How to write your Ateneo Admissions Essay! ~ Essay writing Tips | featuring my own Ateneo essay

This video talks about my personal tips in writing your essay for your college application. Make sure to stick till the end to catch a glimpse of my own college admissions essay that I passed in the Ateneo de Manila University!
Here are some time stamps to help you:
00:00 Intro
00:57 Tip 1 - Understand the topic
02:08 Tip 2 - Be genuine
03:34 Tip 3 - Indicate your skills/talents
06:07 Tip 4 - Focus on the journey
08:04 My Ateneo Essay
11:27 How I applied those tips
13:14 Special Message
I am a Filipina who is currently studying in the Ateneo de Manila University taking AB Diplomacy and International Relations. I am also a Financial Aid Scholar. You can watch my videos about that through these links:
Financial Aid Inclusions and FAQ: • Ateneo Scholarship - F...
How to apply for scholarships in the Ateneo: • how to get scholarship...
Why I became a scholar: • why i became an Atenea...
Atenean Q and A: • Atenean Freshie Q&A ~ ...
Atenean Freshie Tips: • College Freshie Tips 2021
I am open for any collaborations or sponsorships!
Music by Naomi - Osaka - thmatc.co/?l=85E01A7C
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[@Awebriii]

Just uploaded a complete step-by-step guide about Ateneo's online application! Watch it here: kzbin.info/www/bejne/h3S3e5WGocl8bKc

[@Lili-zc4sl]

I liked your accent ate! Also the way you write your essay is like reading a book written by a great author! Thank you for the tips po!

[@alexasilvestre3221]

Thank you for enlightenment po! This means a lot 💙 With 14 mins and 8 secs. clip, I've gained a lot of useful informations and knowledges that would be helpful for those aspiring Atenean (like me) huhu. Thank you po!!

[@hato4672]

This is very helpful ate, thank you so much for sharing your tips to us!

[@samanthakayeagudo4895]

Thank you for this. I'll be applying in ADMU for the next sy. I hope I'll be accepted💙💙

[@jairusvisitacion5267]

grabii nag uupgrade na sa vid quality, lighting and editing!

[@Lily-rl2fs]

Thank you for this video ate! 💕💖

[@Awebriii]

Thank you also 🥺

[@Awebriii]

Make sure to check these videos out as well! Financial Aid Inclusions and FAQ: kzbin.info/www/bejne/n6ermp9vfbd1bMU How to apply for scholarships in the Ateneo: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hXrchY2qhpaHj6M Why I became a scholar: kzbin.info/www/bejne/Z2ecZ5msjsx8f7c Atenean Q and A: kzbin.info/www/bejne/l4eXhHeYlKmFrtk Atenean Freshie Tips: kzbin.info/www/bejne/bXSnfaF7qdKNas0

[@angelamenorca8101]

Tutor here and I was looking for some essay tips for the Ateneo admission that I can share to my tutee :) I'm glad I found your vlog! Nice topic! Very relatable :) I found peace and consolation in Jesus through The Feast, too! God bless and thank you for this vlog!

[@jayczedador2568]

This helps alot, i'll update this comment if ever I got in ADMU :)))

[@kristinbeamalicsilagonoy9287]

Thank you so much ate for boosting up my confidence and persuading me to continue to apply in Ateneo. Although it is my dream school (I am from a province), my mental health/situation always interferes. Making me lose the tiniest hope I have in my body because I am afraid that I might not pass the exams for I feel that I am not that good or I might fail. Socially awkward din kasi ako and afraid of other people around me that's why I'm thanking you a lot po. Oof, too muvh information HAHA. But I really want to get the scholarship wish me luck. I'll get back to your channel once I have questions na regarding this bc I am just Grade 11 palang hehe.

[@Awebriii]

Awww 🥺 thank u for sharing this. It’s okay to let these feelings out lalo kung lagi lang sila nakakimkim. Also, you’ll never know unless u try kaya kahit nakaka kaba, you still try. Also, don’t overwhelm yourself masyado. Baby steps tayo dito. Ang important you’re moving forward in a whatever pace you’re comfortable in. Good luck!!!

[@paulinetrinidad8052]

ate, thank you for this. i will apply on monday and apply also for the financial aid. been binge watching your Ateneo vids to calm me and to inform me that I can do it. thank you for the tips ate. see you in the campus soon?

[@Awebriii]

Yes!! Claiming this na. See you soon sa campus!!!

[@loganlee7611]

Thank you very much sa mga tips, ate! btw, rlly love the spongebob theme

[@loganlee7611]

editing

[@Awebriii]

Yes HAHAHA I love SpongeBob hehe. Thank you!

[@frysksyus]

Thank you atee♥️

[@fd-tx5jk]

Thank you poooo

[@kirstiensocialmedia5508]

ang galing ng essay mo ate!!!

[@Awebriii]

Awww thank you!!!

[@johannahpatricia9814]

Wow, I am a feaster too!

[@heijeol.1793]

thankyou po!!

[@pearlaqua5479]

wowow so creative

[@Awebriii]

Thank you 🥺

[@pandakuo1]

Natutuwa ako sa paraan kung paano mo ine-express ang sarili mo all over the video. Magaan ang mga ginamit na salita sa inggles at hindi nagmumukhang kritikal. Alam mo yun, tipong mapapasabi ka ng: Grabe, ano bang pinagsasasabi niya jusme(dahil hindi ka makasabay sa mga sinabi dahil sa lalim ng mga salitang nagamit). Salamat po sa tips!

[@Awebriii]

Yes yes! Ayoko rin ng ganun kasi mahirap maintindihan HAHA parang readings ko lang sa polsci huhu ayoko na :

[@kate-gg7hq]

ill come back here, when im accepted na ate

[@mikhaelal.7504]

AHHHHHH hi po ate! Ik that the NCE-RACE PSHS ADMISSION RESULTS were out like a week or two ago.. but I just wanted to say thank you and I really appreciate this video of yours cuz it really helped me passed the admission essay... (ps. The nce exam for philsci was not used this year and last year) andd I can't wait to go to PSHS WVC next year especially because I will be spending my hs years there.. but even tho the vid is like for the Ateneo admission essay still the tips were useful and much helpful to me!!!

[@daisukieccheese4083]

Hi, is there a specific question or topic that will be given to us?

[@beacaballero5992]

What font size did you use in your essay?

[@reneliesantos3609]

hello ate, about sa essay po, kami po ba ang mamimili ng topic? hope u see this!

[@violethill4454]

can an average student (stable grades, all passed, doesnt have that much extra curricular) like me can pass through ateneo?

[@theriancharlottediaz6523]

Earllyyy hehehe

[@Awebriii]

🥺🥺🥺

[@atlanticastt]

How long is the deadline?

[@riritruffles4274]

My life is so boring that my essay will probably make me fail :

[@ma-dia]

then write about that

[@rurusavedbygrace]

Galing po nung essay niyo, ate! Can i ask, kung ano po 'yung ginamit niyong app/software to edit this video? ☺

[@Awebriii]

Thank you! I used adobe premiere po to edit this video!

[@_ann6213]

Hi, teach! This is out of the context question hihi when can we know if Engoo is already hiring? Thank you.

[@Awebriii]

They are still hiring but the application process takes a longer time than before because of the surge of applicants :

[@ashvander6389]

hii, do students from public high schools need to pay for the registration fee? or is it free, given that you came from a publich shs? thank you!!

[@Awebriii]

Hi! It's free for public and science hs students!!

[@fd-tx5jk]

Hello riscians

[@noraimaarumpac2121]

Hi ate! Just wanna ask about the Scholarship, renewal siya every year? Also kung anong scholarship (like 100% scholarship) ang meron ka nung nag-apply ka nung freshies ka yun rin yung scholarship mo everytime magrenew? pwede parin bang maging 100% yung scholarship mo kahit senior kana?

[@Awebriii]

Hello! Yes there's a renewal every year. Your scholarship percentage will depend on your family's financial situation. I was a 100% scholar in my freshman year as well as in my sophomore year :> You can watch this for more info: kzbin.info/www/bejne/n6ermp9vfbd1bMU

[@princessmadera31]

ate can I ask? Meron po bang time limit or day limit ang pag pasa mg essay? If meron po ilang oras or how many days? thank you!!❤️

[@Awebriii]

Hi! Usually, Ateneo gives you days or weeks to pass your requirements so no pressure :>

[@eduothelo3218]

HAHAHAHAHA THE INTRO GOT ME LAUGHING SO HARD

[@nicolerubete4588]

Hi ate! Where can I find the essay prompt? I can't seem to find it on Ateneo's website. I'm not sure if they released it or it's yet to be announced hehe. That's all po, thank you for the tips as well.

[@moonlight-gm8yt]

up

[@Awebriii]

It can be found sa FB page ni ADMU! Here's the prompt and I recommend writing it within 2-3 pages: One significant experience or accomplishment that has helped define you as a person!!

[@meoviona]

@@Awebriii Hi, I tried looking for this year's prompt? Where can I find it po?

[@samchamploo462]

Hello po ate. May I ask how long your essay was and how many pages/words po? Thank you!

[@Awebriii]

I wrote a two-page essay!

[@kimmm5]

Hi. I would like to ask kung ano po ang mga books na binasa niyo para gumaling sa mga essays. Thank you in advance❤

[@Awebriii]

Hello! Usually fictional books like Percy Jackson para maging creative ako mag form ng sentences 💕

[@syzhade]

Hi ate how do you get the merit scholarship in ateneo?

[@Awebriii]

Hello! I don't know much about this since this is not my scholarship but you can access those info here!! facebook.com/ADMUadmissions/posts/1664952997042564

[@biliciasachisarmiento4704]

hello po! if you see this, i just want to ask: what's your opinion on a third person essay?

[@Awebriii]

I think it's unique!!!

[@biliciasachisarmiento4704]

@@Awebriii thank you! i was thinking of a casual storytelling kind of approach ? though, i worry that it would seem to informal. the essay doesn't have to be formal po, right?

[@kimmm5]

hello po! ask ko lang po, paano ka po gumaling sa english? like paano ka nagkaroon ng malalalim na words on your vocabulary?

[@Awebriii]

Hello! Nagbasa ako ng books. Nakapulot ako ng mga words na bago saka ginaya ko yung style kung pano sila nagsusulat 💕

[@kimmm5]

@@Awebriii what are those books po? Hehe

[@gabangelo6622]

pwede po bang hindi na maglagay ng title?

[@constanciandraemilia]

Magkaiba pa po ba 'yung essay para sa college admission doon po sa essay para sa financial aid scholarship? or same lang po sila?

[@Awebriii]

Different sila. One for admission abt a prompt na si ateneo magbibigay. Then one for scholarship abt your financial situation. Good luck!

[@constanciandraemilia]

@@Awebriii thank you po!

[@keyriebalasabas2333]

hello po! pwede po ba in Filipino ang essay?

[@Awebriii]

Afaik pwedeng in pure Filipino or pure English. Good luck!

[@moonlight-gm8yt]

wala akong talent😭