i like how this started really dissonant and arythmic and then got good
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@megusultracool thankyou
@wantspizzadaily1316Ай бұрын
The title really adds context to the emotion behind the song
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@wantspizzadaily1316thankyou!!
@naban5360Ай бұрын
This is actually so unbelievably real
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@naban5360 thankyouu
@partlycloudykylieАй бұрын
This is so cool! I need a full version rn!!!!
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@partlycloudykylie maybe soonnn
@rosh9103Ай бұрын
Beginning I was like “uhhhhh” then the chords hit and I was like “oh fuck.” That was good
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@rosh9103 thankyou!!
@lynxfilanteАй бұрын
I look forward to when you make a band and we can hear grungy garage versions of your tunes
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
i do wanna make a band that would be cool!!
@rogeliomeza4314Ай бұрын
@@totallynotaly you better! you've got amazing skills and a good talent for it!
@avaistall15 күн бұрын
you need to start posting this on spotify your gonna go far like wtf omg
@totallynotaly15 күн бұрын
@@avaistall i will very soon!!
@avaistall12 күн бұрын
@@totallynotalyYOPPIEE
@christian_gtrАй бұрын
i like that chord progression, sounds nice
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@christian_gtr thankyou so much!
@Safe-s2o25 күн бұрын
This is good too to my heart&ears . Harmonics hit different
@totallynotaly25 күн бұрын
@@Safe-s2o yay thankyou!!
@elliotmackenzie7646Ай бұрын
i felt this one, thank you aly
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
thankyou im glad!!
@brendanshi7417Ай бұрын
Those sound like suspended shoegaze chords to me. Really nice work!
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@brendanshi7417 ohh yayy thankyouuu
@bastionvillegas3531Ай бұрын
Glad I got recommended this, really nice progression and tone
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@bastionvillegas3531 thankyou!!
@eramiskeI15 күн бұрын
distortion just makes everything better
@totallynotaly15 күн бұрын
@@eramiskeI yea frrr
@Lazarus_Music_Ай бұрын
Sounds really nice!
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@Lazarus_Music_ thankyou!
@mrclaytronАй бұрын
Keep practicing - I like your attitude and I can see you are determined! I'm looking forward to hear when you have some completed songs to upload - I am sure they'll be great! Do you sing also? Good luck!
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@mrclaytron thankyou!! i am working on full songs right now, and yes i do sing
@cranburreyАй бұрын
The title is so real...
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@cranburrey thankyou
@_fishcatАй бұрын
I so wanna add some bass to the background to this 😩 Love the dissonance of the chords, what tuning you in?
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@_fishcat yea that would be cool!! this song was in standard tuning
@_fishcatАй бұрын
@@totallynotaly i just uploaded the bassline on my channel if you wanted to see, sorry for poorer quality if I had more time I would've put more effort in lol. its a bit sloppy
@reservoirdog1Ай бұрын
Good stuff, sort of reminds me of lovesliescrushing
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@reservoirdog1 oh thankyou!!
@neptunebloo13 күн бұрын
Title is so real omggg
@totallynotaly13 күн бұрын
@@neptunebloo yeaa lol
@mxvega1097Ай бұрын
tagabow vibes You might like Swervedriver's G tuning - GCDGCD - resonance and drones for daaayyyysssss.
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@mxvega1097 ohh i’ll try thattt
@mxvega1097Ай бұрын
@@totallynotaly there's a version in f too - FCDGCD, nice playthrough srch "sparky guitar duel swervedriver". He's hidden his tab notation recently but it's v accurate, if yr into that kind of thing. I think there's a tagabow track too.
@PenguinBrotherАй бұрын
BEST ONE YET!!!!! This is awesome sauce!
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
YAYY THANKYOU SO MUCH!!
@Weloz92Ай бұрын
Beautiful chords!
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@Weloz92 thanks
@RockerMinistryАй бұрын
CLEAN ALY, i likey
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
ohh yayyyy thankyouuu!!!
@nathan_amatoАй бұрын
Highly recommend grabbing yourself a preamp - I'm interested in how it would sound without the acoustic quality Either that or id like to hear it as an acoustic track. You've got great ideas!
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@nathan_amato i am gonna be making more acoustic videos soon!! thankyou for the advice!!
@thedarknight571420 күн бұрын
Oddly good.
@totallynotaly19 күн бұрын
thankyou
@greggory3418Ай бұрын
Is it Aly like Al-ee? Great writing! 🎶
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@greggory3418 yea it is and thankyou
@tanneraustin7436Ай бұрын
Hell yeah. Sounds good. I like the vibe.
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
thankyouu
@SoandSo23Ай бұрын
She's purtty spongebob
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@SoandSo23 thankyouuu
@WarFox7012Ай бұрын
Agreed
@WarFox7012Ай бұрын
Drop dead gorgeous in fact
@SextasxizАй бұрын
I loved ❤❤
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@Sextasxiz thankyou!!
@Zeak_FreakАй бұрын
Dope🔥🔥🔥
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
thankyouuu
@woundedmasqueradeАй бұрын
damn this is like the best one imo ngl
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
aww thankyou!!!!
@oleksiyyyy.Ай бұрын
Круто!
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@oleksiyyyy. Спасибо!
@dadoggydudeАй бұрын
title is real
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
thankyou loll
@dadoggydudeАй бұрын
@@totallynotaly
@Not_MathieАй бұрын
This is awesome sauce fr fr
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@Not_Mathie thankyouuu
@tijuu_Ай бұрын
part starting at 0:23 is sick af
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@tijuu_ thankyou
@BabyL3murАй бұрын
is that a jay mascis signature jazzmaster?
@MerinlrАй бұрын
Yeah, dear dino jr..
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@BabyL3mur yea it is!!
@_sunflowerxluАй бұрын
YESS 😔🙌
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
YASSS
@canovasdavidАй бұрын
Nice sound and play
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
thankyouuu
@canovasdavidАй бұрын
@@totallynotaly I've added your work on my playlist project ;)
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@canovasdavid oh yayyy
@LUMINA3Ай бұрын
if you dont mind me asking, what were the chords you used?
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
this is gonna sound really unprofessional but i made this song last minute, so i just googled random chords and put them together. i dont remember which chords i used. im sorry
@Stringbeater94Ай бұрын
Fuego
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@Stringbeater94 gracias
@headbangerboy123Ай бұрын
Music is art and art is subjective, I think this was a$$. Nice playing tho
@camyea69Ай бұрын
Head banger boy
@Noahi626Ай бұрын
Real
@AJRfanboy904Ай бұрын
You wanna go out with me and build a Lego set together? (with rizz)
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@AJRfanboy904 lol w rizz frrr
@AJRfanboy904Ай бұрын
@@totallynotaly I’m being dead serious 😐
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@AJRfanboy904 i already have someone to build legos with
@AJRfanboy904Ай бұрын
@@totallynotaly L
@WarFox7012Ай бұрын
@@AJRfanboy904cry about it
@everestdidthisАй бұрын
woah so cool
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@everestdidthis thankyou!!
@hey9433Ай бұрын
Good but title is a little cringe lol
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@hey9433 yea it was just a random thought but people relate to it ig
@theyalreadyleftАй бұрын
@@totallynotalythey just dont get it
@nomiraymemberАй бұрын
@Yuh24990Ай бұрын
Hi
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
heyyy
@Yuh24990Ай бұрын
@@totallynotaly amazing 👏
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@Yuh24990 thankyouuu
@Sherbert941Ай бұрын
i like the title
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
thankyouuu
@robban556Ай бұрын
lovely
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
thankyou
@ChristinaEarlymornАй бұрын
Hellyeah!!! Rock out ❤ DO ❤ NOT ❤ GIVE ❤ A ❤ DAMN ❤ ABOUT ❤ THE ❤ OTHERS!!!!!!!
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
YESSS ♥️
@johnrivers6252Ай бұрын
You're the best
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@johnrivers6252 you too
@johnrivers6252Ай бұрын
@@totallynotaly keep on rocking dude
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@johnrivers6252 yasss
@mecoderstudios7607Ай бұрын
good stuff ngl
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
thanks!!
@jonas3619Ай бұрын
erhmhmm what the sigma
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
umm whats up brotherrr
@crow3043Ай бұрын
Ok
@N.DwastakenАй бұрын
Can we be together forever???
@WarFox7012Ай бұрын
Nah, she mine
@totallynotalyАй бұрын
@@WarFox7012 true facts
@vl.ca.1733Ай бұрын
Just practice more, and I would not recommend listening tot the comments. This is just mediocre, sry but someone has to say it.
@ReadyMindsetGoАй бұрын
Agreed. Don't make music for positive comments. Make it because you actually have something worth making. This was a nice progression but imo very far removed from a finished song. Would love to hear different parts, vocal melodies, intriguing non-cliche lyrics, etc... that way you stand out and hopefully develop as a real artist that people will want to hear, not just because of their looks or because they want to fit in with a certain crowd or whatever... good luck!
@mars-gu5tuАй бұрын
i definitely agree that criticism is extremely important, but calling something mediocre without actually telling the person how to improve is pointless; either way, i don’t think this could fall under much musical criticism in general since it’s just a chord progression, not a song. it’s kind of like looking at a bowl of cake batter and trying to criticize it. it’s just a building block of what it could become so unless someone somehow made a god awful chord progression (lol), there’s not.. much to say about it (unless it’s some one in a million amazing chord progression lmao). i might understand what ur getting at about the compliments though since it’s just a chord progression and it isn’t anything you’d marvel at as it’s just a component of what could be a song (just like the cake batter analogy lol).
@swopey44Ай бұрын
Either way as long as you have fun and are happy doing it, it doesn’t matter what others think! Just take a look at the songs I wrote, they stink but it’s straight from the heart! Pursue your purpose!