"I'm the only worker at an abandoned theme park" Creepypasta

[@CreepsMcPasta]

Thank you for 10 amazing years on KZbin

[@michaelbrayton9196]

Congrats on 10 years on KZbin that is amazing, you just keep getting better!

[@Goldwodka]

Gz and thx man

[@crageranimations3915]

Thank you for being here

[@JimmmyRaynor]

no u!!!

[@johnmorris4149]

Thank you Creeps!

[@lukebarroso449]

Theme parks. A place of roller coasters, games, cotton candy and existential dread. Fun for the whole family!

[@jackdurden466]

I know right?!?! Perfect! No matter what it’s guaranteed to be either the best, or last day of your life!!!

[@andyseliciano8654]

N crazy things as well

[@tinakylee91]

Pretty sure that was the pitch when theme parks were created.

[@mrhuntalot123]

Goosebumps??

[@codybrox4693]

I want a sequel to this story about new hires working under our protagonist!

[@Haeloft]

Same!

[@joshuawilliams3374]

I just heard this on Spotify and specifically came to this channel to say this exact thing. GREAT story.

[@derekwright7447]

@24:57 "It sounds like a fresh of breath air" I love this! 😝

[@GmodPlusWoW]

I reckon we can get some folks from the Foundation in to help OP out. 'cause somehow I doubt that they're managing this site, given that there's only one person working at the park. This is the kind of situation that the Foundation would gladly toss D-class at, and OP would probably have their hands full with training, rather than attending to all on-site duties themselves.

[@robertwalker-smith2739]

I suspect that the park actually *is* run by the Foundation.

[@Posterofshithahah]

@@robertwalker-smith2739 indeed. Testing site. OP has unfortunately been classed as disposable.

[@saltytroll9976]

@@Posterofshithahah either made a d-class or he is the anomaly that is being contained.

[@aaronweaver9751]

Wanted: Employees for an alternative amusement park. Will train onsite. Excellent benefits and pay. Military backgrounds accepted too. Must be very good at following directions.

[@HardxCorpsxKali]

This is one of my favorites of all time. I absolutely love this one! I just listened to it yesterday and I’m already done listening to it for the second time. Super interesting and I love the ending which is most of the time the most disappointing part of these.. 10/10 for this one brother 🙌🏽

[@chuck2703]

This channel is the only one that makes me consider ad block. "The dead kid reached out and... You too can buy crypto currency".

[@5Demona5]

I had an ad pop up there too, but it didn't sound as funny as yours

[@aaronweaver9751]

Dead folks love cryptcurrency. Can't cross the Styx without cash.

[@mistermadness677]

Thankfully I don’t get that problem, since I have an iPhone 7.

[@dopaminedrought395]

KZbin premium is totally worth it if you ask me

[@kimicappiello5480]

🤣🤣🤣

[@JimmmyRaynor]

I've got 4 puppers crawled into bed listening to creeps today!

[@browneyedgirl9754]

Bliss 😍 I've got two pups snuggled in bed with me. Happy days

[@JimmmyRaynor]

@@browneyedgirl9754 yay 🤗🤗

[@EdgyShooter]

I am incredibly envious, look after those puppers!

[@JimmmyRaynor]

@@EdgyShooter oh I am! I've got 2 now, I was taking care of my sisters 2 other puppers over the weekend

[@kyrahuggins5139]

​@@JimmmyRaynorhow old are they?

[@-karma-763]

creeps is one of my all-time favourite narrators

[@21imjosh]

Creepsmcpasta Mr creeps lighthouse horror Dr creepen Mr creepypasta reddit inc all my favourites

[@rosetanner9817]

@@21imjosh YESSSSS 👏👏

[@samwatts5256]

@@21imjosh the dark somnium is the best for me, the effort he puts in to each narration with the sound design using his own music, guest narrations and sound effects, as well as always selecting great stories

[@thetruespartan2204]

I agree. Idk who is better tho, Creeps or Nature's Temper. Both are amazing.

[@MrDuneedon]

As a former theme park employee myself, I really appreciated this one!

[@Veiofy]

Same!

[@Matriarch_Rin]

Oh I would love an extended story about his weird colleagues. I can imagine a happy-go-lucky type who loves interacting with the kids, talking to Dave, and bringing extra meat for the tamed beasts in the pirate area!

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

Happy 10 years Anniversary CreepsMcPasta and I like that Carnival it's beautiful especially the flashing colorful lights and boy Laughing Jack would be so jealous.

[@Laurawr1989]

Congrats on 10 awesome years dude! Here’s to 10 more! This story was amazing and your narration was perfect - as always 😀😀

[@emilymelissa4535]

24:58 I do love a good fresh of breath air

[@BoxOKittens]

This could actually make for an amazing dark comedy/horror tv series. Have the main characters all be new hires under the only remaining senior staff member, who's just so tired and done they never react with terror to anything.

[@DarkDays1143]

Whoa, I really love these types of creepypastas. Hope there's a second part to this. Maybe getting a new trainee or prehaps make it a family ran lol...

[@crageranimations3915]

24:58 A fresh of breath air

[@torytellstales]

The scary thing is, this almost sounds exactly like my job. I can relate with being left alone and on edge, making sure you're following every step while keeping yourself mentally in check, AND the fact that my place gets understaffed. Fortunately I am transitioning to a different job. You know your job is hectic if it can easily be compared to a creepypasta story lol

[@raheenb]

Dave could be an amazing part of a movie. He'd probably save the protagonist if they planned carefully.

[@danielcoffield1042]

Thank you for providing us all with quality content for a decade! Awesome scary stories

[@kingakarolewska2796]

It's my 4th or 5th anniversary on this channel, congratulations on your success over the years!

[@beetleb.1418]

This is so insanely good ... please make more in this town/theme park. I return to this fic and would keep returning to this world, CMcP. Damned-fine writing and so unimpeachably EERIE.

[@Lunanoctiluca]

This is one of my all time favorite creepy pastas❤ would love a follow story🥰 I know Im 2 years late but..Congrats on 10 years Creeps! Thank you for all the time and energy you put into making these for us❤ You seriously make a difference in so so many of our lives

[@princessofhardrock3934]

Happy 10th Anniversary!!

[@Kat-Zcratch_Mox13]

I'd actually take that job.

[@deathscion]

Would love to see a follow up to this one. There's so many directions it can go!

[@amandam8609]

Is Dave a throwback to the Fire Lookout story?

[@zenpai_senpai]

I love the detail, the differing settings, the spooks OOOO i want a show about this

[@amberford300]

Wow ten years on KZbin, that's impressive. You're great at what you do so not surprising you've been doing it for so long.

[@banjoadventures9315]

"the backwards man. He well, walks backwards...." Me: as fast as u can?

[@minnesota_fats7344]

They need to hire the Winchester boys. They'll clean up the park.

[@MrsCaranAmy]

Thank you for all the narrations that you present for us for all those years. Have a marvelous day 💖 🌟 😊

[@anniereddj]

Congratulations!! Thank you for all the wonderful stories!!

[@Jynx090986]

I think that might be my new favorite story read by you so far. So awesomely creepy

[@hujjwal7682]

Credits for the story PLEASE!!

[@Dark_Angel..]

Just in time...I was just looking for a Creeps fix. ❤

[@ashkanr4796]

what a story. i want more man! it was awesome

[@pinkbuninja6536]

I like this a lot actually, it’s like Night at the Museum but darker. I love a protag that’s used to all the supernatural crud and knows better than to ask questions

[@TheBatandVanGorder]

Love the sound editing

[@RanD0ge581]

My theory about the ferris wheel is that time goes backwards. That's why the guy disappeared and why the backwards man exists.

[@novaca9826]

Idk but i always come back to this story. Love it

[@UHDk.]

Best story

[@Liebe007]

Im watching ur stories for 5 years and really ur prob my favourite creppypasta channel and i want to say just keep it up u will be entertaining to me till the end

[@jackdurden466]

Man, I always enjoy theme park tales. But one that actually ends with a job offer!?!? Hell yes! Sign me up and teach me how to die. See? Backwards was that. And I am so bored with normalcy. Damn good story! And congrats on 10 years! It’s been my pleasure to be here for a slice of it. You’re easily one of my favorite narrators here, the one I can always count on for a great story, correct pronunciation, stories that aren’t too long, or too short. And it’s always a pleasure listen. So to your decade of decadence, I say let’s do another! Way to go CreepsMcPasta! 👏👏👏👏🎂🧁, oh wait, you’re English, 🫖🍪tea and biscuits. Much better.

[@devanedwards5986]

I don’t care how many ads there are, I’ll never use adblock. This is how creeps makes his money, and it’s what incentivizes him to keep being our narrator. Please reconsider using ad block for content creators you care about supporting, it costs you nothing.

[@LadyRevan7]

I got an ad for an amusement park while listening to this. XD I really enjoyed this one! Creepy and good.

[@brodyausten2975]

24:45 "Fresh of Breath air" lmao

[@potatonian]

I love stories like this and the fire lookout one, always very interesting.

[@ergoleon2970]

24:57 “it sounds like a fresh of breath air” lol

[@BreakerInc]

LOVING this one! Only halfway through, and already I know I'm gonna want more, haha XD

[@Wazzupiddy]

"Then there is the screaming...*Loud music ad plays* " Godamnit. only here do I get scared by ads instead of the story, such a tension ruiner. Wish the ads would play at start and end, not in the middle.

[@NotSoSara4764]

Someone should make this into a game. I think it’d be really interesting. Walking around the park, do things on a check list while avoiding all the dangers. And when you encounter the backwards man you need to start walking backwards. I think it’d be cool to see. Anyone?

[@MyXyle666]

This one really needs a movie or a series on Netflix.

[@intermediateingrid5746]

am i the only one who loves horror + theme parks in the same catagory?

[@forrestpatterson6053]

Yo this was great!

[@mattstyles2498]

I feel like this place isn't OSHA approved. So many fines

[@sarahelizabeth6713]

This sounds like it'd be a good indie game 👀

[@nickwilliams430]

This is how things would play out if Scp 682 went to this park Clown monster things vs Scp 682 - Scp 682 would make them its food. Undead Kid thing vs scp 682 - 682 would slaughter it. Water undead kids vs 682 - The water kids would put up a fight but I think 682 would adapt to become a sea monster thing and kill them all. Dave vs scp 682 - Just like the water kids, I think he would put up quite a fight but scp 682 would eventually kill him. The Behemoth vs scp 682 - Scp 682 would slaughter the monster. Backwards Man vs Scp 682 - From what I heard from the story, the Backwards man seems really powerful but I think 682 would defeat him. The reason is because it could adapt to its strength. Bonus Scp 682 vs the staff The staff would all die.

[@nuclearwaste1016]

A fresh of breath air from dave

[@alymatronicdeeare8265]

A. A fresh of breath air.

[@jonathanharris4871]

I don't know what's worse this place or Kate’s Camp Ground?

[@Spacy_skittle]

The SCP foundation will love this one

[@masawashy6843]

24:58 "a fresh of breath air" lol

[@michaellavigne5452]

Great story. 👍👍👍 M / M / M Mt. Man Mike

[@bensimpkins6581]

"Fresh of breath air" lol

[@billybob7392]

This is a great story3. I hope for more.

[@President_of_the_pies]

Maaaan I'd take em up on that job offer

[@Z64dollarsign8]

One of my favorites

[@Unguided]

27:15 He can walk backwards fast as you can!

[@patrickboian8545]

That was pretty good.

[@hexxidelux6224]

"If something happens to me, the knowledge will be lost!" Me: Soooo, why don't you write it dooown?

[@jayman6622]

Why not pit the oddities against each other backwards Man against Dave and so on it’s worth a try

[@amandam8609]

They just need the dancing man, the backwards man is toast if he knocks the earbuds off him

[@cb-bt8ym]

I love you creeps!

[@zhebanelm1755]

This is clearly just Action Park.

[@-JA-]

Thank you.

[@bryankohut9485]

I would work that job for the right pay, even 100k a year I would work that

[@MsDeathGuy]

Well,he did mention the pay is good! I don't see why not....

[@LonaPua_Pouliuli-Popoki]

👁️✨👁️ aloha CreepsMcPasta Congrats Happy Anniversary perfect story another help you ending Me: I was riding the Krazy 🎠 Karma Carousel like forever (btw it just stopped when the C fell off) May I have - a ticket to ride - the Bermuda🎡Triangle ferris wheel? Please? Please? Please?

[@Hnnhjkjm]

You know… would it be kinda creepy if I told you that I listen to you nearly every day to fall asleep? Oh well😂

[@enlightenmentworldunited8545]

It’s creepy.Only in the good way.That creeps is

[@Twila5836]

Same

[@guac_mantaters5683]

Please, this is so cool

[@bubbleszefrog6790]

Is there a game like this? It seems like an amazing concept for a game

[@tdr_paraadvisor3996]

There is actual abandoned zoo believed to be haunted....this story reminds me of that! 😉💯🤷🏻‍♀️

[@TiernanWilkinson]

This is like Whispering Oaks from Left 4 Dead 2, but even more horrific.

[@xoticalpha432]

*creepy music cues* "Let me tell you about Dave"

[@kareenalove]

“It smells like a fresh of breath air” lol sorry I had to

[@azizyahaya2174]

At first I heard that as "the Backwoods Man"

[@stonedjasonvoorhees5959]

I ain't no taco man that's for sure

[@reptilienkonig6551]

"a fresh of breath air"

[@Painfully_Real]

24:57 "a fresh of breath air"

[@broireallyjustcameherewith8318]

people who listen to creepypastas in the middle of the night with no headphones are psychopaths. I gave it shot and thought I heard something on the tile below me but then I heard the snores of my Dad, and theres only 2 people in this house. (audio hallucinations gotta love them.) stuff thats happened walking out of your room thinking you are safe when its dark and you only have the moon for light. Thinking that there is no one around you, but there actually is someone in front of you, like inches away and in that time it took you to notice them...(I had one of these moments after listening to a creepy pasta). instead of fight or flight, it was freeze up and flight and I fell on my back. good places to hide, the foot of the bed and behind a door. One rarely thinks of behind the door.

[@blanknametag5464]

My wife and fall asleep to them every night

[@OrangeC88]

What are the music track titles in this track?

[@hellnoodlerat4937]

Ah yes, a fresh of breath air

[@solaris4022]

Ain't this like abandoned by disney/Room Zero?

[@its_a_me_jt]

Very, VERY similar

[@theguybehindyou4762]

Does the Backward Man moonwalk and say “Eehee” a lot?

[@remembernovember9059]

24:54 Apparently your words get mixed up when you're scared

[@MrPotatoe-ls4zk]

Sounds exciting tbh

[@netfwixnchill3412]

I’m empty enough to work there

[@happymonkey420]

Props Homie ✌🏻🐵✌🏻

[@duckington2816]

I was listening to this in music history and suddenly heard Gregorian chants and said “why do I hear boss music”

[@danajones9631]

As always a very interesting story and awesome storytelling, i'm not sure if it is worth the "good pay" and benefits to work with all of that, thanks for the offer but i'm gonna have to decline, Thanks Creeps

[@francoisgrobbelaar8821]

"a fresh of breath-air"??? 😂😂