I use internal rhymes to enable me to come up with or create punchlines- they work wonderful! it makes it easier to build on a punchline rather than to force them. thank you! it also enables me to become skilled with lyrical content as well by broadening my vocabulary. - it's amazing! I had to take away profane words to accomplish this but it is well worth it!
@songwritingplanet6 жыл бұрын
That sounds great Dabaryam!
@lorbri42345 жыл бұрын
I be working on my passions, I have a lot of fashion, I be running fast like I'm dashing, look at my chips, I mashed it.(PERIOD)
@songwritingplanet4 жыл бұрын
Lor Bri, great lyrics!
@Keepit100Dre8 жыл бұрын
That first internal rhyme was spicy like Mayonnaise
@songwritingplanet7 жыл бұрын
Cool, glad you liked it Diandre! Kevin
@Abreviews48572 жыл бұрын
Mayonnaise isn't spicy you dumb f*ck
@pnry_76414 жыл бұрын
helps me making my POEM(stands for my lyrics) for a project making for own song
@songwritingplanet3 жыл бұрын
Yes, that's the way!
@renegademax4 жыл бұрын
Wonderful instruction and very informative. Thank you.
@songwritingplanet3 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@ThatOneGuy-gb7td4 жыл бұрын
So I do abstract poetry. Or I just started. It helps when I feel sad and it’s a way to cope “To be buried in breasts, to take a rest, and then request, that I object, the world’s aspect, of child neglect, which intersect, life’s effect, misdirect, intellect, seeing interject, with respect, disinfect, then recollect, the dialect, aftereffect, but don’t reject, the neglect, that reflect, the incorrect, left unchecked.”
@songwritingplanet4 жыл бұрын
Yes! Writing and studying poetry is really helpful for lyricists.
@LittForever3 жыл бұрын
niceee
@youtubergames70928 жыл бұрын
thx it helped me for my homework!
@songwritingplanet8 жыл бұрын
That is great, I'm glad you found it helpful!
@joshyt6848 жыл бұрын
Well i have to im s kid this not my page nd i need help nd waiting for it to load
@artofvalor93964 жыл бұрын
Man I needs some rhymes to make some dimes and get this train a goin'. Clear my path and take my cash, damn ima sure be glowing. Looking forward to getting my new career started. See y'all around 💯✌️
@songwritingplanet3 жыл бұрын
Your rhymes are sounding great, keep them coming!
@ReisNove93 жыл бұрын
Thanks
@songwritingplanet3 жыл бұрын
Glad you liked it!
@Allusyy2 жыл бұрын
"so" "open" "growing" are internal rhymes there
@fmblasso16642 жыл бұрын
I use internal rhymes throughout most of my songs
@tyler.bro._88427 жыл бұрын
I want to be a future rapper so thx for the help
@songwritingplanet4 жыл бұрын
Yes, good rappers use these concepts all the time!
@fj25724 жыл бұрын
Cool upload more
@songwritingplanet3 жыл бұрын
Thanks Fjae, more are coming!
@user-qz4en6co9f7 жыл бұрын
thx
@songwritingplanet4 жыл бұрын
Glad you liked it
@mcallstar74 жыл бұрын
What it be an internal rhyme if it's not on the same part of each line
@songwritingplanet4 жыл бұрын
Yes, an Internal rhymes can either be within the same line, or somewhere in the middle of different lines.