i'm still sorry - demo song

i've been writing this song for MONTHS lol i cannot figure it out. so here's a draft.
i wasn’t thinking of you
when i threw myself in the deep end i knew
that my lips were blue still i swore by it
you hurt me
and i liked it
in the weirdest spots of my mind
i find fear in your hands and something still mine
though i cried still i swore by it
you hurt me
and i liked it
all of my nightmares and all of my dreams
when i’m still awake and when i fall asleep
i am haunted by the image of me
that i drowned in your misery and i’m still sorry
i was just dreaming along i thought
all i wanted was a love song
and though it was wrong i gave you my best
you left me there
one bite left
you stand there with the courage to mourn
stand tall and dignified, like the cross on your door
that picture still hides in my drawer when i i gave you my best
you left me there
one bite left
all of my nightmares and all of my dreams
when i’m still awake and when i fall asleep
i am haunted by the image of me
that i drowned in your misery and i’m still sorry
i woke on my knees
begging for an inch of sleep
i won’t see my death for the trees
i will pick till i bleed and i’m still sorry

[@melissashumaker2483]

Ooooo this is my new favorite ❤️

[@angieangel555]

I love this one!

[@hadleyvalentine33]

thank you so much!

[@RapsandRiffs]

Vocals go really well with the guitar, nice blend of country and pop.

[@shoprintart]

😊 good evening,, good musics you thanks 😌 i like 🎉

[@pita.rodrigo]

What do you mean you can't figure it out, it's beautiful and touching!! 🥺

[@hadleyvalentine33]

thank you so much :)

[@calliemarie6055]

This might be a draft but it spoke to me so much. I feel like someone FINALLY articulated what I’m going through😭

[@hadleyvalentine33]

thank you so much that means a lot to hear. i hope the song helps you at least a little bit. 💕

[@calliemarie6055]

@@hadleyvalentine33 it already has!