How To Write Good Scripts // Gacha Life Tutorial

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ElizaLotion

ElizaLotion

Күн бұрын

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↠ If you're looking for some good tips (or are bored out of your mind and have nothing better to do) this is the video for you! I have written some scripts and will show you how I write them in this video!
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Want to read an entire GLMM script? Here's the script to "My Own Story"
docs.google.co...
And here's the video to "My Own Story"
• My Own Story | GLM | [...
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❄️Time taken❄️
⏰ ↠ four days
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❄️Apps used❄️
↠ Gacha Life
↠ Kinemaster
↠ IbisPaintX
↠ Google Docs (I even scripted the video lol)
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If you have any questions or things you want to tell me, please tell me in the comments! As for now I hope you enjoyed the video. If you did, don't forget to like and subscribe. I wish you all a beautiful day and I will see you all in the next video!
☁️❄️Byeee❄️☁️

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@elizalotion2783
@elizalotion2783 4 жыл бұрын
❄️ Welcome to the comments section ❄️ ☁️Timestamps☁️ 0:00 Intro 0:43 Programs 1:06 Set A and B 2:00 Locations 2:33 Dialogue 2:48 Watch me write 5:44 Style 6:17 Writing is Art 6:36 Outro And oof, can we please just ignore how long I was talking about punctuation?? I know you all don't care about it at all, I'm just a HUGE grammar nerd - especially in English since learning a second language requires a lot of grammar studying. And yes, I will not shut up about it and I will never forget to mention it! English is my second language. Nobody cares, I know! Haha, I enjoyed writing that way too much. Who knew commenting on your own videos was so relaxing?✨
@popingshortcake3530
@popingshortcake3530 4 жыл бұрын
💙💙
@elizalotion2783
@elizalotion2783 4 жыл бұрын
Yeah, people learn their first language differently. I'm horrible at german grammar😂💞
@ayoimsam
@ayoimsam 4 жыл бұрын
I can relate _😔_
@AnnoyingCyan
@AnnoyingCyan 4 жыл бұрын
My first language was vietnamese, but now I don't know much vietnamese. I know alot of english tho 😅 (ik no-ones cares ;-;)
@lunarblues8805
@lunarblues8805 4 жыл бұрын
Hehe it’s alright English was my second language as well 😅
@kierwi_arts8846
@kierwi_arts8846 4 жыл бұрын
*_Wow, I’m featured an a famous Gacha Tuber’s tutorial!_*
@elizalotion2783
@elizalotion2783 4 жыл бұрын
Are you enjoying your time in the spotlight, Miss Fruitbowl?❤️🥝✨
@miraalkukhun9735
@miraalkukhun9735 4 жыл бұрын
@Ruiqi He same
@Sakuranbo-Chan
@Sakuranbo-Chan 4 жыл бұрын
Ur famous yourself u have over 1K
@thetwins1446
@thetwins1446 4 жыл бұрын
Wow so lucky:0
@weeaboo901
@weeaboo901 4 жыл бұрын
:O
@caya8638
@caya8638 4 жыл бұрын
Everyone: following the tutorial Me: jamming in the background music
@charedits333
@charedits333 4 жыл бұрын
SAME, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IT'S CALLED
@charedits333
@charedits333 4 жыл бұрын
@Who ?? Who knows, I'll try that 😂
@charedits333
@charedits333 4 жыл бұрын
I tried I can't find it, but thanks for the idea!
@caya8638
@caya8638 4 жыл бұрын
@DerpKawaii omg ty!
@milquecloud9616
@milquecloud9616 4 жыл бұрын
DerpKawaii THANK YOU SO MUCH SHGEHEJJSVEJSHSBE I HAVE BEEN LOKKING FOR THIS SINCE FOREVER SJEJAJDBDHR
@kitt4939
@kitt4939 4 жыл бұрын
*i, an intellectual, uses Microsoft word*
@itsdaelis2554
@itsdaelis2554 4 жыл бұрын
iiDinq me tooo!
@itsdaelis2554
@itsdaelis2554 4 жыл бұрын
・iBearrTzu・ Huh? What do you mean?
@aubelina
@aubelina 4 жыл бұрын
😌👌✨
@madmax2338
@madmax2338 4 жыл бұрын
@・Milkyy boo・ What do you mean?
@sunlitviolet
@sunlitviolet 4 жыл бұрын
・Milkyy boo・ I use my school membership lol
@megxmoonx
@megxmoonx 4 жыл бұрын
Although I’m in the middle of writing my script, I’ll still watch the video and use these tips 😏
@elizalotion2783
@elizalotion2783 4 жыл бұрын
It's a pleasure to maybe waste your time😏❤️🚽✨
@moowri6580
@moowri6580 4 жыл бұрын
Megsstuff Ik you may not car,e but you are the first comment!! :3
@user-hh4zd6bj7f
@user-hh4zd6bj7f 4 жыл бұрын
s i l v i s h /slushie if it was me I would be so proud 😂 because I’m never early
@moowri6580
@moowri6580 4 жыл бұрын
Daydream :3 same lmao 😂
@megxmoonx
@megxmoonx 4 жыл бұрын
Ruiqi He oop-🤭
@GachaMovieInc
@GachaMovieInc 4 жыл бұрын
Friend: Do you know ElizaLotion Me: *Is she selling lotion products.*
@ashley-zz8gb
@ashley-zz8gb 4 жыл бұрын
Umm.. Is that supposed to be a joke or a insult of her name?
@kushiiiarts..6614
@kushiiiarts..6614 4 жыл бұрын
@@ashley-zz8gb a *joke*
@ashley-zz8gb
@ashley-zz8gb 4 жыл бұрын
@@kushiiiarts..6614 oh OK 👍
@mysenpaiissquidward5798
@mysenpaiissquidward5798 4 жыл бұрын
Diba pilipino ka
@prescious_amethyst6687
@prescious_amethyst6687 4 жыл бұрын
lol
@bones4odie
@bones4odie 4 жыл бұрын
I’m about a week late but I have a tip- When a character moves/does a specific action you should write the movement in _italics_ or *bold* (I use italics) Example: Person A: You’re so needy and pathetic. I’m way better than you. Person B: And what do you have that I don’t? Person A: Looks, Popularity, Parents who aren’t dead. _Person B slaps Person A_ Person B: Don’t you DARE talk about my parents like that ever again. (Sorry if it’s bad, it’s all I could think of -w-)
@rairinirin
@rairinirin 4 жыл бұрын
Oh.. I just write what they're doing : Person A ran towards person B, feeling exited. So much that they didn't realize that they were about to fall. Person A bump into person B, making person B Fall forward- head planted into the floor. "Oops, sorry m8-" person A says, but interrupted by person B "WHAT THE FREEECC" person B shouted. Wait I sound cRiNgY-
@t.rocks22392
@t.rocks22392 4 жыл бұрын
ii_Ririya ._.G ur storyline is good but it might get confusing to understand the movements in ur plot
@insertnamehere4833
@insertnamehere4833 4 жыл бұрын
@@rairinirin I do like: Person A started to run towards to Person B. When Person B realized, Person B: Oh God what are you doing! I know this looks messy but it is how I understand the plot better 🤷🏼‍♀️
@rairinirin
@rairinirin 4 жыл бұрын
@@t.rocks22392 yea your right I should write like I'm not making a fanfic or something lmfao
@cocobutterpuffs4312
@cocobutterpuffs4312 4 жыл бұрын
*she moves to the left avoiding the hit* I don’t have italic I used to
@Poochypeach
@Poochypeach 4 жыл бұрын
I write the scripts in my head- (that's why my stories sucks-)
@lonelylie1710
@lonelylie1710 4 жыл бұрын
omg sAme
@iamgonnagocryagain1401
@iamgonnagocryagain1401 4 жыл бұрын
YES
@ivantilllz
@ivantilllz 4 жыл бұрын
same!
@natalie6754
@natalie6754 4 жыл бұрын
Lol I used to do that and now I write scripts
@The7thPurpleCrayon
@The7thPurpleCrayon 4 жыл бұрын
@@natalie6754 same
@yattzz69
@yattzz69 4 жыл бұрын
this was so relaxing to watch and i don’t know why
@The7thPurpleCrayon
@The7thPurpleCrayon 4 жыл бұрын
same
@xitx_nat07x77
@xitx_nat07x77 3 жыл бұрын
Finally a gacha tuber who writes scripts most gacha tubers just think of a story and the start taking screenshots right away this is excatly why you make the best stories! :)
@justtocean2094
@justtocean2094 4 жыл бұрын
wait like i actually needed this
@elmosworld6579
@elmosworld6579 4 жыл бұрын
Just saying, you should’ve said don’t write at night. Personally, whenever I write a script at 3AM it turns out cringey and with bad grammar. If I wrote it at 3PM it would make sense and have good grammar. Then again, I commented this at 3AM.
@silentcookie3339
@silentcookie3339 4 жыл бұрын
Well I am opposite to you I am good story writer at night
@elmosworld6579
@elmosworld6579 4 жыл бұрын
Silent Cookie Okay
@nikagoesoffline5675
@nikagoesoffline5675 4 жыл бұрын
@@silentcookie3339 Same same
@_n0ell3_
@_n0ell3_ 4 жыл бұрын
Well i have no motivation in morning and at night i magically have motivation
@charedits333
@charedits333 4 жыл бұрын
"Then again, I'm commenting this at 3AM" 🤣
@Jess-yt3tn
@Jess-yt3tn 4 жыл бұрын
This is how l write a "script":Have a day dream about an original ldea and then go to gacha life and say... Wait a sec what was it about again. But thank you for the tips....to be honest l didn't know you had to write it first bc lm still a beginner 💞😅😑
@lovve_buzz
@lovve_buzz 4 жыл бұрын
All my best ideas come at night and in the shower
@Jess-yt3tn
@Jess-yt3tn 4 жыл бұрын
@@lovve_buzz Omg same!!!😂😂😂
@nia.da.coconut8048
@nia.da.coconut8048 4 жыл бұрын
omg mood
@iaintedgy1984
@iaintedgy1984 4 жыл бұрын
My ideas will pop out if I'm bored lol
@gutzxy3972
@gutzxy3972 4 жыл бұрын
You don’t have to write it it’s a good idea though
@missiingno
@missiingno 4 жыл бұрын
Hamilton has done this to me. Whenever I hear the name Eliza, my brain just starts singing: I know my sister like I know my own mind You will never find anyone as trusting or as kind And a million years ago she said to me 'this one's mine' So I stood by Do you know why? I love my sister more than anything in this life I will choose her happiness over mine every time *ELIZAAAAA*
@elizalotion2783
@elizalotion2783 4 жыл бұрын
She's the best thing in our lives - So never lose sight of the fact that you have been blessed with the best wife!
@missiingno
@missiingno 4 жыл бұрын
@ElizaLotion Congratulations For the rest of your life Every sacrifice you make is for my sister Give her the best life Congratulations
@missiingno
@missiingno 4 жыл бұрын
@ElizaLotion Also, thank you so much for the heart! ♥️
@yuginoku6592
@yuginoku6592 4 жыл бұрын
I thought i was the only one xD
@saphieliqhts5792
@saphieliqhts5792 4 жыл бұрын
Best Lotion brands ever.
@livvy_lynne
@livvy_lynne 4 жыл бұрын
This is so helpful! You’re great at explaining, and this helped me with some ideas for my own mini movie! Thank you for all the tips, Eliza! Have a lovely day/night, and see you on the next post! 🌸🐝✨
@elizalotion2783
@elizalotion2783 4 жыл бұрын
I'm glad I could help! Thanks, Olive💞✨
@ysanvz
@ysanvz 4 жыл бұрын
I've deleted atleast 5 whole GLMM's & still can't think of one. So I'm glad I found this 😌👑
@l3monqidcpkes270
@l3monqidcpkes270 4 жыл бұрын
Me after just watching Hamilton and looking at the script she made in the desc: WhY dO yoU tyPe LiKe yoUr rUnnIng oUttA tIme?!?
@elizalotion2783
@elizalotion2783 4 жыл бұрын
tYpE dAy aNd NiGht LikE i'M rUnNinG oUt oF TimE
@luvadria
@luvadria 4 жыл бұрын
I love how your character’s facial expressions aren’t extra, you have great tips (these also apply to acting too, when making a script! I guess I know this because I’m a theatre kid.) I love your character design, you have great grammar, no bright colors, and overall, you’re a great Gachatuber. It’s very nice to see the community become way more mature! I might come back to the community. c:
@imbrynnfeeney3024
@imbrynnfeeney3024 4 жыл бұрын
I didn’t know someone so famous would take the time to be helpful thank you! 💖💖💖💖💖💖
@sillychuu
@sillychuu 4 жыл бұрын
Me, trying to sleep at three am: *gets a good idea* _grabs phone to write idea_ *writes* Me: right it looks good, perfect grammar! Me at 10am the next day: huh? Tf did I write?
@thesmartv6431
@thesmartv6431 4 жыл бұрын
If you are writing fantasy glmms, sometimes it’s nessecary to write massive info dumps to set the rules for the world. I’m writing a fantasy glmm myself so I write the rules for the world first that way things are set and if I change anything it won’t cross information said previously.
@thesmartv6431
@thesmartv6431 4 жыл бұрын
Although I’m probably gonna wait till gacha life 2 is out because it’ll probably have more fantasy like backgrounds
@zombii-kenji
@zombii-kenji 2 күн бұрын
@@thesmartv6431 How we doing with hGacha Life 2 chat.
@lucidrii1490
@lucidrii1490 4 жыл бұрын
"Try to avoid info dumps." Me : *nervously sweating*
@draculauraxox
@draculauraxox 2 жыл бұрын
As a writer, I often turn my short stories into extended mini movies. It helps me finish my story, and also gives me a glmm idea! :D
@glitzicurities9075
@glitzicurities9075 4 жыл бұрын
"Try to avoid infodumping" Logan and Remus: *unfuse in background * Awww, dangit.
@fizzarats
@fizzarats 3 жыл бұрын
R.I.P Remus' and logan's fusion chance 2021
@glitzicurities9075
@glitzicurities9075 3 жыл бұрын
@@fizzarats XD finally, someone understands :D
@fizzarats
@fizzarats 3 жыл бұрын
@@glitzicurities9075 :D
@aestheticapple3715
@aestheticapple3715 4 жыл бұрын
Can we just talk about how PERFECT your grammar is Like, seriously I don't think i've ever seen a gachatuber with this perfect grammar
@Daisy12
@Daisy12 4 жыл бұрын
Eliza: where does one write docs? Me: oh- I just write them as I go...... is that not allowed.....?
@talluladyerdoyle1946
@talluladyerdoyle1946 4 жыл бұрын
same :(
@Chrryc0la
@Chrryc0la 4 жыл бұрын
You can! But it is definitely harder to come up with things on the spot and it can tend to get a little messy (in my experience)
@Kuroomiii.
@Kuroomiii. 4 жыл бұрын
@@Chrryc0la i can come up with a whole story line and plot on the spot qwq
@defonotkay
@defonotkay 3 жыл бұрын
Same
@honeybunchstudios
@honeybunchstudios 4 жыл бұрын
I remember a few months ago when I read the script in the desc, and it's always been on docs for me cuz I just never delete it! Watching this like 4 months later I think realizing I finally found the creator!
@Sarah-wu7ki
@Sarah-wu7ki 4 жыл бұрын
This was so helpful, as I’m about to start a new GLS
@clxudyelle646
@clxudyelle646 4 жыл бұрын
I have been looking for a video like this for months!! It was super helpful and exactly what I was looking for! :D
@yayayayayya4595
@yayayayayya4595 4 жыл бұрын
*when you’re that one person that doesn’t write a script and just make your video as you go and you end up watching this* ;-;
@briebrooks9561
@briebrooks9561 4 жыл бұрын
But then you don't end up using them 😂😅
@prettyprince7711
@prettyprince7711 3 жыл бұрын
Aaaaaa I remember watching this a few months back, from where I was starting my first GCMM and I must say, I’m not sure if it could’ve been any better without watching this video. SCRIPTS ARE VERY IMPORTANT
@だいすき-x9m
@だいすき-x9m 4 жыл бұрын
when i first saw the title I was like: ''gASp'' I nEEd tHiS'' Because I'm working on a GLMM r and I don't have any more ideas or what my oc has to say next oop- btw, Thank you so much!
@teraspeXt
@teraspeXt 4 жыл бұрын
Oh my god same- that's literally the reason why most of my series were cancelled
@だいすき-x9m
@だいすき-x9m 4 жыл бұрын
ATS Gaming 😂
@jesseanimatess
@jesseanimatess 4 жыл бұрын
I usually just think of the theme of the video and just write whatever is on my mind (no script just instantly write on the speech bubble) then figure out what expression is best suited for the line, so I never really need these tips, but i enjoy watching how others plan their videos, and yours is probably the best ones i've seen so far, keep up the good work! -Sincerely, a fellow gachatuber :3
@Nyxwasleftout
@Nyxwasleftout 3 жыл бұрын
I just thought of a coffee shop story but its in the middle of the night.
@imbob5106
@imbob5106 4 жыл бұрын
I dont know whats better, the fact that i paused the video at exactly 4:20 at random or the fact that i was just about to make up a random storyboard just so that i could do this
@syelserene
@syelserene 4 жыл бұрын
I’m on my phone- I don’t have a computer to use for google docs (other than my school one) so I use the notes app qwq
@aviebodabie
@aviebodabie 4 жыл бұрын
Pages is also free to download and is easy to use if you have an iphone :)
@The7thPurpleCrayon
@The7thPurpleCrayon 4 жыл бұрын
@•Cherry Creamz• true
@hyunjinsgf.143
@hyunjinsgf.143 4 жыл бұрын
same
@Backrooms.fan11
@Backrooms.fan11 Жыл бұрын
Same lol
@ItzBloomingBlossom
@ItzBloomingBlossom Жыл бұрын
@yukichi6746 it really doesn't matter... U can use the app in which ure comfortable with...
@PeachyHeartOC
@PeachyHeartOC 9 күн бұрын
writing line by line vs the start and ending first idea reminds me of frame-to-frame animation vs in-between animation, the first is better for when you DON'T know what's happening next and the second one is better for when there's a clear thing that is meant to happen in the scene
@PrashantBopte568
@PrashantBopte568 4 жыл бұрын
ElizaLotion: And It's good for phone users if you don't have a PC Me: *you know that it's CANCER when you write a script on your phone*
@elizalotion2783
@elizalotion2783 4 жыл бұрын
But ... but we love pain in the Gacha community
@ilariaercolani179
@ilariaercolani179 3 жыл бұрын
I think that write a script on the phone is too much pain...
@lunapage535
@lunapage535 4 жыл бұрын
I was just thinking about doing a glmm and then I was like. Wait. I have no idea how to write a script. THIS WAS PERFECT. THANK YOU
@MIRACULOUSL4DYBUGG
@MIRACULOUSL4DYBUGG 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for helping me with dis ;)
@ph0en1xfyr39
@ph0en1xfyr39 4 жыл бұрын
Wow I didnt know you had yo put this much detail into the scripts, I have just been thinking of scripts then using them! Thanks for the tips!!
@rrrgsd1
@rrrgsd1 4 жыл бұрын
I have a really original glmm idea ;w; im working on it rn and i hope it will go viral
@elizalotion2783
@elizalotion2783 4 жыл бұрын
I'm sure it will! Hard work pays off❤️
@rrrgsd1
@rrrgsd1 4 жыл бұрын
@@elizalotion2783 uwu ty
@miamx
@miamx 4 жыл бұрын
oo ill watch it when it comes out!! :D
@rrrgsd1
@rrrgsd1 4 жыл бұрын
•pink lilac• it came out now xd
@miamx
@miamx 4 жыл бұрын
@@rrrgsd1 TIEM TO WATCHHH
@nendorii
@nendorii 3 жыл бұрын
im watching every how to write a good script so i can get better at them 🤩 plus sometimes my school just gives me homework to write a script or a story and i always need help with those
@jupiter3251
@jupiter3251 4 жыл бұрын
**sending this to my friend writing a script for me on repeat**
@foreverlazaruss
@foreverlazaruss 4 жыл бұрын
I decided to write down all the tips in this video (took a while) and now i am going to use them when ever I will make a GLMM or a GLS. So, thank you so much these will help me so much!
@astarlight.among._.purple3752
@astarlight.among._.purple3752 4 жыл бұрын
Other gacha tubers: *Having scripts* Me: NaW nO sCrIpT sAlLy I jUsT gO oFf a wIm aNd cHoOsE wHaT tHeY gOnNa sAy aS tHe sCeNe iS hApPeNiNg
@dalooshhh
@dalooshhh 4 жыл бұрын
And that's how Hated Child Becomes a princess was born :> (but honestly relatable)
@just_gabrielle9351
@just_gabrielle9351 4 жыл бұрын
I just created my KZbin account recently and have been planning my GLMM for 3 days. All I finished was the main characters' looks, a rough idea of what will happen, and my intro. *Then I see the time it took for you to write the script for "My Own Story"* 4 DAYS!!! WHAT?!
@irestarted54
@irestarted54 4 жыл бұрын
I, the biggest noob, use notes. ah yes, n o t e s.
@charedits333
@charedits333 4 жыл бұрын
"Sunny's Stuff" 🤣
@pleaseenteraname4059
@pleaseenteraname4059 4 жыл бұрын
same for me its the most easiest
@kxleii6631
@kxleii6631 4 жыл бұрын
I could've sworn I asked you to make a tutorial on how to make scripts.. Tysm for this! I really needed this
@yoongles22
@yoongles22 4 жыл бұрын
*Grammarly has joined the chat*
@cosmoi5771
@cosmoi5771 4 жыл бұрын
it also helps to color code them! for each character, choose a color. it helps organize everything and also adds a bit more color into your script!
@avathegachaqueen7241
@avathegachaqueen7241 4 жыл бұрын
Is this a good story?: Mean Hybrid Aliens Nerdy Babysitter DINO SARA TENKO is arguing with Weird Life Guard HOTTY JASON DANTé. SARA tries to hug JASON but he shakes her off. SARA Please Jason, don't leave me. JASON I'm sorry Sara, but I'm looking for somebody a bit more brave. Somebody who faces her fears head on, instead of running away. SARA I am such a person! JASON frowns. JASON I'm sorry, Sara. I just don't feel excited by this relationship anymore. JASON leaves. SARA sits down, looking defeated. Moments later, Cute Librarian CAT SKYE PANERA barges in looking flustered. SARA Goodness, Skye! Is everything okay? SKYE I'm afraid not. SARA What is it? Don't keep me in suspense... SKYE It's ... a Hybrid Alien ... I saw an evil Hybrid Alien Hypnotize a bunch of Nurses! SARA Defenseless Nurses? SKYE Yes, defenseless Nurses! SARA Bloomin' heck, Skye! We've got to do something. SKYE I agree, but I wouldn't know where to start. SARA You can start by telling me where this happened. SKYE I was... SKYE fans herself and begins to wheeze. SARA Focus Skye, focus! Where did it happen? SKYE LA! That's right - LA! SARA springs up and begins to run. SARA rushes along the street, followed by SKYE. They take a short cut through some back gardens, jumping fences along the way. SARA, closely followed by SKYE, rushes towards PETER, but suddenly stops in her tracks. SKYE What is it? What's the matter? SARA That's not just any old Hybrid Alien, that's Peter Stevenson! SKYE Who's Peter Stevenson? SARA Who's Peter Stevenson? Who's Peter Stevenson? Only the most Mean Hybrid Aliens in the universe! SKYE Blinkin' knickers, Sara! We're going to need some help if we're going to stop the most Mean Hybrid Aliens in the universe! SARA I'm going to need a Gun, lots of Guns. Peter turns and sees Sara and Skye. He grins an evil grin. PETER Sara Tenko, we meet again. SKYE You've met? SARA Yes. It was a long, long time ago... BACK IN TIME A young SARA is sitting in a park listening to some Pop music, when suddenly a dark shadow casts over her. She looks up and sees PETER. She takes off her headphones. PETER Would you like some Fruit Roll Ups? SARA I don't know, you look kind of Mean. PETER Me? No. I'm not Mean. I'm the least Mean Hybrid Alien in the world! SARA Wait, you're a Hybrid Alien? SARA runs away, screaming. PRESENT DAY PETER You were a coward then, and you are a coward now. SKYE (To SARA) You ran away? SARA (To SKYE) I was a young child. What was I supposed to do? SARA turns to PETER. SARA I may have run away from you then, but I won't run away this time! SARA runs away. She turns back and shouts. SARA I mean, I am running away, but I'll be back - with a Gun. PETER I'm not scared of you. SARA You should be. LATER THAT DAY SARA I feel sure I left my Gun somewhere around here. SKYE Are you sure? It does seem like an odd place to keep deadly Guns.. SARA You know nothing Skye Panera. SKYE We've been searching for ages. I really don't think they're here. Suddenly, PETER appears, holding a pair of Guns. PETER Looking for something? SKYE Crikey, Sara, he's got your Guns! SARA Tell me something I don't already know! SKYE The earth's circumference at the equator is about 40,075 km. SARA I know that already! SKYE You’re afraid of your powers. PETER (appalled) Dude! While PETER is looking at SKYE with disgust, SARA lunges forward and grabs her deadly Gun. She wields them, triumphantly. SARA Prepare to die, you Mean Celery! PETER No please! All I did was Hypnotize a bunch of Nurses! JASON enters, unseen by any of the others. SARA I cannot tolerate that kind of behaviour! Those Nurses were defenceless! Well now they have a defender - and that's me! Sara Tenko defender of innocent Nurses. PETER Don't hurt me! Please! SARA Give me one good reason why I shouldn't use these Gun on you right away! PETER Because Sara, I am your father. SARA looks stunned for a few moments, but then collects herself. SARA No you're not! PETER Ah well, it had to be worth a try. PETER tries to grab the Gun but SARA dodges out of the way. SARA Who's the daddy now? Huh? Huh? SKYE Did he just faint? SARA I think so. Well that's disappointing. I was rather hoping for a more dramatic conclusion, involving my deadly Gun. SARA crouches over PETER's body. SKYE Be careful, Sara. It could be a trick. SARA No, it's not a trick. It appears that... It would seem... Peter Stevenson is dead! SARA What? SARA Yes, it appears that I scared him to death. SKYE claps her hands. SKYE So your Gun did save the day, after all. JASON Is it true? Did you kill the Hybrid Alien? SARA Jason how long have you been here...? JASON Long enough. SARA Then you saw it for yourself. I killed Peter Stevenson. JASON Then the Nurses are safe? SARA It does seem that way! A crowd of vulnerable Nurses enter, looking relived. JASON You are their hero. The Nurses bow to SARA. SARA There is no need to bow to me. I seek no worship. The knowledge that Peter Stevenson will never Hypnotize Nurses ever again, is enough for me. JASON You are humble as well as brave! One of the Nurses passes SARA a Possessed Jewel JASON I think they want you to have it, as a symbol of their gratitude. SARA I couldn't possibly.. well, if you insist..! SARA takes the Jewel. SARA Thank you. The Nurses bow their heads once more, and leave. SARA Does this mean you want me back? JASON Oh, Sara, of course I want you back! SARA Well you can't have me. JASON WHAT? SARA You had no faith in me. You had to see my scare a Hybrid Aliens to death before you would believe in me. I don't want a boyfriend like that. JASON But... SARA Please leave. I want to spend time with the one person who stayed with me through thick and thin - my best friend, Skye. JASON But... SKYE You heard the lady. Now be off with you. Skidaddle! Shoo! JASON Sara? SARA I'm sorry Jason, but I think you should skidaddle. SKYE Did you mean that? You know ... that I'm your best friend? SARA Of course you are! SKYE By the way, When I said You’re afraid of your powers, you know I was just trying to distract the Hybrid Alien don't you? THE END
@iheart15zai
@iheart15zai 4 жыл бұрын
That is *beautiful*
@V_entrem
@V_entrem 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for making this! I always struggle with writing scripts and this really helps! :>
@st4r336
@st4r336 4 жыл бұрын
Is it just me or I’m to lazy to write the script? Eeee ;-;
@Joisuakajxisu
@Joisuakajxisu 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this video! I already know how to write scripts, but this is helpful since I get to learn even more things about writing scripts and to improve them!
@ruthvika.k
@ruthvika.k 4 жыл бұрын
OMG thank ALOT Btw im just a beginner in gacha
@plutononplanet6683
@plutononplanet6683 4 жыл бұрын
I actually thought that gacha tubers didn't write any scripts or any scenes,then I thought that wouldn't make sense and right when I was thinking about it,I found about you!I want to be a gacha tuber,and by watching some videos with tips I want to make sure my videos ain't that cringe or embarrassing.... you're sooooo great,nice vid!❤️
@justtocean2094
@justtocean2094 4 жыл бұрын
is notes on your phone good for this?
@elizalotion2783
@elizalotion2783 4 жыл бұрын
You can use them, but other than google docs or word, notes wasn't made for longer texts. Nothing can stop you from doing what you want though✨
@justtocean2094
@justtocean2094 4 жыл бұрын
thank you!
@Lov3.peyton
@Lov3.peyton 3 жыл бұрын
This was extremely helpful and I think you should make a part two with a few more tips! Thank you for the help and info.
@vals_stars4225
@vals_stars4225 3 жыл бұрын
you probably won’t see this, but how many words is a script of yours for an over 20 minute glmm/gcmm?
@elizalotion2783
@elizalotion2783 3 жыл бұрын
I did read this, but I have no idea ... depends on how many flashbacks I include
@rholmseth1977
@rholmseth1977 3 жыл бұрын
thank you so much for this! i was planning on making a mini movie but I have never made one before. So I searched up 'hiw to create scripts for gacha' and I found this. Nothing coukd help more then this!
@aikoaurora7172
@aikoaurora7172 4 жыл бұрын
WHO ELSE HAS BEEN WAITING FOR SOMEONE TO MAKE THIS EXACT VIDEO?!?!?!?!
@crystalblush8344
@crystalblush8344 4 жыл бұрын
I read the script for "My Own Story" and it was really amazing! The story is great and you can see all the thought and effort that was put into it. :)
@rosymapleleia
@rosymapleleia 4 жыл бұрын
I didn’t realize how helpful making a script could be until now-
@infestedcanteens
@infestedcanteens 4 жыл бұрын
Though I have a school computer and I'm subbed there, I still watch this video MILLIONS of times to get my movies right. I had to cancel one because of how KineMaster was lagging and deleting my screenshots on my video project. And I finally gave up and started working on more videos, BUT I am still working on the script! Thanks for making this clear with examples.
@cameliaboeye
@cameliaboeye 4 жыл бұрын
omagad u teach me more about scripts than the school/teachers does :O u actually desserve way more likes!
@khing4415
@khing4415 4 жыл бұрын
THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT PEOPLE NEED, NOT FASHION TRICKS! (Well, some people DO need fashion tricks but it doesn't really matter)
@jasdork
@jasdork 4 жыл бұрын
oh gosh... THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm making a voice acted series and this helped so much! I've improved writing my script and it looked and sounded better than before♡
@smyleemylee
@smyleemylee 4 жыл бұрын
Here's another tip I find useful. (It might not be useful for you, but it is for me.) After you finish making the script, go into gacha life to create the script then go into your editing software to put the stuff together like a normal glmm. Then, after you finish the next scene, put it into a seperate project and later, add all of them together. (If this makes any sense.)
@kawaii_toonz8977
@kawaii_toonz8977 4 жыл бұрын
I don't write my ideas down, but instead write notes about the idea for the future, and so that I don't forget. You don't have to write the entire script down, just a better tip. My ideas come up when i'm bored, or if it's 3am, so I typically don't need to write it down. Great video, though!
@duck3746
@duck3746 4 жыл бұрын
You don’t know how long I’ve waited for someone to make a video on this topic lmao
@sahooelectricandinteriors5876
@sahooelectricandinteriors5876 4 жыл бұрын
This is in my tutorial playlist now. Its amazing, like I love literature too, and I completely understand how you simply can't stop the grammar lecture; even I, while writing stories, write a bit too much and not- needed content. So congratulations, my Arts teacher, you get a sub.
@maiya5560
@maiya5560 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this. These kind if original tutorials are very rare to find
@elizabeth23lh
@elizabeth23lh 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks! I am working on different parts of a story, it has to do with horror, and ofc horror has a problem and solution! :D
@stariilight4643
@stariilight4643 4 жыл бұрын
This really helps me a lot. I was planning to do a glmm and i somehow saw this. So i watch it it really helps me a lot ! Its so helpful for gachatuber's like me. Im so thankful you made a tutorial about it. I really appreciate it!
@elayneisbetterthanyou823
@elayneisbetterthanyou823 4 жыл бұрын
This helped me SO MUCH! Thanks for helping us!
@jss_sucks
@jss_sucks 4 жыл бұрын
You know, I came here to learn good tips on how to write scripts, and man these are really good and deep tips, but I'm really surprised with the last tip, I didn't knew I could write a script on my own way, I always thought there was a right way on how to write scripts, but now I know, thank you for this, it really helps ^^
@xxmaomi_gachaplayzxxgachal4700
@xxmaomi_gachaplayzxxgachal4700 4 жыл бұрын
THIS GACHATUBER DESERVES MORE SUBS! THX FOR THE ADVICE! IT REALLY HELPED ME!!! (I watched till the end)
@hyunjinsgf.143
@hyunjinsgf.143 4 жыл бұрын
So my older gacha videos i’d write long long scripts with many pointless scenes so this helps quite a lot! Since I’m trying to improve with a series that I’m planning atm and gonna write the script for once the characters are all set!
@saccharinn1220
@saccharinn1220 4 жыл бұрын
Dude this is so helpful I didn’t use it for a glmm or Gcmm I used it for my comic this is so helpful outside of the Gacha community
@yfny8539
@yfny8539 4 жыл бұрын
'writing is an art' woah well said it rlly changed my mind 🎨
@teehee1108
@teehee1108 4 жыл бұрын
The amount of detail you put into it made it easier for me to understand! Thank you!;)
@kawffeekream3168
@kawffeekream3168 4 жыл бұрын
Finally, someone made a tutorial! Thank you so much. I struggle with making a series and I can't write great scripts because I've never done much. Let's hope my series and GLMM's look better now! 😊😄💫✨
@qtaisuu
@qtaisuu 4 жыл бұрын
This one girl made a 3 HOUR gacha movie and it's really good! the plot is lovely. Her series is is witch academy go check it out if you're into fantasies!
@notactive88
@notactive88 4 жыл бұрын
Yep this is original! Thank you so so much! This was really helpful! (It's the only script thing I found lol) have a fantastic day!
@chxrri-gachavids
@chxrri-gachavids 4 жыл бұрын
Omg, this was so helpful! Me as a writer will find this tutorial really helpful. Thank you SO MUCH! Love you!
@cassidyz6383
@cassidyz6383 4 жыл бұрын
The way you type is really satisfying to watch I don't know why though
@Leah__Bee
@Leah__Bee 4 жыл бұрын
Not only do I use them for screaming or shouting, but I use exclamation marks when they are very exited too. Like “I’m going to the amusement park for the first time tomorrow!” They aren’t shouting but they are very exited ^^
@ohkay275
@ohkay275 4 жыл бұрын
Found your channel yesterday night and watched "My Own Story" and loved it! I really hope you gain more subs!
@empressaphrodite8132
@empressaphrodite8132 4 жыл бұрын
Finally, some is talking about the scrips behind the glm’s!
@ViralFunnyVideosVFV
@ViralFunnyVideosVFV 4 жыл бұрын
i was going to give up on the story i was writing but this gave me more motivation thank you so much^^
@rosesxnoi
@rosesxnoi 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you for these tips! I’m gonna make my script for my GCMM now! :D
@kewloquiet2653
@kewloquiet2653 4 жыл бұрын
The tutorial was so useful. I’m writing a mini movie so I needed this. Thank you so much!
@bionloops8727
@bionloops8727 2 жыл бұрын
At first i didn't understand but when you wrote it yourself that made me understand you're so clever and creative thank you!!❤️
@snowywinterwishes5663
@snowywinterwishes5663 4 жыл бұрын
Wow! Thank you, I’ve been looking for a video on tips for writing a script, for a while now. This really helps!
@RenRoll
@RenRoll 3 жыл бұрын
Even though I’ve seen this video before, it’s good to look back
@gabrelle-io6wn
@gabrelle-io6wn 4 жыл бұрын
I watched a whole 2 min ad about air conditioners and it's so worth watching
@raekai4254
@raekai4254 4 жыл бұрын
Oml, you are my SAVIOR! I'm only good at writing scripts when it comes to school so thank you sO much!
@shumaine2292
@shumaine2292 4 жыл бұрын
Everybody adds like, ‘potato’..’lazy’...’itz’...but you add LOTION 😂
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