How to Plot Your Novel FAST | Writing Advice

[@dirkwalker9686]

Me at the beginning of the video: "Well that's the dumbest writing prompt I've ever heard in my life" Me by the end: "Where can I pre-order this novel? and when will it be made into a movie?"

[@patnull]

OMG, I was thinking the same exact thing. I can't believe that Ellen Brock turned one of the dumbest ideas I have ever heard of in my life into a novel I wouldn't mind reading.

[@derfinsterling]

Right there with you. Sounds like a Zoe Deschanel movie

[@danecustance2734]

Me too, i thought this would bore me to death.

[@VinJapanGuitarShop]

I'm one minute into the vid and if I hadn't seen this comment I would have been gone. I mean, I was mentally prepared for the dumb writing prompt, but geesh, that was horrible

[@torspedia]

@@patnull Just goes to show that you can turn even the dumbest idea, into a really well plotted out novel.

[@mforvendetta452]

This is brilliant, it showcases one of the most important things about outlining that I struggled with before I figured it out. Build your story on a message, don't wait for your story to produce a message - it won't happen.

[@carlajenkins1990]

Thinking is required in writing. Otherwise, you are going to have a pointless plot.

[@theoneonly2406]

I ageee with this statement and disagree, as this is a year old I won’t bother saying why I disagree.

[@catcactus1234]

Technically discovery writers (otherwise called pantsers) tend to “find” the message of stories as they write them, and it works just fine for them. Of course, that draft is put through a dozen revisions to ensure that everything is consistent later on, but the point still stands. As long as you keep plot structure in mind while you write, you essentially get the same thing.

[@saragarofano6471]

So that if you have to make a choice with where you wanna go with either the plot or a small detail, you know right away which choice you should make even if initially both options would be equally good

[@thebookwasbetter3650]

Pro tip - figure out the ending first with the message in it. Then everything you write up until then will work it's way to it.

[@rednecktash]

You can’t leave us hanging!! This outline needs a sequel!

[@Robert399]

Bake Off 2: Armageddon starring Jason Statham

[@Steelburgh]

Right? Do they get back together? Does she come back strong and win next year? Does she team up with the antagonist and start a baking company that specializes in sailor-themed confections? We need to know!

[@namusmotorola8075]

@@Steelburgh actually, after she returns home that day, a spaceship hits the roof of that house, through an entangled mesh of stuff she realizes the arch rival is actually an alien from a far-off planet, and that's how she wins always against her. After she discusses the matter with James Bond... oops, no-the original story was better than this cliché!

[@cSedx00022]

@@Steelburgh I think the main idea is about her character development journey, but great questions.

[@VampCoffee]

this prompt thing should be a series :D

[@floydlooney6837]

Baking Sailors from Reno, the next trope...

[@justagerman140]

@@floydlooney6837 lol

[@FortyFreedom]

So that’s how a Hallmark film is written! Thank you for this video, it’s really helped me get my head around basic outlines.

[@christopherbenner7516]

Plot twist, the romantic partner and the arch rival are one and the same. She realizes this after she doesn’t win the final, but restarts the relationship anyways.

[@kennethkingsbury5266]

Her construction of the plot is simple but fantastic. When you add all meaningful details, you would have a heart-warming story.

[@NekoSamaIru]

I feel like the love interest should have been a sailor as well, who wants the protagonist to come back, but supports her anyway. So, when she loses to her rival, she knows he'd try to get her to go back to being a sailor, and she might agree. As a result, she ignores all his calls and messages. Anyway, this video was quite interesting. I didn't think asking and answering some questions would help that much. I think I want to try it now.

[@avengeallheroes-nocommenta9878]

i reaaally like that idea

[@aliwinters7847]

I like your idea about the love interest being a sailor as well. I feel like it gives more purpose to the sailor detail that otherwise still felt random.

[@pagebeam17]

I am speechless. I've never seen a video nor read an article that so thoroughly placed me within the mind of a story builder. I’m encouraged by your willingness to resolve some plot questions later, but to push forward with the questions you can answer now. Personally, I tend to get frustrated when I don't know everything at the beginning, and I am therefore blocked and stop writing. Thanks for the reminder about how exciting and resourceful the imagination can be.

[@TyberZann2814]

I wasn’t sold on the premise at first, but then little by little, you made the idea more and more compelling. A simple, yet lovely story. On a side note, I’m glad you’re using more visual aids in your videos. That’s always been something I found lacking in your earlier videos. For a visual medium like KZbin, showing what you’re saying can highlight the points you want to emphasize.

[@to.ri.3]

totally agree with everything said in this comment ^^

[@howedelamitri]

Story suggestion: it would be nice if the skills/experience gained from being a sailor ends up being a key to advancing her life. I think its good to remind people that the Universe is constantly doing things for our benefit, even if we don't recognize it right away

[@lionkingmatiouz3441]

Could not agree more :)

[@brianl3424]

@@howedelamitri Strongly disagree on your point. Rohingya refugees would probably struggle to figure out how being raped, massacred, and driven off their lands by Myanmar's military in the hundreds of thousands is *The Universe* acting to their benefit. Even if you were right, the artist's view of the world is a crucial element in their style, something you don't need to comment on during the creative stage unless you're collaborating.

[@alannothnagle]

Wow! While I haven't gotten around to writing any baking novels yet, this is perhaps the most cogent summary of the outlining process ever. I guess I already knew a lot of this intuitively, but I've never seen it presented so clearly! Yet another reason why this is my favorite writing channel!!

[@Cinemaniac96]

I've been trying to find information on how stories are constructed and what makes them compelling and after finding almost nothing but vague and often contradicting information this channel is a godsend holy shit

[@ledge-magee]

It's really hard to link up the nonsense in those prompt generators, yet I can see a really charming, Great British Bake-Off -esk book series coming out of this. Respect.

[@thepaperlulu]

Tarquin Roswegan right? I was cringing with that plot generation, but i agree, it totally sounded charming in the end.

[@ledge-magee]

The classic "put a goal and character that don't make sense together" technique XD Yet, at the end, I was thinking it was a pretty nice story. Might be because the topic of her being a sailor was smoothed over in the outline.

[@kathyf3656]

@@ledge-magee I've watched Brian Sanderson's lectures from BYU (Writing Fantasy and Science Fiction) and he promotes that same idea, the square peg in the round hole. Cast a character that should have been a sidekick type as the hero, or a love interest as the hero's Mentor, etc.

[@jeromyperez5532]

So I already had my story plotted, but this inspired me to go back and see if there's anything I should add or take away. Thanks for the great reminder.

[@christinag2919]

Honestly, I wanted the rival to be the romantic partner by the end! Thanks for the super helpful video!

[@morningcoffee1111]

Wow. When she began I was so disappointed in the example story idea. It was basic and boring. It was garbage. And when she started breaking it down it became plausible. Then somewhere around the 3/4 mark I had to keep rewinding to get the points she was making because the characters were talking and distracting me. It went from juvenile garbage to something that I’d like to read, or write, in less than 15 minutes. Ellen has some serious skills.

[@davidwinet5607]

I still think the premise is lame but she showed all the development steps for any premise and that’s what counts.

[@boydmccollum692]

I had the opposite reaction lol

[@exendar]

Thankyou so much for this. After watching a few 'how to develop your story' videos I was getting sick of them all being fluff and no content. Yours is a super practical, pragmatic and hands-on explanation - it's helped me a lot.

[@physikus1123]

Your videos persuaded me that writing is so much more about logic and system than people think. I'm discovering some perks of writing myself now, but your advices already helped me three or four times, so thanks:)

[@mm277hb]

by far the best structural advice video i’ve ever seen!! thank you!!

[@yerabbit]

best explanation of plotting i've come across yet. Most people just show a chart and break down the steps, and say "see? this is how you do it" with no information on turning these bullet points into actual plot. Good stuff.

[@Dawm66]

Ellen, your simplification of the outlining process is brilliant. My one ask is that you get a microphone for your channel because you deserve to be heard and it would be easier to hear you if you are not shouting at us. Love love love your channel! ❤ I just subscribed because I think you’re brilliant 🌺

[@vithoralbertim31]

this looks like a plot of a Sandra Bullock's movie.

[@rociopenin7823]

I've read your comment and was listening the video and couldn't stop picturing her as the sailor from Reno who joins a baker competition 😂

[@Legendary_Detective-Wobbuffet]

It sounded more like the dumb romance book Marge Simpson wrote.

[@BlackMasterJoe89]

This was very helpful to me because I'm at the plotting stage of my story and I didn't really know how to move on. I enjoyed how you broke down each event in the story and the idea of asking questions is helpful too!

[@eleanorcm7033]

This is really good, thank you Ellen. I've had an idea for ages, which over time has evolved into a detailed setting with ideas for subplots, and some characters I'm happy with, but I've struggled to simplify it enough to tease out a compelling plot. I think this approach will really help.

[@DebiRose062]

I’m dyslexic. I have tried, so many times to build a novel - yet this has been the best way of learning for me. Show and tell. It works so well for me. Thank you very much Ellen. I look forward to learning more from you.

[@waxwingslain3434]

Came from your ‘4 writer types’ video. I couldn’t be sure which type I’d place myself in until just now, halfway through this vid. I was watching you list out scenes in chronological order when I felt an unspeakable dread in my guts - the pantser in me was howling in anguish😂 Anyway, I love all your videos and find them super helpful! You have such an amazing, efficient way of getting things across. And I love that you’re never judgemental when you talk about the common writer mistakes, be it technical or otherwise. I hope your channel brings you as much inspiration as it does for us:)

[@undeniablySomeGuy]

Makes so much sense. These feel a lot like lessons for productivity in general: you actually know the basic steps of whatever you want to do. Get to what you font know through what you do, then Hit the ground running and dont slow yourself down unless absolutely necessary

[@grrsa]

This is a fantastic exercise. I feel so empowered right now! Been stuck with a prompt for over a month. I am no longer stuck. You rock!

[@robenkhoury7079]

You have red hair and blue eyes!! the rarest combo!

[@basthejokester]

Honestly Ellen you are the first person I've ever seen explain this call and response method so clearly. Not sure if this is exactly that or just similar but I understand this method so well will have to try soon

[@fromeelargo]

I really appreciate this video. I've been trying to get back into writing, and this was incredibly helpful and encouraging. Thanks, Ellen!

[@gary6754]

What about at the end. There's a judge who really liked her entry. And he helps her get a job as a chef. So she lost but now she has a career

[@ZukunftBilden]

Or what if she partners with her archrival to start a bakery.

[@Everyyoueverymiau]

This makes writing a book seem easy. That must mean you explained the process of plotting a novel really well!

[@joshuashepard583]

Ellen Brock, I’m incredibly thankful for your videos.

[@michaeljoshisnaba5853]

I personally want how you explain and how you create your videos more better and better in time. The story is so good and lovely though. It makes me want to read the whole book!

[@SPLITelevisionProductions]

Also I'd love to see more Outlining a Writing Prompt videos from you! You really know how to work out those summaries! Another suggestion would be a video series about different genres, and how to focus on the relevant tropes ie. Crime/Mystery, Fantasy, Comedy/Romance, etc

[@redviper324]

The problem with plotting too fast is that you still haven’t finished your novel and yet you’ve already got plans laid out for another handful

[@ariannelee6642]

i watched this with 40+ premise in my mind. after watching, those premises turned to outlines

[@mariaallaine]

my brain's outlining from one premise to another and i'm frustrated i can't write them down all at once

[@jayarna7506]

@@mariaallaine I find the best way to approach this is try to find the one that you BOTH feel most passionate about and have the most information on. That way you've got a good starting point but other plots you care about more aren't bugging you. Sometimes you can join premises up too

[@deniseleoramadre7898]

This video was BRILLIANT. Comprehensive without being overwhelming and exactly what I needed. THANK YOU.

[@triniguy88]

You helped me jump from a 50 word outline to 7000 word plot thank You. I will remember to send you a free copy once complete. Top-quality advice

[@jessenoelle262]

This is the most realistic and helpful explanation creating an outline that I've found yet! Thanks, Ellen!

[@jennaehrenholm36]

This video was perfect! You know exactly what to say to get people motivated to write. This channel has made my writing and my novel so much stronger, I cannot thank you enough for all you do! 💙

[@preetivish7723]

I love you

[@preetivish7723]

You friendship me

[@preetivish7723]

You massge me

[@lilypond5158]

This has to be the most helpful video I've ever seen about writing. I'm so exited to use this method.

[@thomasmcdonald2219]

You have gotten soooo good at being on camera and talking to your audience. It’s been fun watching you get better over the years.

[@blondetapperware8289]

Wow! By far, I would have to say this is my biggest setback as a writer, so I usually end up with more ideas and less and less outlines or further developments of them, but your process worked unbelievably well! I am now proud to say that my outline is far more concise and secure than I even hoped it would be on my own. Thank you!!

[@coralreeves4276]

Wow. My writer's brain is already constructing the dialogue. Thank you for this video, you just earned yourself a sub! 😍

[@Healoz]

I've been itching to finally start writing, as I've never actually written a proper story in my life yet, and this really helps me get over that difficult slump of trying rationalise the plot. Thank you so much!

[@ShadowRaven66669]

Update? Have you written at least one short story yet?

[@SuperBeanson]

I actually want to read that novel.

[@floydlooney6837]

I'm sure it'll be a Lifetime movie of the week soon enough

[@ClintLoweTube]

I want to eat the food that is baked.

[@purplegothicangel5650]

Seems to me more like a Hallmark movie than Lifetime.

[@azuarc]

My reaction: "Eh, this seems pretty boring. I don't see why anyone would--" * She plans to sabotage her rival. "Ooh, spicy!"

[@morningcoffee1111]

I’m guessing we all mentally wrote vastly different stories as she was breaking down this process. It would be interesting to see how each of us answered the plot questions she asked.

[@annmurry8589]

I started with vivid scenes - kind of slideshow style - and worked at coherent story structure outlines, character arcs, and world building.

[@alangold8414]

SO OBVIOUS but totally useful advice and so enthusiastically presented. This is 60,000 words already!!!

[@bozalaysecacarlos]

I really love how you created an intresting potential story from a concept that initially sounds crazy.

[@savvy4122]

Wow! This was extremely helpful. I was completely at a loss at where to start an outline and how to come up with scenes for it. I figured I was a "discovery writer" since I wasn't good at making outlines or anything, but when I sat down to write I wouldn't know where to take things. Seriously, this video was a lifesaver.

[@csr9183]

This is the most competent and enjoyable writing advice I've found. Great job.

[@IAmKrow]

I think Charles Bukowski once said that a genius makes difficult things seem easy. You've done exactly that with this video. Subbed!

[@Squiggly6942]

I loved this video. Thank you so much for your insight. I am gonna binge your whole channel now.

[@ivanshedrov]

Ellen, I stand on my knees for you. Because of you I found strengh to keep writing and finishing my story.

[@timothymclean]

Ellen Brock: "How does being a sailor affect her? Does she have to give up sailing for the baking competition? Me: "How is she a sailor from Reno? That's in Nevada! Did she move away from Reno to be a sailor? Why? Was sailing her first dream, and now she wants to bake? What did she have to give up to sail? Can we have a parallel between that and what she has to give up to bake?"

[@oz_jones]

She could be working in a river boat?

[@kathyf3656]

Because she lost her job to the rival, she went off an joined the Navy, or the merchant marine, or a king crab fishing boat off Alaska, as a cook. Now she's home, "A sailor home from the sea," and needs to find a second career. The rival was the reason she had to leave town. It's time for a token revenge by winning the contest.

[@mollyringer8349]

Amazing content, thank you

[@timothymclean]

@@oz_jones Do river boats use sails?

[@SqweakySqwizard]

I have been toying around with an idea for a while now, and you just helped me turn my idea into the best plot I've ever written. So thank you.

[@LauraMaisano]

I've never seen a walkthrough of going from idea to actual plotting of scenes. This is wonderful. Thank you!

[@fernandosouza9607]

Wow! a million times wow! Ellen what you did in this video is just out of this world. You not only saved the day turning something flat into something amazingly great. I'm going nowhere else. Just subscribed and I'm going to go through each and every video in your channel! Regards from Brazil and your brand new fan! :)

[@alwaysunbothered5848]

Okay but like you actually make it make sense. Like this makes sense. Actually sense. Plus this gives me motivation to write again 🍎

[@brettkruskie]

I just want to say that having seen this video, this gives a clear example of how outlines work. Great job!

[@SPLITelevisionProductions]

Absolutely loved this insight to how you edit and guide a client to complete their plot summaries and question answering! Thanks Ellen!

[@escrivaodegalarran1098]

Such a high quality content... This is so practical, it makes one wonder why such a good content from someone who clearly has experience with this type of work isn't recommended, I only happened to find this video for pure coincidence. I have wasted so much time already, if only I had this information back then...

[@purpleghost106]

This is really thorough, thank you! Also, I really like how much you talk with your hands! As someone with ADD I find movement can help keep my brain more focused, and your hand gestures did just that. (can't resist the bad pun) I guess one could say this video was really handy. xD

[@Rise876]

I follow a lot of writing advice channels and, honestly, yours is the best. Thank you so much for all the help.👍

[@ProgrammedForDamage]

The timing to this couldn't be more perfect! I was about to try and plot my novel outline today.

[@Nostang3]

Thanks for this video. I was just about to start plotting the whole story to make my writing easier and this is going to help out a lot.

[@phoenixfriend]

Thank you for this. Not knowing how to get from the initial idea to a full plot has always been one of my biggest inhibitors.

[@alisonf.haring3411]

Very interesting video Ellen! I like to plot my stories like this too, starting with the basis of the storyline before growing into something more detailed 😊 Right now I’m trying the snowflake method, I’m liking it so far 😊 I think it might help a lot with editing!

[@eenayde]

great video, as usual! really helpful. not gonna lie, i got really invested in this story as the video went on haha :D keep up the good work!

[@funmeister]

Absolutely love these videos. Not only do they cover our biggest questions and most important points of interest, but are very straight to the point, pithy, concise and don't waste time in the beginning for chit chat the way everyone else seems to do.

[@alphaomega1089]

Excellent! A simple story rich with possibilities! Great job with your outline! Rival editor and co-author: She and the rival went to high school together. She and the rival were polar opposites (male V female mindset). She wants to prove to the rival that a male mindset doesn’t mean non female. She is determined to prove this by entering a baking competition that the school is holding. She is allowed to enter despite studying engineering (as it was open to the community). She is narrowly beaten to the winners post due to the rival’s superior knowledge in the kitchen. She is teased by the rival (mildly); and, instructed to become a mechanic or join the army. She decides to join the navy as a technician. She and the rival maintain their ‘mutual’ interest in each other (via friends and family). She has crewmates onboard that constantly want to see her female side. She already knows that the rival opened a cake shop in town (doing quite well, apparently). She then learns the rival wants to promote a production line of cakes using a competition. She is ribbed into competing by the crew but not by the friends (lack of confidence). She is hearted by the crew’s attempts to push her in the face of superior odds (their motto). She writes a letter to the rival asking if she can enter this competition ($5,000 prize). She is astonished to learn that rival will also compete (not announced previously). She is certain the rival is determined to prevent her from winning, yet again (crew now rattled). She is worried that the intervening years has made this rival’s skill legendary in the town. She spends the next three weeks in the hectic mess kitchen (off duty) to learn more about baking. She is visited by the crew but one there is overly concerned about her need to win (plot revealed). She is aware winning would be an impossible ask (previous attempts only moderate success). She and this special crewmate devise a recipe that can be worked on (his mother’s rum cake). She and her sister have been corresponding (learns that money could be useful to the family). She has her new ‘boyfriend’; bets on her from the crew; and, family and friends rooting for her. She writes a letter to someone (a close friend from high school) spelling out her fears. She is in this competition to prove she can compete in both worlds; but, fears how it’d affect her future as a woman and as a sailor (chef liked her style and found her handy in the kitchen - even promised to give her job if she wants to quite the engine room). How will the author proceed is what I’ll be looking forward too! Will she get her man? Is that college roommate more than a friend? Will she win? Sadly, we know the answer to that already. Will we be happy about it? We can’t expect her to win with against this rival. What will we get out of this defeat? She has her sights locked on to her target. Can we stick around and watch the kill? She vowed to return! The sequel: Operation Sea Biscuit! It's like a Rocky plot!

[@wiggleworm5423]

I can already tell this is going to help me a lot. Funny thing is before I started this video I was already writing down questions to ask myself.

[@marvalousmetanoia9139]

This was such a helpful and detailed video. Thank you for adding visuals. I really questioned the writing prompt but as you continued to explain, I became more intrigued. Great video👍

[@kathyf3656]

Very interesting video. I actually finished my outline yesterday. I did many of the steps you outlined without even knowing it. I'm definitely going to check out your other videos. Thanks for sharing.

[@elfsong713]

This is your most helpful video yet!

[@louroberts5215]

Great tutorial. This makes the process so much easier. Big kudos and thanks!

[@OsaTailska]

Thank you that was so useful !!!!!! 💛💛💛💛💛💛

[@AmericanActionReport]

Thanks, Ellen. I'll use your ideas in my next project. My current project is at the query letter stage. I can hardly wait until Wednesday and Friday. Great work.

[@dattatreyachakraborty8207]

This is gold, "thank you."

[@ASweetShortCake]

Thank you so much for this video! Every single plot I’ve come up with makes my main character seem like a bad person when that’s the opposite of what I want them to be seen as. She lives in a dystopia and people dislike her BECAUSE she’s a good person. Using this will make things more clear for me!

[@Amanda-dn4ld]

What did you do to become an editor? I’m curious what that process looks like.

[@TinciaReima]

Lol It reminds me of The greatest fantasy from The 50 shades of Grey: a fresh college student becoming an editor in her own Company! 😂😂😂😂

[@boredfangerrude]

Thanks! This is just what I needed! Now I can finally finish the first stage of writing a story. XD

[@KaichouClips]

Thanks for putting together such a great guide. Story structures have helped me so much when writing, but I've never come across such an efficient story building method. I'd forgotten just how much you can do by being methodical when writing, and I'll definitely be putting this into practice.

[@Katherine_The_Okay]

i just found your channel. it's almost midnight. i think i may be up until nearly dawn at this rate...

[@JoshuaWeirdo]

This was very helpful. I've watched four other videos on different KZbin channels, looking for this answer, and yours so far has the best advice I've found yet. Thank you.

[@shubhammathur1614]

I always needed a channel like yours! I'm good at writing, but couldn't come up with a structure every time I tried to write. I'll keep learning about that and more through time, and you, keep up the good work, girl!

[@diannewilliams1585]

Excellent breakdown of the process. Thanks Ellen!

[@akz7610]

WOW🥰 I'm super glad I stumbled upon your channel, Ellen! I'm about to be a 1st time author; my middle grade historical fiction is now at the line editing stage with a publisher in my country. Now that I've watched your video, I'm motivated to begin plotting my young adult sci-fi. THANK YOU!

[@lewis3853]

This was so good. It had my creative wheels just a turning in helping me think about how to elaborate and even make a better layout of my novel concept. With this instruction it feels like the novel will write itself (to a degree).

[@orsettomorbido]

I really love your videos! You're clear, competent and have experience and you show all that (and not just tell us XP) I do not have any idea about what to write, but i love to understand how we should write (and to edit my friends' work XD). Your videos are the best i've ever found in regard to that!

[@marg6844]

I've been stuck for years (both in life and with my writing, guess it goes hand in hand) and you made me remember the fun of it, what I really loved about writing stories. Thanks ❤️ Now, off to watch all your other videos!

[@Wirraweee]

You are a lifesaver! I really needed this video XD

[@Hadeshy]

FINALLY It's been ages that I try to work on my ideas to link them, and I was missing two major key points in the plots to start working on the different events. But by watching this I finally found one of those two key points who was basically right under my nose since the begining; the main character's motivation to get involved in the plot. I knew what was the two problems of his arc, what problems he would face because of them, I knew how the end would show his growth regarding his default, but at no point it occurred to me that this default could be the reason he started getting involved in the plot. I guess my brain was just dead because of my depression x) I just need to find how he would stumble on the plot now. That's the hardest part, but I feel like my ideas are clearer now that I don't feel anymore that I aren't going anywhere, so, thanks a lot.

[@TarotbyLayla]

That was amazing how you turned that 3 sentence idea into a STORY bravo!

[@atearsarahjane]

My first thought when I heard arch rival was ‘make it gay. Make it super gay’

[@coffeebreak5367]

Why do I relate to this? X,DDD

[@TheShapingSickness]

Name him DUMBASS like I did in all those Pokémon games.

[@ReiyukaE]

That was my thought too! Make it a nemesis-to-lover arc, let them be lesbian baking ex-sailors or something, I dunno.

[@carlmanvers5009]

@@ReiyukaE I will admit I was thinking exactly the same thing. Maybe it's something about the 'Woman Sailor Turned Baker" archetype that also screams "Lesbian". :)

[@torspedia]

Uh huh, sounds like a good idea for a yuri manga, lol.

[@aprilteesdale3146]

This was great advice, I needed this! Awesome vlog!

[@Sir.suspicious]

Amazing as always, you deserve a prize for such good content

[@chelseadelo3260]

I'd like to see you make a video doing this for different popular genres. A video for plotting horror, romance, crime thriller, fantasy, just to see the difference between them all. And to get a better idea of the process in general. This video on it's own was extremely helpful though! Sitting down as a new writer and trying to decide where to start can be overwhelming and make you want to give up. This gives you a plot for how to plot! lol

[@janie7488]

THIS IS SO HELPFUL!! by far the most helpful video I've seen, it's so weird, I feel like this process will work perfectly for me because i already do something similar, but this is more fleshed out. Thank you so much! Now on to your other videos lol!

[@emmawillis5138]

Haven’t even finished this video but I can already see how bloody clever it is. Your vids are awesome Ellen thank you 🙏🏻