How to write the perfect piece of descriptive writing

[@H3N6Y60]

This video really helped me thank you... Exam is tomorrow wish me luck!

[@matthewoneill1836]

what grade you get

[@severoseverin3193]

At least mine is tomorrow FYI ts 25th here Mach 2019

[@Aryan-fd9yv]

@@severoseverin3193 Even mine is tomorrow by the way it is 26th March 2019

[@zimflame2368]

@@Aryan-fd9yv did u pass

[@Aryan-fd9yv]

@@zimflame2368 yeah I did, thanks

[@TeeDhirav32]

The problem is me finding the right word and right langauge technique in terms of writing

[@antisocialbarbie1587]

Same

[@taz4530]

Same

[@aleeja1993]

Sameeee

[@yashbhatt4029]

READ!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just READ!

[@MrDerpinati]

as far-fetched as this seems, after watching this video, my descriptive skills improved nearly instantly (as well as reading other examples and failing many times prior to watching this), so thank you very much!

[@dritisgowda7445]

i think this is the best descriptive writing ive ever seen. its really beautiful

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Thank you, that's so lovely to hear. I hope the video has helped

[@dritisgowda7445]

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit yes indeed

[@LiyahMoore-yp2hi]

Hi I’m Milan and I’m about to do my year 4 test 😊

[@footballvids8968]

Thanks mate, I have an IGCSE tomorrow and this really helped!

[@aaaaarushdabhade4534]

same brotha

[@princesstravelsx]

Who else is here for homework ? 👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾

[@WangaRay317]

so stressed

[@leahjebbeh2836]

meeee😭

[@scrubby9364]

Me im in set 8

[@botshelefenya6435]

Meee 😭

[@moaadbenrajab3856]

me

[@yasimt02]

Jesus, that story took a turn

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

But did you like it? Has it helped you to understand how to improve your own writing?

[@yasimt02]

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit Hahaha yep, I was just kidding, it definitely helped. I watched the video while cramming for an English test (which was in the IGCSE format) and I did noticeably better in regards to the quality of my writing (and have generally been having an easier time with writing), thanks :)

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

That's great to hear. Feel free to share with others

[@Great_WesternTVFan]

I love English, both language and literature, and this is one of my favourite parts of english

[@arjunandra9611]

Isnt the sample piece a little too much on the narrative side?

[@RJ-ns2ti]

+Arjun Andra It may seem so, but it is not. This is because even though he is, in a way, narrating an incident, it is filled with detailed descriptions of all five senses (except taste of course).

[@kyllakshanahilan4044]

I have to write a huge essay fighting with many year groups, this video helps a lot

[@ninael2695]

Thank you for your very useful video. Please could make more videos about questions 5 in paper 1 and paper 2 with some examples.

[@levelup9273]

when you just realize that your exams are next month and you just begin googling shit randomly

[@AshleyChimombe]

Trueeeeee

[@MOQKD]

Wow that's so accurate

[@Socialrenaissance]

thank you for the videos, they are very helpful and easy to understand, I really appreciate it!

[@jessemcauliffe362]

Incredible. Thanks a million. I'm sorted. And great story.

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Glad it helped. Feel free to share with others

[@hannahrh5355]

Wow, thanks! This really helped me.

[@aimee4927]

I'm sitting here the night before my end of year 9 English test and I'm stressing lol

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Don't panic, just remember what you have to include and execute 😁

[@aimee4927]

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit Thanks, just finished the video and it has helped me a lot!

[@marshamcguire7586]

This was excellent and your accent and voice are very helpful.

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Glad you like it. Feel free to share with others who might need the help

[@dewanfariharamisa5664]

could you please suggest me links where I could get the necessary words to write any descriptive writing.

[@yashmehta3560]

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[@muhammadshahraizkhan1790]

Your channel is a blessing :)

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Glad you like it 😀

[@juliamayele135]

loved this video so much!!

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Thank you! Feel free to share with others

[@user-jm5mv3pw6k]

Thank you. Your video has helped me to improve my writing.

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Jane Jiang no problem. feel free to like and share

[@sparshgandhi3843]

Amazing man

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

So glad you like it. Feel free to share with others

[@sararenmiu5319]

when I'm doing creative writing I struggle with sticking to a single idea/ moment in time and the narrative of my story gets lost easily, any suggestions on how to avoid this?

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Practise a couple of types of narrative writing (positive and negative). Re-draft these until they are perfect and then learn these for the exam

[@jonah9286]

great vid u helped lots for revision

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Glad you like it.

[@rahulmawa5149]

Really a lovely descriptive

[@ayushhongkong]

Exam in 2 days, thank you so much!! this really helped. :)

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Glad it helped! Good luck

[@ayushhongkong]

The English Teacher Please keep doing more of these videos, I’m so much more confident now. Thank you 🙏🏿 ❤️

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

@@ayushhongkong feel free to explore my channel 😁

[@ayushhongkong]

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit Hi so my exam is tmrw and one of the questions was to describe a coffee shop and your thoughts and feelings, would it be possible if you looked over what I wrote and helped me, please. It was a small space, it feels like the walls move closer to you every day, the windows are like telescopes to the future but the tinted windows discourage you, every day the same thoughts rush to your head about how you can get to a better job, walking from the cash register to the machine and back became like a dance routine, every day there is a shimmer of hope when you meet new people, are they nice, mean, or irritating. The few minutes you get as a break during the day goes by in seconds, sitting on the shaky, beaten chair with flakes of coffee powder and an array of sweets and snacks spilled like something just exploded. The shop has a deafening silence in the night and the morning has people taking lazy baby steps to enter and they exit feeling happy and fueled and leap through the tall glass doors. The only thing that makes me sane is my midday escapes when I dump all my thoughts to the chirping carefree birds who care more about me than the people in my life, also the gentle breeze flicking my hair up and down. My job is simple, crafting every drink with utmost precision and seeing the gentle and hesitant smile on the many that get served by me. Getting through the tempting coffee mugs that just end up sitting in your house and collect dust and the useless gift cards and greeting cards that you never use can actually be impossible to get through without buying with the colors glowing and hypnotizing your eyes, seeing different signs that say offer or sale or limited time can trick the kid inside you and pull you in. Finishing up the day carrying any leftover food like Santa Claus on Christmas day to the many unfortunate homeless who are dirty and miserable and hating life, serving them with a warm dinner reminding them of their childhood puts the biggest smile on my face nudging me to come back to work the next day. After several slow months, the unbreakable bonds you make with other inmates are amazing, laughing about the various different people and the chatting up a good looking girl who thinks she is so much better than us and flicking her hair that slaps us back into reality and reminding us that we are just coffee shop people. Watching heart-melting birthday surprises and heartbreaking breakups make Netflix and Hulu look like garbage. The day silently ends and I walk out with gentle strides and take a sigh before I lock up and walk down the empty streets and shining stars hoping for a better morning.

[@ayushhongkong]

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit please try and check this out ?

[@bestever7881]

thank you Dude

[@hanayasser6704]

This helped a lot. Thank you!

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Good luck!

[@antisocialbarbie1587]

What is the title of the essay you did here?

[@saulbadman5705]

This is a pretty good video, thanks a lot

[@ritwikkaushik2342]

I am here from online class, our teacher is making us watch it, I am commenting as I am in the class,

[@PeterParkerOrSpiderman]

Thanks this is very useful and you have earned a subscriber

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Welcome! I'm glad you like it. I hope the other videos will be helpful

[@Ivan-jl3nx]

this video really helped thanks alot

[@legendarywolf6850]

How can I thank you for teaching 😀

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

really glad you found it useful. Feel free to share with others

[@10toesdwn60]

I've got an Igcse english test paper 3 in 30 minutes

[@10toesdwn60]

@Moniessh Gunasegaran doesnt matter in the end

[@tashfeenkhan2506]

can you do videos for gce o level

[@nadir3032]

how did you find the photo, what did you search up

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Generic photo stock images

[@aliceetal5303]

this really helped me

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Really glad you like it. Feel free to share with others

[@kirithigasanthanam2398]

can i use headings and subheadings for descriptive essays

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Not really. Use the example to help you

[@blendcoco7660]

can u do videos on articles like newspaper/magazine articles for edexcel plzzzz

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

+blendcoco Already done. check out the following: kzbin.info/www/bejne/b6W9l5t7rdJqobs

[@blendcoco7660]

+The English Teacher aha oh yeah thanks again

[@jackmanatawa5212]

Where can I send a sample of my work to you?

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Send it to my Facebook page which you can access on my channel

[@therealguimy]

How long did it take in total for you plan and write that piece?

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Ten minutes to plan and 35 to write

[@hunainalirazasaleem6660]

um sir why is the story mentioning about the hijackers message ? is it related to the question? the writer was describing about the cafe and stuff how he got in the plane

[@rivur._]

when you write a descriptive piece you need to have a section where the atmosphere has switched (eg. happy at the beginning then switch to sad). to do that, sometimes having a flashback or a scene that you’ve made up (but still related to the picture) can help. i hope this makes some sense?

[@MOISTIMAN]

I have an exam tomorrow... This is gonna help me a lot!

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

UltimateR_954 I'm glad to have helped

[@Idkdude2015]

How’d it go?

[@MOISTIMAN]

@@Idkdude2015 It was two years ago I'm doing A-Level now lol

[@viraajdarbar137]

cheers for the help mate. really useful. but where do we get these words from to enrich our work?

[@yashmehta3560]

Descriptionari.com

[@angelstarfire]

@@yashmehta3560 thank you!

[@Livelaughlove09]

I am revising for my assesm

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Good luck

[@hrishitarajan3077]

Can u do me a video on how to write a good piece of diary entry

[@taka7377]

do you have anymore examples

[@micahthomas7644]

holy shit that went 0 to 100 really quick

[@ranveerjain6135]

How many words was it?

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

I believe I wrote it in about 500 words

[@dan132dgamez5]

the thing is i get things like the desert and the only thing there are rocks

[@x._.y6894]

It didn't seem like an essay but a story...Will you please explain me what it would look like if it was a story... I am confused

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Hello, this video is a story (a descriptive one). Are you looking specifically for the perfect essay writing video? kzbin.info/www/bejne/jnOXYWCBgpZniKM

[@x._.y6894]

Ahh ... Thanks a lot..💕

[@kirithigasanthanam2398]

Can i use quotes in between descriptive essays

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Do you mean dialogue? You can but sparingly as you do not want to create too much plot

[@godcandy108]

Nice piece, but why so sinister :) Can't we have a Hollywood ending?

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

I'll leave that to you :-)

[@arjunkhandelwal9174]

The question was describe your morning walk A thick mass of slate grey fog covered the water like a mosquito net. It prevented any unwanted sunlight from reaching the ground. Searching for its next target, the brisk wind whirled over the still waters. Mingling with the fog, the smell of moldy mud slithered through worn dirt track. Faint whispers of grey blue stretched out in lazy ripples, like the brushstrokes of a Renaissance era painting. Wandering through the banks of the lake, the jagged dirt path framed the placid waters. Dotted around the track were: tired benches, reluctant to be used again; olive-green palm trees shivering in the cold; and clusters of rocks and pebbles which were weathered away by the elements. Elderly men and women drawled along the path like soldiers in the world war two trudging through the muddy trenches. Disrupting the monochrome greys of the fog a streak of azure blue into the water like a shuttlecock smashed at 400 km/h. The neon blue bird was now perched on the branch of a palm tree, quite proud of the fish that it had just caught. Its spread its wings revealing a plumage of dazzling orange and brilliant blue. I could not believe such a beautiful creature was such a viscous killer. Peering over the low hanging mist, the palm tree stood waiting for the sun to come out. Lines of white, spiraled along the stone grey trunk of the tree, it looked like a marble column straight out of ancient Greece. The tree's slender leaves fanned out of its center, overlooking the placid waters of the lake. The tree felt cold and lonely: it was shrouded in fog. Dawn broke, trickles of sunlight bled through the mist. The fog was losing control. As the sun rose, shafts of light started to burst through the once impermeable mosquito net. The golden warmth of sunshine hugged the dirt track. Rejoicing in the arrival of the sun, the palm trees basked in the balmy morning weather. Warm wind caressed the morning walkers and joggers as they circled the lake. The tranquil turquoise water shimmered and dazzled, shining brighter then the North start. The glorious sun was victorious and had once again risen to dissipate the early morning fog.

[@tungsten2009]

It was too broad in my opinion.You used imprecise metaphors, and every sentence was hyper focused, independent line that had the feeling of several needles stabbing here and there. You used the colons and semicolons wrong.They are used to elaborate on a single point, not string together several different ones

[@layanhassan9769]

this is beautiful

[@abdullahahmed3843]

Problem with me is, vocab doesn’t always wanna hang out with me.

[@bro2293]

Hi there - descriptive writing is definitely not my strong suit and I lack ambitious vocabulary - I was wondering whether you had any tips on how to broaden my vocab without it sounding too pompous or awkward

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Try using a thesaurus and select a few words that you feel comfortable using in your writing and then just practise using them so it begins to feel natural. Good luck with your revision and feel free to share with others

[@wowjef]

I did not find this useful. It is over-cooked and a very mechanical approach to writing.

[@jessemcauliffe362]

Or even descriptive piece. !!

[@ranveerjain6135]

NOICE

[@Mirglipa]

Summer school tingz

[@buklauuu5064]

are you allowed to use "i" in the descriptive writing

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Saddam Hussein yes depending on your narrative perspective

[@jackriesterer9444]

wow what a bandwaggon

[@tiegomotswedi6526]

Wow

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

I hope you mean't that in a good way?

[@edv1412]

what if the picture you are describing is very boring and dule

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

It won't be. And even if it is, create the magic with your words (modernism)

[@edv1412]

Okay thanks

[@aydenlew]

English Checkpoint tomorrow wish me good luck

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

How did it go?

[@aydenlew]

The English Teacher It went really well thank you!!!

[@anweranwer8096]

me having a writing exam on monday-......... ya'll wish me luck!

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Keep practising, watch this video and you'll be fine

[@anweranwer8096]

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit Thanks!

[@jaredgraham5010]

We chilling in class

[@therealguimy]

Who else is here bc of their upcoming exam? 😀😆😅

[@neilv01]

Not me

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Good luck!

[@therealguimy]

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit thanks! It's tomorrow!

[@mariannekail5008]

Who Mark's gcse English coursework

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Your teacher will before the exam board ask for a sample of the marking to check it's accurate

[@ZynovoGames]

Hello, Sorry to bother you but I was wanted to see if you had any free time as to go through some of my work. Unfortunately, my english teachers isn't a very good one, and I've been emailing her a lot of my work for feedback; I'm yet to receive a single reply back. If you could supply me with your email that'd be great of you!

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Itz Tetra you can send me work via my Facebook page. go to my channel site to locate the link

[@tsheringtenzing8507]

could you please asses my work too ?

[@LiyahMoore-yp2hi]

And I need help

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Well, you've come to the right place. Hopefully, this gives you the answers you're looking for

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BGS

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9/11?

[@Max_Novak]

Hi

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Hello. I hope you found this useful?

[@Max_Novak]

@@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit ye

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ANY OF MY IDRISSI FRIENDS WATCHING THIS CAUSE I AM

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why am i here?

[@TheEnglishTeachertuitionkit]

Because you are a bright individual who seeks answers

[@monsterjazzlicks]

Why is the audio of the voice so loud and distorting all the time? Very poor quality!

[@therealguimy]

I think it's fine. The problem is with your speakers😎😱

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