How would sing Kingdom Jindo Arirang (진도아리랑) by A.C.E

How would sing Kingdom Jindo Arirang (진도아리랑) by A.C.E (by my opinion)
Song: Jindo Arirang (Prequel)
Artist: A.C.E (에이스)
Check the original performance of A.C.E! • 에이스(A.C.E) - 진도 아리랑(전사...
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( I hope there are no mistakes in editing of the lyrics ((; )
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