How To Write The Perfect Chapter

Hello everyone! In this video I attempt to discuss two main techniques using The Promised Neverland's Chapter 3 to help you write your opening chapters!
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0:00 Introduction
1:59 Recap
6:56 How To Make Your Chapter's Interesting
9:28 The Revelation
17:35 The Unexpected Moment
25:26 The Combination
31:51 The Perfect Chapter

[@user-nm4pq4kc3u]

As an aspiring (comic/ manga) writer, this is one of the best videos about comic specific storytelling I’ve ever seen. Wonderful example and break down. Thank you!

[@sdpad1899]

Wow!!! Thank you for the amazing comment! I hope to make some more just like : D

[@homertonbloor8294]

The goat, to someone who’s never engaged in manga content before his certainly has me hooked. Much better editing than so many KZbinrs I’ve seen online delving into other topics.

[@sdpad1899]

Wow that's the highest praise!!!! Thanks so much!!!! Yeah slowly improving my editing hahaha going to try and make more videos like this :D

[@schocoman3000]

Absolutely agree…! Very helpful on top of that..! :)

[@sdpad1899]

@@schocoman3000 thanks so much!!!

[@kevinkeniry6291]

Great editing on this one man! Really enjoyed the last segment of the vid, the perfect chapter is the one that turns casual viewer into fans. :)

[@sdpad1899]

Thanks so much!!! I love that comment! Hahaha

[@PoisonSwampRS]

The return of the king

[@sdpad1899]

Thanka You Besto Friendo!

[@phillipcontreras720]

Nice. that's good advice for all writing types this breakdown of unexpected moments and revelations not drawing on too long and not becoming too formulaic and expected. I'll keep that in mind.

[@sdpad1899]

Thanks for watching! :D

[@Jasul_]

Video came up in my feed and impressed with the quality from a small channel, keep up the good work!

[@sdpad1899]

Thanks so much I glad you liked it! Hopefully more content on the way :D

[@Czar_Art_]

Bro I read it last weekend and I wasn’t thought it had so much effort in the story and I wanted to stop collecting it but I’ll see the price for the box set!

[@sdpad1899]

Yeah I should really buy the boxset in the future! There are some arcs that are a little slow but there are some really great moments in it :D

[@gutsherrfaunkev158]

great manga deconstruction. i hope you continue with this kind of videos.

[@sdpad1899]

Thanks so much! Yeah I've got loads more ideas for videos :D

[@Abilovesbooks]

New subscriber here! Your videos are so helpful! Do you have any advice for someone who wants to create a manga but can't personally do the art? I'm a writer, but I can't draw very well.

[@sdpad1899]

@@Abilovesbooks I’m glad I could help! Yeah I also can’t draw and use illustrators haha, that’s a great idea for a video! I’ll add that to the list :D

[@Abilovesbooks]

@@sdpad1899 Thanks for responding!

[@user-bk8er1pw8k]

This got me to read the manga and i don't even read manga.

[@sdpad1899]

Wow that's awesome to hear! It's got some great moments in it! :D