How to Write a Scene

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Jacob Tyler Mowery

Jacob Tyler Mowery

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@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Get Practical Tools to Write Your Great Screenplay: www.practicalscreenwriting.com
@aashay
@aashay 4 жыл бұрын
Amazing video. I'd really love to get this book. Any chance, you have some coupons for these corona times? Dollars don't convert so well in developing countries. Thanks a lot.
@morningcoffee1111
@morningcoffee1111 4 жыл бұрын
Tyler Mowery is the book in .mobi format?
@ladymatrix8
@ladymatrix8 4 жыл бұрын
I purchased the book. But it has yet to make it to my email. I accidentally did a double purchase [trouble shooting] to see if I overlooked a step. Still have not received an ebook from the second attempt. So, there may be an issue somewhere. Tyler, would you please refund the second purchase and see to it that I get the first order for the ebook? Thanks! Hope I did not confuse you. LOL...
@mjolninja9358
@mjolninja9358 4 жыл бұрын
Asha same
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
@Asha It should've sent to your email! If you don't get it, contact support@practicalscreenwriting.com and I'll make sure you get it.
@bertdekunst4849
@bertdekunst4849 4 жыл бұрын
The questions: - what do the characters want? - what is the specific problem in the scène? What creates conflict? - what do the characters do to try to get what they want? - how does this scene change the overall story? - what are the goals of the characters in the story and in this scene particular?
@koldx111
@koldx111 4 жыл бұрын
How is "what do the characters want?" different from "what are the goals of the characters?". That just seems to over complicate things.
@bertdekunst4849
@bertdekunst4849 4 жыл бұрын
@@koldx111 Tyler mentioned both and what you say is right. But you could also see 'the goal' as what the character wants in the 'concious' sense, and 'the want' of the character is what he longs for on a subconcious level. I don't know, I'm not a writer nor I created this video.
@DarthDre
@DarthDre 4 жыл бұрын
@@koldx111 it's the difference between wants and needs of a character. A want isn't necessarily a need for a character, and when a want is opposite to a need, then you have something amazing to write about
@koldx111
@koldx111 4 жыл бұрын
@@DarthDre lol. Why are you talking about want vs need? We were talking about how the 2 questions are the same but just phrased differently. When you set a goal, that's usually a want. Oftentimes the character doesn't know their needs until later.
@DarthDre
@DarthDre 4 жыл бұрын
@@koldx111 the goal would be what the character needs
@jdog783
@jdog783 4 жыл бұрын
Reminds me of Trey Parker and Matt Stone (South Park)’s “Therefore/But” rule: Every scene should be linked to the next by either the word “therefore” (causation) or “but” (complication). Keeps the story simple, dramatic, and moving forward! Helps me a lot:)
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
I’ve seen that video! That’s a good tool for sure.
@GlaceonStudios
@GlaceonStudios 4 жыл бұрын
"So" would be a good abbreviation for "therefore."
@theversacelife5232
@theversacelife5232 4 жыл бұрын
Hey can you do a video about having two protagonists? I’ve never seen a video on it before and think it’d be helpful.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the suggestion! I’ll add it to the list
@theroom8989
@theroom8989 4 жыл бұрын
Also 2 villains
@atgtours
@atgtours 4 жыл бұрын
Doesn’t ‘The Departed’ show 2 protagonists?
@rogersjgregory
@rogersjgregory 4 жыл бұрын
Great idea. My story has two protagonists and two antagonists.
@carlosdaudt88
@carlosdaudt88 4 жыл бұрын
The Versace Life
@execheems
@execheems 4 жыл бұрын
Keep teaching us bro, I've actually started writing a story with the help of your videos!!!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it!
@MEDIAMANIACHUB
@MEDIAMANIACHUB 4 жыл бұрын
if need to learn screenwriting art to what even film schools don't teach ( in hindi /urdu) just visit #mediamaniachub on youtube
@BudsCartoon
@BudsCartoon Жыл бұрын
2 years later, how's that story coming???
@KingLlins
@KingLlins 3 ай бұрын
After 4 years, how is the story going 😊?
@duchi882
@duchi882 4 жыл бұрын
Your content is perfect while we're Isolated in our Homes
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Great to hear!
@subhasharma4425
@subhasharma4425 4 жыл бұрын
@@TylerMowery thank you
@thein-famouselguapo15
@thein-famouselguapo15 4 жыл бұрын
Often times a person might be great at what they do but they are lousy when it comes to teaching/ training. You Tyler have a gift, perfect explanations and examples. Thank you for all the great info you provide. It really does help.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks so much!
@eddiegonzalez6956
@eddiegonzalez6956 4 жыл бұрын
Agreed. it is very frustrating when a video, or class is promoted to be about covering some specific issue, only to have the lecturer take off on unrelated tangents,
@purenuggets
@purenuggets 4 жыл бұрын
Scene components : Desire Conflict Action Change
@gothochblandat8031
@gothochblandat8031 4 жыл бұрын
two of my feature scripts are moving forward with the hopes of selling and going into production in the fall. Im currently rewriting to send in my second draft to the producers. im SO nervous. so thankful for these videos as im looking through the scripts.
@Rohan.S.Patne.
@Rohan.S.Patne. 4 жыл бұрын
Best of Luck! :)
@BehindtheCurtain
@BehindtheCurtain 4 жыл бұрын
Good luck! That's awesome.
@Tedliftfilms
@Tedliftfilms 4 жыл бұрын
That’s incredible. Hope it pans out!
@raineharkins3872
@raineharkins3872 4 жыл бұрын
You have an uncanny ability to post the exact video I need.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Haha I do my best!
@cathykoziol9286
@cathykoziol9286 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the presentation. Really appreciate how well organized this discussion was on how to write a scene. Tyler seems more like an architect than a gardener in style.
@rossjennings8264
@rossjennings8264 4 жыл бұрын
Tyler, thanks for this video! Had there been times were I took a different POV from the books, especially one by Jill Chamberlain, your videos help and I’m up everyday learning new strategies! I have the idea of no budget film revolving around three characters. I’m obsessed about making it look cool, but it’s a learning curve and I have to take this step by step. We’re all students of curiosity, my brother! And more importantly looking at films that don’t involve VFX, only surround around character. Thank you again, still pushing and never stop until we all achieve where we want to be
@dear_cassandra9653
@dear_cassandra9653 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for sharing your gift. As an aspiring playwright, though it is different from screenwriting, you've helped me in so many ways in the craft of creating dynamic characters and putting my thoughts clearly on the page to tell a compelling story. I don't have access to these platforms in my country apart from the tube so please continue doing this for people like me. You're amazing and gonna go far. Cheers 🇬🇾
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad you’re being helped by the content! Ill definitely continue to make videos!
@cxxipm
@cxxipm 4 жыл бұрын
The editing skills is 👏🏼👏🏼
@rajivyadav4081
@rajivyadav4081 4 жыл бұрын
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@princessthyemis
@princessthyemis 4 жыл бұрын
This is SO HELPFUL! I'm outlining a new story but I've seemingly always struggled with making scenes GO somewhere, to have purpose! This is so concise and well-explained!!!!! Thank you!!!!!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
You’re welcome!!
@DanielleDeutschTV
@DanielleDeutschTV 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this! This explained screenwriting better than many of the other videos I've watched recently. I loved the beginning when you poked fun at different methods out there as a bad place to start at first. Awesome work!!
@autumngreenleaf3390
@autumngreenleaf3390 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. This is one of the best resources for beginning my screenplay which I will review once or twice more at least. This is one of the best ways I have spent 15 min and 43 seconds since learning how to write with all the footage I've been viewing.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad it’s been helpful!
@kayl3igh143
@kayl3igh143 4 жыл бұрын
I'm a 15 year old aspiring script/screenplay writer. I'm currently working on my first script, and so far I have ten pages done! I know it's not a lot, but I've had this idea for over a year so I'm excited to finally write it all out 😁
@tristynweber1223
@tristynweber1223 3 жыл бұрын
Same here! I've finished my first draft and have been binging this guy's videos.
@tfd_shad2494
@tfd_shad2494 4 жыл бұрын
I love your videos man. For a person like me who never plans to attend film school, people like you who take the time to create these concise conceptual visuals are a blessing. Thanks Homie. I wanted to challenge your idea on the SOC movie. When creating a biopic do you think there is room for leniency in that rule if the scene is an integral part of the characters life even if its not ideal for that particular screenplay? If my explanation needs more explaining let me know.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
I see what you’re saying. And that’s hard to say. I think it comes to asking “What is the goal of this story?” Also “who is this story about?” The more characters and plot lines you have in a 2 hr film, the more things can get confusing. So I get, as a cultural icon and within the history of rap, Snoop Dogg and Dre’s partnership was extremely influential. I think if I’m looking at Straight Outta Compton as a stand-alone story, Snoop Dogg as a character within that story isn’t necessary. Hopefully that makes sense.
@Chesschange
@Chesschange 4 жыл бұрын
I've been trying to get into the heads of my favorite Authors for months but end in vain. The biggest challenge was that I didn't know how they created their scenes perfectly to affect the story until now. Thanks. This gonna help my structures to run smoothly because I been getting stuck after writing a lot of unnecessary details. 👍👍👍
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it!
@ashwinkelly2523
@ashwinkelly2523 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you, this came at a perfect time! I’m writing a 60 second film currently, and you have single-handedly taught me how to write.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
High praise! Glad to have helped you!
@josephdocherty7919
@josephdocherty7919 4 жыл бұрын
60 second film? You must be a fan of Film Riot!
@ashwinkelly2523
@ashwinkelly2523 4 жыл бұрын
J Dob you caught me
@RandomSkyeRoses
@RandomSkyeRoses 4 жыл бұрын
@@ashwinkelly2523 what is your film about?
@jinks908
@jinks908 Жыл бұрын
Reminds me of Nolan when he said "If there's a problem in the third act, it means there's actually a problem in the first act."
@marciorobertomouradearaujo5883
@marciorobertomouradearaujo5883 4 жыл бұрын
After this video i've decided to rewrite a short film screenplay that i had made, and now i'm completely changing the story, in a way that i think it's making the story way more interesting. Thank you for your videos! Greetings from Brazil!
@Rocketscienceshorts
@Rocketscienceshorts 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you, Tyler! By the way, these are also amazing questions to help one connect the most powerful final cut in editing. Your instructions and directions go so much more deeper than just writing. As always...Thank you for being persistent in keeping this channel alive and moving.
@zooted6863
@zooted6863 4 жыл бұрын
I'm a simple man,I see 500 days of summer,I click. Great video btw!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@UG3DBoss-54
@UG3DBoss-54 Жыл бұрын
These were some really good points made in the way scenes are made, how they work in order to push the story forward.
@ComicPower
@ComicPower 3 жыл бұрын
Watching Tyler's videos feels like I'm attending film school remotely and dont have to move to New York, Florida or California to attend. Bravo.
@TheSalMaris
@TheSalMaris 4 жыл бұрын
Great content--simple questions that demand important answers. Love it.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear!
@hmusicvisions6554
@hmusicvisions6554 4 жыл бұрын
As someone who enjoys reading and has just thought of writing. Your videos are a Harvard Grade Course taught easily and effectively
@jbenvindo
@jbenvindo 4 жыл бұрын
Hahahahahaha I can’t believe! You used a Brazilian meme!! The woman at 0:49 is from a very famous Brazilian soap opera! Loved it!
@LARealEstate
@LARealEstate 3 жыл бұрын
Outstanding content. This is VERY helpful... watched it several times. Thanks!
@SONICADVENTURES11
@SONICADVENTURES11 4 жыл бұрын
Your videos are the only thing that’s making me sane.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad I’m holding things together!
@beerome840
@beerome840 4 жыл бұрын
I love how easy you made the info to retain!
@IlSH2
@IlSH2 4 жыл бұрын
I love these type of videos, they are very didatic and really encourage me to write down a a draft.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it!
@faisalalqaraghuli6101
@faisalalqaraghuli6101 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for all the hardwork you put into these videos, they really stand out and be helpful in their own way by understanding the writer too instead of just the writing.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you! Yea I think incorporating the writer’s mind is super important.
@faisalalqaraghuli6101
@faisalalqaraghuli6101 4 жыл бұрын
And you’re doing a damn great job at it. Keep it up UwU
@michaelnoronha7386
@michaelnoronha7386 4 жыл бұрын
Best viewed and heard till date. Thank you. Do elaborate with additional videos.
@stephmoyer3075
@stephmoyer3075 4 жыл бұрын
I have always struggled with storytelling! This video broke it down perfectly for me. Thank you so much!
@danielhamilton7429
@danielhamilton7429 4 жыл бұрын
Tyler I just wrote my first screenplay. I would love for you to read it and give me your feedback. If it wasn't for that "Blue Moon" script you wrote, I wouldn't have had the drive.
@saraskerritt9262
@saraskerritt9262 4 жыл бұрын
Well done and really helpful. The animations/clips were a nice touch in this one.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Leveling up these videos!
@saraskerritt9262
@saraskerritt9262 4 жыл бұрын
@@TylerMowery You're turning it to 11 for sure
@john-markwaddell2005
@john-markwaddell2005 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the lessons man, keep up the good work.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying them.
@RUSHMP4
@RUSHMP4 3 жыл бұрын
when I'm out of good movies to watch, I check one of this guy's video and at the end I have a list of good movies to watch
@BudsCartoon
@BudsCartoon Жыл бұрын
Glad this came up and that you pitted fiction vs non-fiction, NWA vs. No Country. Showing Snoop is something that they HAVE to show, an Easter Egg of sorts. Are you suggesting 1. Cut that studio scene? 2. Cut Snoop totally from the screenplay? 3. Leave the studio scene but cutting out prior Dre vs. Suge conflict scene? 4. Introducing Snoop in a different scene without the need for the redundant Dre vs. Suge conflict, possibly fictionalizing they way they met? 5. None of the above.
@ldhproductions112
@ldhproductions112 4 жыл бұрын
Honestly can’t wait to see what films you make.
@smepable
@smepable 4 жыл бұрын
Your videos are always a joy to watch, it is always so perfect, no second wasted, a good screenplay in itself.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your kind words!
@123leemur
@123leemur 3 жыл бұрын
1:18 That cartoon is me during this whole writing process
@AllThingsFilm1
@AllThingsFilm1 4 жыл бұрын
Excellent video. I wrote down these questions and considerations to keep handy when I start writing.
@Ayushman-lf3xc
@Ayushman-lf3xc 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks Tyler, it was really useful for me to get through the writer's block.
@Mattamillion-vk2pf
@Mattamillion-vk2pf 8 ай бұрын
Thank you though, I'm a screenwriter and this is 'very' helpful. Thank you, thank you!
@George-cx8ed
@George-cx8ed 4 жыл бұрын
Your content is so perfect and has actually inspired me to finish a few scripts so thank you! :)
@priyanshiupv
@priyanshiupv 4 жыл бұрын
Such a simple straight and great explanation. Thank you 😊
@pixxelwizzard
@pixxelwizzard 4 жыл бұрын
By the way, I'm a novel writer, not a screenplay writer, and I find all of your advice applies equally well in that field. Thanks for this series, really enjoying it.
@study5774
@study5774 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much ! it helps alot!
@glennripps1575
@glennripps1575 4 жыл бұрын
Another great lesson, and great examples to go with the lesson.
@mandieh4204
@mandieh4204 3 жыл бұрын
I am not a screen writer but I like to write novels (not published just an ameture) and I like this idea for writing scenes. I think this will work for me even though I only have a vague idea on where my story is going. Thanks.
@River_Frost
@River_Frost 4 жыл бұрын
I'm close to finishing my second script thanks to your help!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Great to hear!
@lunarmusichunter8920
@lunarmusichunter8920 4 жыл бұрын
I love this. Use simple tittle. Not clickbait like youtuber usually.
@yerabbit
@yerabbit 4 жыл бұрын
this is awesome, and timely. Also nice animations!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed the video!
@Petilombe
@Petilombe 4 жыл бұрын
My god this is so well done, I love your channel I love your videos I'm so thankful for this
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@Jan-kc2yk
@Jan-kc2yk 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for these great videos!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching them!
@UrbanRiotProductions
@UrbanRiotProductions 4 жыл бұрын
Another great video! Super helpful and exactly what I needed to get through my next script.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Awesome! Glad to hear it.
@nathanb5921
@nathanb5921 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks Tyler! So helpful!!! Keep 'em coming!
@gabeugenio
@gabeugenio 4 жыл бұрын
I love your channel, thanks for all the tips. Now in the quarantine, I have no excuse for not writing lol
@zack4407
@zack4407 4 жыл бұрын
Love this channel your videos always inspire me to start writing and to make sure the story works .
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it!
@swamybengaluru5230
@swamybengaluru5230 4 жыл бұрын
I loved it, thank u so much!! Right time I seen it coz am going to re-writing script today & co incidentally I watched it❤️❤️
@charlottedrcleary
@charlottedrcleary 4 жыл бұрын
Fantastic advice! Thanks so much, this really helps me ground my writing
@karoljaworskirichards
@karoljaworskirichards 4 жыл бұрын
Great stuff, mate! I just bought the ebook and I'm looking forward to seeing more content here.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@Maros_Mari
@Maros_Mari 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you. For those interested further there are great books on this such as McKee's Story, Save the Cat or Character's Archs. Worth reading.
@niamscookery3442
@niamscookery3442 4 жыл бұрын
Very good !
@Abby-ow1gk
@Abby-ow1gk 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much, this is probably the most clear explanation on this topic, great video 😊
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear! I hope it helpful
@marktaylor5671
@marktaylor5671 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the video. You explained the process very well.
@bradweiergallery
@bradweiergallery 4 жыл бұрын
THIS IS PERFECT! thanks for simplifying this!
@reelscreenwriting8940
@reelscreenwriting8940 4 жыл бұрын
Awesome, that ebook looks interesting, gonna give it a look.
@OutstandingScreenplays
@OutstandingScreenplays 4 жыл бұрын
Amazing video! I just did a video on how to write a great opening scene, so I think a great scene should have suspense, conflict and stakes, mystery and should open a lot of questions, so the audience will be intrigued to watch the next scene.
@mikegoggins9350
@mikegoggins9350 4 жыл бұрын
It also needs to have dramatic irony
@remymargaux1233
@remymargaux1233 4 жыл бұрын
When Red goes to find the letter in the shawshank redemption there's no conflict. Yet its a good scene
@EndesCot
@EndesCot 4 жыл бұрын
Hey Tyler! Superb video! Special note to the editing, it just gets better and better. There's a question I have about the ebook: What does this ebook mean in relation to your Screenwriting course? I've considered taking the course since it came out but I've never had the spare money to enroll. Is this book some form of introduction to the course...? Is it complimentary, a summary, or completely new advice? Given the price difference I will surely get the book but I was wondering what would that mean for my long standing consideration of the course.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Sure! So the eBook focuses on what problems current writers face and what your real problems are as a writer. I talk about a better way to view story and writing stories. The Course goes into detail on building a new writing process, overcoming writers block and procrastination and building long term habits, as well as a systematic rewriting plan that helps you find and fix story problems. And it gives you a community of writers to keep you focused and accountable. The eBook essentially covers a new philosophy on looking at writing, while the course gives you a practical detailed plan to implement this new system into your life and writing.
@humanambassador
@humanambassador 4 жыл бұрын
this video hit the spot very good excellent sir
@laurahealy2163
@laurahealy2163 3 жыл бұрын
oh, boy...now I'm a little bit ticked off, just a little...because Mr. Mowrey, your work is all I need to put the icing on the cake. however, I went out and bought an Amazon Kindle Fire just for your book. I know you have just launched a PODCAST called The Writer's Mind. I'm sure that would be extremely valuable except I have completed my undergraduate work and done 1 out of 2 years of Master's level work. I read and write at a Ph.D. level. I am not boasting. I am blessed to have a Mom who believed in teaching Reading- and my fraternal twin sister and I were the first ones' who experienced the awesome benefits of her teaching us to read. Practical Screenwriting: Cutting Through the Noise and Focusing on What Matters by Tyler Mowery isn't available on Kindle anymore? That's not cool, man.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 3 жыл бұрын
Hey Laura, it was never available on Kindle. And I didn't advertise it as such. I always sold it as a PDF on my website. I don't know where you might have saw an Amazon Kindle listing, but if there ever was in was made by someone who wasn't me. You can find the PDF at: www.practicalscreenwriting.com/ebook
@laurahealy2163
@laurahealy2163 3 жыл бұрын
@@TylerMowery It's in the KZbin.com video that I am replying to: Look at 00:01 of the video: you will see Tyler Mowery - Practical Screenwriting: etc., etc. on a "Kindle".
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 3 жыл бұрын
It can be viewed on Kindle. But it is a PDF. I was showing different devices it could be used on to show it was a digital download, not a physical book.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 3 жыл бұрын
I am showing that it can be read on digital devices and that it isn't a physical book. Not that you should go out and buy a Kindle to read it. But you still can read it on the kindle if you'd like.
@laurahealy2163
@laurahealy2163 3 жыл бұрын
@@TylerMowery It's alright. I went to your sight, bought the .pdf, had it delivered to my e-mail on the "Kindle Fire" and opened it in "Kindle". Kudos to you for the prompt update!
@unknownclothing8840
@unknownclothing8840 4 жыл бұрын
After watching this, I would LOVE to see you do a breakdown and get your opinion on “The Hangover”
@aqdassyed6572
@aqdassyed6572 2 жыл бұрын
Thankyou for this , very well explained!👏♥️ , Please i would like to request to include some elements of psychology related to emotions so that it could suits it in screenwriting!
@ponzgamer8303
@ponzgamer8303 4 жыл бұрын
Very useful... Great video.. thank you bro
@incyder
@incyder 3 жыл бұрын
Great information. I really liked the video. Another key element is pacing. You, Tyler, should learn to pause and let your viewers digest what you've just showed them.
@burnpoet
@burnpoet 4 жыл бұрын
Great content Tyler! Keep it up!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@olumuyiwalafe7768
@olumuyiwalafe7768 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this concise info, much appreciated.
@AA-kd4kd
@AA-kd4kd 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for these videos. ♥️
@raphaelmotta7630
@raphaelmotta7630 4 жыл бұрын
This was crazy helpfull. I'm trying to write a dialogue driven short film, and I was having trouble figuring some things out, specialy the want or goal for the characters.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it!
@orlandosilverwolf4449
@orlandosilverwolf4449 4 жыл бұрын
Spot on Dude. Really helped me 👍🏼
@LinguaSerbia
@LinguaSerbia 3 жыл бұрын
Maybe a bit confusing at the second part but I learnt a lot from this video. Thank you
@Udhbhavana
@Udhbhavana 4 жыл бұрын
Nice work. Keep it up.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@maayanon1247
@maayanon1247 4 жыл бұрын
You're Under Rated.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@litobeatz639
@litobeatz639 4 жыл бұрын
Agreed
@Lactosefr33
@Lactosefr33 3 жыл бұрын
this is an excellent, and perfectly summarized video, that helped me look better at the scene I was having troubles with. Thank you so much.
@batnick4433
@batnick4433 4 жыл бұрын
The justice league scene just made me think more that the Nando V movies scene rewrite where the characters share their fears makes the scene so much better.
@Paytonwh
@Paytonwh 4 жыл бұрын
This is great! But I sometimes have the problem of coming up with a goal/ want for my character that is rather arbitrary just because I feel like I need to answer that question for myself, and I realize it only after I've analyzed the scene that the goal wasn't coming from the an true need of the character but rather my need as a writer to get to the next step. How can I know when what I came up with is arbitrary and what can I do to get to a real honest character want/goal? Maybe this is being more clear on what the story is about, maybe discuss some ways to gain clarity on that? Either way I love your videos keep it up!
@seoz774
@seoz774 3 жыл бұрын
Establish what you'd like their want/goal to be - depending on the nature of the character and what you'd think is interesting. Then, ask yourself what decisions your characters would make as a consequence of these goals/traits. If you feel that the character is merely a pawn trying to fit your grand narrative - then their goal becomes obsolete. This means your story will go in directions you hadn't anticipated: but that's a sign that you're letting it unfold naturally, taking it in potentially more interesting and organic directions.
@JoacoCarnero
@JoacoCarnero 4 жыл бұрын
You should translate your videos mate! They were helping me a lot!
@averagealisha8227
@averagealisha8227 4 жыл бұрын
Something I'm confused about (regarding conflict) is what if it's a love scene? A scene where two characters realize their emotions towards each other? I'm failing to see the conflict there. Does that make the story boring? What if a scene shows the growth of the characters' relationship with each other, but it doesn't have a conflict?
@tomlewis4748
@tomlewis4748 Жыл бұрын
Then it does have change, which is a major goal. The conflict in a love scene is not necessarily between the two lovers. They will have slightly different outlooks, which does imply a challenge, yet not necessarily a conflict or an obstacle. But that does imply tension (which is the point of having conflict in a story) just as much as conflict does. The conflict in a courtship love story, in the early stages as well as the commitment stages, is more about the risk: Jack wants to be with Parker, but there is the risk that she will reject him, for instance. That's a value at stake of happiness versus psychological death. We've all been there, and all readers or viewers can identify with this. The reader wants to see how they face and solve these problems, from the safety of not being at risk themselves. So it's there, but a love story is not like an action story or a thriller, where the value at stake is life versus death, so it is not as high-tension. What it can be, is more naturally emotional than most other genres, and something universally identified with. My suggestion is to do what you can with the courtship challenges, but add other challenges or conflicts, such as a rival character, society or the workplace frowning on fraternization (Navy SEALs can lose their Tridents over an affair with the wrong person, for instance), the lovers being forced apart and only later can reunite, and (or) have secondary genre arcs parallel with the love story arc that have their own conflicts, some of which may influence the conflict in the love story (for instance, if a mob has a hit out on one of the lovers, that person being harmed or killed would have a devastating effect on the courtship). A love story has many conventions that will make it strong and legit. There are helper and harmer characters. There are secrets. Rituals. Things that force the lovers apart or force them together before they bond with each other. There is the progression from puppy-love 'happy-land' scenes to scenes based on commitment and fear of commitment. It can have a very solid arc if written well. It facilitates lots of change in the characters and how they relate to each other over time. Maybe shy on day one, maybe completely at ease on day one hundred. a courtship love story (or commitment love story) is much more about the journey than the destination. The climax is always, predictably, 'will they-won't they', and we typically know the answer to that early on. It is not like a thriller or a performance story where everything builds to a climax scene where life versus death or professional success versus failure is the value at stake. It has its own set of advantages over other genres. But the best advice is to add secondary genre arcs that can beef up the story, secondary genre scenes that can inform the change in the love story scenes.
@NINA.t.r
@NINA.t.r 2 ай бұрын
Your videos are super helpful
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 2 ай бұрын
Glad you think so!
@john.m.shukites
@john.m.shukites 4 жыл бұрын
If you get an opportunity, I would love to see a video on writing the first scene. Please and thank you!
@stefanbendik26
@stefanbendik26 4 жыл бұрын
That was one of my favorite moments in Justice Legaue
@Ruylopez778
@Ruylopez778 4 жыл бұрын
I'm wondering about non-linear plots or subplots in terms of flowing or leading into the scene before or the scene after (e.g. Reservoir Dogs, 2046). Is it OK for things to feel a little disjointed or confusing for the audience, because they realise it's not chronological? Or are they just prepared to wait until they start to piece the answers together? And a what stage in the movie should the audience be able to start putting things together? Or are these kind of movies actually following the same rules but I just don't see them?
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
A completely confused audience will be bored. Even in films like Reservoir Dogs there is still clarity and cause/effect. I would also say as a writer you should start writing clear cause and effect before moving onto something like Rdogs. Because you can’t see your mistakes as easily in a nonlinear plot. Which is harmful to the new writer.
@Ruylopez778
@Ruylopez778 4 жыл бұрын
@@TylerMowery Thanks, Tyler. In my case, the subplot is backstory and non-linear, and not confusing per se, because different events happen in different specific cities, but I'm concerned that it might not flow very well yet, switching from subplot to main plot. I feel it's jumping around too much. The opening scene basically orientates the audience to the rough order of the backstory in terms of time period/place. I'll definitely use the rewrite questions for each scene, and see if I can tighten things up or cut some out.
@migueldelgadillo4097
@migueldelgadillo4097 4 жыл бұрын
@@Ruylopez778 you can definitely make the story non linear (so long as it serves the story and not undermines it). For clarity, each plot thread should have a distinct desire.
@Ruylopez778
@Ruylopez778 4 жыл бұрын
@@migueldelgadillo4097 Thanks. To me the tricky part is, I don't want to jump around and seem contrived - which is my concern about having a nice flow from scene to scene. It will also be obvious which scenes are present day, and which scenes are in the past, by how they are framed. So I don't think the audience will be too confused and by the midpoint it should be making total sense, even though they don't have all the details. Actually the main want of the character in the back story is the opposite of his want in the main plot. I suppose that is the point.
@thoreboomgaarden6189
@thoreboomgaarden6189 4 жыл бұрын
Would you say it's okay to have a technically unnecessary scene if the film is a comedy and the scene is really really short but really funny?
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Sure. But too many and they will begin to bog down the story.
@EvaMallekoote
@EvaMallekoote 4 жыл бұрын
Hey Tyler, your videos are a great help! Do you think you could maybe do a video on writing for a series/tv show?
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