack on its own without context, it wasn't very moving, it was without plot. But what you did made it a part of the episode in a way that I couldn't even tell the difference between what used to fill that hole, and what replaced it. You made the change seamless, and it all fit in where it was supposed to be. I wouldn't change anything on that end, so good job, very well done! I liked the atmosphere you created with this, it was kind of chilling, like the kind that you get when the blood drains from your face, and you held that throughout the video, this is usually something that people will do subconsciously, and is very prone to subtle change as it often takes forever to complete something and the creators will lose the feel as they go along. So good on you for holding that, and that's something that just comes with experience, so you are definitely getting used to the feel of your content and how you want it to be seen. I especially liked the scene where Konrad was telling the scientists to open the door the second time. The placement of events, the angle of the camera, and the weight of it was very well set! Done just after immense fear and just before flaming anger, you did well to look right at his face with the angle you had, and the voice and music weight and volume were near perfect. I would have said the first one was my favorite, but that was the hook of the video (and a damned good one too) and was good in its own right. But now to the rest. Again, this is just helpful commentary, and not meant to be taken as negative judgement so please take portions of it as you wish, I have no intention of verbally bashing you or your works. So, first of all, I would like to express confusion about the beginning, and I am sure you probably either predicted this or expected some confusion because of how it was done. Konrad is just standing there. I am not sure if the sound effects are meant to make it seem like he was out of it or off in his head thinking about what to do next or beholding the destruction around him, but as the very first part of the video, I believe this either should be made obvious or shortened so that it doesn't seem like our main scientist is standing innocently in the middle of a disaster, losing his marbles because of how old he is. You lost the main purpose for the confusion as the video went on, because it is easily forgotten in the chaos, but you might keep it in mind for the future. Best to not have our scientists losing their marbles when the fate of the world is at stake, yea? Second, I realize it is for effect, but at the end of the intro when you up the volume you put it at a level where the brain has to adjust to the input level, and it makes the next scene extremely quiet in comparison even after the silence. This is not something notice by a lot of people generally, but it is a basic part of video editing, to keep the volume of the entire thing withing a certain range, and making magic with the editing of the surrounding sounds to where even a whispered scene is just as loud as a talking scene, without the audience noticing it is anything but a whisper. In short, you have to work around the edits so that the sounds are not completely overpowering, even for the effect, because a seasoned editor can make a small noise just as clear as a loud one, it just depends on the context of sounds and speed of the volume increase/decrease. (this really lowered the appreciation of the following subtle sound effects you added, and I actually had to pause and watch the scene after a moment of getting my regular hearing back to notice those sounds) Third, when Konrad is watching the footage of after the moon base gets destroyed, he looks at the last one far to long with no context as to why. What I mean by this, is usually when someone pauses when scrolling through something like that, it is either because they take notice of something in that image, or they are giving their mind a break from the pace. The former is usually indicated verbally: "what is...?" or "wait/hold on..." and then what they have noticed gets revealed, either right then or after a moment of horrible realization. The latter is usually indicated by a weary sigh, this helps get the audience to release some of their tension so that they are less prepared for the next moment when you reveal the terror that still lives. Without something of this nature, you imply that Konrad either has psychic powers, a really strong spidy-sense, or seriously doubts the success of his own operation. Play around with it, make sure that there are no awkward pauses or really coincidental pauses that take the audience out of the plot. Just as a sequential tidbit, I really wish you would have emphasized the "he" a bit more (just a bit, to make it more pronounced, not cliche) in "this is the key, HE has to be". I had to rewind it several times because I thought he said "this is the key, IT has to be" and then I later realized "it" was Jack, and I knew you wouldn't leave such an important line with such missed opportunity as to say "it" instead of "he". The last thing, in the end when he is talking to Jack, to be honest, I feel like Jack would have either been more cynical/bitter, or angry/disbelieving, and while it is a good angle to shoot, where Konrad is on higher ground and implying that he has more control, Jack would have at least moved around more, even if its just forwards and back or scanning his surroundings, hes been through way too much to trust some scientist that claims he was able to just release him from the simulation at the pull of a lever. Jack is a more high-strung character, or at least that is how he is portrayed, and it makes complete sense with how everything has been going in his life. You know him best, try to keep his style, especially if you are going to go first person perspective. I understand the context of the scene and why it would have been good to do it as you did, but since we are keenly familiar with the first person perspective of this character, it is fairly noticeable to the viewers. Oh my gosh this was long. Weirdly enough, I don't even see how there is so much info in here to make it this long, or maybe I am just getting familiar with explaining and stretching it out too much. Let me know if you want me to make these shorter, I fear for future video's comment sections xD (seriously, I complement it and talk about four items, HOW IS IT THIS LONG) Anyways, as always, this is helpful criticism from one movie maker to the next, do not take my word as law, and please please take no offence, I really do love what you do and hope to see more improvement. Can't wait to see what's next!

[@thatonekpopaddict7835]

Who has been here since the beginning. Like 2011 begining Edit: I SWEAR TO GOD IF HE KILLED JACK!!!!!

[@StarLeader44]

Almost. I was 2 years late.

[@vtron9832]

I remember the beginning.

[@TheOneWhoKnocc]

Me

[@TheOneWhoKnocc]

This, the Haunting, and Hunt for Herobrine since the beginning

[@ezillakilla9710]

So he was pulled out o ft he simulator which means that Albert, roman, didn't exist or they died in the simulation

[@venus_ai]

Roman blew himself up outside the simulation:( Big sad.

[@ezillakilla9710]

My question was the void or darkness it said Jack was trapped in that darkness so was he pulled out of the voids after the simulation came back.

[@unwantedstranger2070]

THIS.IS.SO.BADASS!!! 😍 So many nostalgic memories!!!

[@KitkatGalaxy]

Oh this is good! I’ve been waiting for this, and it’s worth the wait. 👏👏👏

[@samtigerlilly1003]

Aw damn I forgot about the telekinesis. Thought Herobrine killed everyone through, like, mindbreak-aura-- after a certain distance he could just. force-crush consciousnesses like soda cans, and that was why he got OP in the sims.

[@Tis2019]

Omg so much stuff happened! That ending though! It got me sad.. hopefully it wasn't in the head or heart.. He's been through so much... And he's going to end him right then and there?! 😥 Well it looks fantastic! Keep going!

[@hot_pockets1213]

*sees herobrine* Me turning on creative: *I'm about to end this man hole career*

[@kidmagictherapper5301]

Hot_ Pockets *EPIC GAMER MOVE*

[@matthewtighe2097]

not funny shut the fuck up

[@UnluckyCreature]

@@matthewtighe2097 very funny did laugh

[@potatochiknug1258]

LootAway very funny did laugh

[@potatochiknug1258]

LootAway very funny did laugh

[@azurekuzma3598]

Although the view count is low, don't despair! The effort that is put into this is already clear, and it deserves to be recognized. For all of the productions before, and for all those to come.

[@friight_]

hOL UP THAT ENDING THO-

[@inkwellproductions9139]

Some people forget Minecraft movies...but not us.

[@imperial_crest6809]

Prepare for the Endgame!

[@RealOdd2000]

Waited so long it’s back and I have to say I’m really excited for the next episode 😁

[@vtron9832]

This is becoming a great thing! And to think this all started with a bungalow...

[@spiderpiller2522]

Yes we must stop Herobrine

[@creationfied]

I don't really get what's going on but I'm enjoying it

[@FunkinBoys]

Jack has been through many things.Now he need to do it again.but in Real life and not in a simulation.RIP Josef aswel if you remember :D!

[@oxsai]

So excited!! :)

[@CrystalKnight427]

OMFG THIS BRINGS BACK MEMORIES!!!!! X3

[@zackscout6365]

I’m surprised no one has given you a movie job with the editing acting and directing

[@lonelywriter6332]

THIS IS AWESOME!!!!

[@blazingstar1825]

Jack no what happened next one please pretty please with a cherry on top

[@kl0nos]

one day maybe.. he will un-private his videos :(

[@ASharkNamedWaffle]

After a long time i went to my playlist of Herobrine Lake with all seasons And they all are private videos. Where is The Herobrine Lake series? Why was it removed? I want to watch all episodes again. It was one of the best series i know. Anyone know where i can see all episodes?

[@Torgeirihle]

New channel! Apollow studios!

[@banjomanperson]

DylanARCHIVE

[@intertwined_x4779]

What order do I watch this in? Is it forgotten, hero brine lake, prequel, unknown, sequel, nexus trials and then this?

[@venus_ai]

Forgotten Herobrine lake The prequel The unknown The sequel The nexus trials Then this :) Honestly theres so much- too much

[@potatochiknug1258]

Hollup did jack just fuckin die?

[@thescorpion1012]

Taking a little inspiration from stranger things aren’t we

[@iigxbbieee3998]

Why was da beggining like the beggining of stranger things

[@Atzana_]

mega oof

[@ezillakilla9710]

Should have continued it

[@Sixblackcats20]

Nope

[@ezillakilla9710]

@ bro it’s was like a good story line

[@Sixblackcats20]

@@ezillakilla9710 sorry. Read your comment wrong Lol

[@banjomanperson]

Bit late to ask for part 2?

[@dragonwing4ever]

No way he killed jack