I wrote a simple waltz (It's not simple) | Original Composition

[@alasdairhicks6731]

You definitely took some inspiration from a very certain romantic era piece 😂

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Shhhhhh... They don't have to know...

[@alligatorman_]

I keep hearing liebestraum but idk if that’s what you’re talking about😭

[@imincent1767]

i hear leibastraum aswell

[@HarutPiano]

@@imincent1767 leiebebdsisjsbtraum?

[@larryjackson2721]

Definitely a lil bit of Liebestraume No. 3, but played in the style of Chopin! Lovely!

[@tarikeld11]

0:41 really interesting effect, it sounds like strings are playing in the background!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you! I love that section :)

[@Camille_Hargraves]

It reminded me of Liszt (firstly, especially liebestraum obviously) and when you stepped in d-flat I really felt Sosprio vibe

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Liszt is one of my favorite composers, so it makes sense. Thanks for listening!

[@Camille_Hargraves]

@@JelloPuddingComposer oh, yeah, one of mine too! But it is still original and it was a pleasure to listen to such great music =D

[@keyamusica]

Very Romantic, especially Lisztian and Chopinesque 🥰🎶🎶

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

They're my favorites!

[@pabookps1535]

A totally mind-blowing piece. I'm left speechless. The passage at 0:55 is beautiful. My most sincere congratulations!!!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much!

[@count_sumarokov]

Sounds very dreaming, light, and there are really cool harmonic transistions. Wish to be able to save it on Spotify!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

[@liamesanchez]

Great piece of music! Really interesting modulation choices. It's like a merging of the Prelude and Waltz genres, which Chopin championed during his time; it is great to see more composers take inspiration from the Romantics. Please keep sharing your gorgeous work with the world. God bless you and keep you. ~L

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much! I'm very grateful you enjoyed it!

[@violintegral]

I brushed my teeth while listening to this because it's the perfect length also cool piece thank you

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

I have never had such an honor as to be the teeth brushing song. Thank you so much!

[@hooman9554]

New habit unlocked

[@terrotorotbart8319]

I don't know why but this is one of the greatest interactions I've ever read

[@alessandro3298]

Very very nice! It’s also great to see someone handwriting music for once in a while! Perhaps I would elaborate more in the 1:00-1:20 section, but it’s a fine work.

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you!

[@audicoes]

Rare and genuine. Even the style is Chopin's, but it's sincere and well written. My kudos.

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much!

[@tchibou25]

It feels after playing too much of my favorites romantic music i started to get this same type of moments of improvising things that can easily reminds me of everything u learned and loved

[@asamoib9035]

Meliton Soupelin vibes on this channel! (in a good sense). Very beautiful song :)

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Glad you like it!

[@gabe_the_musician]

Nice piece. I like the hand written score!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much!

[@hooman9554]

I love these kind of romantic pieces so so so so muchhh!!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you!!

[@t8RKfUsBPeA]

I absolutely LOVE it! I'll put it as my phone alarm to wake up every day because this is so beautiful

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

That's such an honor!

[@stavfirst]

This is absolutely incredible!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much!

[@red-winged_blackbird]

This is stunning! Lovely piece!!!!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you!!

[@red-winged_blackbird]

​@@JelloPuddingComposer You're very welcome. And what a treat to see the hand-written music along with it!

[@VanVlearMusic]

Oh dang I saw your title and handwritten style and thought this video was from melatonin soup, but it’s a new fabulous KZbin piano composer ❤

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

He's one of my biggest inspirations :)

[@nathankim9193]

Melatonin Soup

[@VeronikaPianist]

You are absolutely talented😍

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much!

[@gracejohnston888]

Who needs sleep when I can listen to this on repeat for 12 hours

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Sleep is for the weak!

[@aPersonWhoHasViolins]

You're getting famous! Thank you for sharing your wonderful piece!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much for listening!

[@aPersonWhoHasViolins]

:)

[@RyanPerryMusic]

This is gorgeous- thanks for sharing bro

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you for listening!

[@mb9369]

Beautiful

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you!!

[@321musicisWhat]

This is 🎵🎶🎵🎶🎵🎼🎼🎶🎼🎵🎵

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Indeed, it is

[@ariapanades6318]

Gives me ratatouille vibes,I like it!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Well, that's a new one. Thanks!

[@gcb642]

wtf this is so good and original

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much!

[@HarutPiano]

It's beautiful.

[@HarutPiano]

You took a bit of inspiration from Debussy and Liszt ? I feel like hearing both styles

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you!!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Definitely some Liszt. He's one of my favorites

[@HarutPiano]

@@JelloPuddingComposer dang I really hear it, keep working everyday it'll pay off (you're already really good lmao)

[@Matecrash]

OMFG, very original, at least i have never listen something like this one.

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much!

[@_yperm]

fantasie-waltz so beautiful

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much!

[@gracejohnston888]

This song is so good it is going to replace water in my diet

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Live by the song, die by the song

[@Whatismusic1234]

This is music

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

He's a genius!

[@gmfrunzik]

Whenever i see you or the priginal wim i have to double check the name lol

[@Whatismusic1234]

@@gmfrunzik quick hint! My profile pic is blueish, depicting colour, whereas WIM123 is black and white, just like his black-and-white mentality

[@realityproof_0891]

This could definitely also be from the 1840s

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much!

[@josephalvarez5315]

I agree.

[@TrashResolution]

i love this

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you!

[@TrashResolution]

​@@JelloPuddingComposerI love the transition of the melody to the higher octave. I think you can definately write more emotional and touching pieces

[@maxwalsh9950]

Well done :)

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you!!

[@Fransclude]

This is beautiful, how long did you take to compose this?

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you! It took 2 weeks to compose, and 2 weeks to write down

[@LaurentSault]

Very nice!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much!

[@LaurentSault]

@ thank you for the submissions - each one has been flawless and unique.

[@DityaSangGita]

A little reminiscence of Liszt's _Liebestraum_

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Liszt is one of my favorites!

[@avivyoukerharel2140]

Fun, me likey 👍 👌

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you!!

[@WillardsCooks]

How do you have such clean notation??

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Lots of practice and a ruler!

[@Robo119]

I hear Liszt 🤔 (very good composition)

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

He's one of my favorites!

[@leglz3102]

You are very talented! How much time did you put into this piece?

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much! It took 1 month, 2 weeks to compose and 2 more to write it out

[@red-winged_blackbird]

​@@JelloPuddingComposer incredible job!

[@mason.e.broderick]

This is good wall-licking music

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

._.

[@mason.e.broderick]

@JelloPuddingComposer ',:)

[@avivyoukerharel2140]

I have at least 3 questions

[@antoniofaulkner2423]

I love the art style did you hand draw this or is it digitally made

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you! It's fully hand drawn by me

[@antoniofaulkner2423]

That’s CRAZY how did you get it to be so neat

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Magic! (And a ruler)

[@gracejohnston888]

On December 25 sing fum fum fum

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Mmmmm... Garlic bread...

[@bytemixsound]

Given the somewhat binary nature and brevity of this waltz, I feel like this could be suitable as an "infinite waltz" much like the idea from one of Chopin's short Waltzes or Mazurkas that can be repeated as many times as the performer wants. I say Chopin but with the dissonances through the A theme and broken chord arpeggiation in the B section, I do hear some Liszt influence coming through as well. My only real critique as a first thought, is possible overuse of damper blurring things a bit in the "B" section with the broken chord arpeggiation, so it sounds kind of messy there, and the voicing is less clear. More careful use of damper should help the notes shine through a bit better in the recording. Maybe try finessing the damper more with either 1/2 or 1/4 damper, or rhythmic dampering? It's a thought. Although listening again, part of my critique may not actually be the damper, but it could just be the microphone position isn't letting the soprano notes shine through, so the bass end sounds a little overpowering and muddy at times. So it could be a simple microphone placement issue, and not the pedaling technique at all. In any case, it's a nice little waltz! It's not super simple, but it's not horribly complex either. Nice work!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

That's a lot of feedback, thank you!

[@Alleriian]

Modern day Liszt… wow

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you so much!

[@Alleriian]

@@JelloPuddingComposer No seriously for your third piece it’s REALLY good, how long have you been composing??

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

I've tried to compose a couple pieces over the years, but I've only ever been motivated to finish anything recently, so I'm glad it's paying off!

[@Kepershi.]

1:10 un sospiro reference.

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Liszt is one of my favorites!

[@zecaaabrao3634]

Libestraum+1

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

For real!

[@aspen1192]

Please make the 6/4 measures easier to ready, it’s super difficult to read. But other than that I really enjoyed it

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I think the 6/4 measures only look complicated, which just adds to the 'simpleness' of the song

[@Tommyfermar]

I like how you change harmony

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thank you!

[@AlexandreResende]

do u mind if i play this at a piano competition?

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Not at all! If you want the full sheet music just let me know.

[@danielhughes441]

You played a couple of your hemiola rhythms in the upper right hand incorrectly…I was excited to hear the effect, but alas, they came out like eighth-notes

[@ericwarncke]

I like it, but your tempo rushes like crazy when you are playing the 8th notes compared to the quarter notes. You get twice as fast in some spots, which is just a little too rubato for my taste. I definitely liked the progression though and found it very beautiful.

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

I will keep that in mind for the future. Thank you!

[@Keegan_Brassfield_Music]

We do you use to write your music? Do you use a software of some kind? And my lasts question do you compose for any other instruments?

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

I actually write all my songs completely by hand, and I've never tried composing any other instrument. Maybe in the very far future

[@Keegan_Brassfield_Music]

@ that’s really impressive!!

[@mikechad27]

liebestraum?

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

I definitely took some inspiration from a lot of Liszt's works in this song

[@feyindecay912]

I think it feels more 6/8. Nice piece.

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

I think it looks like a 6/8 piece, but if you play it by accenting it in groups of 3, it feels weird

[@jonkadriu9307]

How old are you?

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

I am 17

[@jonkadriu9307]

@JelloPuddingComposer you're either insanely talented or some 60yr old professional player

[@cringelord6545]

Как набор звуков да, как музыка не очень

[@ricardorasillacalvo7918]

Very good!

[@JelloPuddingComposer]

Thanks!