I Investigate the US Military’s Paranormal Cases: These are my Stories | A DR CREEPEN ORIGINAL STORY

[@fox19delta21]

Out-freaking-standing!!! Like a combination of X-Files, Kolchak the Nightstalker, and JAG. Loving the premise, though, I'm sure you've already been bombarded with comments that Marines aren't called Soldiers and vice versa. The difference is obvious. Marines eat crayons. Soldiers dip their crayons in hot sauce first.

[@DrCreepen]

Haha... thanks for the advice! I should have been more careful about that.

[@Emerald.She-Ra]

My thoughts exactly. I immediately thought of Unit 731 (WW2 Japanese experimentation on PoWs etc). It also gave me Rendlesham Forest vibes. If you're still up here, in Scotland @DrCreepen, you should look at the Falkirk Triangle, the sightings on bases, including Faslane, Leuchars, Benbecula, etc.❤

[@richjackson2986]

Came to say this. Although I really enjoyed the story, as a veteran of both the Marine Corps and the Army Reserves, it immediately dropped me out of the story. But it’s a mistake often made by the uninformed. A possibility helpful list. Marine Corps - Called Marines. Positive nicknames, Devil Dog, Jarhead, Leatherneck. Negative nicknames, Jarhead, Crayon eaters, Bullet Sponge, Bellhop/Bellboy (used by the Navy) Army - Called Soldiers Positive nicknames Troop, Battle Buddy or just Battle. Negative nicknames, Doggy Air Force - Called Airman Positive nicknames, unknown Negative nicknames, Zoomie, Chair Force Navy - Called Sailor or Seaman Positive nicknames unknown Negative nicknames, Swabbie, Squide, Seman or Taxi Driver ( Used by Marines) The positive nicknames are most often used within the branch of service, Marine to Marine, Soldier to Soldier. Because of the time frame mentioned, during WW2: Soldiers were sometimes called Dogface or G.I.. Marines were often referred to as, Gyrene (a combination of G.I. & Marine) or Leatherneck.

[@harrygrimley4352]

Maybe just a touch of fringe 😊

[@kimberlyrogers9953]

Lol!

[@jyspenla]

I was a Marine brat. We were stationed at Bragg, LeJeune and Cherry Point. I can totally see you going with a super soldier/transhumanism direction. Then add in there the demons and rituals that the Nazis performed and called forth in their demons. The Presidio was also a huge Satan nest, run by Col Michael Aquino…wicked stuff. He’s also the leader of The Church of the Temple of Set. You’ve definitely got enough whoowhoo in this story! I’m really enjoying tonight’s reading! Jenny

[@DrCreepen]

Many thanks! I wasn't at all sure where this would go when I started, but there looks like being elements of everything you mention in what's to come.

[@stephenbeauman6290]

Popped a pill, smoked some weed, and now,"It's time to sit back and relax with your favorite drink, and listen....", loving it Dr. you slay bro

[@toya876smith4]

I bet you fighting with that hunter lol

[@WilliamStreiff]

I've been clean and sober for fifteen months for those same reasons

[@aggromando7323]

That’s how to listen! Ultimately relaxed.

[@aislynnmari]

Stephen, I also think that to myself every time the Dr says it! 💀😆

[@lewisbuckingham8434]

Always a joint and sleep to the doc 👌🏼

[@carolrader9911]

Thanks Dr. You put alot of work into these stories and so very appreciated

[@TayTayMakesBeats]

I really enjoyed this one, other than the fact that it felt like it ended too abruptly, even for an ongoing story. That just makes me want a sequel even more.

[@carolduvall111]

I think you should continue with those creative juices flow..because so far so fantastic, great job I anticipate more greatness from you😊❤

[@DrCreepen]

Thank you so much!

[@bobzthabarbarian]

A Dr. Creepen original??? I dig it. Thanks for the story doc. An hour of work has just flew by🖤🖤🖤

[@DrCreepen]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[@Kimbeslice1]

There are a lot of fantastic elements to this story. The pacing, the building suspense, etc. As a Soldier though, the only part I have an issue with is who is employing the protagonist here. He seems to report to two Colonels but then they don’t actually want him to discover anything? I know the first one made mention that he didn’t actually want/expect him to discover anything. There may be a very logical explanation for this discrepancy. If there is, explaining it fairly early on would definitely help people like me to get much more immersed into the story.

[@DrCreepen]

It's actually something I realized I hadn't addressed while I was recording this. This will be mention/resolved in the next part, as it seems weird he is being assigned by someone but not reporting back to them. Glad you mentioned it.

[@Sarah-said]

Hey Doc, I'm impressed! 👍 Yes, you are getting noticably better and better with each new writing. Keep up the great work and pat yourself on your back for the great story. Just make another part to this intriguing tale!?!

[@DrCreepen]

Thanks, will do!

[@Chicken-Noir]

Here's an idea for you. Do a story about a numbers station. One that doesn't belong to any nation or any known military organization. The voice that reads the numbers can be understood in any language because it sounds like whatever primary language the listener happens to speak. An example would be there are two people in one room hearing the same broadcast at the same time on the same equipment, one native Japanese and the other Mexican. Both would understand what was being said because both would hear it in their native tongue. One more thing, when the last number is read, anyone who listened to the entire broadcast from beginng to end spontaneously vanish.

[@stephenbeauman6290]

I like it, just sounds Biblical

[@DrCreepen]

I like this a lot. Many thanks!

[@BenSS3]

This sounds great.

[@lillianagrey6884]

Check out a movie called Banshee Chapter. It involves a numbers station..and drugs

[@thebluerose7648]

They made a movie about that and somebody was trying to kill the chick that read off the numbers , for some reason I wanna say Nicholas Cage was in it but can't say for certain.

[@annettew5740]

Ate a gummy, turned off the lights and now I'm snuggled in and ready to listen to a special treat from our dearest Doctor! Thank you Doc! I hope you have a fantastic weekend!🤗💜🕷

[@michaelbrayton9196]

This was amazing I can’t wait to hear more of it! Great writing!

[@DrCreepen]

Thank you so much!

[@alexisblack7179]

I live in Fayetteville NC, Cumberland County here an currently work on Fort Bragg now Fort Liberty ❤ Enjoying this one! Thanks Doc!

[@jbuckshot01]

Up here in Md. grew up next to fort Meade now next to Aberdeen proving ground.

[@rebeccamiller3248]

Grew up in VA near Ft Lee and about a hundred other bases.

[@DrCreepen]

Very cool!

[@pax_aurum_nightlord]

This is definitely an interesting series you are working on Doc. As a person currently working on my own story project, you should always be proud of your work, and take the time to plan it carefully. Take constructive criticism, but ultimately you know what is best for you and your work.

[@MrsCaranAmy]

This was such a treat tonight. The stories were just amazing. Since paranormal, military, and detective stories are some of my favorites. Well done, @Dr. Creepen. Thank you ❤️ 🤗 🌟

[@rebeccamiller3248]

Loved it. Far as helping story have the soldiers not be ghosts but caught in a time dimensional rift.

[@DrCreepen]

This is kind of what I'm thinking too. I have a vague idea about trying to transport soldiers across great distances 'Star Trek' style, but something went wrong with the experiments.

[@BigBen-wc1wj]

Took the thought out of my brain!

[@rebeccamiller3248]

@@DrCreepen how bout a Philadelphia experiment or create a black/worm hole where they were trying to move troops from Bragg/Liberty to Lejune. Then the troops are stuck in limbo/time trying to get from place to place. Able to see and hear trying to communicate they need help. Not to mention if you make the troops late 80's it would be feasible both base commanders were involved in the experiments. Possibly the commanders are trying to cover up their mistakes or even fixing them by sending the troop in that talked to the investigator. That it almost worked allowing him to come through once in a while. Also commander's are afraid to use the tech because it could suck possibly more than just troops like the whole base. Yeah it would put them at retirement age. But this is fiction. It would also explain the uniform differences they were just switching the BDU around that time from Olive Drab to camo if I remember correctly. The tech could be reverse engineered UFO tech gotten from Germany. Just spit balling here if it helps. Also the troop that scared everyone the newer one who communicated with the MMC could also be reason people died because the commanders kill anyone who reports talking to him to cover it up. BTW your my favorite on the creepypasta genre.

[@spiralrose]

To be honest that sounds very much like a “ jumped the shark” idea. Military ghost-stories are so fun because you just don’t find enough of them. You’re doing great with the paranormal end… no need to add Science Fiction. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

[@rebeccamiller3248]

@@spiralrose only problem if it were actually ghost then command would not be trying to cover it up or miss direct the investigation especially with similarities between the bases in the paranormal realm. Makes more sense they are trying to cover a failed experiment.

[@marvthebass]

Sitting back with my Santa Fe Brewing Co. Imperial Stount and listening 😫👌 this is the perfect friday evening. As for the Story's direction? I feel like my own country's illustrious military isn't above trying to make ghost soldiers to fight against the communist threat

[@SleepyLeeeee]

I came back to listen since my headache went away from last night. It seems this story already has a pretty good direction of where it's going. You selected NC military bases as a good place for this story. You have "Project Eagle" which, I don't know if you meant for it this way (or if you knew this) but eagles are not considered a 'unified," biological group. So it fits perfectly into being the group who may be the ones who were experimented on and perhaps made bigger and smarter. The second "Project Phantom" can mean spectator or an illusion. This lends some flexibility to your story as the listener would automatically (and reasonably assume) that this group are the perceiving ones. There's also these connecting soldiers, from WWII and Vietnam, as an illusion because our battlefields or our environments hold memories of what happens. It's not that absurd, imo, for soldiers or marines who have these shared experiences in the same places to naturally pick up previous or even future visions.. The ground literally holds natural healing properties and it can also be manipulated to fuel some things through heat, and tweaking of the ...germy/chemical stuff down there (lol I can't remember the names atm). So why can't it hold our energy as well? That could be one way to explain the bleed through of the time differences. It could even have been used in the experimentation of making super humans (what's it called?). That could also be apart of what was experimented on to enhance the soldiers. Wouldn't it be clever to have someone you could send into the future and/or the past to spy on things? Or maybe Dr. Graves can't remember something he is supposed to know about himself that aligns all these pieces? Is he an extension of that project? Does he know? Do all the time periods work together? And has Dr. Graves been intercepted for nefarious reasons or for good reasons? Maybe just dig under the places like the bunker to see what he can find? Idk but you have a lot of options of where you could go with this story! One last thing, I'm not really sure Dr. Graves is always on the same timelines as far as his own life. There was that one character he ran into that seemed very off and odd to him...maybe Dr. Graves goes back and forth in time?

[@devildog3575]

It’s just the water at Camp Lajeune

[@thelazarusproject7028]

The stars have truly aligned. 2 of my favorites. Paranormal military stories and the good Dr. Ive been listening for years and it's such a treat to hear u reading your own work. Please keep up the amazing job. Looking forward to many more like this 😊

[@clydedevlin1084]

Another busy day, so we're absolutely shattered 😴 and here goes our amazing Dr with the perfect way to relax yet again. ❤ we thoroughly appreciate your hard work, sir. 😊

[@DrCreepen]

Enjoy!

[@lilrut4207]

Wow you wrote that yourself!!! I’m truly amazed!! I loved this story I can’t wait for the next chapters

[@DrCreepen]

I'm glad you like it

[@lilrut4207]

@@DrCreepen my bad I meant “I can’t wait “

[@danibeauchamp1554]

I am sitting here impatiently waiting for more. You are a amazing narrator and a captivating writer

[@kellyholmes4554]

❤❤❤ Great work can't wait for the rest! As always had to watch it 3 times as your wonderful voice n narration helps me sleep but the great content brings me back to finish! Thankyou ❤❤❤

[@DrCreepen]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[@angelariley.9963]

I loved it. I wanted it to go on for longer.

[@brianback3865]

I like the story and am curious to see how the paranormal activities on the separate bases are connected. The obvious cover-up by the brass is also intriguing. Good job so far, I can't wait to see where this goes.

[@dwightkey4070]

Good Friday to you Dr!

[@SeauxNOLALady]

Just FYI, Fort Bragg is now known as Fort Liberty. Since Bragg was a confederate officer, it was renamed. As a born and bred Southern woman who comes from a strict Southern Baptist military family, I am allowed to say that the Fort should have been renamed. Here in New Orleans where I am, the confederate statues were removed and some people lost their minds over it. I don’t understand why it upset them so much. We lost the Civil War for Goodness Sake! Having those statues erected in the first place was dumb… That’s like if Germany erected statues of Hitler after losing WWII… And they claim to be proud Americans and patriots, but the statues representing people who betrayed our nation don’t belong in a place of honor! I’m INCREDIBLY proud to be a southern American. Our culture, our history, our rich heritage and diversity is so awe inspiring. Especially here in New Orleans. So don’t come for me if you’re a fan of honoring the shameful practices and hatred of our past. Also, I find it funny that most who were protesting the removal of those statues were…white… The black people who were enslaved and abused by rich white men who abducted them from their homeland to sell them into slavery like livestock…they weren’t bitching about removing those embarrassing monuments to a past that we should NEVER elevate to anything of value.

[@Melissa___]

This is fantastic Dr well done, thoroughly enjoying it! Also don’t think you need our help, your imagination is doing perfectly well!

[@DrCreepen]

Wow, thank you!

[@Photobunce]

Bravo! Author!! I would love more of these stories, Doc! Right up my alley.

[@DrCreepen]

More to come!

[@SleepyLeeeee]

I very much enjoyed this story. You did well. I have a headache and am exhausted, so I'll pass this time on suggestions. Thank you for the story

[@madknight13]

Really enjoyed your story :D

[@kateg.1386]

Loved this! Ty for the sneak paek earlier!! You are the best, Dr Creepen. ❤❤❤

[@erickag5215]

You always provide the best stories!!!

[@MagicMan76]

New shift schedule means I’m usually asleep within a few minutes of getting into bed, so haven’t listened for a while. It’s currently 2:34am and I’ve been awake since 7am yesterday. It’s good to see you again, Doctor.

[@DrCreepen]

Perfect! Welcome back!

[@TheAmericanCelt]

Cant wait for the next part. Awesome cliff hanger.

[@BekieBoots]

I love it! ❤ I'm feeling time travel/ military superiors can't quite die, so they are kind of immortal with a twist. When the investigator finds the truth, he also finds out both how high it goes, which is all the way to the tope, possibly worldwide, culd leader cult type stuff, and how to kill them and end the suffering of the men/ ghosts trapped in the relm between time! It's an idea. You dont have to take it, but it's your if you want it or parts or whatever.😊

[@lexiedovahkiin]

Congratulations on this! You have drawn us in, teased with this secret project and that, toyed with ghosts and hunan experiments.. so I say keep going. Keep exploring what the connection is between what was done at the two forts. And then I wonder what adventures our hero faced that date back to the 1900s?

[@DrCreepen]

Awesome! Thank you! Yes, I've left quite a few threads open at present. I have some ideas of how to bring it all together, but input is much appreciated.

[@taylorfain6957]

I listened on the way home from the beach! And dude. This was freaking amazing. The army stories are meh on my end. Just not my personal favorite. Not because they aren’t good. I just prefer like deep sea nightmares. Or horrific monster in the woods ate my friends. But this. This was amazing Dr. this was freaking fabulous. I really do hope you follow up. Because I enjoyed the fuck out of this. Got me over here mad and pissed off. Because I tooo want info on project eagle. Damn these redactions. I do you hope you put more out with this story! Keep up the amazing work and as always. Thank you for the entertainment

[@VictorNajera-p9l]

Great story playa, can’t wait to see where this leads too

[@dereksmith3757]

Very good story so far, I enjoyed listening to it. As for input, one good hook would Be Krieger is still alive and experimenting and it develops into a contest between the two

[@roden70]

That's a good one. He took the lives from the soldiers he used to add to his own livespan, deceiving the military without them ever knowing. He is still working under another name (he staged the death of Krieger) and at the start of a new experiment in Germany on a very large scale where he works to revive the Third Reich. He is still a Nazi.

[@killuz9355]

ok so, i have 2 main comments. before i present them let me briefly say that your stories are fantastical and i adore listening to them. 1- i feel like you could have elaborated more on the part about how or why he was able to obtain clearance to the sensitive redacted files. making it a one and done sentence may make the story more streamlined, but it does challenge the suspension of disbelief a bit more than it should. 2- i would personally like this story to have an eventual solid conclusion, without too open of an ending, but also not one of those "i am writing this in my deathbed" type of endings. those are seldom fun, and often kinda ruin the story. i wanna see this investigation through, know what happens to all the people involved, and how the investigator is able to share the records of it, even if it's by means of a third party letting us "see through their eyes" as they experience reading it themselves. that's it! keep it up, this is wonderful!

[@DrCreepen]

Good points. I will elaborate on point one in the next installment. For point two, that's my intention, definitely.

[@lastmanstanding1767]

I love it. Maybe it could have Philadelphia Experiment vibe.

[@princessofhardrock3934]

Great story!! Your writing is excellent! Can’t wait for more of this series!!❤

[@DSWL_]

you sir, are too good to us. 🍻

[@Antihero-4132]

Good way to start my morning!!

[@DrCreepen]

Enjoy!

[@PandoraSaysSo]

Loved it! I enjoyed the pace, and the characterization. I feel like the story moved along well. I am so proud of skills!

[@charlieghostwolf6161]

Thank you good Dr and well done, this is really good so far, you captured the mindset pretty well of military commanders intent on keeping secrets by different methods (I served in a a unit that was the big stupid cow - military intelligence)(sorry old habit, stupid cow - oxymoron) and the fact that commanders of different bases tend to know each other pretty well socially as well as professionally, there are only so many in those positions, also even though the main character has clearance to access the records it's normal for it to be flagged when certain records are accessed One thing to consider for going forward is the private that had the copy of the piece of paperwork is more than he seems, he had more knowledge than he should And was sharing what would be a classified document The connection to Project Paperclip can/should lead to an entire web of interconnected experimental programs with similar goals and the subjects are perhaps not dead but in some way caught between living and dead with their 'ghostly' appearances being mental projections (the stories of gruesome/tragic deaths are the result of many continually exaggerated retellings, military personnel love to share tales) Again great story so far and I look forward to more whatever direction you take it

[@DrCreepen]

''The private that had the copy of the piece of paperwork is more than he seems.'' This was hopefully ambiguous enough that it could go either way. From a story point of view, 'he's there if I need him.' ''The connection to Project Paperclip can/should lead to an entire web of interconnected experimental programs with similar goals.'' Love this; it kind of sums up where I was planning on taking this! Many thanks for your suggestions; this has probably helped nudge me in certain directions.

[@charlieghostwolf6161]

@@DrCreepen I kinda figured as much about the private with the document I just caught it through the lens of real experience I'm just glad I could be of some assistance, I've been playing RPGs for many years and I write nearly all my own material so when I hear/read a good story my mind starts cooking off on ideas 😎 As I said before I'm really looking forward to more of this regardless of where you go with it Bright Blessings Dr ✨🎶

[@dascooter8287]

Riveting sir! Absolutely riveting! In both content and performance Doc. Great stuff!

[@glorbojibbins2485]

Sitting here with my cup of ice cold piss ready for a spooky story

[@toya876smith4]

My eating jollof rice and budweiser and listening to the doctor

[@deanmorgan1821]

I can't wait to hear more!

[@rudeawakening5816]

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻I really enjoyed the story!! I think you do an excellent job writing!! I'm excited to see where it goes!! Keep up the incredible work😉 👍🏻

[@tankblackheart1776]

Amazing work doc. Can't wait for the next part. 10\10

[@korosheht5446]

That was really good i gotta say dr has a knack for military stories i would love to hear what happens next

[@christopherlauterbach6544]

Thank you for this this was really good. I mean I think the direction is going is perfect. Has that air of mystique coupled with military history secrets. Bravo!

[@MyCraftyMind4U]

Wow, what a great story story! Thank you for sharing your work

[@LoraWilford]

Loved it!!!! Can’t wait to see where this goes! ❤

[@HOLLOWPOINT953]

Great story so far. Cant wait to see where you take it!

[@roden70]

Great story doc! It sucks you right in! This hour flew by. It would be neat if the professor could find out more details about the supernatural experiments and how they were conducted. Why the soldiers died. If any survived and he could spreak with him/ them. And that he could help the spirits who warn the living somehow to find peace. Confront the powers that be with his findings but putting the eternal souls of those to rest before the urge to expose the gruesome experiments by the army and not making them public in return for some ceremony at the 2 bases.

[@taylorfain6957]

To answer your question! This man keeps getting booted from base to base. Prying tiny bits of information. Finally put it together. And give this man an “unfortunate accident” to loop back to the first ghost private giving his warning.

[@christopherneelyakagoattmo6078]

It's polished enough to continue forward. On to San Diego and the ghost ships of the fleet experiments of the 1960s operation Paperclip associated w psychic rocket & jet control by the US Navy... remote viewing and JPL faster-than-light communications to Mars and The Ares probe landed on the Red Planet...❤😅 Mucho luv Doc. Keep the faith, brother. Hope is a muscle.

[@RavenVargas27]

Hi Doc, I love it the story plot and creepiness level is perfect an amazing Doctor Creepen original you could write great books your talented, thank you added to my favorites 🥰

[@jonmarkherrscher7315]

In my experience if you want to know something. I always find an old timer to ask. Usually the most boring guy has the most information.

[@jonathanwatson1054]

Amazing story. Hope there's more to this tale.

[@wendyhill3942]

It is intriguing, Doc. I'm no writer, but it feels like it's heading toward a situation where the experiment is not over. Not just that, the ghosts haven't been avenged, but more like the experiment took a new direction from the failed project.

[@nickwest1337]

That was fantastic! As to where the story should go, I have no ideas, I'm just interested to see, well, hear, what happens next.

[@cadillacdeville5828]

Mr. Perfect voice ❤❤❤

[@goutambhola5646]

That was well written. Great work

[@Teknofobe]

My opinion? The past, present and future are simultaneous.

[@michelepruitt3145]

Wonderful Tale Dr. Creepen, just Spectacular! 🧡💚 Hi A.J.! 💙💜 You are a Great Writer I doubt you need help. 🩷 If I were writing I would keep the Ghost of Thompson in the Story helping him till the end. Sweet Dreams and Bye, Bye! 😱👻🐺🐈‍⬛💖🙏✌️

[@DrCreepen]

Thank you so much!

[@nickn4976]

Loved the story. Food for thought & plot development - hidden secrets research project. Little bit OSINT, little bit Indiana Jones. Convenient location for “home” in WV. Greenbrier Resort in WV once housed a fall out shelter for congress, constructed in the early 60s. Maybe buried documents in a far off corner with the bunker built as a red herring to hide the real secret? Also close to “home” is a place called Bedford Springs Inn (Bedford, PA - remote mountain town famous for nothing.) inn is currently an Omni resort. Has a lot of hidden secrets according to local lore and legend. Similar to the Greenbriar bunker but less public knowledge. Also known as (in best mountain hick accent - ) “Why else didn’t they tear that down if it wasn’t being used for something?!”

[@DrCreepen]

Good suggestions!

[@MaxJongmeyer]

Absolutely loved it. In terms of space, it could even make a turn in Germany itself. I would love for the resolve to stay creepy and suoernatural, maybe playing on the idea that our world is not as much removed from the spiritual/ supernatural world as we choose to believe. Great work!

[@Andrew-if3sd]

Hi Doc, no ideas yet, save that I would like to hear more historical facts, good so far, technical details: weapons, some known cryptids of the area...just started 3:38

[@patburrell1027]

Keep it going Doc. I can't wait for more. I want to know what their hiding.

[@fox19delta21]

I would be more than happy to assist you in fleshing out your series. (I wish I'd have come up with the premise myself) Be advised that the US Army caved to political pressure and renamed nine of our biggest Army bases to conform with current woke sensibilities. (I'll send you the list) For instance, Fort Bragg has been renamed Fort Liberty after the auto insurance company of the same name. I would strongly suggest against using any of the new politically correct names as they are liked by approximately 0.0000107% of Soldiers serving in the Army just behind pulling CQ duty on a holiday weekend and command directed mandatory fun day

[@DrCreepen]

Awesome. I don't know why I didn't think of asking you!

[@kristijensen7457]

I’d love for this to go into interdimensional beings, the military commanders could be trying to keep a top secret project that allows us to communicate across the dimensional veil, under wraps. The paranormal disturbances could be the beings trying to communicate back.

[@mattacosta1044]

Do a story where a guy goes to sleep and then wakes up and his whole house has been transported to a different world but everything inside his house he can use in the new crazy world like guns that he had in his house food all of the random stuff in this new crazy world or even make it a cabin you can have dinosaurs zombies creatures whatever you want to put into the story just give me a shout out please and thank you keep going and rock on

[@bisonjoy70]

I think the writing was excellent, I just don't get who is sending the investigator in when the generals want to hide everything. I see no one yet has given any ideas on how to continue it...maybe work with some clergy to put the tortured souls to rest? But of course the truth has to come out first. How do these present day generals know so much about the past so long ago?

[@DrCreepen]

I've addressed this in another comment, but your point is a good one. I'll deal with who is sending him and why in the next installment.

[@bogumiciochon7915]

This is outstanding! I listen to Your podcasts daily while working, but have never commented on KZbin in my life. This is a first! I enjoyed the story immensely as it touches the creepiest thing in existence which is Nazi experiments. I would have a few ideas for this: I would imagine a war across time, between Nazi Germany and modern day NATO or even just the US, where the frontline moves across time, the Nazi entry point would be Riese, with exit at the bases You have described. Krieger could be connected to Himmler's "Hexen" research and a double agent , hence the ongoing war ( Thomson's death was in the 70s) You could spin a massive conspiracy, where most modern conflicts would be a cover up for the war losses. Let's say the process of time travel has something to do with Nicola Tesla's wireless transfer of energy, hence the lights in the desert. Energy that Nazi Germany is leeching from our time for its war effort. I could think of a few more ideas, yet my break is nearly over, so all the best and Please make it into so much more than just a ghost story! All the best

[@bogumiciochon7915]

Or possibly the time travel could work a bit like Mars transfer, possible only at certain points in time, The Nazis would have sent a major force through, destroying Riese in the process, and we're aiming for just after the fall of Soviet union as not to have to fight them after failing Barbarossa, the plan has partially failed and the troops have scattered over multiple points in time, You could mention the Glocke possibly as means of travel and leeching energy, which is required for the bulk of the force, which are currently stuck in limbo between time, to fully make it through, as for the creepy part I would imagine opening the portal would involve sacrificing a medium ( Hexen research) in some gruesome way, let's say you need to spread the nervous system over a large area. Hope any of this will be of any use.

[@carriemarshall7070]

I enjoyed it, but one problem, never call a Marine a soldier :-)

[@DrCreepen]

Noted!

[@James-m3o5x]

Enjoyed 👍🏻

[@Mars-pb3ds]

It's very good, thank you

[@DrCreepen]

I'm glad you like it

[@nightflyr1]

Very good start to what could be a deep dive into the darker side of military black projects. My thoughts would be you need to sort out the point(s) of origin for the original thought(s) / purpose(s) for such experiments. From there, the path that leads to the end results of the apparent volunteers... and to what extent the military is aware. These are just broad stokes of a story layout, it would takes pages of typing to flesh it all out

[@stacydangelo]

Great story so far.

[@nissanguy16]

You left out Scotland County and Richmond county as well. Luzon Drop Zone is part of the SF and Rangers’ training area. Camp Mackall is considered Ft Bragg (Ft Liberty now). Quite a few literal ‘weird things’ happened out there. Several SF guys ‘randomly’ died and found in a ditch within a couple years.

[@seraphjansin1141]

I live in North Carolina I love this my dad was a marine

[@tanyalee5458]

Loved it!!!!

[@jasonroberts4470]

Thanks 😊

[@DrCreepen]

Welcome 😊

[@amandaofhouserobinson6707]

Very, very good!!! ❤

[@dalejones9799]

Very good story it is captivating. I am curious what is hidden in the bunkers that is a real mystery. Perhaps the answers lie in the ammunition bunkers maybe some kind of laboratory or machinery. This story would make a great book.

[@madsketscher5228]

I listen to a lot of your videos and didn't even know u created/wrote your own original content as well. This is tickeling something good. I don't have any wild and original suggestions myself and don't know if this suggestion is kinda off base since these aren't strictly military stories but I would love for you to check out some of these authors stories, to maybe inspire some of your future narrative on this series. I don't remember them all so will have to go look around, but I will reply to this comment with my suggestions, once I locate them. Mind you, I am not suggesting stories to be copied but more as fuel for your imagination. (Not that I am implying you would copy but more to make my intentions with these suggestions clear) Which is also part of the point since I am not looking for a variation of these but find them fantastic and have a feeling some of it could help you come up with your own great story, maybe with slight thematic springles/spice :)

[@derrickpelke7893]

Good job

[@TheeIllustreous]

Part 2!!! Maybe a ufo tie in? Good work!!

[@beardyben7848]

@DrCreepen Might want to decide the current military motivations. Are they merely protecting their reputation, or are they continuing or planning to continue the experiments? Knowing the answer to that will help your plotting. It could be individual commander's reputations instead of the military as a whole. Or it can be a combination of these motivations. Also, there could be some Senators involved in this, because US Senators tend to be the longest careered top government officials because of 6yr terms and extremely high rates of re-election. I know that this isn't a political thriller, but having the context set in your mind will help you decide on antagonist behaviors. As for the weird, go with your heart. It could be soldiers turned into spirits by super-science, then compelled to kill by occult ritual contract. Or the reverse, turned into spirits by the occult and sent abroad by energy transmission and compelled to kill nearby uniformed military. Also, it could be that the soldiers who spoke with that anomalous private get bumped off by the government forces keeping it quiet, either by conventional sabotage, or by ordering the anomaly to get rid of them. Finally, speaking with the anomaly could trigger a pre-determined curse if certain criteria are present. Best of luck, and I look forward to your future work!

[@DrCreepen]

Good points! Thanks for these suggestions.

[@jonh2119]

I enjoyed this one a lot and am very curious about where it goes. And about that... Those experiments are of course not finished. The occult parts was more than the military could handle, and some doorways were never properly closed. Voila, links to parallel cold war realities, hell and places rather far from logic and sanity. And what came through those doors, deciding it would be a good idea to stay?

[@ayeitsshane806]

Loved it.

[@johngolden3714]

Interesting story. Maybe it could tie into the Philadelphia Experiment.

[@DrCreepen]

There are elements of that circling around in my mind, to be honest!

[@333dsteele1]

Great stories. As ending, the two generals at the two bases were successful participants in the Nazi experiments, now working to undermine US security as part of a post-WW2 group collaborating with extraterrestrials, planning to invade the world via the 5th dimension.

[@mariotelarico8623]

Feedback: Marines on Camp Lejeune- will not refer to each other or their subordinates as soldiers. Small detail. Does crack suspension of disbelief for a split second. Posted with love and respect.