How To Write The Perfect GCSE Essay For Q3 Of English Language Paper 1 Exam With Just TWO Paragraphs

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Thanks miss, will watch again for paper 2. Hopefully ill do well on this paper. GL

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Hi Babara can you pls try post-like words to describe each character in A Christmas Carol or An inspector calls

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The extract was about hyenas, the creative writing part was a picture on zoo / wildlife park

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Aren't we supposed to do start middle and end?

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question 5: For descriptive writing it asked about something to do with the 'zoo and wildlife suggested by this picture of a zoo.' For story it just said about a 'human meet an animal'. Source A: It was 'The life of Pi by Yann Martel' Year 2001 For question 4: It asked to what extent do you agree on 'The hyena was being funny, not being frightened so the hyena wasn't a serious threat after all' on line 20--end For question 3, asked about structure about the source. For questions 2, it asked on 'how the does the writer use language on line 10--19.' For questions 1, it asked to 'list 4 things about the source on line 1-6'.

[@teutawhyman3974]

Very thorough explanation. However, isn't it the second paragraph more on language analyse instead of structure? The analyse of the word 'silence', I would say, fits more with Q2 Language device. Towards the end though, you are mentioning circular structure.

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Miss you haven't zoomed in would that still be 8/8 marks for this response?

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its a structure question and zooming in on a specific word is language, if you meant zooming in as a structural device then no it is not required to get full marks

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Zooming in and doing word-level analysis is LANGUAGE. You do that in question 2, not 3.

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@@FirstRateTutors Aren't we supposed to do start middle and end?

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Good day Miss Barbara Njau, I have a question regarding the AQA GCSE History Paper 2 exam tomorrow. One of the topics I will be assessed on is Britain Health and The People. You have made a video on this topic roughly 3 years ago (kzbin.info/www/bejne/enKZaZ-wfLWenck) yet it is still very valuable and helpful for this year's exams as of 2023. In the video, references to doctors and scholars from arabia are given and I wish to ask, do I use the Latin name for those people such as Johannitus or the Arabic name such as Hunan ibn Ishaq? Both do not pose any problem in revision but potentially losing priceless marks for pointless reasons is unwise. To prevent such a prudent and pompous mishap I ask you to provide me out of kindness a brief response please. Thankk you for all your help btw

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i have my yr 10 mocks for the next two weeks , i was wondering for english language when you get an article do you still plan out for 10 min or do you just get into the question? Also for Macbeth do you include context in 1a) because for A Christmas Carol i seen some of your model essays and you include context for 1a)

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You should always plan but I would only suggest for around 5 minutes. For Macbeth, you always want to include context e.g. women in the jacobean time, chain of being and the divine right of kings, king James 1 etc

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For all Macbeth and An Christmas Carol it's important to add context u can use PEACE for example P - Point E - Evidence A - Analyse C - Context E - Effects

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when the question tells you to focus on the beginning middle and end, dont you have to do 3 peel paragraphs because it the questions tells us to look at whole source or do we need to just focus on the shift from beginning to end?

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you should make vids about q5 because it's 50% of the paper; that it was most people are worried about

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Already did: kzbin.info/www/bejne/d6DThIKigad3hc0

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Can you please do question 5?

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she did

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@@IsraYussuf-w7r 😂 i am sweating in my room trying to write faster.

[@henrywilliams614]

The exam went well, I have one question, I confused the actions of one character with another ,for example in the text about life of pi I accidentally wrote the boy commuted instead of the hyena, what happens in terms of the marking

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but please miss can you go through q4 because i get confuesd them

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she did

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Already did: kzbin.info/www/bejne/jZOsipdpntJjhMU

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