Wow this actually helped me a lot. I have a news writing contest tomorrow and this helped a lot. Well.....thank you and wish me luck😊
@daneloiengerjuanr.purisima71674 жыл бұрын
Same
@peachyonomatopoiea4 жыл бұрын
Samee, mine's tomorrow as well! 💛
@prateekannam75954 жыл бұрын
How did you do?
@fredericocuerdo12055 жыл бұрын
Thank you mister ! It helps a lot ! Many people are learned in your video ! Keep going mister ! May the lord God bless you
@noelmayol24905 жыл бұрын
I'm a news journalist I watched this so I can know, BTW thanks 😊👍!
@johnnyragadoo24143 жыл бұрын
Nice advice. The old-schooler in me wants to point out the lead is actually the lede, but that looks confusing to the modern eye. - 30 -
@VelocityWriting3 жыл бұрын
I'm with you 100%. I'm torn every time I write it. We know that "lede" is the proper professional term today. However, when I use it, people criticize equally and insist it is "lead." You have to keep in mind that "lede" only came into the language in the 1970s and didn't show up in dictionaries until 2008. "Old school" is thus a relative term. www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/bury-the-lede-versus-lead Software like Word and other major writing tools still mark "lede" as a misspelled word. In recent years I have started referring to it as the "hook" because it defines the function of the first paragraph.
@stephen-zu7nl3 жыл бұрын
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@uwy61104 жыл бұрын
It's been a while since my last training and competition.Im competing so I'll watch this the information is very clear thanks
@VelocityWriting4 жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@drivhenaltre26373 жыл бұрын
Im actually a feature writer but my teacher needed me to write a news article for our school paper cuz she can't contact our news guy so this helped
@mastkwestani83876 жыл бұрын
You helped me so much I got 90% on my news letter report test
@mastkwestani83876 жыл бұрын
Thank u
@VelocityWriting6 жыл бұрын
Glad I was able to help!
@fadis9036 жыл бұрын
Great!!! Fingers crossed for me
@jaggergege77915 жыл бұрын
Thank you this will help me with my Historical investigation essay. Really appreciate you taking the time to do this video.
@lfdeftonesbae865 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the tips i love your explanation and voice and later will be my journalism contest
@rechelleraldpagulayan79825 жыл бұрын
Me to
@biancapuzon84433 жыл бұрын
Awesome video! My teacher recommended this video to me and I made the right choice of clicking it!
@MrKebry3 жыл бұрын
This man is great at explaining.
@ngunitv3 жыл бұрын
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@abdulmalekalem34553 жыл бұрын
The Bob Ross of English! Thank you kind sir for this video, as it helped me alot in my English Journalism Essay!
@nyachiangboldieu62993 жыл бұрын
Thank you ❤️ You have been of help to me
@anamiealfonso69634 жыл бұрын
thanks sir!..This is a good presentation that we are needing in class.
@CanCanElf165 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for creating this video! I'm working on my news writing skills.
@kristy27162 жыл бұрын
Great Job!!!! Really helped me with my assement! Thank you again, Sir!
@brandonliu7772 жыл бұрын
This was very helpful, thanks!
@VelocityWriting2 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it!
@franceslandicho51355 жыл бұрын
I am a News paper school journalist, I watched this video to improve my skills.
@VelocityWriting5 жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching. Journalism is an important career and I hope you pursue it.
@kimchi83613 жыл бұрын
thank you so much this helped me a lot especially while making my online class activities
@veronicagdowning2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for creating this video. I will show it to our incoming student writers this semester as we prepare for the Spring issue of our periodical.
@oofinggoofingflaming00fs925 жыл бұрын
Thank you sir, Needed this for my assignment.
@cesaraugustocavazzolajunio74383 жыл бұрын
Great job! Thank you so much!
@VelocityWriting3 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@fadis9036 жыл бұрын
Very useful for my upcoming Basic News Exam , 102 , scheduled for tomorrow. I got it simple and precised. Thank you!
@bluemoon3726 Жыл бұрын
Does the who? What? When? How can be written in different order and also after writing those, do I need to add a sentence
@roscoebarnesiii3989 Жыл бұрын
It depends on what's more important.
@mint_feather74465 жыл бұрын
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@deep_jaybabasahebstudio7546 жыл бұрын
tommorow is my viva about media Report Writing And I M Here.
@sbarr104 жыл бұрын
I was taught the 5 H's and the W in first grade. A timeless rule !
@itsthedanielshow41564 жыл бұрын
you mean the 5 W's and the H?
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I am lucky to find your video. It was short but meaningful. I took 4 pages note from your saying. Hahaha. Just as you said, your video is too: short but rich. Thank you.
@makuojinanwa5 жыл бұрын
Love your personality and I love this educational content.
@VelocityWriting5 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your encouraging words.
@ny_cruz3 жыл бұрын
I love your channel. It’s so helpful and informative. Thank you so much for sharing. ❤️
@vhannealcala81556 жыл бұрын
Hi may i ask a question why we cant use I in making a news report
@VelocityWriting6 жыл бұрын
Historically, news reporting has been objective. The news person did not inject themselves or their views into the story. News people reported facts and readers, listeners or viewers came to their own conclusions. The news person was the unbiased observer who just "reported" the facts of the situation, so there was never a reason for them to use the personal pronoun, "I." Sadly, this has changed in the last few years, and, as a former journalist, I think it is a bad thing. Objective reporting has been replaced by subjective commentary. Commentary on the news used to be relegated to the Editorial (Opinion) Page. No longer. Every reporter seems to be a pundit now, and that damages journalism. Reporters are not providing the facts for us to evaluate, they are feeding us their ideology and bias. Anytime the reporter (or the news agency) becomes the story, rather than reporting the story, then you have journalistic corruption in my view.
@jaggergege77915 жыл бұрын
"I" turns the report into a bias opinion or personal opinion on the subject you're writing about
@BOCETOMEDIA5 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this guide! You are the best!
@proahnaf6393 Жыл бұрын
it helped me very much in my exams! THANKS!
@rhobot753 жыл бұрын
Learning a lot, thank you!
@noahrigney5493 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this kind sir
@imanidlamini84996 жыл бұрын
Great explaining ☺ thank you Sir
@amrita62674 жыл бұрын
What do you write in the first paragraph to make it catchy
@VelocityWriting4 жыл бұрын
I offer some tips that apply to all writers (book authors and bloggers) here. velocitywriting.com/write-blog-posts-that-influence-people/#2_Your_Introduction
@akshitaagarkar29164 жыл бұрын
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@uzsid08806 жыл бұрын
thank you
@weeeams8315 жыл бұрын
Thanks, it helped me. 😁
@dizuko32412 жыл бұрын
May I ask if news writing is much better than editorial writing?
@VelocityWriting2 жыл бұрын
Better? Historically, they have been considered two completely different types of writing. News writing is an objective report. It provides the the "who, what, and when" of an event, and the reader draws his or her conclusions from these objective facts. Editorial writing is subjective, not objective. The writer is interpreting the news for the reader. The writer filters it though their own ideological lens. The writer is saying the reader in incapable of thinking independently, and most be told what to think. This approach has contributed to the sharp polarization of views in recent times. There is a place for news (the front page) and there is a place for opinion (the editorial page). However, when news and commentary are mixed, as we too often see today, it is nothing more than propaganda.
@dipuomalema955 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much
@ROCEMPOWERMENT6 жыл бұрын
great video thank you
@horacesiu Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the tips :D
@runbabyrun1203 Жыл бұрын
thanks for the information i am making a story report
@imdsaladondfreeza13012 жыл бұрын
thank you so much for this, sir.
@jennifersaraceno23086 жыл бұрын
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@ngengenancy33542 жыл бұрын
Can a shy/introverted person be a good journalist??
@VelocityWriting2 жыл бұрын
Being shy and introverted are not good characteristics for any job where you deal with people. And journalists always take the lead in engaging with people. Being shy and introverted is a learned behavior. Yet, in reality, It does not protect you from anything. I was shy until I was a teenager, but learned some communication skills. Later, I served as a journalist in 31 different countries interviewing maybe a thousand people over the years. You can and should unlearn your bad social skills. View YT videos on "How to start a conversation," practice those skills for three weeks with new people, and you'll have a new outlook on life. You can do it!
@ngengenancy33542 жыл бұрын
@@VelocityWriting Thank you very much
@thisisaprettylongname5 жыл бұрын
Are news story’s and newspaper 📰 report the same
@daniellahopkins79764 жыл бұрын
this helped thank u!
@LiveIt-YouRLife2 жыл бұрын
thank you very much for all the tips sir!
@VelocityWriting2 жыл бұрын
My pleasure!
@Islamosophia20245 жыл бұрын
You are amazing. Thank you.
@FilmNFire2 жыл бұрын
Great! Thanks!!
@ainamaesebarios23885 жыл бұрын
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@zachsastrillas60726 жыл бұрын
Thank You Sir .. It helps me a lot 😊
@venketrithvik91674 жыл бұрын
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@DuaneHHLyon4 жыл бұрын
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@qine65593 жыл бұрын
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@VelocityWriting3 жыл бұрын
I appreciate that.
@drbandanagaurav4 жыл бұрын
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@MsrMcTwisted4 жыл бұрын
Thank u this helped me with writing my essay for class
@VelocityWriting4 жыл бұрын
I'm happy I could be of service to you. Good luck!
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@chadmolligan54183 жыл бұрын
Thanks
@VelocityWriting3 жыл бұрын
I'm glad this was helpful to you and that you took a moment to say so. A word of thanks now and then is appreciated.
@aprilmauricio99756 жыл бұрын
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@ambertilley23684 жыл бұрын
Excellent!
@Doddydzia4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the tips and the explanation, it is help me to develop a news..salam hormat dari Indonesia
@womenwhorockwithsuccessmed25194 жыл бұрын
Great Tutorial
@VelocityWriting4 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@taniapriyam35296 жыл бұрын
Thank sir
@ohwoavwosemine65322 жыл бұрын
Thanks sir
@jeskvell32543 жыл бұрын
thank you so much, sir
@franpolyphemus44964 жыл бұрын
The angle you take in writing the article is influenced by your personal biases. For me, I don't think saying that news articles merely state the fact is entirely correct. Our biases must always tend towards the people and the common good.
@VelocityWriting4 жыл бұрын
Sorry, Fran, as a journalist in past years who covered stories in over 30 countries, I completely reject your perspective. I hope people who read what you said will reject it too. What you say is unethical in my experience. News is an objective, unbiased reporting of facts. Readers/viewers/listeners independently make up their mind based on the facts, not the tainted bias injected by a reporter. Opinion belongs on the Editorial Page, never the news page or newscast. Biased news reporting is just propaganda. Propaganda NEVER serves the common good.