i’m sick of saying sorry for the shit i never did

[@megusultracool]

i like how this started really dissonant and arythmic and then got good

[@totallynotaly]

@@megusultracool thankyou

[@wantspizzadaily1316]

The title really adds context to the emotion behind the song

[@totallynotaly]

@@wantspizzadaily1316thankyou!!

[@naban5360]

This is actually so unbelievably real

[@totallynotaly]

@@naban5360 thankyouu

[@partlycloudykylie]

This is so cool! I need a full version rn!!!!

[@totallynotaly]

@@partlycloudykylie maybe soonnn

[@rosh9103]

Beginning I was like “uhhhhh” then the chords hit and I was like “oh fuck.” That was good

[@totallynotaly]

@@rosh9103 thankyou!!

[@lynxfilante]

I look forward to when you make a band and we can hear grungy garage versions of your tunes

[@totallynotaly]

i do wanna make a band that would be cool!!

[@rogeliomeza4314]

@@totallynotaly you better! you've got amazing skills and a good talent for it!

[@avaistall]

you need to start posting this on spotify your gonna go far like wtf omg

[@totallynotaly]

@@avaistall i will very soon!!

[@avaistall]

@@totallynotalyYOPPIEE

[@christian_gtr]

i like that chord progression, sounds nice

[@totallynotaly]

@@christian_gtr thankyou so much!

[@Safe-s2o]

This is good too to my heart&ears . Harmonics hit different

[@totallynotaly]

@@Safe-s2o yay thankyou!!

[@elliotmackenzie7646]

i felt this one, thank you aly

[@totallynotaly]

thankyou im glad!!

[@brendanshi7417]

Those sound like suspended shoegaze chords to me. Really nice work!

[@totallynotaly]

@@brendanshi7417 ohh yayy thankyouuu

[@bastionvillegas3531]

Glad I got recommended this, really nice progression and tone

[@totallynotaly]

@@bastionvillegas3531 thankyou!!

[@eramiskeI]

distortion just makes everything better

[@totallynotaly]

@@eramiskeI yea frrr

[@Lazarus_Music_]

Sounds really nice!

[@totallynotaly]

@@Lazarus_Music_ thankyou!

[@mrclaytron]

Keep practicing - I like your attitude and I can see you are determined! I'm looking forward to hear when you have some completed songs to upload - I am sure they'll be great! Do you sing also? Good luck!

[@totallynotaly]

@@mrclaytron thankyou!! i am working on full songs right now, and yes i do sing

[@cranburrey]

The title is so real...

[@totallynotaly]

@@cranburrey thankyou

[@_fishcat]

I so wanna add some bass to the background to this 😩 Love the dissonance of the chords, what tuning you in?

[@totallynotaly]

@@_fishcat yea that would be cool!! this song was in standard tuning

[@_fishcat]

@@totallynotaly i just uploaded the bassline on my channel if you wanted to see, sorry for poorer quality if I had more time I would've put more effort in lol. its a bit sloppy

[@reservoirdog1]

Good stuff, sort of reminds me of lovesliescrushing

[@totallynotaly]

@@reservoirdog1 oh thankyou!!

[@neptunebloo]

Title is so real omggg

[@totallynotaly]

@@neptunebloo yeaa lol

[@mxvega1097]

tagabow vibes You might like Swervedriver's G tuning - GCDGCD - resonance and drones for daaayyyysssss.

[@totallynotaly]

@@mxvega1097 ohh i’ll try thattt

[@mxvega1097]

@@totallynotaly there's a version in f too - FCDGCD, nice playthrough srch "sparky guitar duel swervedriver". He's hidden his tab notation recently but it's v accurate, if yr into that kind of thing. I think there's a tagabow track too.

[@PenguinBrother]

BEST ONE YET!!!!! This is awesome sauce!

[@totallynotaly]

YAYY THANKYOU SO MUCH!!

[@Weloz92]

Beautiful chords!

[@totallynotaly]

@@Weloz92 thanks

[@RockerMinistry]

CLEAN ALY, i likey

[@totallynotaly]

ohh yayyyy thankyouuu!!!

[@nathan_amato]

Highly recommend grabbing yourself a preamp - I'm interested in how it would sound without the acoustic quality Either that or id like to hear it as an acoustic track. You've got great ideas!

[@totallynotaly]

@@nathan_amato i am gonna be making more acoustic videos soon!! thankyou for the advice!!

[@thedarknight5714]

Oddly good.

[@totallynotaly]

thankyou

[@greggory3418]

Is it Aly like Al-ee? Great writing! 🎶

[@totallynotaly]

@@greggory3418 yea it is and thankyou

[@tanneraustin7436]

Hell yeah. Sounds good. I like the vibe.

[@totallynotaly]

thankyouu

[@SoandSo23]

She's purtty spongebob

[@totallynotaly]

@@SoandSo23 thankyouuu

[@WarFox7012]

Agreed

[@WarFox7012]

Drop dead gorgeous in fact

[@Sextasxiz]

I loved ❤❤

[@totallynotaly]

@@Sextasxiz thankyou!!

[@Zeak_Freak]

Dope🔥🔥🔥

[@totallynotaly]

thankyouuu

[@woundedmasquerade]

damn this is like the best one imo ngl

[@totallynotaly]

aww thankyou!!!!

[@oleksiyyyy.]

Круто!

[@totallynotaly]

@@oleksiyyyy. Спасибо!

[@dadoggydude]

title is real

[@totallynotaly]

thankyou loll

[@dadoggydude]

@@totallynotaly

[@Not_Mathie]

This is awesome sauce fr fr

[@totallynotaly]

@@Not_Mathie thankyouuu

[@tijuu_]

part starting at 0:23 is sick af

[@totallynotaly]

@@tijuu_ thankyou

[@BabyL3mur]

is that a jay mascis signature jazzmaster?

[@Merinlr]

Yeah, dear dino jr..

[@totallynotaly]

@@BabyL3mur yea it is!!

[@_sunflowerxlu]

YESS 😔🙌

[@totallynotaly]

YASSS

[@canovasdavid]

Nice sound and play

[@totallynotaly]

thankyouuu

[@canovasdavid]

@@totallynotaly I've added your work on my playlist project ;)

[@totallynotaly]

@@canovasdavid oh yayyy

[@LUMINA3]

if you dont mind me asking, what were the chords you used?

[@totallynotaly]

this is gonna sound really unprofessional but i made this song last minute, so i just googled random chords and put them together. i dont remember which chords i used. im sorry

[@Stringbeater94]

Fuego

[@totallynotaly]

@@Stringbeater94 gracias

[@headbangerboy123]

Music is art and art is subjective, I think this was a$$. Nice playing tho

[@camyea69]

Head banger boy

[@Noahi626]

Real

[@AJRfanboy904]

You wanna go out with me and build a Lego set together? (with rizz)

[@totallynotaly]

@@AJRfanboy904 lol w rizz frrr

[@AJRfanboy904]

@@totallynotaly I’m being dead serious 😐

[@totallynotaly]

@@AJRfanboy904 i already have someone to build legos with

[@AJRfanboy904]

@@totallynotaly L

[@WarFox7012]

⁠@@AJRfanboy904cry about it

[@everestdidthis]

woah so cool

[@totallynotaly]

@@everestdidthis thankyou!!

[@hey9433]

Good but title is a little cringe lol

[@totallynotaly]

@@hey9433 yea it was just a random thought but people relate to it ig

[@theyalreadyleft]

​@@totallynotalythey just dont get it

[@nomiraymember]

[@Yuh24990]

Hi

[@totallynotaly]

heyyy

[@Yuh24990]

@@totallynotaly amazing 👏

[@totallynotaly]

@@Yuh24990 thankyouuu

[@Sherbert941]

i like the title

[@totallynotaly]

thankyouuu

[@robban556]

lovely

[@totallynotaly]

thankyou

[@ChristinaEarlymorn]

Hellyeah!!! Rock out ❤ DO ❤ NOT ❤ GIVE ❤ A ❤ DAMN ❤ ABOUT ❤ THE ❤ OTHERS!!!!!!!

[@totallynotaly]

YESSS ♥️

[@johnrivers6252]

You're the best

[@totallynotaly]

@@johnrivers6252 you too

[@johnrivers6252]

@@totallynotaly keep on rocking dude

[@totallynotaly]

@@johnrivers6252 yasss

[@mecoderstudios7607]

good stuff ngl

[@totallynotaly]

thanks!!

[@jonas3619]

erhmhmm what the sigma

[@totallynotaly]

umm whats up brotherrr

[@crow3043]

Ok

[@N.Dwastaken]

Can we be together forever???

[@WarFox7012]

Nah, she mine

[@totallynotaly]

@@WarFox7012 true facts

[@vl.ca.1733]

Just practice more, and I would not recommend listening tot the comments. This is just mediocre, sry but someone has to say it.

[@ReadyMindsetGo]

Agreed. Don't make music for positive comments. Make it because you actually have something worth making. This was a nice progression but imo very far removed from a finished song. Would love to hear different parts, vocal melodies, intriguing non-cliche lyrics, etc... that way you stand out and hopefully develop as a real artist that people will want to hear, not just because of their looks or because they want to fit in with a certain crowd or whatever... good luck!

[@mars-gu5tu]

i definitely agree that criticism is extremely important, but calling something mediocre without actually telling the person how to improve is pointless; either way, i don’t think this could fall under much musical criticism in general since it’s just a chord progression, not a song. it’s kind of like looking at a bowl of cake batter and trying to criticize it. it’s just a building block of what it could become so unless someone somehow made a god awful chord progression (lol), there’s not.. much to say about it (unless it’s some one in a million amazing chord progression lmao). i might understand what ur getting at about the compliments though since it’s just a chord progression and it isn’t anything you’d marvel at as it’s just a component of what could be a song (just like the cake batter analogy lol).

[@swopey44]

Either way as long as you have fun and are happy doing it, it doesn’t matter what others think! Just take a look at the songs I wrote, they stink but it’s straight from the heart! Pursue your purpose!

[@PVTHOS]

👌